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Posted: 9 years ago

#601

Originally posted by: hemvibond
oh my god i dont believe this
there are so many stories here
i wil read them one by one
this one is so long

no worries dear ..will be waiting for ur comment

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Posted: 9 years ago

#602

Chalo update will be kal duphare ko stay tuned

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Posted: 9 years ago

#603

Originally posted by: Krish58
hmm bhavna ke husband ke liye aisa exp kyu?

Bhadresh ki taraf se😳

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Originally posted by: iKunshTyagi

Bhadresh ki taraf se😳

kyu bhadresh ki taraf se

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Posted: 9 years ago

#605

Heeein bas ittu SA wait kar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#606

nice story
loved all the bhairavigiri
& other scenes wer ghotalas wer near to karthik
it took me 3 days to read it

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Originally posted by: chakudibhatt
nice story
loved all the bhairavigiri
& other scenes wer ghotalas wer near to karthik
it took me 3 days to read it

thanks for comment.. .will update soon

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vavainnocence

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Posted: 9 years ago

#608

Nice sweet title of the story
I read half of d story
Its a mixture of laugh, cry, & other emotions too
I liked it

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vavainnocence

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Posted: 9 years ago

#609

U r a great writer
If at all u think of publishing a book
Do tel me i wil read it

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Krish58

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Home ff part 23

At police station...

Manav- sweety singh ji yeh dono chor ne kuch bola woh bag ke baare mein...

Sweety Singh-areee manav kitna pucha mein ne unko par kuch bol hi nahi rahe..

Manav- haan toh aap aur try kijiye na please...

Sweety singh- manav mein try karta hoon par yeh log bag ke baare mein kuch nahi bol rahe..

Manav gets call...from ronnie

Manav- boliye ronnie bhaiya ...

Ronnie- manav tum jaldi se karthik ki shop pe aajao..hame woh ramniklal ke khilaaf bahut bada woh ba woh ba...

Karthik and manav -tch tch tch

Ronnie- areee ek min manav..woh you are with me ko Hindi mein kya bolta hain

Manav- tum mere saath ho

Ronnie- haan toh woh bahut bada saath bhoot mila hain

Manav - kya???

Ronnie- areee saath bhoot man..

Karthik- areee ronnie bhaiya saath bhoot nahi saboot hota hai..aap laaye phone mein manav se baat karta hoon...

Karthik takes phone from Ronnie's hand..

Karthik tells manav to come to rustomji shop...

Here Ronnie is crying as karthik doesn't let him speak on phone and rustomji is pacifying ronnie..

Rustomji- na na dikra ( beta) aisa rote nahi... Areee aise bade hoke koi rota hain...

Ronnie- (crying)par mereko koi nahi bolne deta ..yeh karthik ne bhi mera phone mere haath se le liya...

Later on Rustomji tells everyone that how ramniklal cheated him and took away his land in illegal way...

At R3...

Pritesh-yeh kya dadji aap uss din mujeh pakd ne hi nahi aaye...mein aap se naraaz hoon

Ramniklal-areee par tum uss din kaha chala gaye the...

Pritesh- (in most sweetest words)areee woh dadi bahaar thi na issliye chup gaya tha dadji . Lekin mein aap se baat nahi kar raha hoon aur naahi mitesh bhaiya aap se baat kar rahe hain..aap toh hum ko pyar hi nahi karte ..

Ramniklal-areee karta hoon na pyaar tum dono se..

Pritesh- aap mujeh se pyaar karte hain yeh mein maanta hoon par mitesh bhaiya ko aap pyaar nahi karte dekhiye kitne udaas hain...

Ramniklal-(towards mitesh) areee mein tumhe bhi pyaar karta hoon...

Mitesh-mein kaise maan loo..agar aap mujeh vishwas dilaate hain ki aap mujeh bhi pritesh jitna pyaar karte hain toh mein aapko ek secret bataunga...

Ramniklal-kaisa secret??

Pritesh-yahi ki colonywale aap ke khilaaf konsa saboot dhoondh rahe hain..

Ramniklal-(in mind) mujeh yeh mitesh ko yakin dilaana hoga...taaki mein apne khilaaf saare saboot mita saku...

Mitesh- dadji dadji... Aap mujeh yakin dilaaye..

Ramniklal is trying to manao mitesh but fails..

Ramniklal-pritesh yeh mitesh toh maan hi nahi raha...

Pritesh- dadji aap bhaiya ko unki fav serial yeh laptop pe dikhaye woh maan jaayenge...

Ramniklal- mitesh chalo tumhari fav serial dekhte hain.

Pritesh-(in mind) dadji utare baalti mein..

Miteshh-thik hain lekin aapko yeh puri serial mere saath baithe dekhni hogi aur hasna hoga mere saath tabhi mein vishwas karunga...

Ramniklal-(in mind)ek serial hi toh dekhni hain dekh leta hoon...kyuki mujeh toh yeh jaana hain ki yeh colonywale mere khilaaf kya saboot dhoondh rahe hain..

Ramniklal agrees.

Pritesh-(whispering) mitesh bhaiya tyaar hai na aap..Chaliye jaldi hum apne kaan mein rui(cotton balls) daal dete hain taaki hame kuch sunaai na de..Ab dadji ko two hours tak woh bhau meri beti nahi. . serial ka maha epi dekhaye hain...

Mitesh- chal pritesh...

Pritesh- chaliye dadji aap baith jaaye yaha hum dono yaha baith te hain Ab majje se serial dekhte hain...

Pritesh and mitesh every now and then laughed at dadji's condition .. ramniklal was getting frustrated on watching show but still he watched as he wanted to know information about colony people...

At night...

At ghotala house..

Jacky- vasant uncle..mein ne aapka timi timi detector hcji ko bhej diya hain unhone kaha ki kal tak woh usse repair karke wapas bhej denge...

Vasant- Acha hain chalo kal tak timi timi detector aajayega aur Tera detector woh thik ho ke aaya?

Jacky- nahi uncle ..HCji ne kaha ki woh puri tarah se bigaad gaya ...

At bhatt house...

All are present karthik is their too..they are discussing about what to do next

Bhavna -areee par ghotala bhai aap sab karthik ko gawaah ke tarike se toh laa rahe ho par proof kaha hain..kyuki woh baba toh yeh karthik ki baato pe bharosa nahi karega.. .hame aur saboot jamaa karne honge..

Hemant-nai nai Bhavna aunty woh jamaa nahi majaa hota hain ..Jo bhadresh uncle bolte hain...Same majaa aayega...

Bhavna- oh ghotala putra woh jamaa hota hai..

Bhairavi-baa aap aise mere bhai ko mat boliye..jaroor aapne hi galti ki hain bolne mein...

Bhavna- oh hemant ni vakil tu thodi der chup re Ben...

Bhairavi- toh barobar...

Vasant-hemant woh majaa nahi jamaa hota hai beta .

Hemant-nai nai papa aap galat bol rahe hain

Sharad- bhabhi yeh bhaiya ne toh phir se paathshala shuru kar diya..

Varsha- vasant aap baad mein samjhana ..

Vasant- nai nai .mein clear karta hoon yeh gende ki spelling warna phir se gadbad karega yeh..

Ohja- hogaya chalu class..hi hi hi..chalo tab tak mein kuch khaalu hi hi

Ohja leaves towards kitchen...

Vasant- haan toh hemant woh jamaa hota hai majaa nahi..

Hemant- nai nai papa..

Vasant-areee kya nai nai kar raha hain jamaa hota hai woh uska matalb saare saboot collect karna hona hain..

Hemant - nai nai papa woh saare nahi saale hota hain saale matalb brother in law.. matalb ki Jo manav bhaiya honge aur ronnie bhaiya honge..

Lajo- hemant ke bol raha hain beta ..

Hemant - lajo aunty mein sach bol raha hoon ..manav bhaiya aur ronnie bhaiya saale honge

Manav-areee hemant tum galat bol rahe ho aur hum kaha se brother in law honge..

Hemant(happily) -heein kyu nahi manav bhaiya megha didi aapki behen hain toh jab megha didi ki shaadi sharad chacha ke saath hogi toh aap sharad chacha ke saale honge aur jab aapki aur anna didi ki shaadi hogi toh ronnie bhaiya aapke saale honge na...

On listening this sharad starts doing his yayayayayayayayayayayya and lehrana and manav blushes..too..

Vasant- yeh dekho baniyan ne lehrana chalu kar diya..aur manav ne sharmana start kiya.

Ronnie-( to bhavna) yeh dono toh blush karne lagaa...man..

Vasant- oh baniyan lehrana bandh kar...

Sharad- yayayayayaya.

Varsha- sharad yayaya karna bandh kar ...aur manav tum bhi baad mein company dena sharad ko...sharmaane mein.

Lajo- reee baad mein sharmana... Tum dono

Karthik stops sharad from doing more lehrana and brings back manav too from his trance...

Manav stops blushing and sharad stops doing lehrana...

Vasant- hogaya lehrana...baniyan

Sharad- sorry sorry...bhaiya woh thoda megha ki yaad aagai aur bahut dino se mera yayayaya nikal nahi tha toh ander logically overflow hogaya tha..toh nikal gaya..

Bhavna- oh logical Ghotala abhi tere sorry ko daal tel ke kuve mein ...abhi Jo baat hain is pe dhyan do...

On hearing this all ghotala's and karthik looks towards bhavna..

Bhavna - areee baap re yeh log toh aise mujeh dekh rahe hain jaise mein kuch Alien ki bhaasha mein bola ho

Hemant- konse tel ke kuve mein daale Bhavna aunty??

Karthik- aur kab jaana hoga bhavna aunty sorry ko tel ke kuve mein daalne ke liye kyu ki hume phir Kuwait,iran aise jagah jaana hoga na. phir aane mein der hojaayegi na

Varsha- sahi kaha karthik .. bhavna aunty hum sorry ko courier karde ya parcel karde...?

Sharad- bhabhi logically hum courier karte hain na jaldi pauch jaayega...

Ronnie- yeh log ka merry go round phir se chalu hogaya man.

Vasant- haan sahi kaha sharad very good beta...

Bhavna- aeem par ghotala bhai aap logo ka sorry ka parcel ko woh waha Kuwait mein tel ke kuve mein kon daalega... phir

Vasant - bhavna aunty hum na aise paper pe likh denge ki jiss kisiko yeh parcel mile woh unke paas wale tel ke kuve mein daal de..toh kya hain na sorry woh tel ke kuve mein woh insaani daalke aayega...

Bhavna-(angrily)areee ooo Bhairavi ke maayeke walo mein ne aise hi kaha ki tel kuve main daalo ... sach mein nahi daalna hai sorry ko tel ke kuve mein.

Hemant-hawww ...par abhi aap ne kaha na ki tel ke mein daalo sorry ko ...

Bhairavi- dekha aap sab ne baa kitna bolne mein gadbad karti hain clear bhi nahi karti... aur phir mujeh bolti hain..hemnat mere bhai tu chinta mat kar aap sab ki koi galti nahi hain..baa ki galti hain baa ne bolne mein gadbad ki...kitni baar aapko bola hain ki jaake apna check up karvaaye dimaag ka ..phir bhi maante nahi

Bhavna- aeee Ben tu chup re ne thodi der..jaa woh Jo daal saamne mein ne rakhi hain usse count karke aa aur bolna ki kitne daal hain..

Bhairavi-toh barobar

Hemant- mein company doon bhairavi didi ko??

Bhavna-haan ja beta apni didi ko madad kar ...

Hemant- heeein ..

Hemant and bhairavi leaves...

Bhavna- aur ghotala and gang aur karthik abhi ek aur ghotala giri ya natak start kiya na toh mujeh se bura koi nahi hoga...

Something strikes to varsha ...

Varsha- areee bhavna aunty ek mast plan sujha hain...aur proof jamaa kar ne ke liye...

Vasant- kaise plan ?

Varsha- hum log ek natak karte hain...jisse hum saari sachai bhadresh bhaiya ke papa khud Kabul karenge ki unhone dhokha kiya hain..

Manav- varsha bhabhi yeh toh bahut hi acha plan hain par karenge kya..hum

Varsha- hum natak karenge matalb ki hum mein se koi do ya tin log nakli clients banke woh ramniklal uncle ke office jaayenge aur hum unse contract lenge aur dhire dhire unhe aise fasaa yenge ki woh sab sach bole aur wohi sach ki recording karke ke hum baad mein saare proof ke saath bhadresh bhaiya ko dikhayenge...kaisa laga idea..

Liza- yeh bahut hi perfect plan hain...

Manav- yeh toh perfect plan hain...isse hum aur proofs milenge aur karthik tum hi bol rahe the na ki ramniklal uncle ki yaha koi office hain aur tumhari zameen ki file bhi unke paas hain...

Karthik- haan aur woh rustomji ki fille bhi hum wapas laa sakte hain..hum aisa kar sakte hain ki kal hum unko follow karte hain aur Aaj jab woh hamare shop aaye the tab mujeh patah chala ki unke office mein kuch lakde ka kaam hain ..

Ronnie- toh uss mein aur ohja uncle aur Jacky chala jaata hain carpenter banke ..aur agar hame mauka mila toh hum tumhara file bhi dhoondh lega man...

Vasant- haan toh kal hum karthik beta tumhare shop pe aayenge

Karthik- haan

soon all leaves to their respective houses..Karthik was with manav..

Manav- karthik woh dono chor toh kuch bol hi nahi rahe bag ke baare mein aisa lagta hain maano kisi ne unhe hypnotise kiya ho...

Karthik- manav , aisa hosakta hain .aur mujeh lagtaa hain mere chacha ne hi hypnotise kiya hai

Manav- matalb?

Karthik- manav mere chacha ke paas hypnotise karne wala superpower hain..woh kisi ko bhi hypnotise kar sakte hain.

Manav- karthik toh kya tum woh dono chor ke paas sach bulaa sakte ho hypnotise karke ?

Karthik- nahi manav mere pass yeh power nahi hain..

Manav- karthik iska matalb yeh bhi hain ki tumhara parivaar yahi kahi hain aur woh tumhe dhoodh rahe hain..

Karthik- haan manav aur shayad unhe woh bag mila ho do chor ke pass se...

Manav- ho sakta karthik .

Next day...

As per plan vasant sharad and manav and karthik follows uncle and Ronnie ,ohja uncle and Jacky goes to ramniklal office as carpenters.

At ghotala house...

Varsha was talking with megha...

Megha- varsha bhabhi ...yeh dekhiye Grishma ne yeh drawing bannai hain..aap sabki mmm hain na

Varsha takes balayein in alien style..

Varsha- yeh toh mmm hain megha...Grishma ki drawing hame bhej dena..

Megha-haan bhabhi aur haan bhabhi abhi abhi HCji ne aapka timi timi detector repair kar ke diya hain mein woh bhej rahi hoon...

Varsha- haan thik hain tu jaldi bhej..jaldi mein abhi jaake market jaake check karti hooon.

Megha-(sharmaoing) hooon aur bhabhi sharad kaha hain... Dikhai nahi de raha ...aur vasant bhaiya aur baaki sab...

Varsha - sharad aur baaki sab abhi bahar gaye hain..

Megha - hmm.

Varsha-chal mein market jaake aati hoon tujeh kuch chahiye...

Megha- nahi bhabhi kuch nahi chahiye..aap sab apna dhyan rakhna..hoon

Varsha- hoon

Megha- ishaaba

Varsha- ishaaba.

Varsha calls out shishir and hemant..and they leave for market...

At bair agency...

Bair agents have captured 212 ...

Agent x- sir hum yeh news kab deni hai ki humne ek alien ko pakkd liya hain...

Agent-z abhi nahi agent x abhi pehle yeh tab thik hone do..iss mein se hame aur bhi information milegi aur tab hum yeh news denge taaki iske saath daar isse bachane aaye aur hum unsab ko pakd le...agent q iss par nazar rakhne ki zimedaar tumhari hain..

At ramniklal office

Ronnie - ohja uncle chalo man hame dhoondhne jaana hai woh karthik ka file..ooo Jacky chalo...

All leaves towards ramniklal's cabin...when a peon(p) stops them...

P- rukiye aapko kiska kaam hain ???

Before Ronnie could speak...

Ohja- areee hum sab Rajasthan ke mashoor carpentar hain...hamare jaise kalakaar ko nahi pehchaana...maareh jaise prathibhashali ,,carpentar ko nahi pehchaana ..huh.

Ronnie- (to Jacky) chalu hogaya Rajasthan tourism mein keh raha hoon ohja hum sab ko musibat mein daalega...

P- dekhiye mein log Jo bhi ho lekin aapko yaha kya kaam hain

Ronnie- areee man hum log carpenter hain toh carpeting ka kaam hi karega na ...

P-( looking towards Ronnie) ek min ..ek min.. aap log Rajasthan se aaye hain toh aapko dekh ke lagta nahi ki aap Rajasthani hain...

Ronnie-areee mein Christian hain par rehta Rajasthan mein hain...tumhe insab se kya kaam hain jaao tumhare sahab ko bulaake laao...unhone hame bulaaya hain kaam ke liye...

Peon goes away..

Ronnie- ohja uncle tum overacting mat karo tumhare yeh Rajasthan tourism ke wajah se hum sab musibat mein aajayega..tum thodi der shaanti rakho..

Ohja- ke ke ke bol raha hain jhallar taareh kehne ka matalb hain ki mein overacting kar raha hoon

Ronnie--haan aur Ab tum chup baithega..Jo bhi bolna hain mein ya Jacky bolega hoon?

Ohja and Jacky - hooon...

At market..

Agent z and agent x are following varsha and shishir and hemant..

Agent x- sir,mujeh aisa kyu lag raha hain ki mein ne in sab ko kahi dekha hain...

Agent z- haan agent x mujeh bhi yahi lag raha hain ki in sab ko kahi dekha hain par yaad nahi aa raha..

Varsha- yeh detector timi timi nahi hi raha hain.. suddenly varsha feels some one is following them...

Shishir - mummy aisa bhi hosakta hai ki bhaiya abhi market mein na ho woh kahi gaye ho...

Varsha- hosakta. Hai shishir...hemant, shishir , chalo jaldi yahaa se mujeh lag raha hain koi hamara picha kar rahe hain...

Hemant- mein dekhta hoon mummy kon picha kar raha hain..

Shishir- nai bhaiya piche mat dekhiye unhe him par shaq hojaayega...

Varsha- haan beta..chalo jaldi ..

The y all hide near by a tree. And saw who was following them.

Shishir- mummy yeh toh woh agent q aur agent x hain..Jo hamara picha kar rahe hain..

Hemant-mummy kahi unki memory wapas toh nahi aagayi..

Varsha- nahi patah hemant par hame colony jaana hoga ...chalo jaldi..

All starts walking hurrdiely.. as were agents following them...

Suddenly she sees a auto coming towards them...

Varsha stops the auto wala and asks him to take them to sunshine colony..

At ramniklal office...

Ronnie- areee jaldi dhoodho man..woh logical Ghotala ka phone aaya tha ramniklal kabhi bhi yaha aa sakta hain..

Jacky- dhoondh rahe ronnie bhaiya par file milni bhi toh chahiye ..

Ohja- areee dhoondh rahe hain jhallar ..

Jacky-(in a bit louder voice) mil gayi file ronnie bhaiya ohja uncle mil gayi file..

Ohja- areee waah jhallar tune dhoondh nikali file...ek kaam karo yeh file ke ander Jo bhi papers uske photo khich le ronnie air phir bahaar jaake yeh saare papers ke copy nikalvane lete hain...yeh le phone.

Ronnie- good idea ohja uncle ..

Ronnie click photo from phone...

Ronnie- areee waah yeh phone toh Mere phone jaisa hai...

Jacky - yeh phone aapka hi hai ronnie bhaiya ..

Ronnie looks angrily at ohja uncle...

Ohja- hi hi hi mahol mahol ronnie..woh toh bas aise hi...mein.. hi hi

At night...

At ghotala house ...

Varsha tells everything that happened at market...

Varsha- vasant mujeh bahut dar lag raha kahi agents ko patah na chal gaya ho ki hum kon hain...

Vasant- varsha tum daro mat.. woh agents ki memory wapas abhi nahi aayi abhi tak..lekin hum chukana rehna hoga...

Varsha- vasant bahut darr lag raha hain mujeh ..kahi woh log 2015 aur 212 ki piche ho toh...

Vasant- bas varsha hum hamari manzil se jyadaaa door nahi ...varsha daro mat ..patharwale bhagwan hamare baccho ki raaksha kar rahe hain...

Vava hugs each other...

Next day...

At ghotala house...

Vasant- sharad kya kar raha hain thik se yeh daadi laga beta...dekh chipk nahi raha ...

Sharad- haan bhaiya mein phir se thik se lagaata hoon..

Vasant- varsha tum sab ghar pe rehna aur haan chaukne rehna...hoon?

Varsha--hooon...

Vasant- yeh hemant kaha hain subha se dikhai nahi de raha

Varsha- woh bhavna aunty ke yahaa gaya hain bol raha tha bhairavi ko kuch help karni hain.. issliye help karne gaya. Hain

Ohja ,ronnie and manav bhavna enters...

Ohja- ke ke ke hai yeh jhallar ghotala maareh ko tune lead role nahi diya...

Bhavna -yeh Rajasthan express ki tape mere ghar se chalu..ooo Rajasthan express aap kya lead role lead role ke liye to rahe ho

Manav- papa aap kya drama kar ne baith gaye kya farak padta hain kon lead. Role kare.. important yeh hai. Ki hame record karna hain sab baat..

Ohja-woh mein kuch nahi jaanta maareh ko lead role karna hain bas...warna mein nahi aa raha..

Ronnie- aeee ohja uncle tum kya woh ba woh ba woh ba...

All- tch tch tch..

Bhavna- ronnie bol ne bhai late ho raha hai sabko

Ronnie-areee ek min man...woh bhavna aunty aap subha chai ke saath kya khata hain..

Bhavna- sev mamara

Ronnie- aur better option do bhavna aunty...

Bhavna- areee ek min ubho reh bhai ..( just wait for a min )

Bhavna- haan mein subha ko chaai ke saath gaathiya,khakhra ...

Ronnie- haan toh ohja uncle man tum kya nakhara kar raha hai...

No one understand what Ronnie said...

Bhavna- re daffod ...atkuchand woh nakhra hota hain nakhra.

Ronnie-- ohja uncle samjh gaya ..na..

Manav- haan papa please aap co operate kijiye..

Ohja-thik hain tu keh raha hain issliye mein nakhre nahi karta par main lead mein hi rahunga...

Vasant- areee thik hain ...ohja uncle aap ban Lena par please ab chaliye...aur haan Ronnie tum waha atakna mat...warna saara drama mujeh sambhal na hoga.

Varsha- vasant aap overacting mat karna ...

Manav- vasant bhaiya yeh lijiye meri watch iss mein mein ne recorder fit kar diya hain...

Vasant- haan haan thank you manav...

Manav-aur hum log yahi rahe.ge taaki woh ramniklal ya bhadresh bhaiya ko shaq na ho...all the best.

Sharad- bhaiya mmm acting karna...

Varsha- all the best vasant...

Ronnie- haan haan chalo abhi late ho raha hain...

All 3 leaves...

At bhatt house...

Bhavna calls sharad

Sharad- boliye bhavna aunty...

Bhavna aunty (angrily)- ooo logical Ghotala abhi ke yaha aa..sab ghotala ko leke aur haan saath mein adoption papers leke aana aur agar adoption papers nahi laaya toh ek gun laana..

Sharad- par Bhavna aunty hamare paas gun nahi hain...

Bhavna- acha thik hain...

Before sharad speaks bhavna. Cuts call..

Jacky-sharad kya hua Bhavna aunty gun kyu maang rahi hain...

Sharad- patah nahi bahut gusse mein the aur hum sabko bulaya hain unke ghar adoption papers leke..ya gun leke...

All ghotala's go to bhavna house...

Bhavna calls manav. And asks him to come to bhatt house...

Edited by Krish58 - 9 years ago