Home - ff ( part 27 on page 133) - Page 3

Created

Last reply

Replies

997

Views

48.4k

Users

25

Likes

650

Frequent Posters

Krish58 thumbnail
Visit Streak 500 Thumbnail Visit Streak 365 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Home ff - part 2

Patharwale bhagwan indeed heard their prayers because as soon as he came out of temple ... Timi timi started

Inside the temple ghotala's were praying for 2015 when prajati detector starts doing timi timi..
Vasant - varsha ,sharad yeh dekho prajati detector timi timi kar raha hai...

Hemant- haan mummy ,detector full speed mein timi timi kar raha hai...

Varsha- iska matalb 2015 yahi kahi hai vasant...

Vasant- haan varsha haan, hume der nahi karni chahiye..

All the ghotalas came out of temple ..and started moving timi timi in all directions..

Sharad- bhaiya detector toh market jaanewale raaste pe timi timi aur bhi zyada kar raha hai... Hame iss taraf janaa chahiye.. Bhaiya...

Hemant - nai nai chacha , raaste nai aaste hota hai aaste..

Vasant- kya aaste gendelal woh raaste hota hai aaste matalb dhire dhire woh yeh insaan nai kehte aaste aaste bolo ... Matalb dhire dhire bolo...

Sharad- haan hemant ,woh raaste hota hai... 'R' hai aage 'A' nahi...

Shishir - mummy dekho na chacha aur papa start hogaye...

Varsha- senior professor ghotala aur junior professor ghotala aap apni grammer ki school baad mein kholna Ab chaliye ...

Vasant- sorry woh thoda samjaane mein ghus gaya tha... Haan haan chalo...


Ghotala's start their search ...

Here in colony, Ronnie ,ojha uncle , bhadresh ask jacky regarding ghotalas's disappearance ...

Sharad called abd informed Jacky that detector doing timi timi and asked him to tell any lie as colonywala would surely ask Jacky about their disapperance

Jacky -mein sach keh rahaa hoon Ronnie bhaiya , vasant uncle or baki sab bahaar gaye hai movie dekhne gaye hai subah ke show mein...

Ronnie- movie dekhne gaye hai toh woh woh woh woh what are you saying mother ko Gujarati mein kya kehte hai bhadresh?

Bhadresh - bol baa

Ronnie - you can do better bhadresh

Bhadresh - tu su ke che baa

Ronnie - haan toh woh log kya abhi tak subaa ka show dekh rahe hai?

Jacky didn't understand what Ronnie said then he looked at ohja uncle and bhadresh

Ohja uncle- areee jhalar, tune subah ka subaa kiya ..subah hota hai subah...

.Ronnie - tum samjha na man.. Haan toh Jacky tum bolo woh log kaha hai aur unka moblie bhi switch off aa raha hai..

Jacky- woh log bhar gumne gaye hai movie dekhne ke. Baad .

Ronnie was convinced but bhadresh he wasn't ...

Bhadresh- ek min. Agar woh log bahaar gaye hai movie dekhne ke baad toh kya abhi tak ghumte hi rahenge...sach sach bol woh log kaha gaye.. Kahin tu bhi toh in sab ke saath mila toh nai hua...

Ronnie- Aree yeh abhi bola na ki woh ghumne gaye honge...

Bhadresh - lekin vaalah, Aaj paper mein nai padah ki chor aajkal ache ghar ke dikhne wale insaan banke chori karte hai..

Ronnie- nai bhadresh. Jacky sach keh raha hai... Tu galat mat samja.. Phir liza mujpe chillata hai..

All leaves but their was someone who heard their convo. It was none other than char daanto vala rakshas as ghotala's would say... It was pritesh...

Pritesh (to himself)- Ab toh patah lagana hi padega ki ghotala family ghum ne gaye hai ya phir...

2015 was going towards market he was doing a job as care taker in a shop ...

[Owner of shop treats well with 2015.He is jolly good fella .. He finds 2015 good boy and decides to give a job in his shop ...so 2015 lives in shop and works their... ]
Owner of the shop - rustomji

Rustomji- karthik, tum aacha hua tum jaldi aagay mandir se bahut kaam hai... Aaj
[ here( 2015 )name will be karthik..because it is pre winter period name so ritu ka name bhi hogaya]

Karthik(2015)- haan,thik hai,par pehle yeh aap prasad lijiye..

Rustomji was surprised by seeing what karthik had brought for prasad..

Rustomji- Aaj tune bhagwan ko methi or aloo diya prasad mein?

Karthik - haan, woh agar logic lagake socha jaaye toh bhagwan ko variety milegi prasad mein .. Roz roz mitha khanyenge toh bore hojaayenge bhagwan...

[ so,karthik aakhir hai sharad ka bhatija aur ghotalaputra so thodi bahut ghotalagiri usse mein bhi dikhane wali hoon ... ]

Rustomji- haan toh bhagwan fruits diya hota prasad mein..

Karthik - fruits toh parso hi diye the prasad mein angoor diye the...

Rustomji was surprised but now he was habitual with karthikgiri...

Rustomji- koi vandho nai( no problem) jao yeh saare box upar ke shelf mein rakh ke aao..
Karthik does hooon and leaves...

Here ghotala's reach market and detector was still doing timi timi ...

Shishir- mummy detector timi timi bahut der tak kar raha hai... Aur abhi bhi kar raha hai.. Iska matalb hamare bhaiya yahi kahi hai...

Varsha- haan,shishir.. Vasant hum kaise doondhenge hamare 2015 ko yaha .kaise patah chalega ki hamara beta konse insaani roop mein hai?

Vasant- sochne do varsha..kaise doondhenge hum..

Vasant then ask sharad to try to contact to 2015

Vasant- sharad, 2015 ko contact karne ki koshish kar shayad usse contact ho jaaye.. Plz try kar sharad..

Sharad tries but as their superpower were not working properly so he couldn't 2015

Sharad- bhaiya contact nai ho paa raha 2015 se..

Vasant takes sharad to get some dhoop near by a tree.

Vasant- shayad dhoop nai li tune ..tu yaha aaja ..aur Ab try kar... Contact karne ki..

Sharad again tries but all in vain...

Vasant- sharad beta ,tu koshish kar..


Sharad - bhaiya nai ho parah.. Contact superpower kaam nai kar raha thik se...

Shishir - papa hum alag hokar doondhte hai bhaiya ko..

All agrees with shishir plan
and hemant goes with vasant in one direction and varsha sharad and shishir goes in another direction..

Frnds 2015 ke konse superpower hai...




Edited by Krish58 - 9 years ago
chatterbox thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#22
i dont like mausa ki poetry but i wud say in his andaaz on ur update here

wah wah wah adbhut hai

normally i dont read ffs or os but urs is good


Krish58 thumbnail
Visit Streak 500 Thumbnail Visit Streak 365 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: chatterbox

i dont like mausa ki poetry but i wud say in his andaaz on ur update here

wah wah wah adbhut hai

normally i dont read ffs or os but urs is good


thanks di😳
Senoritaamor thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Bohot achha hai Krish bilkul real jaisa. Ronnie, bhadresh, vasant , hemant sab show kaise hi hai👏
coolhi1988 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Achiever Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#25
awesome update krishu🤗...
hemant hemantgiri se baaz nai aata... vasant professorgiri se..
sharad also joins vasant...😆😆
finally shishir & varsha stop them...
karthik nice name... he also does ghotalagiri evenm after living 5 yrs with humans...😆😆
rustamji nice fellow...
ronnie-bhadresh-ojha usual 3 idiots.. koi kaam nai ghotalaz ki inquiry karne k alawa... jab ghotalaz gharpe hote h toh bhi inko problem nai h toh bhi problem...
bechara jacky...
ronnie ki hindi abhi tuti hui...😆😆 subah ka suu baa...😆😆😆
but 2015 ka ghotalaz se milan kab hoga???

continue soon...


Kulasya. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Nice work . Will read & comment . 😊
Krish58 thumbnail
Visit Streak 500 Thumbnail Visit Streak 365 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Hiyu abhi der hai unke Milan mein but unsabka par surely they all will meet.. And next update mein surprise hai...
.anjali. thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Krishuu..come here🤗kinni achi story hai ye...loved it...
Loved to read 2015s emotions...well written👏
All the characters are nicely written...with a real touch..bilkul show jaise😳
Waiting for 2015to meet his family😃
Update next chap soon😳
ice-cold thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Nice update krish 👏
Hope the cvs of the show read this 😃
Waiting for next part 😃
Krish58 thumbnail
Visit Streak 500 Thumbnail Visit Streak 365 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Thanks anji and icecold sorry don't remember your name.. Will update soon

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050

9 months ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1013 page no 26 Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1013 page no 26

Welcome to the new thread of Ranveer's unsaid feelings. Keep enjoying the world of Ishveer. Their unconditional Love, their friendship, their...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington

1 years ago

⭐Back⭐ Arhi FF | Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon: Chapter 3 - Part 3/3

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050

3 years ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #13 updated episode 971 page 155

Welcome you all to the new thread of RANVEER'S UNSAID FEELINGS #13 Keep Travelling in the world of ISHVEER LOVE Warm Regards sakshi ❤️ Index...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

9 months ago

PreRish FF ~ Purity Of Souls (ch 6 - page 5)

[NOCOPY] P U R I T Y O F S O U L S T E A S E R "bungle ke piche teri beri ke niche aha re aha....kanta laga!!!" The song was too loud in the...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: goodkashish

6 years ago

Kassir ...Sujal&Kashish...Part 28 - Pg 33

Kassir Extremes Intro 9pm - London Airport - Christmas Day It was a cold chilly night in the beautiful city of London. We arrive at Heathrow...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".