Home - ff ( part 27 on page 133)

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Home - ff part 1

Here I have written more of 2015 POV and less of ghotala family... Hope you all like it.. hi
A guy around age of 27 was roaming here and there ..
For past 5 years ...
He was tired .. From hiding . Tired from running away every now and then .. Tired from speaking lies to this humans ...yes humans because for outside world he was human but he only knew his very own existence he was not human he was an alien .. For this world his name was sometime samar,sunny, vicky etc. But none knew his real name 2015 ..
He wanted to go home .His place from where he belonged .He wanted to go back to his family.. Wanted to hug them.

Here ghotala family was in same dilemma ..they were tired too of speaking lies to everyone .everyday. In these 2 years colony people had become their family.. They didn't like tell them lies..
Manav was not their 2015.. But they use to consider him as their son as his age was of near about age to 2015..
They wanted to go back to their planet as because of pollution it was difficult to live ... Though they loved the colony people as they were their family ..but they have to go. Willingly or unwillingly..
They had promised Jacky that they will soon go to their planet...

2015 firmly believed that his family would come in search for him .. So he also decided to go in search for them..


2015 pov
'Kahaa hoga mera parivaar, hey insaano ke ishwar koi toh raah dikhao. Mujeh pakka vishwas hai mera parivaar jaroor dhundne aayega mujeh.. Agar woh yahaa hai toh kahaa hoge,kis haalat mein hoge.. Mere dost patah nahi kis halat mein hoge woh bhi mujh se bichad gaye hai.'

'Kash mein apne ghar se bhagkar yahaa aaya na hota' he said while sitting on a bench near a temple...
'Kyu aagaya mein...yahaa.. Kyu mein ne gusse mein aakar ghar choda apna...
Papa ne mujeh daata tha .. Lekin woh mere bhale ke liye tha.. ..woh mere bhala hi chahte the..'

And he started crying.. All this human emotion were unknown too him before but now he had feel each emotion everyday ..
Yeh insaano ke bahut saare alag alag emotions hai.. Patah hi nahi chalta kab kon kya feel kare.. Kabhi gussa hote hai toh kabhi khush hote kabhi darte hai... he thought

His chain of thoughts was broken by a sudden noice.. He looked up.. A boy of around 23 ya 21 age was their and had dropped a bag on ground.. He was going to help that boy but then that boy's father came.. He heard them talking...

Vasant-kya kar raha hai hemant, beta sambhal ke chal na chahiye na ...

Hemant- papa mein sambhar ke hi chal raha tha par bag bhari tha... Issliye gir gaya...

Vasant - sambhar? Aree gende woh sambhal hota hai sambhal . aur naki sambhar hota hai 'L' hota hai piche . aise nai chalta beta ... Varsha samjhao na isse


He was enjoying their convo... It remember him of his father and younger brother who was eeeh just like that boy... He always enjoyed his father and his younger brother convo ... He remember that he used to become a sandwhich between his father and brother.. Then he saw a lady about his own mother's age came along with her two other person .one was older than him and the other was youngest in family.

Varsha - vasant ghotala aap apni paathshala mein zindgi bhar padate rehna hemant ko.. Ab chaliye. Der ho rahi hai.. Sharad tum aur shishir jao aur woh road ke saamne sabji bechne wale bhaiya hai unse 2 kilo aalo aur 1 kilo baingan leke aao hum patharwale bhagwan ko prasad mein chadayenge..

Sharad- bhabhi agar logically sochne jaaye toh hame dhaniya bhi prasad mein chadna chahiye . unhe sirf aloo aur baingan aacha nai lagega... Dhaniya denge toh acha lagega patharwale bhagwan ko...

Varsha- tu thik keh rah hai sharad ... Dhaniya bhi leke aana..

Sharad- ji bhabhi aap bhaiya aur hemant mandir mein jaaye mein aur shishir aate hai.. Chal shishir .and both leaves..

That boy was smiling on seeing the family .. And their conversation..
it made him remembered his own family

Toh woh unke chacha hai aur woh sabse chotta ladka hoga
He remember his chacha with whom he has spend most of his childhood...when his two brothers and little sister were not born..


He missed his friends with whom he has came on this planet.. He has to find them too.

He went inside the temple..
' hey insaano ke ishwar mujeh vishwas hai ki mera parivaar mujeh doondhne aaya hoga woh abhi jahaa kahi bhi ho unka khayal rakhna aur mujeh apne parivaar se aur dosto se mila do'
And a tear escaped from his eyes ...

Here ghotala family were praying to patharwale bhagwan ..that they find their 2015 soon and right now where ever he is.. He is good and fine...

Patharwale bhagwan indeed heard their prayers...
Because as soon as he came out.. Of temple .. Timi timi started ..


Index -


Part 2

Part 3


Part 4



Part 5


Part 6


Part 7


Part 8

Part 9



Part 10


Part 11

Part 12


Part 13


Part 14


Part 15


Part 16


Part 17


Part 18

Part 19



Part 20



Part 21


Part 22


Part 23


Part 24


Part 25


Part 26


Part 27

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow ⭐️ very good krish ❤️
Dhaniya bhi prasad me chada dia 😆
I can picture everyone speaking as you wrote 😳
Write more dear what will happen now coz Tim Tim has started. 😃
Will wait for your update 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh dear achha hai kisi ne 2015 ke baare me socha
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's very nice :) Please write more .
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Originally posted by: Senoritaamor

Oh dear achha hai kisi ne 2015 ke baare me socha

OS means one short like short story it doesn't have parts ...But if all want I can give its other parts or ff if all wish I will convert this OS in ff and will try to write os on other topics too
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Well written Krish. 👏Kya talent hai ⭐️
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Ok.. do write more on public demand then 😳
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Originally posted by: Krish58

OS means one short like short story it doesn't have parts ...But if all want I can give its other parts or ff if all wish I will convert this OS in ff and will try to write os on other topics too

of course dear...
plz do it...
all wil b glad to hv a ff... & os also...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb os krishu🤗..
well done...👏

2015 pov well written... yeh cvs ko to 2015 ka pov yaad hi nai h.. infact 2015 hi yaad nai h...
but u felt it so well...
2015 reminiscing his decision of cuming to earth... & getting upset from his dad...

hemantgiri idhar bhi shuru... sambhar😆😆😆
vasant bhi professorgiri nai chodega...
& varsha as usual reminds vasant to stop his professorgiri...
varsha asking sharad to get 2 kg aloo & 1 kg baingan for prasad...😆😆😆 ghotali...
sharad logically asks for dhaniya also...😆😆😆 dhaniya prasad me kya logic tha...😕😕
yeh ghotale ka logic kuch samaj nai aata kabhi...

2015 reminded of his family... but couldnt join d dots...

finally ghotalas & 2015 go to temple & pray for their milan...
& finally god heard their prayers...
& timi timi hua...😃😃

plz do convert it into ff if possible...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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COngrats krishu... 🥳
for d first os of d forum..

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