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Posted: 9 years ago

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Home ff part 18

Patharwale bhagwan disappear after giving hint...

Vasant wakes up from.his sleep..

Vasant - varsha. varsha ..utho ...varsha ..utho..jaldi utho..

Varsha - kya hua vasant aap soye nahi ..

Vasant- - varsha abhi abhi patharwale bhagwan mere sapne mein aaye.the .aur unhone hame paheli di..hain .unhone hain sanket diya hain varsha..

Varsha - vasant kya sanket diya patharwale bhagwan ne ...unhone kya paheli di. Vasant...

Vasant - batata hoon varsha pehle niche chalo...tum hemant shishir ko bulaake laao mein sharad aur Jacky...ko niche bulaata hoon..

Varsha goes to call hemant and shishir

And vasant calls out for sharad and Jacky...

In main hall...

Sharad- kya hua bhaiya..aap ne kyu bulaaya...achank itni raat ko

Varsha- sharad,abhi vasant ke sapne mein patharwale bhagwan aaye the aur unho hone nayi paheli di hain..

Vasant- haan sharad ..unhone sapne mein aake yeh kaha ki .. ...Vasant...

"jaan sako toh jaan lo,

pehchan sako toh pehchan lo...

attit samne aayega jab

akhri padav se saamna hoga tab

paar karloge padav jab

mil jayegi tumhe tumhari manzil tab.."

Varsha- isska ka kya arth hua vasant..

Vasant- varsha iska arth hame khud dhoondhna hain. ..socho kya kehna chahte hain Patharwale bhagwan..

All starts to find meaning of paheli...

After an hour ...

Varsha - vasant ...vasant ... Jo paheli ki aakhri line hain ' mil jaayegi manzil tab' usse shayad patharwale bhagwan ..hamare bte 2015 ki baat kar rahe the...

Vasant- sahi kaha varsha ...aur pehli do line ka matalb yeh hai ki hame pechanna hai kuch...kuch jaana hoga..

Sharad - bhaiya 3rd aur 4th line ka matalb yeh ho sakta hai ki ..jab attit saamne aayega tab aakhri paadav se hamara saamna hoga...

Jacky- aur jab hum yeh padaav paar kar lenge tab hum hamari manzil ki aur karib aajayenge ..uncle

Sharad was thinking something...

Sharad- bhaiya, bhabhi hame 2015 ke saath saath 212 ko bhi dhoondhna hoga... shayad yeh paheli se patharwale bhagwan hame dono ko dhoondhne ke baare mein sanket de rahe ho.. Patharwale bhagwan

Vasant- haan sharad yeh bhi hosakta hain ... kyuki abhi tak 212 ke baare mein bhi koi suraag nahi mila...Haan .. hum yeh kasoti par karenge aur phir hum hamare 2015 aur 212 ke aur karib aajayenge..bas phir hum unhe dhoondhenge aur wapas apne grah chale jaayenge...

All does the action of hum badi door se aaye hain

Jacky - par uncle hame yeh kaise patah chalega ki kiske attit ke baare mein jaana hain ...

Vasant- Jacky yeh hi toh pechaan hoga .hame aur toh aur jab yeh attit se saamna hoga tab hamara aakhri padaav shuru hoga ...

Varsha - toh hum kaise patah karenge vasant...

Vasant- patah nahi varsha par koi na koi raasta toh jaroor hoga...Socho sab kya ho sakta hain Patharwale bhagwan ke paheli mein ...unhone attit ki baat kyu ki hain...

Varsha goes in kitchen... makes coffee mixed with tea

Varsha - mein sabke liye mmm coffee aur chaai dono mix karke laai hoon

Hemant- heeein mummy mein ohja uncle ko phone karta hoon unhe chaai wali coffee taste karni thi toh mein abhi unhe phone karke bulaata hoon yaha..

Vasant - aeee hemant tu yeh kya kar raha hain... ..sharad yeh hemant phone kare usse pehle phone le uske haath se...

Hemant- par papa ohja uncle ne saaf saaf kaha tha(imitating ohja uncle) ki tum log jabhi banao coffee wali chaai chahte raat ke 2 baje ho ya. Subha ke 4 maareh ko bulaane .mein aajaunga...

Toh mujeh unki ichaa puri karni hain.. Papa ...

Vasant - aeee hemant thodi der shaant reh na..plz..

Plz ohja uncle ko baad mein pila denge hum coffee wali chaai puri tank bharke

Hemant. Starts doing hafu hafu...

Vasant - hafu hafu bandh ..warna abhi chacha aur Jacky bhaiya chale jaayenge muh mein..

Varsha- vasant shaant hojaaye na woh sirf ohja uncle ki ichha puri karna chahta hain...

Vasant- areee kaise raho shaant abhi yeh colonywale aajayenge hamare khilaaf naara leke jab unhe patah chalega ki ...

Something strikes to vasant

Vasant - varsha ...areee hemantgiri ki wajah se hame raasta milgaya patherwale bhagwanji ki paheli mein hame ek aur raasta milgaya..

( Going towards hemant) areee mera hemant...mera pyara gendu ( Taking balayein of Hemant in alien style) and then hugs him...

Hemant hugs him back and he is happy...

All are shocked...

Shishir - chacha papa ko achank se kya hogaya..aur aisa kya raasta mila

Sharad- patah nahi shishir...mein puchta hoon

Sharad- bhaiya baatein toh sahi aapko kya raasta mila hain ...

Varsha - haan vasant jaldi batayein na...

Vasant- yaad karo kab sabse pehle patharwale bhagwan ne hame darshan diye the... aur kya hua tha tab

Varsha- vasant patherwale bhagwan ne hame woh ashram mein darshan diye jab hum angel ko thik karne ke liye hum patharwale bhagwan ko dhoondhne gaye the...tab..

Vasant - haan sahi kaha varsha aur uske baad kab hame darshan diye patharwale bhagwan ne?

Sharad - bhaiya jab colony wale woh Gujarat ke rann utsav mein jaanewale tab aur waha jaake hame yeh patah chala ki manav zinda hain..

Vasant- haan sharad aur tisri baar jab hum log yeh picnic pe jaanewale the tab aur pritesh ka accident hua tha par humne waqt ko rewind kiya tha..

.aur baat yeh hain ki jab bhi patherwale bhagwan ne hame paheli di hain woh kahi na kahi colonywalo se Judi hain..aur iss baar bhi..ho na ho yeh paheli colonywalo se Judi hain...

Sharad- bhaiya kahi yeh paheli manav ke saath toh nahi Judi kyuki woh hum sab se koi baat chupa raha hain bhaiya ...

Jacky- haan uncle mein ne kai baar dekha hain woh kisike saath baat karta hain par jab pucthe hain toh woh jawab nahi de sakta..

Vasant- shayad ho sakta hain hame patah toh karna hoga...Ab sab suno kal hum baat karte hain..ki aage kya karna hain..hoon?

All- hooon

Next day,

At bhatt house...

Bhavna was cutting vegetables. .

Bhairavi- baa Aaj duphar ke khanne mein paneer banaau ya bahaar se khaana mangwalu

Bhavna- aavyu navu ( kuch naya aaya) aeee ben yeh kaise option diye hain tune...

Bhairavi- baa simple option hi diya hain mein ne ki duphar ke khaane mein paneer bannau ya bhaar se mangwalu khaana..

Bhavna- maanna padega ..kya choice di hain ..chakudi.tune ek dum novelty option dia hain...acha mein yeh kahu ki paneer ki koi sabji banana toh..

Bhairavi-toh baa mein sirf paneer banaungi ...

Bhavna- areee par hum aise akele akele paneer kaise khayenge bhairavi..usme kuch daalna hoga na jaise ki pyaaz..tamatar..

Bhairavi- baa hum paneer ketchup,achaar ya lahsoon ki chutney ke saath khaayenge na.

Bhavna- areee par Ben hum chutney ke saath kyu khayenge...paneer..

Bhairavi - baa ap hi toh boli thi ki chakudi kuch different bannana toh paneer mein Ab pyaaz tamatar daalungi toh different kaha se hoga ..issliye chutney ka option diya baa.

Bhavna - acha rehne de paneer cancel kar hum bahaar se khaana mangwa le...

Bhairavi - thik hain baa..toh kya mangwau aapke liye.. Matalb ki konsi chutney khaani hain woh khaman ke saath aati hain woh..ya phir tikhi chutney ya phir meethi chutney ya phir tikhi ..meethi chutney dono...

Bhavna- bhairavi buddeshwari tu bahaar se khanna mangwaa rahi hain toh yeh sab option kyu de rahi hain

Bhairavi- baa woh mein bahar se chutney hi mangwaaungi na toh hogaya na bahaar ka khaana.. aur woh chutney hum paneer ke saath khayenge..

Bhavna- lohipini ..daakan... phir tune bahaar se khaana mangwane ka option kyu diya jab tu mujeh paneer chutney ke saath khilaane wali hain..toh...

Bhairavi- kyuki baa agar paneer kehti toh aapko ketchup ya phir lahsoon ki chutney saath khanna padta aur

Bhavna -(angrily) aeee dakan ...lohipini mein jab tujeh ..kaha ki.. ..tu rehne de ... hum lajo ke ghar khaana kha lenge tu waha aaram se jhulla jhul...

Bhairavi- toh barobar..

At colony garden...

Anna- manav tum sach sach batao do saal pehle kya hua tha...

Sharad- haan manav tum sach sach batao tum kya. Raaz chupa rahe ho

Jacky- aur tum uss din phone par kisse baat kar rahe the. ?

Manav-dekho mein nahi bataa sakta kya hua tha do saal pehle..plz tum sab mera vishwas karo ..plz..

Anna- acha aisa hain na thik hain mein tum se baat nahi kar rahi ..

Sharad & Jacky - aur hum bhi...

Manav- areee plz tum tino bacho jaise behave mat karo ...mein sach nahi bataa sakta...plz mera yakin karo

Anna ignoring manav ...

Anna- sharad ,Jacky tum logo ne kuch kaha..

Both- nahi...

Manav giving up...

Manav - thik hain mein batata hoon...par promise karo ke tum yeh sab Mere Ma aur papa ko kabhi nahi bataaoge...

All 3 - thik hain ...

Manav- mein do saal se secret mission mein hoon aur abhi mein secret mission hoon..aur isske aage mein kuch nahi bataa sakta ..issliye yeh baat mein ne MA papa ko bhi nahi batayi..

Sharad - kaisa secret mission manav..tum hame bataa sakte ho hum kissiko nahi baatayenge..

Manav- nahi sharad yeh mein kisiko nahi bataa sakta .hame allowed nahi hain..kyuki yahaa koi bhi hamari baate sun sakta hain ..plz tum isske aage mat ...pucho...

Anna- thik hain I believe you aur hum yeh baat kissiko nahi baatayenge

Manav- ( in mind)I m sorry Anna,sharad,jacky ki mujeh tum sab se jhut bol raha hoon..mein chahkar bhi nahi bata sakta ki do saal pehle alien ne meri jaan bachai hain agar mein ne yahaa kisiko bataaya toh uski zindgi khatre mein aajayegi...

At night...,

Bhatt house...

Shanav ,Anna and Jacky hemant , bhairavi were seeing old pictures of Bhavna aunty...

Bhavna- abhi yeh dekh yeh mere youth days ke photo...lagti thi hoon na mein miss world jaise..

Anna - miss world???

Bhavna - acha thoda aise miss India .. lagti hoon na.

Shanav& jacky- miss india???

Bhavna - haan ave chal na Tera na mera Ab mere woh jamnagar ki miss jamanagar toh rakhna hi padega...

All laughs..

Hemant sees a photo...

Hemant- areee waah yeh bhadresh uncle ki photo lagti hain...

Bhavna gets tensed...

Sharad - haan hemant yeh toh bhadresh bhaiya ki photo lagti hain..yeh dekho..

Sharad handover the photo to...manav Anna and Jacky..

Manav- areee haan Anna dekho toh sahi bhadresh bhaiya kitne cute lag rahe hain

Jacky- haan ...bhadresh bhaiya cute lag rahe hain...

Hemant takes photo .from Jacky hands..

Hemant- lekin yeh uncle kon hain .bhavna aunty. ...bhairavi didi

Bhairavi - hemant yeh toh..

Bhavna aunty takes photo from hemant hands...

Bhavna- yeh yeh toh ..haan woh hamre koi ristedar honge.. baba ke saath...

Bhairavi - nai nai baa aap bhul gaye hain yeh..toh...mitesh pritesh ke papa ke...

Bhavna - bhairavi jaa Jake upar dekh ke pritesh aur mitesh so gaye na...

Bhairavi - lekin baa woh toh kab ke so gaye mein dekh ke aai..baa

Bhavna- chakudi jaa wapas jaake dekh. Kar aa ki woh so rahe hain ya nahi...

Bhairavi - par baa ..

Meanwhile here shanav hemant Jacky and Anna were shocked due sudden change of Bhavna aunty behaviour..

Bhavna- chakudi kaha na jaa...

Bhairavi- toh barobar...

Bhairavi leaves...

Bhavna- aur abhi bahut der hogayi hain toh Ab tum sab ghar jaao mujeh bhi bahut neend aa rahi hain kal aana aur dekhna dusre photos...

All leave...

Sharad- yeh bhavna aunty ko achanak se kya hogaya..unhone woh tasvir dekhne baad kitna ajeeb behave kiya...manav tumhe patah hain woh uncle kon the..

Manav- nahi sharad...mujeh nahi patah woh kon the..par kuch baat toh hain achanak se Bhavna aunty ka behaviour change hogaya woh tasvir ko dekhke..kuch baat toh jaroor hain...

Anna- haan manav ..kuch baat hain Jo woh chupa rahi hain..aur shayad bhairavi ko patah hain lekin bhavna aunty ne chup kar diya bhairavi ko jab woh kuch bolne gaye...

Hemant- aur meri bhairavi didi ko khali khali daata diya woh uncle ke wajah se...

Manav- hum kal bhairavi didi se puchte hain ...

All leaves

At ghotala house...

Jacky- sharad ..bhavna aunty kuch chupa rahi hain ... woh aise achanak behave kiya unhone

Sharad- haan Jacky kuch toh hain pakka kuch connection hai hame abhi bhaiya bhabhi ko inform karna hoga...

Sharad calls out for vava...

Vava comes down...

Vasant -(coming down) haan sharad kya hua ..

Sharad tells everything that happened at bhatt house...

Vasant - sharad..hame patah karna hoga..kal bhairavi se puchna usse jaroor patah hoga...

Next day,

At colony garden

All kids were playing ...

Manav- bhairavi didi ne kuch bhi nahi bataya...mujeh...unhone kaha ki baa ne kasam di hain issliye woh mujeh kuch bhi nahi baatayenge...

Sharad- toh Ab hum kya Karen... ..

Hemant comes from back...

Hemant- eeeh...chacha mein jaau bhairavi didi se puchne woh mujeh sab batati hain..toh mein jaau puchne??

Sharad - areee haan hemant tu ja. Yeh toh mmm idea hain tu jaa..

Manav- aur haan hemant ..dhyan se puchna woh uncle ke baare mein ... hoon?

Hemant- hooon

Hemant leaves ...

After sometime...

Hemant comes and starts to cry...

Shanav tries to pacify hemant..

Sharad - areee hemant tu ro kyu raha hai ..chup hojaa...

Manav- hemant shaant hojaao Rona bandh karo...aur batao kya hua...

Hemant- chacha ,manav bhaiya bhairavi didi ne mujeh bataane se manna kar diya... mein ne unse woh uncle ke baare mein pucha toh unhone manna kar diya..aur kaha ki baa ne meri kasam di hain .

Bhairavi didi mujeh batana chahti thi par kasam ke wajah se kuch nahi bata paaye..aur woh Rone lage toh mein unhe company dene lagaa Rone mein..aur yahaa ..aaya..

A taxi enters in ..colony .

Shanav ,hemant sees it...

Pritesh- mitesh bhaiya lagta hain Papa aagaye...

Mitesh - haan mein dadi aur mummy ko bataa ke aata hoon..

Bhadresh comes out along with a old man...

Hemant- pritesh bhadresh uncle ke saath yeh uncle kon hain?

Pritesh- nahi patah hemant bhaiya..

Bhavna and bhairavi comes out ..

Bhavna is shocked when she sees the old man ...

Edited by Krish58 - 8 years ago

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hiya

@coolhi1988

Achiever

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Posted: 9 years ago

#312

Superb Update..
loved it...
full package...
from surprise to suspense to hilarious to Emotional to suspense again...
very well written👏👏
plz mujhe aashirwad dijiye ki me bhi itna bada update jaldi se jaldi de paun.. coz mujhe to kitne din lag jate h ek update type karne me...

mate dhanya ho tum..
chapter bada kaise karna yeah to koi tumse sikhe...
adha update on solving riddle...
seriously...
all confused about the riddle finally they try to sort out & try to understand the actual meaning / hint of it...

haha my best part..
bhairvi eating baa's head with her options on food..
sirf paneer banao.. uske saath chutney khayenge..
arey waah.. nai dish try karti huu..
but apni behen ko khilaungi..
mujhe to paneer pasand hi ni h...

all see old pics of bhavana...
they see a pic with bhadresh...
bhavana hiding sumthing...
& diverting topic...

continue soon..
building up suspense haan...
thnks 4 d pm...
2 ghante se type kar rahi huu abhi jake khatam hua comment...
bich me aur najane kitne kaam kiye honge...😆😆😉

Edited by coolhi1988 - 9 years ago

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Anamta

@Senoritaamor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#313

Wow yaar superb update 👏

Patharwale bhagwan ki riddle ka meaning mujhe pm kar de same mazaa ayega 😆

Wow krishu tu Itni achhi bhairavigiri Kaise sochti hai. Mai to haste haste pagal ho gayi paneer wale scene mein 🤣

Ab kya hoga?

Jaldi update karna

Love you 🤗🤗

Edited by Senoritaamor - 9 years ago