Swasan Raglak FF:- Hatred or Love (part 12 on pg 13) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Awesome
Waiting for your next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
its amazing..but why dont u post it on telly updates????😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Sorry guys for not posting yesterday as I lost all my data and didn't had time to type again. Hope you all like this part
Part 8
Both Swasan were confused where to go and asked each other about it
Sanskaar:Where to go there so many places in London. Swara you itself tell
Swara:Neither I am getting where to go.Sanskaar you decide it
Sanskaar:I would decide if I would get where to go
Swara:Wherever I go I just want you with me . Nothing else than that
Sanskaar smiled listening this and Swara realized what she said
Swara:I meant that I cannot go alone any where I need someone with me and as you I am really Darpook
Sanskaar:No problem and I will also never leave you but yes you are really very Darpook Miss Swara Maheshwari and don't like Darpook girls
Swara smiles as Sanskaar addresses her as Swara Maheshwari and Sanskaar is just lost in her as but then he realize what he said
Sanskaar:Sorry by mistake I told you Swara Maheshwari instead f Bose
Swara:No problem
And they both were lost in each others eyes and had a passionate eye lock but their eye lock was broken by a sudden sound which made Swara scared and she holds Sanskaar's hand tightly and close her eyes.Seeing Swara he consoles her
Sanskaar:Swara don't get frightened.It was just a noise nothing else ans see I am with you
Swara opens her eyes and sees Sanskaar and is lost in his eyes and she thinks
Swara(in mind):Why do I feel so protective in his arms. Have I really fallen for him. Sanskaar you have made me fall for you and now I will not let you go away from me. You have become my life and I will not let my life go away from me.I love you Sanskaar
Felt her feelings
Sanskaar:(in mind) Swara you are my whole world and you have become my life and need. I cannot live without you.You have changed my hatred for you into love and I will not let my love go away from me.I love you too Swara.
And their eye lock continues but Sanskaar breaks it
Sanskaar:Swara lets go to mall There we can do shopping and will also have our dinner
And they both went to the shopping mall and there Swara while selecting dress was seeing Sanskaar's face in the mirror and looking at his expression was selecting the dress and a lady was showing dresses to Swara
Lady:This one mam
Swara looked into and Sanskaar nodded his head
Swara:No
And then Sanskaar sees a dress and laces his hand on it and Swara immediately tells the lady to show that dress and it was beautiful off shoulder light blue gown and tells the lady to pack it. And in the same way Swara keeps hand on a suit for Sanskaar and Sanskaar Asks the guy who was showing him to show that one and it was a suit of different shades of blue. It had light blue t-shirt with dark blue pant and blazer.
Sanskaar:Pack this
Guy:Ok sir
And their shopping gets over and go to a restaurant and as they enter the restaurant they get mesmerized seeing it . It was whole decorated with lights and there were couples mainly.The manager comes
Manage:May I help you
Sanskaar:Yes a table for two
Manager:Of course
And he takes them to a table for two and then they order
Sanskaar:What to order
Swara:Order whatever you like but two blackcurrant ice cream in desert
Sanskaar smiles listening to this and he orders their dinner and they both have it.After that there was a dance
Sanskaar:May I dance with you
Swara:But I don't know to dance
Sanskaar:Just look into my eyes and leave other to me
And she goes with him to dance floor. and he keeps his hand on her waist
Sanskaar:You don't have any problem
Swara:No
And she also keeps her hand on his shoulder and in background plays
Oo..Oo..Oo...O

Bheegi bheegi sadko pe main
Tera intezaar karun
Dheere dheere dil ki zameen ko
Tere hi naam karun
Khud ko main yun kho doon ke
Phir na kabhi paun
Haule haule zindagi ko ab tere hawale karu

Sanam re sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Sanam re sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Karam re karam re
Tera mujhpe karam hua re

Oo..Oo..Oo...O

Tere kareeb jo hone laga hoon
To toote saare bharam re
Sanam re sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Sanam re sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re

And they both are just lost in each others eyes and comes very close to each other

Oo..Oo..Oo...O

Badalon ki tarah hi to,
Tune mujhpe saaya kiya hai
Barisho ki tarah hi to,
Tune khushiyo se bheegaya hai
Aandhiyo ki tarah hi to,
Tune hosh ko udaya hai

Mera muqaddar sawara hai yun
Naya sawera jo laya hai tu
Tere sang hi bitane hai mujhko
Mere saare janam re

Sanam re sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re (x2)
Karam re karam re
Tera mujhpe karam hua re
Sanam re sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re

Oo..Oo..Oo...O

Mere sanam re mera hua re
Tera karam re mujhpe hua ye

And the song gets over and both come back in sense by listening to the claps and saw that people around them were staring them
Sanskaar:Lets go Swara
Swara:Yes
And they both leave from there and at last reach their room and arrange their beds to sleep and both get freshen up and lie down on the bed and think
Swara:(in mind)Soon this distance will be clear and I will tell you Sanskaar how much I love you
Sanskaar:(in mind)Swara soon I and you will be together just a little bit more patience and soon I will tell you that I love you
And both Swasan turned and faced each other
Swasan together:Good night
And they both close their eyes and think about their moments and go to sleep

Precap:Swasan's passionate hug

Hope you all liked this Part also and Please do comment.I made it a little bit long as I was free today and was not able to post for many days.




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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Wow... what a cute part... Please update soon... will wait for their confession...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Awsum.loved it...maat tha...hope their Distance is Cleared Very Soon...hope u understood wat i mean 😳😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Hey,,,
nice story..
read all the chapters...

Just wanted to ask if swasan are family rivals or their own job rivals???
hope they stay together for ever...

continue soon..
plz pm me when updated!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Hey,,,

nice story..
read all the chapters...

Just wanted to ask if swasan are family rivals or their own job rivals???
hope they stay together for ever...

continue soon..
plz pm me when updated!!


Thanks for appreciation and Swasan are business rivals not family rivals
Edited by zaira786 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Thanks for all your appreciation and Hope you all will like this part also
Part 9
Both Swasan were sleeping peacefully in each others embrace when a sun ray falls on Swara's face ad she gets up and sees that she is sleeping in Sanskaar's embrace and she is continuously staring at Sanskaar's face and how he is holding her tightly in his embrace .She then tries get up bu while getting up he falls on Sanskaar and Sanskaar also gets up and sees that Swara is on him but his eyes just staring at her beauty and they both had passionate eye lock but it was disturbed by a knock and Swara got up and opened the door and Sanskaar also got up
Person:Here Mam this is the invitation for tonight's party
Swara:Thank you
And he gives the invitation card and goes and both Swasan sees the invitation card
Swara:Its tonight's party's invitation card so we have to reach there at 7 pm
Sanskaar:Yes so get ready up to 7 please don't t more time or else we will get late
Swara:Why I will take time?
Sanskaar:That's the habit of you girls
Swara:I am not that type of girl who take time for getting ready by the way are going somewhere
Sanskaar:Yes but what happened
Swara:You are leaving me alone and I don't want to be alone I will also come with you(tears fell from her eye
Sanskaar:Aww Swara don't get scared nothing will happen to you and if you feel scared then call me and I will come back up to 7 and you also get ready(wipes her tears)
Swara:Ok
And he goes
At 6:45
Swara got ready and was waiting for Sanskaar and he came in the room and was mesmerized to see Swara in an off shoulder blue gown and was happy that she wore his liked dress
Sanskaar:You are looking beautiful in this gown
Swara:By the way Sanskaar your choice is very nice
Sanskaar:Of course that's why I have chose you
Swara felt happy listening this but diverted the topic
Swara:Now you also get ready or else we will get late
Sanskaar:Yes
Sanskaar realized what he said but felt that Swara has started feeling for him or else she have told and he goes to washroom and gets ready and comes out wearing the suit that Swara selected him and Swara got happy that he wore the suit that she gave him and goes and hugs Sanskaar in excitement and Sanskaar also hugs her back and they both are lost in each others embrace and had a long passionate hug

Precap:Swara crying and yelling for help

Hope you all like this part also and please do comment.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Awsum..n lovely part bt it was tooo Short. .plzz update a longer one n Precap is really Scary..y Swara is yelling fr help..hope Sanskaar saves Her...continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry guys for not posting yesterday and for the short update so as it was yesterday Valentines Day.Today I will post a Valentines day special which will be full of Swasan scenes.Hope you all guys like it
Part 10
Both Swasan broke their hug and saw each other lovingly but soon their eye lock was broken as the clock rang and it was 7:00.Both of them went out and saw a car waiting for them.They both sat in the car and reached the venue and they both got down and they reached the venue all the attention of everyone goes to them as they were looking as a perfect couple in those attire an the party starts and Sanskaar gets busy talking with someone bu the time a guy gives Swara a drink which makes her feel dizzy and Sanskaar
Swara:Sanskaar
And as he looks Swara disappears and the guy takes her to a room in that hotel while Sanskaar feels restless
Sanskaar:(in mind)Why am I feeling so restless.Why I am feeling someone who is close to me is in trouble.Is Swara in trouble.I have to find her.
And he is goes from there and starts searching Swara While Swara is in a room and a guy comes there.He is Sanjay.He is a big business man and the biggest rival of Sanskaar.
Sanjay:So you are the girl whom Sanskaar is fallen for(and he come near her)
Swara:Go away from me(shouts crying miserably)
Sanjay:No chance you are the weakness of Sanskaar and I will use you for my benefit
Swara:Please let me go
And her hand hits her a vase and falls down and Sanskaar listens to the sound and runs to that room and tries to open it but in vain so he broke and sees Swara there
Sanskaar:Swaraa
Swara:Sanskaar
And she goes and hug him and he goes towards Sanjay and holds his collar
Sanskaar:How dare you do such a thing with her
Sanjay:Then what are you doing she is nothing for you then why are you saving her
Swara listening to this breaks down and leaves from there and Sanskaar gives Sanjay to the police as he had already called them and goes behind Swara
Sanskaar:Swara listen to me
Swara:No Sanskaar. I don't want to talk to anyone and thanks for saving me
And she goes from there
Sanskaar:I love you Swara and please listen to me Swara
Swara was walking on a lonely path and as she was walking some guys surrounded her and started to tease her
Guy 1:Miss may I leave you
Guy 2:Why you I will leave such a hot girl
And they started to come closer to her
Swara:Please someone help me
And a guy just going to touch her suddenly a hand stopped it and yes it was Sanskaar
Sanskaar:How dare you touch her
Guy:Who are you
Sanskaar:Who am I you are not needed to know just pray for yourself
And he starts beating him badly and seeing this Swara is stunned and the other guys rum away and he also escapes from Sanskaar
Swara:Why do you always save me.Whom am I for you.Answer me Sanskaar
Sanskaar(holding her shoulders tightly)because I love you.Yes Swara I love you.How When it happened i don't know and where this will lead me I don't know but just I know that is I love you and you are my life
Listening Swara gets tears in her eyes of happiness and hugs him
Swara:I love you too

Precap:Swasan getting cozy

Hope you all will like my this part.Please do comment.

Edited by zaira786 - 9 years ago

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