DESTINED LOVE AND PAIN#6 || note pg 33 || December 8th , 2017

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#61

THIS IS KIND OF POLL

WHAT MY READERS THINK ABOUT THE PACE OF THIS STORY

AS IN PART 58 VILLAINS ARE INTRODUCED SO SHOULD I MAKE THEM OBVIOUS AND MAKE THE STORY FORWARD

OR

SHOULD I WRITE LIKE I AM WRITING ..

ANYONE WHO FEEL STORY IS NOT MOVING FORWARD TOO WITH ALL MAANEET AND DIYA'S SCENES GOING TOO MUCH

PLEASE GIVE ME YOUR REVIEWS

I AM CONFUSED

REST OF THE STORY I WILL GIVE ACCORDING TO READERS

Edited by suhaaana - 9 years ago

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IMA9167

@IMA9167

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

I want MAAN to take care of villians(witchiii)
Along with family moments
Don't concentrate on just villians
Along with maans anger ,show mmaan cute moments too

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Leenu

@Blossom_29

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Amazing update diya was enjoying the birthday party with sneha and naina both were very happy to see cute diya maan was very supportive and caring for diya maaneet were taking care of diya as now ayina was there

my answer for the note : continue the same
but maaneet has to be more careful of villans

Edited by leenuguru - 9 years ago

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Haya1022bmw

@Haya1022bmw

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Lovely update.. Dia is a cutei pie.. Maan is alert now.. Waiting for next

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preeti

@pari1689

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

so sweet update...
hehe poor khushi...
maan possessive dad...
haha diya feeding pasta to Mr bunny...

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geet_v81

@geet_v81

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Nice update

Thanks for the update and password..

Diya is such a cute pie.

Waiting for aaiyana's next step...

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tammana

@tammana.m

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Fabolous 👏 😊
Diya is sooo cute she give food to Mr bunny n spoil her dress n bunny to 😃
Family scene really lovely
Thnks for pm
Waiting for nxt

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Gudiyeet

@Gudiyeet

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: suhaaana
THIS IS KIND OF POLL

WHAT MY READERS THINK ABOUT THE PACE OF THIS STORY

AS IN PART 58 VILLAINS ARE INTRODUCED SO SHOULD I MAKE THEM OBVIOUS AND MAKE THE STORY FORWARD

OR

SHOULD I WRITE LIKE I AM WRITING ..

ANYONE WHO FEEL STORY IS NOT MOVING FORWARD TOO WITH ALL MAANEET AND DIYA'S SCENES GOING TOO MUCH

PLEASE GIVE ME YOUR REVIEWS

I AM CONFUSED

REST OF THE STORY I WILL GIVE ACCORDING TO READERS

Me too confused 😉

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IMA9167

@IMA9167

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Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Very nice update
Poor khushi ignored by our bunny DIA
DIA bonded well with sneha and naina
Maan GEET DIA scene was cute
P.s: answer to your note I already cmntd mine was first
Waiting for next part