Swasan Raglak FF:- Hatred or Love (part 12 on pg 13) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Awesome update
Pls pm me next time
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Nice update
Swara and sanskar have reasons to go London. They wanted to fulfill their dreams.
The nokjhok between swasan was awesome.
Waiting for your next update.
Please send me pm
Edited by Sakkiyah - 9 years ago
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#13
Swasan they have their own reason to work together... Love hate story... Beautiful update...

Will be waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Awesome update !!
I m in love with your story !!
Please update soon...
PM me please !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Sorry for not posting yesterday and thanks for all your comment and this is Part 3 hope you like it
Part 3
They both reached home and started packing as they were packing they thought about each other
Swara's home
Swara:Why are these Maheshwaris so mysterious? Don't know why but the hatred I saw in his eye had some secret behind it. Don't know why I feel very mysterious about him.Stop it Swara you have to focus on your work. He was your rival and He always be your rival Nothing else.
Sanskaar's home
Sanskaar:Why am I thinking about her. Why I feel that she is someone who I needed. Why do hatred of hers felt me a little different. Mr. Sanskaar Maheshwari stop thinking about her she is tour rival nothing else.
and they both went to sleep lost in their thoughts about each other.
Next Morning
Both of them got ready and reached At Mumbai Airport They both met each other There many questions running in their mind about each other but they hesitated and there was but the silence was at last broken by Sanskaar
Sanskaar:May we go Miss The greatest ego girl Swara Bose
Swara:What you told that mine ego is very high How mean you are and for your kind information you also don't have less ego
Sanskaar:You are calling me mean then what about you and how dare you comment on me
Swara:Like how you commented. You live your luxury life with your family and you don't even know how my life is
Sanskaar:Ya I live a luxurious life but my life is always incomplete and my family you have no idea about them. Just leave it now.(tears fell from his eyes)
Both stared each other they both had a passionate eye lock and thought
Swara:(In mind) Why I feel pain in his eyes. Why do I feel he has something in his heat which he is no able to show He is really very mysterious
Sanskaar:(In mind) Why do i feel that we both are connected. Why my heart says that she is the one whom i was finding Don't know what's happening to me
They both came out of their thoughts as there was a announcement that their flight has landed and all of them are requested to reach there. Both Swasan took their bags and went into the flight and took their respective seats and as the flight was going to departure they all listened the sound of gun and of them panicked and started running here and there and because of this Swasan got separated in the crowd and they both shouted each others name
Swara:Sanskaarrr
Sanskaar:Swaraaa
Precap:The flight of Swasan land at London airport

Hope you all like my this part.Please do comment.😊



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update
Really loved the nokjhok between swasan
Waiting for your next update
Edited by Sakkiyah - 9 years ago
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Fight in between swasan. Both monologue about each other is nice... Update next part sooon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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zaira
nice story...sorry i was unware about it...
do pm me..
n update soon
love
simi 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome keep it going plz continue updating dont leave it in the middle
Edited by aamias - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Thanks for all your comments . Hope you like this part also.
Part 4
Both Swasan were trying to find each other when suddenly Swara felt a hand on his shoulders and it was Sanskaar and she hugged him in fear and he also hugged her back they both had a passionate hug at last they broke their hug and both were staring each other
Swara:Where did you go suddenly? You didn't even know how scared I was?
Sanskaar:I didn't went any where you only left me and came and Really Bose are very Darpook
Swara:No not at all but sometime any body gets frightened
Sanskaar:That can be seen Miss Darpook
Swara:You are saying as you are very Brave
Sanskaar:Of course I am
Swara:Oh really Sanskaar see there is a spider on you coat
Sanskaar:What where it is please throw it
Swara:See your face you are more darpook than me
And she burst out laughing and Sanskaar fumes with anger but seeing her sweetness he calms and then a announcement is made that the problem is sorted it was an accident all the passengers are requested to take their seats. All passengers including Swasan take their seats. The flight takes off and Swara gets scared and she holds Sanskaar's hand tightly
Sanskaar:So Miss darpook you have never ever sat in flight yet
Swara:No its my first time
Sanskaar:That's why I am thinking why you are holding my hand so tightly
Swara notices it and gets embarrassed and diverts the topic
Swara:I am sorry in fear I holded your hand and now please don't show attitude about it. It was just an accident
Sanskaar:I didn't tell anything why are you explaining me
And he smiles at this childishness and Swara is left speechless
After 6 hours at last they reach London. They both come out of the airport and are mesmerized seeing the beauty of London and there they see a Car waiting for them. They both sit in Car and they reach in hotel. There they talk with the receptionist
Receptionist:Sir may I help you
Sanskaar:Please May we get our both's room keys
Receptionist:Wait for a minute sir
And she goes and give them their room's keys
Receptionist:Sir these are your room keys
Sanskaar:This is keys of only one room where is the others
Receptionist:There is only one room booked on both of your name
Swara:What But how can this happen
Receptionist:Mam as its a tourist season so there was scarcity of rooms so they booked only one room
Swara:I don't know I need a separate room. I don't want to sleep with him
Sanskaar:Then who wants sleep with such an egoistic girl
Swara:What! What did you called me
Then the Organizer comes there and tries to convince
Organizer:Sir and Mam Please can you adjust for some after that we will give you separate rooms Please
Swasan together:Ok
And they both take keys and go to their room.

Precap:Swara fall on Sanskaar

Hope you all have liked my this part.



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