DARK KNIGHT- A SwaSan FF- T2- DELETED- AN- PG 1 - Page 2

Originally posted by: mystery75

RES

I was literally w8 for ur update since u have promised to update on fri

and b/c of waiting i happened to go to ur index and read ZEINTH and read all the comments too just to kill the time

i was about to comment on it but then i see that u have updated

now im still in that blushing mode☺️

so need a little time to come back to my senes

so i can be a little late to unres

plzz dont mind it all ur fault too😳

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

awesome update and very interesting name of the place.

Can't wait to read more.

Originally posted by: mystery75

RES

I was literally w8 for ur update since u have promised to update on fri

and b/c of waiting i happened to go to ur index and read ZEINTH and read all the comments too just to kill the time

i was about to comment on it but then i see that u have updated

now im still in that blushing mode☺️

so need a little time to come back to my senes

so i can be a little late to unres

plzz dont mind it all ur fault too😳

Wow

was so deeply immersed in the update that I could completely imagine each and every scene of swasan unfolding right in front of my eyes literally 😲

the sky of a new day... the horse...and swasan in the middle of now where... swara's feelings and emotions her thoughts everything...completely imagine swara's expression when she thought that she had a slightest chance to be free from her captivator...each and every minute detail which u wrote is so unfolding in my head.

ohh at sanskar's bag i was imagining it to be "hermoine's magical pouch in HP-7 part 1🤣 how he's fishing out the things from it😆

and when he says "trust me" and the look swara gave and his own realization of her look is also so note worthy👏 i have noticed this one thing while reading dark knight that these are although really small things made they really made great impression at least on me as a reader

the scenes at the mahesh mahal were although predictable but still i just loathe ragini sheis a disgrace to a sister daughter and also a friend😡

MOUD yes it did and will symbolize the turning point in their life

swara's mind working on to give signs to the old man and the lady😆...sanskar's persistence to not to let swara get away from his near vicinity😈...his rather confidant lies😳😳 all were so awesome😃😃

ohh at first i had a heart attack that swara had left a very very solid clue and now some how the army will get to them😲😲 but then ahhh swara's plan backfired...i was so relieved at that *phew*

and sanskar's reaction to that was so in the place.

really like that old man's world to swara

everything that happen there is so meaningful and amazing😊

gonna read it again😳

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Shruti...was waiting for ur update... since u told me ur going to update...ahhh loving it...such wonderful detailling...😉

While reading was feeling like ..i have somehow reached that era... ur awesome...👏👏

Enjoying swasan journey...waiting for their blooming friendship ...love ...etc😳😊

Im getting greedy...desperately waiting for next chapter...😃😉😊

1 wish/pray for u dear...do write ur own novel ...1 day...i will definitely read it... ur blessed...muahhh...love u...⭐️👏❤️

Originally posted by: raaz19

Loved the story even more...

Thanks for creating and making sanskaar realise that people love and believe that he is not a traitor...If only swara could see what he really did for her also...

I am sure love will blossom...

Each chapter leads us to a world that we never believed could exist...

Originally posted by: Vini224

Having read all your stories , have to say this is my favorite story so far.

You just transported me to a different place and time with all those vivid details.

Having read your story , I feel RS should have made a period drama like yours instead of the one she is dishing out now.

Please update soon.Can't wait to see how you develop Swasan love story.