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Home ff part 10

Okay I don't know ke yeh part mein ne kaisa likha hai because it was difficult to write the makarshankranti ka part..
And it's scene


Megha comes inside she was happy...

Megha comes to varsha room.

Megha was happy and she wanted to share it..

She saw varsha was sleeping..

Megha sits beside varsha ..

Megha-( in mind) bhabhi toh so rahe hai unhe abhi bataao ya kal..mein kya karoo bhabhi ko uthao ya nahi...

Megha's trance was broken with varsha voice..

Varsha- megha..megha kya hua tu soi nahi...
Varsha gets up ..

Megha- ( excitedly ) bhabhi ...bhabhi..
and megha hugs varsha..

Varsha hugs her back.

Varsha- megha kya hua..batana tu itni khush kyu hai..kya hua..

Megha breaks the hug..

Megha- bhabhi mein sab batati hoon. .woh bhabhi abhi mein sharad ke saath balcony mein thi..usne...

Megha was sharmaoing ...

Sharad was going to his room when hemant appears from back and does eeeh..

Sharad gets surprised and looks back..
It was hemant ..

Hemant - ( happily)eeeh chacha aap itni raat ko yayaya kyu kar rahe hai...

Sharad - aeee hemant tu yeh kambal leje itni raat ko kya kar raha hai...

Hemant- chacha woh mujeh thodi awaaz sunaai di issliye mein kambal odhkar bahaar aaya toh dekha balcony wala darwaaz khula hai issliye mein gayab hogaya aur phir dekha toh aap yayaya kar rahe the.

Sharad hugs his bhatija ..hemant hugs him.. Back

Sharad- aeee hemant mein bahut khush hoon . itna ki mere ander ke yayaya khatam hi nahi ho rahe hai..

Hemant starts doing his chidhana to his chacha..

Hemant- chacha kya hua ..

Shishir comes their as he doesn't find hemant in their room..

Shishir - hemant bhaiya aur sharad chacha aap yaha kya kar rahe aur chacha aap yayaya kyu kar rahe ..hai..

Shishir joins his hemant bhaiya in teasing sharad...

Sharad- mein bata hoon kya hua..
Before sharad could say anything...

Vasant and Jacky comes their..

Vasant- ( to Jacky ) yeh dekho chacha aur uske bhatije yaha hai..aadhi raat ko kya baat karne baithe gaye .hai..yeh tino bhoot

Vasant- oh chacha and bhatija gang tum tino itni raat ko bhoot ki tarah kyu ghum rahe ho..
Aur oh baniyan tu raat ko kyu lehraha hai tu..aisa Kya hua ki raat ko lehraha hai..

Sharad sharma jata hai... On asking..and he again starts doing yayayayaya
And goes to his room and vasant ,hemant Jacky and shishir HC follows him..

In sharad room,

Vasant- aeee baniyan lehrana bandh kar..
Warna abhi paani mein dhoke sukha doonga tujeh...

Sharad stops..

Vasant- Ab bata itni raat ko kyu lehra raha tha..aur phir se lehraya na toh sach mein tujeh baniyan banake press karke mein cupboard mein rakh doonga

HC - bolna sharad..

HC said while eating chips...

Sharad- bhaiya woh mein ne aaj subha aapse kaha tha na ki mein megha ko sab sach bata doonga ..toh mein ne usse sab kaha...

Here in varsha room,

Megha and varsha were in tears..
Megha told varsha everything which sharad had said to her.

Varsha wipes her tears ..and hugs megha..

Varsha- mein bahut khush hoon tum dono ke liye...megha...

Megha- bhabhi mein ne iss pal ke liye bahut intezaar kiya hai... .mein bahut khush hoon ki mein aap logo se door nahi hoongi...


Here in sharad room,
All were in tears...

HC was in tears .. he was happy for them, as 9211 family have gone through so much ..first it was megha and then 2015 ... for HC his people were like his own family and if anything happened to anyone..HC would get worried and would go to any strength to help his people...

Vasant was in tears and he hugged his brother.. He was happy for sharad...

Vasant and varsha has always treated sharad as their son...


Vasant-(with tears) mere baniyan.. .mein bahut khush hoon...

Sharad- ( in tears) bhaiya aap kyu ro rahe hai..

Vasant- sharad ,mein khush hoon ..yeh khushi ke aasu hai..mere baniyan..

Hemant- hawww papa aapne
Aasu khushi naam ki ladki se maang kar liye hai... ?

Vasant- nai nai hemant yeh sirf kehte hai woh aise movie nai dikhte ki bte ko naukri lag jaati hai aur maa kehti hai ki yeh toh khushi ke aasu hai.. Woh wale khushi ke aasu

Hemant doesn't understand.

HC - aeee hemant mein bata hoon..
Vasant ,mein beta banta hoon..

All other watch what was HC and vasant were doing

Vasant acting as mother...HC acting as beta..

Vasant- yeh raju abhi tak aaya kyu nahi...badi der hogayi..mera raju aaya kyu nahi abhi tak..

HC comes.

HC- aeee maa mein aagaya maa..mujeh naukri mil gayi maa .aashirvaad de maa mujeh Tere bte ko naukri mil gayi...

Vasant- kya ..kya kaha tune tujeh naukri mil gayi..sada khush raho ..tariki karo

HC touches feet of Vasant and. Gets up

HC- aeee maa tu ro rahi hai..aaj toh tujeh khush hona chahiye..

Vasant- areee pagale yeh toh khushi ke aasu hai..mein khush hoon issliye aankh se aasu nikal rahe hai..

All- aap dono toh mmm kiya

Vasant -haan toh hemant isse kehte hai..khushi ke aasu matalb jab insaan bahut khush hota hai toh uske aankho se aasu nikalte hai...hooon

Hemant- hooon ... Eeeh toh papa jis din hame hamare 2015 mil jaayenge tab aap kushi ke maare royenge na...

All gets emotional...

Vasant comes towards hemant and pyar se hemant ke sir par haath rakhta hai

Vasant- haan...mere pyare gende...

sharad and HC comes towards vasant.. And puts their hand on vasant shoulder..

HC- vasant, chinta mat karo ...hame hamara 2015 mil jaayega. Mein tumhara dard samjhta hoon tum sab mera parivar ho...mere apne ho...
(Wiping his tears) Aur sharad tumhari aur megha ki shaadi ka menu mein decide karenga aur mein hi banaounga hooon.

All laughs and says - hooon..

Next day,

At bhatt house,

Bhavna- aeee dakan,lohipini. kai janam no badlo le che tu maraa jode hain..mein ne kya bigaada tha Tere haan..

Bhairavi( crying)- lekin baa..

Bhavna- chup bilkul chup hojaa ..Aaj toh faisla ho hi jaayega chal mere saath tu chal..

Manav enters

As soon as manav entered he knew definitely their is some bhairavigiri done
bhairavi didi..

Manav- Bhavna aunty,, aapne mujeh kis kaam ke liye bulaaya tha.

Manav thought he should leave as early as possible ..otherwise he would surely become sandwhich between saas and bahu
He was about to leave

Bhavna- aeee manav rukh tu.

Manav- kya hua Bhavna aunty...

Bhavna- manav abhi ke abhi ghotala nagari jaa aur Jo koi bhi pehla ghotala dikhe na usse pakkd ke laa.. Abhi jaa aur haan saath mein adoption papers bhi saath mein le aana ..aur khabardaar Jo naa kaha hai toh .. Warna tujeh ghotala nagari mein lejaakar ghotalao se kahoongi ki tujeh adopt karle ... Ya toh phir mein ghar chodke chali jaaungi..

Manav- Bhavna aunty shaant hojaaye aapka blood pressure badh jaayega.. Thik hai mein laata hoon par aap shaant hojaaye..

Bhavna- kaise rahi shaant mein .. Manav tu bol haan yeh bhairavi aur uske kaarname ke kaaran mein kaise rahoo shaant..

Bhairavi gets scared because of Bhavna anger ..

Bhairavi-( crying) manav ...

Bhairavi hides behind manav ..

Bhairavi- manav tu baa ko samjha ek toh khud bolne mein gadbad karti hai aur phir mujeh daati ti hai..

Manav- bhairavi Didi aap roye mat. .. Aap shaant hojaaye ..aap mujeh batayie Bhavna aunty ne aapse kya kaha

Bhairavi- batati hoon manav,

Bhavna- tu chup re daakan mein batati hoon manav ...
Kal hum log woh til ke ladoo aur chikki bana rahe the... Toh mein ne isse kaha ki chakudi mein sone jaa rahi hoon ..toh til ke ladoo bana dena aur Woh akhrhot. (walnut ) ke chilke( shell) ko bahaar daalna ..
Toh dekh iss buddheshwari ne kya kiya..

Bhavna show a til ka ladoo in which bhairavi had put small pieces of walnut shell..

Bhavna- abhi mein ne yeh khaya ladoo aur mere daat mein darad hone laga ..iss buddeshwari ne akhroht ( walnut) chilke saare til ke ladoo mein daal diye ..

Bhairavi- nai nai baa ..mein ne saare til ke ladoo mein nahi daale sirf kuch til ke ladoo mein hi daale hai..aur baa aap hi ne saaf saaf kaha tha ki chakudi mein sone naa rahi hoon toh til ke ladoo bana dena aur akhrhot ke chilke bahaar daalna toh akhrhot Jr chilke bade the issliye usse koot ke chotte chotte tukde daale mein ne

Bhavna- aeee dafod mein ne ne saaf saaf..kaha tha ki akhrhot ki chilke bahaar daalna matalb ki kachre mein daalna

Bhairavi - nai baa aapne kachre word use nahi kiya tha..Ab tu hi bol manav kiski galti hai meri ya baa ki..

Manav- ( in mind) hey bhagwan bacha le mujeh..

Manav- Bhavna aunty galti aapki hai..aapko clearly batana chahiye tha bhairavi didi ko...

Bhairavi- dekha baa, manav ko bhi patah hai..

Bhavna- aeee manav. Bhairavi ka vakil.. Tu kya iski taraf daari kar raha hai...

But before Bhavna could say further liza and Anna enters...

Anna- good morning manav..

Manav- good morning Anna.. .

Liza - areee Bhavna aunty tum abhi bhi niche hai woh upar bhadresh bhaiya aur Ronnie aur ohja uncle sab upar chaat par hai...

Bhavna- aeee kaise jaau liza puch iss bhairu se puch kya kiya issne..

Manav- Bhavna aunty mein jaa raha upar chaat par ..

Anna- ruko manav mein bhi aa rahi hoon..

Manav- haan jaldi chalo Anna..

Manav and Anna were at colony garden they were waiting for ghotalas...

Anna- manav tum Bhavna aunty ke yaha se jaldi kyu chale aaye..

Manav - Anna Bhavna aunty ne kaha ki mein ..

Manav tells Anna about bhairavigiri and also that what Bhavna has told him..

Anna- oh my god I don't believe this...

Ghotalas enter...

Hemant- eeeh manav bhaiya , Anna didi
Hemant waves hi towards manav and anna
..
Manav just laughs and say hi to hemant...

All ghotala's come to colony garden...

Vasant- chalo chaar par chalo abhi competition bhi haina ...

Manav- haan chaliye mein bas aaphi ka intezaar kar raha tha..

All were at terrace...

Bhavna ,bhairavi enters with Bhavna still angry on bhairu ..

Bhadresh- chalo aagaye sab.. Haan toh chalo competition start karte hai...aur sabko ek ek baar toh competition mein hissa Lena hi hoga...

Teams were decided already .. 3 idiots

In bhadresh team -Ronnie ,ohja uncle, Bhavna,anna and liza were their...

In vasant team- varsha,HC,bhairavi, shishir, pritesh were their..

In manav team- sharad, lajo aunty , megha,Jacky,hemant were their

Hemant- ek min ek min... Mujeh papa ki team mein jaana hai ...

Vasant- areee par hemant tu manav ki team mein hai...beta

Hemant- nai nai papa mujeh aapki team mein rehna hai...papa Bas..and hemant starts doing his hafu hafu and pair zameen par patak ta hai..

Vasant- aeee gende chaat tod dega tu..achaa thik hai tu meri team. Mein aaja .. Bas...

Hemant becomes happy and does eeeh...

Soon competition starts ..

Every one were flying kites...

Bhadresh- oh shri shri ghotala dekhna aapki patang toh mein hi kaatunga

Vasant - haan haan dekhte hai...

Bhadresh says to ohja - ohja uncle phirki thik tarah se pakadye..


Ohja- ek min..bhadresh ..abhi mein yeh til ke ladoo kha loon.. Phir pakdta hoon..

Bhadresh - oh kaka murli baad mein khana abhi meri patang kat jaayegi..

Bhavna-oh Rajasthan express laaye phirki mujeh dijiye aap khaiye til ke ladoo.. Ek number ke bhukkad baaras. Hai kam se kam Aaj ke din toh khanne pe dhyan kam kijiye..

Ohja - hi hi hi hi
Bhavna takes phirki.. From ohja hand..

Vasant- varsha... Dekho meri pehli patang hawa mein udd rahi hai...

. Varsha - haan vasant laaye na mujeh dijiye mujeh bhi patang udda ni hai...

Vasnat- haan ..haan yeh lo varsha..

Pritesh - pehli patang ka kya matalbvasant uncle ??

All looks at vasant...while flying kite...

Hemant- eeeh pritesh pehli patang matalb pehle papa patang uddte the toh unki patang fat jaati thi aur Aaj nahi fati papa ki patang issliye papa ne kaha meri pehli patang..

Vasant- haan yeh sahi keh raha hai..

Everyone were flying kites ..

Bhadresh- Aeee Ronnie kya kar raha hai tu apni patang bich mein kyu laa raha hai..
And suddenly bhadresh ki patang kat jaati hai..
Before Ronnie could speak...

Bhadresh- yeh dekh teri wajah se meri patang kat gayi.. Ronnie.

Ronnie - areee meri wajah se nai kati patang.. Meri patang tujeh se pehle kati hai bhadresh..

Sharad- bhadresh bhaiya ,aapki patang mein ne kaati hai .. ..

Bhadresh- hain, logiacal ghotala tune kaati hai..koi baat nai dusri baar mein teri patang kaatunga.


Jacky- sharad ..woh dekh hamari patang ka pech hua hai kisi aur patang ke saath...

Sharad- Jacky.. Yeh le tu patang udda mein teri phirki pakdta ta hoon...

Now Jacky was flying kite..
But soon undono ki patang bhi kat jaati hai

Jacky- hamari patang kissi ne kaati

HC - aeee sharad, jacky mein ne kaati hai patang ...chalo chalo aur uddao patang . ... Hooon

Both- hooon


Here megha was flying kite..and woh Anna ki patang kaati hai...
Megha was happy as usne pehli baar patang uddayi thi and patang kaati hai... And she happily hugs Jacky as woh uski phirki pakdi hui thi...


Anna was jealous as manav and sharad helped megha. And manav was spending more time with megha...

Between Bhavna and bhairavi ..Bhavna ki patang kat jaati hai ...

Even pritesh and shishir hemant were flying kite with help of HC..

And trio milke manav ki patang kaate te hai...
Vasant was having hard time with hemant. . . as while flying kite hemant galat shabd bolta and vasant patang uddte waqt samjhane baithe jaata hai hemant.. Ko.
Vasant- kya nai nai kar raha hai hemant..

Varsha isse samjhao na..aisa nai chalta beta..

Hemant - papa papa...

Vasant- kya papa papa kar raha hai

Hemant- woh dekhiye hamari patang ka kech hone wala hai..

Vasant- nai nai hemant usse pech kehte 'p' hota hai 'k' nahi..dekh abhi hamari patang ka pech hogaya ..
Vasant was busy in professor giri and vasant ki patang ka pech hojata jaata hain and patang kat jaati hai

Hemant- hawww papa meri fav patang kat gayi. He starts doing hafu hafu

Vasant- hemant beta ,sorry dekh mein tujeh na dusri patang udda ke dunga...

Hemant- nai mujeh wohi hi patang chahiye

Varsha was trying to manaoing him.


HC- aeee hemant tu ro mat yeh vasant wohi patang tujeh udda ke dega..
Hooon

Hemant- hooon

Vasant- HCji..lekin mein kaha dhoondhne jaaunga patang.. Ab woh mein kati patang kaha se laaunga...

HC - aeee dooba hemant ko dusri hi same color ki patang udd ke dena dekh yaha kitni saari uske fav color ki patang hai...

Hemant- eeeh papa aapko tisri baar dooba bola...

Vasant- haan Ab chal tujeh yeh wali patang udda ke deta hoon.

Hemant- eeeh papa... And he happily hugs vasant.

Vasant smiles at him...

Vasant- mere pyare gendu.. Chal
Aur iss baar bolne mein galti m mat karna warna hamari patang phir se kat jaayegi..hooon

Hemant- hooon



Anna- oh my god I really don't believe this..mr.ghotala toh patang uddte waqt bhi hemant ko samjhane baithe gaye..

Liza- Anna agar Ronnie patang uddte waqt atak sakta hai..toh Mr.ghotala bhi samjha sakta hai hemant ko..
Par tum yeh batao tumhara muh kyu subha se utara hua hai.

Anna- nai nai liza bhabhi mera mood toh thik hai ..aapko aisa kyu laga..

Liza- kuch nai.. Bas mujeh aisa laga ki tumhara mood kharab hai..(In mind) kuch toh hua hai..Anna ko oh...God help her.. ..

Here, manav and sharad were leading..

Plus HC and ohja were on food..
competition on who is eating more..

Bhavna- oh bhukkad baarso dusro ke liye rehne do .. Khanna ..aise subha se gapaa gap thus rahe ho dono...
Sahi kaha tha vasant bhai ne aap dono judwaa bhukkad baraas bhai ho..

Ohja- ke ke ke ke kehne ka matalb aap ka Bhavna bhabhi..
Ki mein bahut khata hoon

HC- Haan,issme puch ne ki zaroorat nahi hai ohja bhai

Bhavna- haan ..aap aur yeh himanshu bhai dono bhukkad hai..bhukkad pura nasta safaa chat kardiya...sab log bichare kabse bhukhe hai subha se ..

HC- aeee Bhavna Ben..mein kaha ..

Bhavna- kya Bhavna Ben..haan..subah se aap itna kha rahe hai aap kya yeh Rajasthan express ke saath competition karne baithe gaye haan...

Lajo- oh ho Bhavna bhabhi aap kyu in dono ko daat rahi hai.. Duphar ho gayi hai toh sabko niche khanne ke liye bulaa lijiye..sab subha se bhukhe honge...


Vasant and Hemant were flying kite...

Vasant- Hemant beta thik se phirki pakd na. Beta..dekh teri fav..color ki patang tujeh udd kar de raha hoon na ..


Manav gets a call..

He excuses himself..

Sharad notice it...

Manav- haan...

Karthik- manav , tum kaha ho. Mein tumhare colony mein toh aagaya hoon par tum kaha ho??

Manav- karthik tum ruko mein aata hoon niche...

Karthik- manav kisiko shaq toh nahi hoga na

Manav- karthik tum chinta mat karo kuch nahi hoga mein tumhare saath hoon ..sirf tum normal behave karna... Thik hai ..

Karthik- hoon ...thik hai

At ghotala house detector was doing timi timi with full and high speed...

Here vasant and varsha were smiling as they saw hemant and shishir were having fun with HC while flying kite and then they saw sharad ,megha and Jacky.. They were happy too..

Varsha take balaaien of her family in their alien style..

Vasant- kya soch rahi ho varsha??

Varsha- kuch nai bas ...soch rahi thi ki abhi kaha hoga hamara beta vasant..kis haal mein hoga.. Kaha reh raha hoga..kya waha ke insaan uss ke saath ache se baat karte hoge..kya woh abhi hamari tarah makarshankranti ka utsav mana raha hoga??

Vasant- varsha... Chinta mat karo hamari yaade hai uske saath...woh hamara Bahadur beta.. Hai..hum usse dhoondhnege aur woh hame bahut jaldi mil jaaye..aur patah hai mein roz patherwale bhagwan se yehi hi prathna karta hoon ki usse manav jaise ache insaani dost mile taki woh yaha akela mehsoos na kare ...

While they were talking about 2015 .
karthik comes with manav. .

Sharad and megha were fighting... They were using their manipulate superpower on dice..

Sharad - 5
Megha- 4
Sharad- 5
Megha-4
Sharad-5
Megha-4..


Sharad - nai nai 5 aaya tha dice par

Megha - nai sharad,4 aaya tha dice par aur tumne manipulate kiya tha dice ko..

Sharad- nai ,megha 5 aaya tha aur tumne manipulate kiya dice ko...aur hamne decide kiya tha ki agar 5 aaya toh tum meri phirki pakdogi aur agar 4 aaya toh mein phirki pakdoonga..

Megha- nai sharad 4 aaaya tha .

Sharad- plz na megha meri phirki pakdo..

Megha- nai, mein nai pakdene wali phirki... Mujeh patang uddani hai...tum..manav bhaiya se kaho... Tumhari phirki pakdne ke liye .

Sharad- areee par manav nai ya yaha..aur sab patang udd rahe ..toh..tum hi abhi free ho..toh tum pakoda na meri phirki..dekho tum pakdna phirki phir mein tumhe patanga uddne dunga ..

He comes near megha...and whispers to her.
Aur logically shaadi ke baad jab hum yaha prithvi par wapas aayenge ghumne bhaiya bhabhi aur sabke saathagar makarshankranti ke utsav par aaye toh tumhe hi meri phirki pakdni hogi..

Megha sharma jaati hai ...

Megha- aur logic yeh bhi hai ki dekho abhi vasant bhaiya ne phirki pakdi hai aur varsha bhabhi patang udd rahe hai toh logically shaadi ke baad tumhe hi meri phirki pakdni padegi..

And abhi bhi tum woh hi karoge..kyuki mein tumhari phirki nahi pakdungi.

And megha snatches kite from sharad hands..
Sharad was sharmaoing ...

And then he realise that megha has snatched kite from him..

Sharad- megha yeh cheating hai..

Megha- koi cheating nahi hai sharad.. Aur agar Ab tumne thik tarah se phirki nahi pakdi na toh mein tumse nazaaraz ho jaaungi..

Sharad - thik hai ...

Sharad was happy ..He was lost in megha thoughts ..

And was blushing hard..his trance was broken by hemant...

Hemant- eeeh chacha

And starts his chidhana

Sharad- kya hemant tu bhi..na..

Hemant sees karthik..

Hemant- chacha dekho karthik bhaiya aaye hai..

Sharad sees karthik..

Sharad- aree haan hemant.. Yeh toh karthik hai Jo rustomji ki dukaan mein kaam karta haina..

Bhavna aunty asks everyone to come down for lunch..

All were going down...

Pritesh- areee vasant uncle chaliye na niche ..

Vasant- hum aa rahe hain pritesh.. Bas woh hemant .shishir aajaye ..hum aa rahe tum jaao niche ...

Pritesh leaves ...

At terrace..
Vasant- Ab sab suno aur HC aap bhi sunniye ...na aur baad mein chikki khanna..



Vasant- Ab sab suno niche koi...

HC - aeee ek min..mein HC hoon toh meri baat sabko maanani padegi..

Vasant- areee par high command.

HC- no..tune hi kaha tha na vasant ki Ab sab meri matalb HC ki baat sunnege .haan toh suno niche haina koi bhi gadbad nahi karega ..sab log normal behave karenge aur sabse important baat yeh hai ki agar tumhe khaane mein se koi chiz nahi pasand aayegi na toh woh mujeh dhire se chupke se de dena..kyuki woh Bhavna Ben hain na woh zyada khanne nahi denge..

Vasant -(with angry look)yeh aapki important baat hai..???

HC- haan kyu...? Tujeh problem hai??

Vasant- nai nai...

HC - haan toh chalo sab dhoop le lo..jaldi..

All were taking dhoop.


Here karthik was taking dhoop ...
From ohja uncle balcony..

Pritesh sees it

Pritesh-(in mind)yeh bhaiya ghotala family ki tarah dhoop kyu le rahe hai ? Kahi yeh bhi toh...


At bhatt house,

Bhavna informed that lunch will be at their house.

Manav introduce karthik as his friend...

Karthik soon become comfortable with ghotala parivaar and manav .

Karthik was with manav , sharad and Jacky..
Hemant comes from back...

Hemant- eeeh, karthik bhaiya,

Karthik gets scared as he didn't knew it was hemant...

Vasant-- aeee hemant aise koi daraata hai beta, koi kisi ko dekho tumne karthik ki daraa diya..

Karthik- nai,nai koi baat nahi...aap mat daatiye hemant ko

Hemant- papa karthik bhaiya ne mujeh yeh whistle ( taking out whistle from his pocket)di thi jab hum unke dukaan mein gaye the..woh bhi tree mein di thi...

Vasant was going to explain difference between tree and free but varsha calls

During lunch when karthik praised the daal made by varsha.. Varsha was happy... ..

After lunch,
Vasant - hemant usse tree nahi free kehte hai tree matalb pedd,aur free ka matalb muft

Varsha and megha were climbing stairs...

Sharad- laaye bhabhi ,woh mats de dijiye ...

Varsha- nai nai sharad tu jaa mein aur megha leke aate hai ...

Sharad- aree bhabhi aap de dijiye bhari hai ..mats aur dusri saari chiz bhi hai aapke haath mein ...

Karthik- haan ,de dijiye na.. Aap...

Varsha and megha gives mats and other thing to karthik and sharad..

Varsha was feeling happy on seeing karthik..she didn't knew the reason but she felt happy when she saw karthik..

Bhairavi- karthik yeh bhi le ...aur haan baa ne kaha hai yeh saare dabe ko chupa dena issme khaane ki chiz hai..toh tu yeh saare apne saath le jaana. Taki ohja uncle aur himanshu bhai sab kha na le issliye

Bhairavi hands him some dabbas
Megha- ( whispering) bhabhi yeh HCji kitna khaate hai ..

Varsha- wohi na, Ab kal ki hi baat hai mein ne tum sab ke liye gajar ka halwa banaya tha HCji ne sab kha liya ... Aur rehne bhi nai diya.



Karthik- thik hai bhairavi bhabhi,

Bhavna- kya thik hai bhairavi bhabhi..aeee buddhimaani chakudi mein ne tujeh kaha tha ki yeh saare Dabe chupa dena ghar mein matalb tha ki hamare ghar mein hi chupana tha...

Bhairavi- nai baa, nai aapne kaha tha saaf saaf ki chakudi saare dabbe ghar mein chupana aur aapne clear nai kiya ki kisike ghar mein.. Baa aapki galti thi...
dekha sharad, karthik, baa kitna confuse karti hai ..ek toh khud hi bolne mein gadbad karti hai aur phir mujeh bolti hai.. Baa...

Kitni baar kaha hai unse jaake ke apne dimaag ka ilaaj kar vaaye par sunte hi nahi..

Bhavna- aeee dakan mere dimaag. Ka ilaaz ..Tere dimaag ka ilaaj karva ..ghanchakkar.

Sharad- Bhavna aunty relax chill chill..

Liza- Bhavna aunty aap baad mein daant Lena ..abhi upar aaye aap sab..


At terrace..

Ohja uncle was flying kite...

Ohja- hai koi Jo maarah Rajasthan shur veer yodha ka patang kaat sake hain...

Soon ohja uncle ki patang kat jaati hai

Ronnie- aeee ohja uncle dekho tumhara patang kat gaya aur kaata bhi toh woh ba woh ba..

All tch tch tch..
HC - aeee Ronnie jaldi bol bhai...

Ronnie- ek min.. Man..


Liza was flying kite..

Liza- seriously Ronnie tum aise waqt pe atak ta hai man..

Ronnie - ek min... Yr..liza save me ko Hindi mein kya kehte hai..

Liza- Ronnie,seriously tum itne easy sabd mein atak ta hai man...save me ko Hindi mein bacha lo mujeh..

Ronnie- haan toh ohja uncle aapki patang aapka ka hi bacha ne kaata hai...

All look at Ronnie..

Liza- Ab tumhe mere se koinnahi bacha sakta Ronnie..seriously tumne bachha ka bacha kiya...

HC- aeee atkuchand woh bachha hota hai aur bacha nahi...

Ronnie- aap samjha na...
Ohja(looking towards).- reee vivhishan apne hi baap ki patang kaati tune ..

Manav-(laughing) Papa sab chalta hai..aaj ke din aap dusri patang uddaye..

Ohja- rukh tu Ab dusri baar udaata hoon aur dekhna Ab mein kaaa hoon teri patang...

Varsha- areee sharad apni patang bich mein mat laa.. Bahut muskil se meri patang udd rahi hai...

Sharad- bhabhi, mein apni patang bich mein nahi laa raha hava ke kaaran ho raha hai...aur patang kat jaaye toh dusri udda Lena bhabhi..

Varsha- Heeein...

Sharad and varsha ki patang mein se sharad ki patang kat jaati hai..

Varsha- sharad dusri patang udda Lena..

Here, pritesh with help of HC bhadresh ki patang kaat te hai.

Vasant was flying kite...

Vasant- varsha, dekho meri patang udd rahi hai aur abhi tak nai kati meri patang..


HC - aeee vasant abhi kat jaayegi. Teri patang .dekhna kyu ki Ab mein udd raha hoon patang ..

Vasant- aajaye .. ..aap ..HCji...

Soon vasnat ki patang ka pech ho jataa hai.. .

Vasant- Dekhna aapki hi patang kategi HCji...

HCji- aeee vasant meri patang nahi hai woh ..yeh ..dekh meri patang toh fat gayi hai..

Karthik- aapki patang ka pech mere saath hai...

Vasant saw karthik and manav were their..
And karthik was flying kite..

Vasant- areee karthik tum ho...
Acha hai .. .acha hai..beta chalo dekhte hai kisiki patang kat ti hai..

Karthik looked at vasant when he called him beta ...he gets emotional.. As only varsha and vasant has called him beta.. ..otherwise all have called him by his name..

Manav understood karthik situation.
He just kept his hand on karthik shoulder and assured him ..

Soon vasant ki patang kat jaati hai...

Karthik was happy ki ussne pehli patang kaati...
At night,
At ohja house...

Lajo tells everyone that dinner would be at their house

Ohja uncle was constantly giving reasons on why all should not have food at their house...

Ronnie- Aaj toh ohja uncle ko bahut wo ba woh ba ...

Bhadresh- atka yeh ..bol ne wallah bol..

Ronnie- ek min..man..vasant ghotala Woh dil ke arama ganna kisne gaya hai..

Vasant- areee baapre Ronnie ka meaning puchna toh din par din bhayank ho raha hai..

Ronnie- mein tumse pucha hi kyu...

Ohja - jaldi bol jhallar

Bhadresh- - areee ek min.. Yr..sochne de... Mujeh..haan yaad aaya ..woh salma agha ne gaana gaya hai

Ronnie- haan toh Aaj ohja uncle aap ko toh bahut bada salma lagega..

No one. Understand what Ronnie said..

Bhadresh- aeee wallah woh sadma hota hai sadma..

Ronnie - tum samjaana man..

Hemant- lekin ohja uncle ko sadma kyu lagega..Ronnie uncle?

Ronnie- kyuki Aaj unke yaha hum sab khaana kha rahe hai issliye...toh woh toh kanjoos hai issliye

Ohja - ke ke ke ke.. Bol raha hai tu Ronnie..

Karthik insist on going back to shop as he has to care of shop but .. Lajo ask him to have dinner..

After dinner ,
karthik leaves ...for the shop...

Here varsha and sharad wanted to go back to Ghotala house , as their powers were going to fluctuate

Varsha-(whispering) megha, mujeh ghar jaana hoga mere powers fluctuate hone wale hai.. Megha...

Megha- bhabhi lekin hum achank yahaa se kaise jaaye agar aise hi chale jaayenge toh sab hum lar shaq karenge...

Vasant- varsha , mujeh lagta hai tumhare powers fluctuate hone wale hai.. kuch sochta hoon mein... ... Aur jaise hi mein kahoo tum aur sharad yaha se jaana . Aur uske baad mein aur baaki sab yaha se aajayenge

At ghotala house ,

The detector was still doing timi timi with full speed
Karthik had not gone far from colony when his powers start to fluctuate ..

At ohja house

vasant gets idea ,

And he says that they have made sweet for everyone..

Varsha - mein leke aati hoon
Chal sharad

Sharad and varsha leaves

They enter ghotala house and their powers start to fluctuate...

Sharad sees the detector was doing timi timi..

Sharad- bhabhi detector timi timi kar raha hai..isska matalb hamara 2015 yahi hai..
Varsha was size was continuously changing ..

Varsha- kya ?? sharad Tere bhaiya ko contact kar abhi..
Hame abhi jaana hoga dhoondhne ..Tere bhaiya ko contact kar mein formula leke aati hoon.
Vasant and other ghotala enters house as their power were going to fluctuate...

Vasant sees detector doing timi timi..
And they decide to go out
All take formula

HC -hame abhi hi nikal na hoga 2015 ko dhoondhne..
Hoon
Ishaaba..














Edited by Krish58 - 8 years ago
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superb duper fantabulous update was it...

megha-sharad happy... their happiness knows no bounds...
they want to share their happiness...
megha shares her feelings with varsha.. varsha happy for them...
sharad does yaya & hemant wakes up & goes to see being invisible.. shishir also wakes up 7 cums near sharad... both tease sharad...
sharad shares his happiness with vasant & others...
vasant happy for his brother...
HC overwhelmed..
hemantgiri shuru ho gai.. adhi raat ko... khushi k aansu ni samaj aye bachhe ko.. aur papa & hc shuru ho gaye classes k liye..
they remember 2015...

whole makarsankranti scenario, competitions, chat, arguments all written perfectly...
liza told correctly agar ronnie patang udda te waqt atak sakta h.. toh vasant hemant k liye classes kyun nai shuru kar sakta...😆😆

Bhairu at her best.. kya mast bhairavigiri ki.. walnut ke chilke crush karke tel k ladoo me dal diiye... ek to til ka ladoo itna kadak hota h usme bhi chilke... mind blowing bhairu.. pakka sabke daat todne ka bandobast kiya.. kash sabse pehle bhadresh ko khillati.. maja aata.. waise bhi woh uske haath ka bana saara khana khata hi h.. 😆😆

bhavana aunty pissed off with bhairu & antics... eh kam tha... ki bhavana aunty k order ka mast maltab nikal kar bhairu khane ke dibbe karthik ko diye uske ghar le jane k liye...😆😆😆
manav surely phas gaya in dono saas bahu k bich...😆😆

ojha uncle , hc competition of eating...😆😆 yeah sabse best competition thi...

bhavana aunty shouting at them... ojha uncle to seriously koi asar nai h...

HC tells all imp notice to pass food to him if they dont want.. serioulsy itna imp note tha.. kya batao.. okk HCji.. mom jab karela aur kantola banayegi aur jab forcefully meri thalli me dalegi tab me aapko parcel kardungi... hoon..

karthik enters... he feels comfortable around ghotalas & manav...
varsha too feels nice wen karthik was around...

loved vasant-karthik competition... 😳

everyones superpower start to fluctuate... first sharad & varsha.. they go at their home..
& they notice detector timi timi.. sharad contacts vasant & asks him to cum soon...
all decide to go to look for 2015 considering he wil b around...

wil they b successful in finding 2015?
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..
Edited by coolhi1988 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Krishu baby mast likha hai👏
I love it.
Kaash show me bhi megha hoti chipkali nahi😡
Agla part update soon yaar
Love you🤗
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Reserved. It's my birthday today 😉 So celebration still going 😉. Will read tomorrow now
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quite lengthy update but end part was great that now all r running to find why timi timi is blinking and super powers still flucutating

interesting and himanshu looks same like in khichdi series

good one and in show also i want jd to be high command he wud do justice to that character and also hope now alien secret is out he also appears
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Originally posted by: Kulasya.

Reserved. It's my birthday today 😉 So celebration still going 😉. Will read tomorrow now

Belated happy birthday ...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: chatterbox

quite lengthy update but end part was great that now all r running to find why timi timi is blinking and super powers still flucutating

interesting and himanshu looks same like in khichdi series

good one and in show also i want jd to be high command he wud do justice to that character and also hope now alien secret is out he also appears


Yes di it's quite lengthy as it was difficult to narrate the makarshankranti scene...

Will write soon di
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Originally posted by: coolhi1988

superb duper fantabulous update was it...

megha-sharad happy... their happiness knows no bounds...
they want to share their happiness...
megha shares her feelings with varsha.. varsha happy for them...
sharad does yaya & hemant wakes up & goes to see being invisible.. shishir also wakes up 7 cums near sharad... both tease sharad...
sharad shares his happiness with vasant & others...
vasant happy for his brother...
HC overwhelmed..
hemantgiri shuru ho gai.. adhi raat ko... khushi k aansu ni samaj aye bachhe ko.. aur papa & hc shuru ho gaye classes k liye..
they remember 2015...

whole makarsankranti scenario, competitions, chat, arguments all written perfectly...
liza told correctly agar ronnie patang udda te waqt atak sakta h.. toh vasant hemant k liye classes kyun nai shuru kar sakta...😆😆

ojha uncle , hc competition of eating...😆😆 yeah sabse best competition thi...

karthik enters... he feels comfortable around ghotalas & manav...
varsha too feels nice wen karthik was around...
loved vasant-karthik competition... 😳
everyones superpower start to fluctuate...
& they notice detector timi timi..
wil they b successful in finding 2015?
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..



Thanks hiyu
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u r welcum krishu..
well i think this was one of d longest update i hv ever read...

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