DESTINED LOVE AND PAIN#6 || note pg 33 || December 8th , 2017

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

beautiful update

diya happily spend time with girls

diya becoming naughty day by day she feed mr. bunny pasta when maaneet are talking

geet agree with maan to be at home near diya

about question

story is going with it's pace , must go as per writer's thinking which make it more beautiful

so i will say that let it be like what you think for it

but always waiting

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Part 60

Lovely and Pleasurable Update

Diya just to cute the way she went with Sneha than went and wished Naina was truly

cute

Maan had his eyes on his princess all the time and Geet had to finally go fetch her as they food too

arrived

Diya decides to feed her Mr Bunny wow that was sweet

Maan and Geet talking about the project with the Mittals and also their about Neeraj

and Maan tells Geet to resign after the project so that she can always be around Diya

as its true Aaiyna will not be quiet but both have no idea that someone else is actually going to do

the job not Aaiyna

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

About Your Questions

At the moment the introduction to the villians are there and the pace of the story is also moving

smoothly , there is Maaneet all the time which is also good

and both are now looking after Diya's health

so the way you writing in your style is just excellent

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Karamjeet Kaur

@karamjeet

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Suprbbb update...
Diya is sooo cute...
loved Maaneet nd Diya part sooo muchhh...
plzzz u just write whatever u want in dis story...
i'm loving Maaneet nd Diya parts...

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Shashi1984

@Shashi1984

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Superb update. Fabulous Birthday celebration of Naina. She got an angel with her to celebrate her birthday. Diya too enjoyed the celebrations. Loved the cute moments of Diya.

I want you to continue as you are writing, not totally shift to villains but Maan must keep an eye on them to protect Geet and Diya, along with cute moments of Dadda and Diya and moments of Maaneet too.

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mitani

@mitani

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Actually i always love their family bantar. Diya is so cute. owe diya is feeding mr bunny that to her fav pasta.

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saadi88

@saadi88

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

First of all thank u so much for the pm and pw.really i feel so happy..diya is such a cutie pie.and feeding Mr. Bunny haha..that was so adorable.shes full of inocense. .u jus write so beautifully..cont . writing.will be waiting for ur further updates..thanku😊