Swasan Raglak FF:- Hatred or Love (part 12 on pg 13) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsome story or chptrs
loved it...
cont soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
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LOVED IT
CANT WAIT TO READ THE NEXT PART

PM F YOU CAN
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Waiting for your next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely updates dear... Short n sweet !!
Update soon... PM me please !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry for not posting yesterday as I was busy. Hope you all like this part also
Part 5
Both Swasan reached their room and saw it. It was beautiful both were mesmerize seeing it. As they both were tired and it was night they both wanted to freshen up and sleep so they both were settling their bags and suddenly thy both started fighting
Swara:Hello I will keep my clothes here you keep in the other Almira
Sanskaar:Miss Darpook I will keep my clothes here and you in the other Almira
Swara:Why is your name written here
Sanskaar:Is your name written then
Swara:OK I will keep in the other Almira I don't want to argue with you
Sanskaar:means I won won
Swara:No not at all I have not surrendered I am just feeling pity for you who is scared of spiders.
Sanskaar:Lets stop arguing and lets freshen up
Swara:Ok then I will first get Freshen up
Sanskaar:Ok you can
Swara:In one attempt Ok wow amazing
Sanskaar"Just to do neutral I allowed you first.You gave me this cupboard and I am letting you freshen up first.
Swara:Ok then its now neutral for both of us.
And then she goes and freshen up and come and after her Sanskaar goes and freshen up and come and they both were just going o sleep and again get into an agreement.
Swara:I will sleep here I don't have a habit of sleeping anywhere else than bed.
Sanskaar:Neither I so I will sleep on bed you adjust somewhere else
Swara:Why me You adjust
Sanskaar:You adjust
And this goes on for some time Swara gets an Idea
Swara:Lets stop arguing. Let we both sleep on bed
Sanskaar:What you and me together No chance
Swara:Not together we can make a pillow border
Sanskaar:Ok
And they both make a pillow border and sleep
Next Morning
Swasan were sleeping when a sun ray falls on Sanskaar's face and he wakes up and and is mesmerized to see Swara sleeping in his embrace holding him tightly and she shivering and for warmth she is holding him tightly and to make her relax he also holds her tightly in his embrace and Swara now gets relaxed and sleep peace fully and suddenly then Sanskaar remembers that she is his rival and he cannot melt for her So he carefully comes out of her embrace and places a blanket on her so she doesn't feel cold and gets and as he was going to washroom he sees that Swara is going to fall from bed and goes to save her but his leg also slips ans Swara falls on Sanskaar and she wakes up.

Precap:Swasan's meeting

Hope you all like this part also.Please do comment


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update
The nokjhok between swasan was nice.
Waiting for your next update
Edited by Sakkiyah - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey dear!!
i saw this on telly updates also..so its u'!!!
nice yr..
but i will be extremely hpy if u tell me how to write a fanfic in india-forums..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kritika_201102

hey dear!!
i saw this on telly updates also..so its u'!!!

nice yr..
but i will be extremely hpy if u tell me how to write a fanfic in india-forums..


Just click on New topic and write Title of what ever you want to post and then write the content and this way you can even write fanfiic also and thanks for your appreciation
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsum..loved it ...continue soon yaar. ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww ... That was sooo cute !! Those nokjhoks are damn cute... Update soon yaar !!

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