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Krish58

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Bjrbal ki bhabhi aur hemant ki behen... Bolu...

I m irritated with chipkali so obviously usse sharad ke saath nahi rakhungi .chipkali khamkha phir se sharad ka dil todegi sur hamara logical ghotala ki life partner ko sochungi ki bulao ya na bulao

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hiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

bhabhi?? m still single dear... aise dukhti nas pe namak mat dal...😭😭

hemant ki behen chalega... ghotalaputri bhi chalega...😆😆

ek kaam kar sharad ki partner ko bulale.. phir chahe itna chipkali ko jalana.. tujhe thandak pochegi...

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Krish58

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Oh sorry its bhanji galti se mere phone ne bhabhi likh diya

Edited by Krish58 - 9 years ago

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ice-cold

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Well written Krish👏

Bhairu was too gud😆 Try if u can increase her part a little😆

High command bhi kamaal hai😆

Overall superb👏👏

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hiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

krishu congrats on 1000 views of ur ff..👏👏👏
chal aab party de...

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Anamta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: coolhi1988
krishu congrats on 1000 views of ur ff..👏👏👏
chal aab party de...

Superb likha hai yaar👏

Meri bhairu mast hai aur high command bhi.

Chal ff ki views par party de

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hiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Krishu... v want party...
v want party...

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whiteMagic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Wow ⭐️ you are brilliant 😃 .Read the last two parts in one go, felt like watching bdsah. Loved the bhairvigiri 😆 and waiting for high command. And last me karthik saw manav right? So they know each other 😕 very interesting 👍🏼 update soon.

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Krish58

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Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: whiteMagic
Wow ⭐️ you are brilliant 😃 .Read the last two parts in one go, felt like watching bdsah. Loved the bhairvigiri 😆 and waiting for high command. And last me karthik saw manav right? So they know each other 😕 very interesting 👍🏼 update soon.

Thanks ..surprise ahead and yes we all have started shanav SS do read that too.

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Krish58

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Posted: 9 years ago

#70

Home ff part 6

Okay this part a way long and yes in these ff it will be manav and Anna and sharad and his 78 square.. I decided this paring when I started this ff.

Aur koi proff reading nai ki iss baar as busy with clg stuff so.. Plz agar yeh part kisiko bich mei boring lage toh sorry keh rahi hoon ...

Part 6

After few days,

At ghotala house...all were packing things which they have to send to high command

Varsha- hemant yeh packet ko sidhe pakad dekhna girna jaaye mein bag leke aati hoon...

Vasant- yeh high command kitna saaman mangvate hai ... Yeh saaman rakhte rakhte kamar dard hone laga ..

Lagta hai insaani roop mein reh reh ke insaan hote jaa raha hoon

Jacky- uncle, abhi mein aur sharad manav ke saath bahaar jaa rahe hai..

Sharad - haan,bhaiya aur hum hamara detector ke saath jaayenge taaki patah chale ki manav hamara 2015 hai ya nahi..

Vasant- haan, yeh thik kiya yahi.. Sahi mauka hai..aur sharad saath jaa rahe toh Anna bhi aa rahi hogi toh lehrana kam karna aur dhyan rakhna..aur hemant chacha mat banna..

Hoon

Both do hoon..

Jacky and sharad leave...

After ..Jacky and sharad leaves .

3 idiots enter ghotala house..

Ohja- kaise ho vasant ghotala

And even before vasant can say anything .ohja uncle enters house and settles himself on sofa..

Ronnie- kaisa hai tum ohja uncle kisi ke bhi ghar directly jaake woh woh woh

Bhadresh - aaya nahi ke atak gaya yeh are valah bol bhai bol jaldi bol..

Ohja - haan Ronnie tu bol tab tak mein kuch kha leta hoon...

And ohja calls varsha...

Ohja- oh varsha ,o varsha..jaraa mareh liye chai aur thoda biscuit laa khane ke liye..

Vasant and 2 idiots look at ohja angrily.

Ohja does his heee heee.

Bhadresh - ae bhai tu bolna kaha atka..

Ronnie was going to speak.

But vasant doesn't let him speak .. .

Vasant- haan,Ronnie jaldi bolo woh bahut kaam hai... Na..

Ronnie again tries to speak

Varsha and hemant enters

Varsha and hemant - areee Ronnie bhaiya aur bhadresh bhai aap yaha iss waqt. Kaise aana hua..aaye aaye ander aaye baith ke baare karte..

Vasant- varsha, hemant yeh kya kar rahe ho mein ne kya kaha tha jab koi achank se aajaye tab aisa bolna hai

.. Yeh log toh colonywale hai hamare padosi hai aur tumhe patah hai yeh log kabhi bhi aajate hai hamare ghar bina bole aur bina darwaaza par knock karke...

Aur dekho bichare Ronnie ko bolne nai de rahe hai hum bichara atak gaya hai..

Ronnie rone jaisa hojata hai aur dekhta hai vasant ki taraf.

Vasant- sahi kaha na ronnie.

Again before Ronnie could speak

Ohja- haan, Ronnie bol ke bol raha tu..

Again before Ronnie could speak.

Hemant seats on sofa and mimics Ronnie

Hemant-(crying)aise thodi chalta hai..jabhi mein kuch bolne ko jaata hai sab bich mein bolta hai man,koi mere ko bolne dai deta,man..

Ronnie - yeh ,woh woh woh..

Bhadresh- atka phirse.yeh atkuchand.

Ronnie- ek min..ek toh pehle hi koi nai bolne deta..Ab mere ko bolne diyo..

Haan toh..ink ko Hindi mein kya kehte hai vasant

Vasant- liza ko bulao

Ronnie- mein tumko kyu pucha man... ( towards bhadresh) ink ko kya bolte hai Hindi mein..

Bhadresh- ink ko Hindi mein... Hindi mein haan sayhahi kehte hai..

Ronnie- haan yeh hemant syahahi hai.

Ohja uncle - ke ke ke ke bol raha hai jhalar tune sahi ka syahahi kiya..sahi hota hai sahi.

Ronnie - tum samjhana man...haan toh hemant sahi keh raha hai..

Vasant- haan .. Toh Aap sab yaha kyu aaye the...

Ohja uncle - aree suno marih marih baat suno.. Dekho makarshankranti ka tyohaar aave hai..toh kyu na ek competition rakhte hai patang udane ka Jo bhi haarega usse sabko party dena hoga .

Varsha takes bags up ...

Bhadresh - areee varsha bhabhi yeh itne saare bags leke kaha jaarahi hain..

Varsha - woh woh yeh saaman ..(looks at vasant)

Vasant- woh woh yeh saaman ..woooh woooh aa raha hai ..bas aa raha hai... Haan toh yeh saaman hume suryanagar bhejna toh yeh hum upar kamre mein rakh rahe hai...

Varsha and hemant go upstairs

Vasant- haan toh aapko kuch chahiye..

Bhadresh- haan toh hame kuch nai chahiye .hum bas yaha baithe hai aaram se ... Aap saman upar rakhiye..(in mind) pritesh ne sach kaha tha kuch gadbad chal rahi hai ghotala nagari mein patah lagana padega kya maanjra hai ...ka baa

He hears ..ha baa.

Ohja uncle - areeh itni jaldi ke hai vasant ,abhi toh hum aaye hai..

Thoda chai...pila dete.. Ruko...

Oh varsha bhabhi,oh varsha bhabhi...

Inside room ,

Varsha- off ho..ek baju yeh high command aur dusri baju ohja uncle..

Hemant,mein niche jaa rahi hoon. Tu saaman ka dhyan rakhna.. Phir hum jaldi se bhej denge high command ko taki jald se jald detector thik hojaay aur hum hamare bacche ko doondh sake. Aur chale jaay apne grah..wapas..

Hemant tu rukh yaha... hoon

Hemant- hoon..

Hemant was thinking something.. And does eeeh.

Here, at downstairs

Somehow vasant and varsha manages situation.and after sometime 3 idiots leave..

At bhatt house,

Bhadresh and pritesh were talking...

Pritesh- mein ne kaha tha na papa kuch na kuch toh gadbad ho rahi hai ghotala nagari mein.

Bhadresh- tu sahi keh raha hai pritesh hum log ghotala nagari gaye the..woh ghotala badi badi bag mein kuch saaman rakh rahe the..aur Jaise hi hum aaye toh woh shri shri ghotala ne sab saaman upar rakhne ko bol diya varsha ko.. Aur jab hamne pucha toh kaha ki khanna bhejna suryanagar...

Meanwhile ohja and Bhavna enters in main hall

Bhavna- ae baba aur Sherlock holmas tum log phirse ghotala's pe shaq karne lage..

Pritesh- dadi,aap mummy ho.

Bhavna- nahi lekin kyu yeh sawaal puch raha hai?

Pritesh- dadi, toh pachi.. Woh varsha aunty aur unlogo ne bol diya ki suryanagar khaane ka saaman bhejna hai ... Aur aapne maan liya.. Kya suryanagar mein sabko ohja uncle ki bimaari lagi hai?

Ohja- aeee pritesh ke ke ke ke bol raha hai tu yeh..

Bhadresh - haan baa, wohi na Ab sab ke sab toh ohja uncle jaise bhukad baaras toh nahi honge na suryanagar mein...

Bhavna- tu sahi keh raha baba.. Kuch na kuch toh gadbad chal rahi hai ghotala house mein.. Kyuki uss din jab hum log woh rustomji ki dukan gaye the aur jab mein ne aur lajo ne pucha ki dusre dukaan mein chalte hai aur shopping karni hai toh ek dum dhaadham se na boldiya..

Ohja - kya bola Bhavna bhabhi.

Bhavna - woh hamare Gujarati mein kehte hai..

Pritesh- fari thi chalu Thai gaya aa logo ( see again they started)dadi,aap baad mein samjhana ohja uncle ko... Aur yeh sochiye. Ki woh bag mein kya hi sakta hai.. Kahi woh log aur koi. Chiz toh chupa nai rahe..socho socho kya ho sakta hai..

Here at colony garden .. ,Anna sharad and Jacky and manav came back. Manav gets the call and he excuses himself. Jacky goes to ghotala house and while sharad was going.. Anna calls him

Anna- sharad ,ruko.?

Sharad- kuch kaam hai Anna ?

Anna- sharad kya tum mujeh se abhi bhi nazaaraaz ho mujeh sharad?

Sharad- nahi Anna mein tumhse bilkul bhi naaraz nahi hoon ..

Anna- toh phir tum mujeh a thik tarah se baat kyu nahi kar rahe ..kyu sharad?

Sharad - Anna mein normally hi baat kar raha hoon. Jaise pehle karta tha Anna..

Anna- sharad , kya tum mere aur manav ke saath kal woh Alex aur Mary ki shaadi mein aaoge unhone humein invite kiya hai.

Though sharad had forgave Anna.but he can't have another heartbreak..he was heart broken when everyone including Anna accused his bhaiya and bhabhi.. Though he loved Anna but his love for his family was above all..

Meanwhile, manav comes too.

He becomes worried as he saw both of his friends sad..He knew sharad is upset with Anna..also Anna was upset with all that happened few days ago..manav could not see Anna sad.. He loved her .he loved her so much that he was ready to scarifice his love for her happiness

Manav - kya hua Anna, sharad ..koi problem hua hai kya.

Anna - kuch nai manav,woh mein sharad se keh rahi thi ki kal woh Alex aur Mary ki shaadi hai toh woh bhi hamare saath chale ..toh sharad mana kar raha hai..

Manav - aree sharad, chalona tum bhi hamare saath

Sharad- mein aajata manav ,par mujeh kal bahut kaam ,,woh kuch saaman bhejna hai toh mein nai aa paaunga.

And he leaves...

Manav holds Anna 's hand and

Manav - Anna tum udaas kyu ho ? Koi problem hai Anna..koi baat kehni hai tumhe?

Anna looked at manav faces the concern he had for her .. The way he asked her..about her worries .she could find the same manav who used to ask her about her worries the reason for her sadness ..

Anna- manav, manav woh ... Mein bahut tired ho gayi hoon issliye tumhe aisa lag raha hoga ...

Manav - okay thik hai tum ghar jaake aaram karo... .good night..

Anna leaves..

At dsouza house,

Bhairavi enters

Ronnie- areee bhairavi tum yaha abhi iss waqt...kuch kaam tha kya...

Bhairavi- Ronnie bhaiya woh baa ne kaha ki jaa aur Jake Ronnie ka dimaag kharab kar..

Ronnie- kya bhavna aunty ne aisa kyu kaha ...

Bhairavi - woh Ronnie bhaiya , baa ne kaha tha ki kuch kaam hoga toh woh mujeh kahegi lekin patah nai unhone kuch kaha nahi .

Aur jab mein ne pucha ki kuch kaam hai baa toh Toh baa ne kaha ki jaa aur jaake Ronnie ka ya Anna ka dimaag kharab kar .. Toh mein yaha aayi puchne aapka dimaag karu ya Anna ka..

Ronnie had no words for this...

Ronnie- bhairavi Anna room mein hai toh uska dimaag kharaab karo..aur bhadresh abhi so raha hai ya jaag raha hai..

Bhairavi- nai Ronnie bhaiya woh so rahe hai..

Ronnie- raat ke 9 baje so gaya?

Bhairavi- haan..

Ronnie - mein tumhare ghar jaa raha hoon woh Anna upar kamre mein hai..

In Anna rooms...

Anna was thinking ..she was still confused whether she loves manav or sharad...she was thinking what manav said right .now .but in reality she could only imagine his face his concern...and then about sharad... She was confused...

She felt a tap on her shoulder.Anna was startled and came back from thoughts..

She saw bhairavi was their...

Anna- bhairavi tum yaha iss waqt .. Bolna toh chahiye na.. Tumne toh mujeh daara hi diya...kuch kaam tha bhairavi

Bhairavi - woh Anna baa ne kaha ki mein Ronnie ke ghar jaake Ronnie bhaiya ka ya phir tumhara dimaag kharab karu..aur Ronnie bhaiya ne kaha ki mein tumhara dimaag kharab karoo.

Anna had no escape but to talk with bhairavi..

Anna was again thinking about manav and sharad..

Bhairavi- kya soch rahi ho Anna ?

Anna - kuch nahi tum yaha aso na bed pe baitho..

Bhairavi- Anna tum manav aur sharad ke baare mein soch rahi hona ..

Anna was surprised

Anna- tumhe kaise patah chala bhairavi..

Bhairavi- yeh toh tumhe dekh ke hi patah chalta hai Anna..

Anna- bhairavi, tum kehna kya chahti ho?

Bhairavi- yahi ki tum decide nahi kar paa rahi ki tum manav se sharad se pyar karti ho ..

Mein ek raasta batati hoon Anna confusion door karneka

Anna- kya hai woh raasta?

Bhairavi- tu na Anna apna fav..mein se fav song soch aur ankhe bandh karke woh song soch aur Jo bhi pehle matalb manav ya sharad mein se jiska chehra nazar aaye .usse hi tu pyar karti hai Anna.

Anna- I don't believe this..

Bhairavi- Anna try karne mein kya jaata hai..try kar..

Anna thinks about about her fav. Song and closed her eyes.

After sometime she opens her eyes and says I really don't believe this...

At ghotala house,

Sharad says that the detector didn't do timi timi... When manav was near them..

So it was confirmed that manav was not their 2015.

Vasant - tune thik tarah se detector ko rakha tha na ki Anna ko dekh lehrane toh nahi laga tha..

Sharad gets sad..he doesn't do any lehrana on listening Anna name

Vasant asks Jacky

Vasant- Jacky isse kya hua yeh baniyan lehra kyu nahi raha ..

Sharad- bhaiya , Ab jisse koi rishta nahi rakhna phir mein kyu lehrahraoo

Vasant- mein samjha nahi sharad?

Sharad- mere kehne ka matalb yeh hai ki bhaiya Ab mein Anna se koi ristha nai rakhna chatha jab tak hum yaha hai woh sirf aur sirf dost hai aur kuch nai.

Varsha comes too.

Varsha - sharad yeh tu kya keh raha hai .. Tu toh Anna se...

Sharad- nahi bhabhi, mein nahi karta Ab usse pyar..pyar karne ke liye bharosa hona chahiye. Vishwas hona chahiye risthe mein.. Aur jis rishte ka aage koi bhavishya nahi..aise rishte mein rehne ka kya faayada aakhir mein milega toh dard hi na Aur aap hi ne dekha thana bhabhi kaise uss din in sab ne aap par aur bhaiya par kaisa inzaam lagaya tha...

Vasant- par tunne toh usse maaf kar diya thana..

Sharad- maaf kar diya hai..par Ab phir se dil todne ki himmat nahi hai mujeh mein bhaiya..

. Haan maaf kiya lekin kal jab phirse koi gadbad hogi ya nai hogi toh woh phirse hum sab par shaq karegi..aur kal jab usse hamari sachai ka patah chalega.. Toh woh hame pe aur shaq karegi..

Manav Anna se pyar karta .itna ki woh uski khushi ke liye uske pyar ki kurbaani de raha hai...

Manav bahut achha ladka hai ..woh anna a sacha pyar karta hai.agar koi aur hota toh woh Ab tak Anna se saare riahte tod chuka hota.. Usse dhokhebaaz kaha hota par nahi manav ne aisa nahi kaha..balki ussne apne pyar ki kurbaani di..

Aur agar mein Aaj manav ka dard samaj sakta hoon toh uska bhi samaj sakta hoon Jo mera hamare grah par intezaar kar rahi hai.. Mein usse bhi dhokha nahi de sakta..

Vasant- tum 78 square ki baat kar rahe ho?

Sharad - haan bhaiya...woh toh mera intezaar kar rahi hogi hamare grah par.. Mein patah nahi usse yeh sach kaise keh paaunga. Aur sach sunne ke baad mujeh nahi patah 78 square mujh par vishwas kar paayegi ya nahi. Lekin mein usse dhokhe mein nahi rakh sakta..

Bhaiya,bhabhi jacky aapko issme meri help karni hogi.. Manav aur Anna ko saath laane mein..

Vasant hugs his little brother he knew how sharad must be feeling right now..

Also hemant comes and starts to cry as sharad was crying..

Varsha asks hemant why he is crying..

Hemant- mujeh kissine nahi bola help karne ke liye ..

Sharad - haan toh tu bhi help karna meri..

Hemant- chacha woh toh mein ne start kar diya hai aapki help karna..

Vasant- kya..aeee hemant kya bola tu abhi...

Hemant- papa yahi ki mein ne chacha ki help karna start kar diya hai..

Vasant- aur kya kiya tune?

Hemant- eeeh

all ghotalas and Jacky are shocked...