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Thanks to all for your lovely comments.. Will update soon

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Part 3 hope yeh part I didn't messup and tried to write bhairavigiri hope you all like it do give your fair views ..hope you can all imagine it

Home ff - part 3

All agrees with shishir plan .

Vasant- varsha mein aur hemant iss taraf jaa rahe hai aur tum ,sharad aur shishir uss taraf jao..sharad mere saath contact rakhna thik hai.

And they all do ishaaba ..

At bhatt house , Bhavna aunty was screaming on bhairavi

Bhavna- nai , nai Aaj toh faisla ho hi jaayega ya toh mein rahoongi iss ghar mein ya toh tu rahegi...

Bhadresh was as usual sleeping ..

Bhadresh(yawing)- kya hua baa? Itna kyu meri bhairu pe itna chilla rahi hai? Kya kiya bhairu ne?

Bhavna - baba puch iss dakanbala se ki kya kiya isne

Bhairavi (crying)- mitesh pritesh ke papa meri koi galti nahi hai baa ne hi mujeh kaha ki , ' chakudi jaa pani leke aa beta aur mera sar dard kar raha hai toh sar darad ka tel saath mein Lana.. Chakudi...

Toh baa ne jaisa kaha mein waisa hi kiya. Mitesh pritesh ke papa ...yeh dekhiye paani aur sar darad wala tel (oil)doono saath mein lai hoon...

And bhairavi shows the glass in which she has mixed water and tel(oil)...

Bhavna- Ab bol kya karu mein isska.. Chakudi mein ne saaf saaf kaha tha ki paani Lana aur mere sar mein dard kar raha hai toh sar dard wala tel saath mein Lana.. Matalb dono alag alag Lana..

Bhairavi was crying and nodding in no

Bhairavi - baa aapko saaf saaf bolna tha na tel alag se laane ke liye ..ab matalb baad mein samjaane ka kya matalb baa..

Bhavna - ooh buddheshwari,lohipini... Chod kasu kehvu j nathi tane .. ( leave it I don't want to say anything) ...

Bhairavi- to barobar

pritesh was planning on how to bring out reality of ghotalas and how Jacky is related to them as now a days Jacky would always be seen with ghotala's...

Pritesh chain of thoughts were broken when mitesh was called him ..

Mitesh- pritesh kya soch raha hai? Mein kabse bula raha hoon ..dadi aur mummy kabse niche jagda kar rahe hai.. Unka jagda rokne ke liye chal ..

At market ,

vasant and hemant went in one direction and sharad,varsha and shishir went in other direction

vasant and hemant had detector with them and special glasses were with varsha.

Vasant had asked sharad to constantly stay in contact with him ..

Vasant and hemant were searching 2015 when hemant asked a person in near by shop

Hemant- uncle,aapne yaha kisi do sar wale alien ko dekha hai..woh mere bade bhaiya hai..

Person- kya ????

Vasant comes their

Vasant- sorry , bhai sahab , yeh mera beta thoda eeeh hai ,iski baato pe vishwas mat karna

And takes hemant from their...

Vasant- hemant ,tu yeh kya kar raha tha aise kisi ko nahi puch sakte beta ki alien dekha hai ki nai.. ..aise nai bolte...

Chal hame 2015 ko doondhna hai ..dekh detector timi timi iss taraf zyada kar raha hai...

Hemant does eeeh and starts calling out 2015 bhaiya in their alien language... Vasant gets surprised..

Vasant - yeh tu kya kar raha hai hemant? Aise alien language mein 2015 ka naam kyu le raha ...

Hemant- heeein , papa abhi toh aapne kaha ki aise kisi ko nai puch sakte issliye dekho mein chilla raha hoon toh agar 2015 bhaiya yaha hai toh unhe patah chal jaayga ki hum hai

Here varsha,sharad,shishir were searching 2015 with help of special glasses..

Sharad- bhabhi ,yeh lijiye glasses ..

Varsha wears glasses but in vain.. She couldn't find 2015...

Sharad- bhabhi 2015 dikha... Aapko

Varsha - nahi sharad, 2015 yaha dikh nahi raha...hai Agar 2015 yaha nahi hai toh kaha hai... Toh phir detector timi timi kyu kar raha...

Hey patharwale bhagwan koi raasta dikhao.kaha hoga mera bacha...

Shishir - mummy aap chinta mat karo hamare bhaiya yahi hai...

Inside shop,

Karthik was working in shop...

Karthik- areee woh box toh dusre kamre mein reh gaya ...

(He then sees here and there )

Acha hai koi dekh nahi raha ...

Karthik uses his aar paar jaanewala superpower ... He used his powers when no one use to watch him...

He took the box and came back to room...

He was keeping boxes on shelf... When he sees the family photo of rustomji..karthik gets emotional , tears escaped his eyes...

Karthik - kaha hoga mera parivaar kaha honge mere dost, kaise doondhu mein unhe..detector bhi kaam nahi kar raha ..konse insaani roop mein honge woh...

Hey insaano ke ishwar koi toh raah dikhao ,koi isshara dikhao taki mein unhe doondh saku...

Here sharad, varsha and shishir are searching 2015.

Sharad contact vasant through telepathy

Sharad- bhaiya 2015 nahi mil raha ...

Sab jagah doondha par 2015 mil nahi raha

Vasant - haar mat mano sharad hum iss tarah se asha nahi chod sakte detector timi timi kar raha hai.hamara 2015 yahi kahi hai bahut nazdik hai... Humse..

Tu phir se contact karne ki koshish kar shayad iss baar hojaay aur haan thoda dhoop mein jaake try karna taki superpower thik se kaam kar sake.. Agar Aaj hame hamara 2015 mil jata hai toh bas Aaj hi hum apne grah wapas chale jaayenge ..hoon .

Sharad does hoon

Vasant - ishaaba

Sharad- ishaaba

Varsha - kya kaha sharad tere bhaiya ne

Sharad- bhabhi , bhaiya ne kaha hai ki detector abhi bhi timi timi kar raha hai 2015 yahi kahi hai bahut hi nazdik hai

Shishir- chacha aap bhaiya ko contact karne ki koshish kariyena...

Sharad - haan par pehle mujeh dhoop wali jagah jaana hoga wahi se contact ho paayega..

Shirshir sees here and there

Shishir- dekhiye chacha yeh dukan se thoda aage dhoop aa rahi hai. .

varsha sharad and shishir goes near the tree..All 3 ghotala takes some dhoop...

Sharad tries to contact 2015 but in vain.

Here vasant was sad, worried as they were not able not able to find 2015, he wanted to cry but he couldn't he had to be strong.. For his family.. All this was noticed by hemant..

Hemant starts doing hafu hafu ..

Hemant- papa aap himmat mat haariye, aap parekh rakhiye dekhna hame hamare bhaiya mil jaayenge aur aap unhe pyar se gale lagna aur hum ding ting dance bhi karenge unke saath ...

Vasant looks at his pyara gendelal with love and smiles at him..

Vasant chukles and says

Vasant- mere pyare gende aajkal Tera dimag chalne laga hai..sharad sahi kehta hai .. Tu logic wali baat karne laga hai.. Aur yeh parekh kya hota hai haan ,woh asha hai..ab yeh mat kehna ki asha aunty ki surname parekh hai..

. Chal Ab 2015 ko doondhte hai...

Varsha was loosing her patience ... After all she was a mother .. She was on verge of crying...

Varsha- sharad phir se try karna kya kar raha hai tu...

Sharad- haan bhabhi, haan..

And again he tries... And this time while trying to contact 2015 his telepathy signals were getting clear..

He started to speak in alien language .

Sharad - hello, hello 2015 .. 87 square chacha ... Hindi ...Hindi...

Karthik was keeping boxes properly on shelf when he received broken signals...someone was trying to contact him. May be it was from his chacha .

Karthik starts speaking in alien language.

Karthik- hello , hello 2015. Hindi ... Hindi...87 square chacha ..2015 ( crying) chacha ..2015..

Sharad can hear 2015 .signals were weak ..voice wasn't clear..but yes he did hear word chacha..tears started rolling down his cheeks ..

Sharad(crying)- 2015 ,mein tumhara 87 square chacha , kaha ho tum ... Kaha ho tum... 2015 kaha ho tum...

Karthik(crying)- chacha ,2015 ...chacha.. Kaha...

But he couldn't speak more signal was broken...

(To himself ) iska matalb mera parivaar yahi kahi hai.. Chacha ne abhi mujeh contact kiya iska matalb woh yahi hai . yaha iss seher mein hai.. Mujeh abhi doondhne Jana hoga ..unhe... .shukriya insaano ke ishwar..

Signals got broke sharad again tried to contact 2015 ...but in vain.

Sharad wasn't able to speak...varsha and shishir were confused..

Varsha- kya hua sharad tu kyu ro raha hai

For few minutes sharad didn't speak anything..he still couldn't believe he just talked with 2015 after 5 years...

Sharad(crying)- bhabhi...bhabhi.. (Looks at varsha) bhabhi ..woh bhabhi... 2015..bhabhi.. Mein ne usse abhi baat ki bhabhi... Usse mera contact ho paaye ..woh yahi kahi hai...

Varsha ( crying) - kya?? Tune usse baat ki kya kaha usne sharad..? Kaha hai woh ?? Thik toh hai woh?? Sharad bolna chup kyu hai tu?

Sharad - ( crying) bhabhi, usne sirf itna hi kaha chacha 2015 Hindi Hindi... Aur phir signal tut gaya.. Mein ne phir se try kiya par contact nai ho parah..

Shishir- (crying) chacha aap phir se bhaiya ko contact kariye na..

Varsha- sharad tu phir se contact karne ki koshish kar 2015 ko, mein doondhne jaa rahi hoon ..2015.. Ko. shishir tu Tere papa ko phone kar ke yahi bula le...

Inside shop,

Karthik suddenly started feeling weird... His superpowers started to fluctuate ..

Karthik- yeh kya ho raha hai mujeh...

Mein aise bahaar nahi jaa sakta... Mere superpowers control mein nahi reh rahe... Formula 070 ka dose toh mein thik se liya tha.. Phir mere powers phirse fluctuate kyu ho raha hai...

Here varsha went in search of 2015 ..and sharad was trying .. But all in vain..

Vasant and hemant arrives

Vasant - kya hua shishir aur varsha kaha hai...?

Shishir- papa mummy 2015 ko doondhne gayi hai..papa chacha ka contact ho paaye 2015 bhaiya...

Vasant - kya? Yani sharad tu ne 2015 se baat ki.. Kya kaha usne ? Kaha hai woh sharad?

Sharad- bhaiya , mein ne 2015 ko contact kiya.. aur ussne chacha 2015 Hindi Hindi kaha bas aur phir signal tut gaya bhaiya... Bhaiya ,bhabhi 2015 ko doondhne gayi hai iss taraf. Hame bhi jaana chahiye ..

Vasant agrees and all leave ...

Here,karthik comes out of shop and starts his search.. And goes in same direction where ghotala's went...

Hemant super power starts to fluctuate...

Hemant - papa mein gayab hone wala hoon..

Vasant - aeee gende abhi mat gayab hona...

Varsha - vasant mere bhi superpower fluctate ho rahe hai..

sharad and shishir said in union - hamare bhi.. Even vasant superpower started to fluctuate..

Vasant- koi yaha apne powers use nai karega hame jald se jald market se nikal na hoga. Aur ghar jaana hoga... Tab tak sab apne powers ko kaise bhi kar ke control karo .. Hame 2015 ko vapas doondhne yahi aayenge...

hooon..

Varsha,shishir,hemant,sharad- hooon.

All the ghotalas left the market .

Karthik came back to shop.

He was sad...and disappointed..

Rustomji-areee kaha chala gaya tha tu karthik..kabse aawaz laga raha hoon tujeh

Karthik-(fumbling) woh mein.. Woh mein... Kaam se bahaar gaya tha .

Rustomji- aacha thik hai..soon mein bahaar ja raha hoon thode din ke liye tab tak shop tu sambhal Lena...

Karthik- Ji thik hai.j

Edited by Krish58 - 9 years ago

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Anamta

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Very good yaar.

Aur bhairavi to great nikli👏

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ice-cold

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Well written Krish 👏

Cvs should actually read all stories that ppl of our forum write ⭐️

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whiteMagic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Nice update ⭐️ 👏
Loved it 😳 write more dear..

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hiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

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awesome update...
all go on different side to search 2015...
kuch bhi ho jaye.. yeah vasant hemant ko apne saath hi rakhta h...

bhairavigiri superb👏👏 waise yeah same wali bhairavigiri to maine bhi ki thi 10-15 saal pehle... detail mujhe yaad nai thik se but hum kahi bahar trip pe jaa rahe the.. & winter season tha.. toh oil bottle me akdam jaam gaya tha... toh mom me bola ki bottle ko garam pani me 2 min rakhenge to oil pigal jayega... then she ordered me leja bottle ko & pani me dal... & i bhairu's sis bottle ko balti me daldi... & wonder bottle khuli thi...😆😆😆 phir do min baad mikalke le ayi.. jab dad ne bal me dala toh he was like yeah oil itna patla aisa kyun h...
phir maine bola ki koi bhi gadha liquid water me mix karo to patla to hota hi h na...😆😆😆😆
my mom was like abhi me tujhe zoo me hi rakh ke aati huu...😆😆😆😆

hemant thoda logical bola.. aur mast hemantgiri karke help ki.. wat an idea to call out 2015 in their language... hemant consoling vasant...😳😳 so sweet...

sharad - karthik talk... so emotional part was it.. well written👏👏

continue soon...
sorry for late unres...
thnks 4 d pm...

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Krish58

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Home ff- part 4

Rustomji asks karthik to look after shop as he will be out of town ...

At ghotala house ,jacky's superpower fluctuates he was scared as Bhavna aunty was calling ghotala's ..

Jacky- mere superpowers fluctate ho rahe... Hey, Patharwale bhagwan yaha kisi ko mat bhejna.. ... Uncle ne kaha tha woh log aa rahe hai.. Unke bhi superpower fluctuate ho rahe hai.. kaise bhi karke colonywalo ko unke ghar bhejna hoga...

Here, while coming back hemant became aadha invisible hogaya. So ghotala's have to cover him with a white cloth..

Here in colony garden ,Bhavna is calling out ghotala's ..

Bhavna - ooh ghotala bhai bahaar aao aur abhi ke abhi yeh adoption papers pe sign karke bhairavi ko ghotala nagari lejao..

All colonywal come out..

Anna - kya hua aunty Bhavna aap itna kyu chilla rahi hai

Ohja uncle- ke hua itna kyu chilla rahi ho ..Bhavna bhabhi... Thoda dhire chillao varna colony ke ghar ke khidkiyo ke kaanch tut jaayenge..

Bhavna glares at him...

Ohja uncle- mera Matlab hai...heee... Heee...mera matalb hai kyu itna chilla rahi hai..

Bhavna- mein Ab nahi reh sakti iss bhairavi ke saath ..bas Ab ya toh yeh bhairavi rahegi ya phir mein iss ghar mein...

Jacky comes out of ghotala house

Bhavna- ooo jacky kaha hai ghotala family haan... Kaha hai sab

Jacky - woh Bhavna aunty ...woh...

Jacky was stopped by pritesh

Pritesh- haan ... haan Jacky bhaiya kahiye na sab kaha hai..aapko toh patah hi hoga na..kyuki aajkal aa toh ghotala family ke yahaa hi rehne lage hai..

(Looking towards Bhavna) dadi aap ghotala ko pareshan kyu kar rahe hai..aap Jacky bhaiya ke ghar rehne chale jaayi ae...

(In mind) Ab dekhta hoon kon bachata hai aapko Jacky bhaiya.. Aur ghotalas ko...

Jacky gave the same look as vasant gives to pritesh..

Jacky(to himself) uncle sahi kehte hai yeh chaar daanto wale rakshas se bachke rehna hoga... Mujeh jald se jald kuch sochna hoga...

Ronnie- ae bhadresh dekh Tera beta kya bol raha hai..

Pritesh- Ronnie uncle mein yeh keh raha hoon ki dekhiye Ab Jacky bhaiya toh apna zyadtar ka waqt ghotala's ke saath rehte... Toh unka ghar toh khali hi hoga na bhai, toh dadi waha rehne chali jaay toh kya hai na ghotala's bhi disturb nahi honge. ( looking towards Jacky) kyu sahi kaha na Jacky bhaiya..

Jacky- mein kaha hamesha ghotala family ke saath hota hoon..woh toh mein unke ghar kabhi kabhi kuch samaj mangne chala jaata hoon...

Pritesh- aem??

Bhavna - ae Sherlock holmas tu kehna kya chahta hai...

Pritesh- dadi,mein yeh keh raha hoon ki aapko nai lagta ki jacky bhaiya kuch zyada hi ghotala's ke yaha rehne lage hai... Kyuki jab hum kabhi kabhi jaate hai..

Toh ghotala family hame bhagne ki koshish karta hai.aur toh woh log subah se dikhe nahi.Ab koi subah se movie nai dekh sakta aur naahi koi subah se ghumta rehega. Toh socho kaha hai ghotala family..

Bhadresh - wohi toh subah se keh raha hoon, kaha hai ghotala family...

Meanwhile ghotala family enters colony...

Bhadresh- yeh dekho ghotala family aa gayi ooo ghotala family kidhar se aa rahe hai...

Ronnie- haan bolo... ..aur yeh hemant ko kyu woh ..woh.. He pushed me ko Hindi mein kya kehte hai..

Ohja uncle- tune mareh ko dakha mara

Ronnie- haan aur yeh hemant ko kapde se kyu dakhaa kyu hai..

Vasant - kya bola Ronnie?

Bhadresh- valah,tune Dhaka ka dakhaa kiya..

Ronnie- tum samjaana... Aur haan tum bolo ghotala's hemant ko kyu Dhaka hai kapde se...

Sharad- bhaiya kya bolenge hum colonywalo ko...

Vasant- sochne do...(to colony) woooh woooh aa raha hai.. Bas aa raha hai..haan toh woh hemant ko thand lag rahi thi issliye usse aise kapde se Dhaka hai...

Hemant - haan Ronnie uncle dekho mujeh thand lag rahi hai dekho mein thand se ladkhada raha hoon...( he makes sound like woh kaap raha hai)...

Vasant- haan, aeee ladkhadana kya hota hai.. ,hemant..woh kaapna hota hai.. Kaapna aur naki ladkhada na...

Vasant- ladkhadana matalb jab kisiko pair mein chot lagti hai aur woh thik tarah se chal nai paatah usse ladkhada na kehte hai..ab jaise ki uss din sharad chacha ko bat laga tha paav pe toh woh kaise chal rahe the usse ladkhadana keh te hai

Ronnie- yeh toh samjaane baith gaya man...

Hemant- nai nai papa...

Varsha- hemant abhi thodi der chup hojaa.

Hemant apne paav patak tha hai and starts doing hafu hafu...

Vasant- hafu hafu karna baandh kar.. ..

Haan toh issliye hamne hemant ko aise kapde se Dhaka hai...

Bhadresh- acha thik hai hemant ko thand lag rahi thi barabar hai par sab log subah se 'Kahaa the aur yeh Jacky tumhare saath kyu reh raha hai.. Sach sach bolna ... Ghotala ..manjra kya hai...

Sharad- bhadresh bhaiya woh hum log movie dekhne gaye the subah ke show mein...aur uske ek aur movie dekhi aur phir hum ghumne gaye..

Varsha- aur Jacky ko khana banaa nai aata issliye woh hamare ghar mein khana khata hai...hain na Jacky?

Jacky- huh..haan woh mein unke yahaa khana khane jaata hoon...

Pritesh- aap dusro ke ghar mein bhi khana khane aa sakte hai... Jacky bhaiya koi mana nai karega.

Jacky- areee khamaka dusro ko taklif dena ..isse acha mein uncle ke yaha jaata hoon aur aunty ke haath ka khana mujeh acha lagta hai...

Varsha - vasant ,meri size choti hone wali hai jaldi chaliye na...

Vasant-- haan haan varsha lekin chaar daanto wale rakshas ne plan kiya hai Ab sab hum pe shaq karenge ...

Kuch sochna hoga mujeh...

Taki colony wale hum par shaq nai karenge aur Jacky bhi Bach jaayega..

Ronnie- haan woh thik hai lekin yeh Jacky yeh tum logo ke ghar kuch zyada rehta hai uska explanation do..

Bhadresh- haan aur yeh bhi bolo kahin tum log woh choro ki toli toh nahi hona aur yeh Jacky bhi tumhara saathi toh nai...

Sharad- Ronnie bhaiya , bhadresh bhaiya aap yeh kya bol rahe agar Jacky hamare saath thoda zyada time spend kare toh usme galat kya hai... Aise toh ohja uncle ,Ronnie bhaiya bhi pura din bhadresh bhai ke yahaa rehte hai...

Toh hamne toh kabhi nahi pucha ke kyu rehte hai aap

Vasant- aur rahi baat Jacky ki toh woh shishir aur hemant ka cousin brother hai...

All look at ghotalas with surprise even Jacky too looks at surprise..

Pritesh- toh phir Jacky bhaiya ne pehle kyu nai bola..

Vasant- woo...wooo hame baad patah chala Matlab ki yeh mere bahut door ki behen ka beta hai... Toh kabhi mile nai phir baat baat mein chala...

Sharad- (whispering) - bhaiya mera kabhi bhi roop parivartan ho sakta hai..powers out of control ho rahe hai..

Ghotala's were finding it hard to control superpowers. And here colonywala were asking them questions ..

' hogaya aap sab ka' someone said

Ghotalas and colonywala looked towards entrance...

Bhadresh - ' lo aagaya ghotala's ka

Vaki, manav.

Manav ... He had been always supportive ..to ghotalas right from beginning

. Not because they saved him and brought him back.But he considered them good people with good heart..

Colonywala's have always considered ghotala's weird people.. But he didn't mind that .. Though they were weird but they were good,innocent people with good heart.

Just like ghotala's he had his own secret which he can't reveal to anyone ...

Manav- aap sab hamesha ghotala parivaar par shaq kyu karte hai..kya bigada hai ghotala family aapka.. Agar woh log subah se movie dekhne gaye hai ya bahaar gumhne gaye hai toh isska matalb yeh nahi ke woh log chor hai..aise toh mein bhi subaah se bahaar tha toh aap logo ko mujeh bhi chor kehna chahiye

Aur rahi baat Jacky ki toh shayad unhe baad mein chala ho ki Jacky unka rishtedaar hai...

( looking towards vasant) - uncle aap hemant ko lejaaye usse thand lag rahi hogi...

All ghotala's and Jacky leave from their .

At ghotala house ghotala's superpower is continuously fluctuating. After sometime they become normal...

Jacky- uncle aapko kuch patah chala 2015 ke baare mein...

Hearing 2015 name ghotala's become emotional as they remembering day's incident.. Varsha starts crying ..

Vasant (getting emotional) - varsha..

Varsha - vasant Aaj hamara beta 2015 hamare itne nazdik tha aur hum usse doondh nai paye..Aaj itne saalo baad uski awaaz ..suni sharad ne...usse baat ki...

Sharad(getting emotional )- haan Jacky Aaj 5 saalo baad 2015 se contact ho paaye...

(Looking towards vasant and varsha)

Bhaiya ,bhabhi mujeh maaf kardijiye Aaj itne saalo baad 2015 se baat hui. Aur aapse baat bhi nahi kara paaya... Mein ne bahut koshish ki contact karne ki par ho nahi paaya...

Vasant - nai sharad teri koi galti nahi hai..tune teri ore se bahut koshish ki..

And all ghotala's hug each other... Jacky was watching them...he had tears too..

Vasant- Jacky tum bhi aajao,kyuki tum bhi hamare bte jaise ho..tumne bahut help ki hai.

Varsha- aur tum Aaj se hamare saath rehna..

Shishir- mummy,papa yaad kijiye manav bhaiya ne bahaar colonywalo se kya kaha..

And all remember that manav said woh bhi subah se bahaar tha...

Shishir- iska yeh bhi matalb ho sakta hai ki manav bhaiya hamare... 2015 bhaiya ho...

Sharad- haan,bhaiya mujeh bhi yahi shaq hai kyuki army head office walo ne kaha ki manav ohja toh shahid ho chuka hai...

Vasant- nai,nai tum log kaise baat kar rahe ho.. Mein khud gaya tha check karne detector ke saath aur detector timi timi bhi nai kiya..

Hemant- haan, toh kaise karta timi timi kyuki woh toh kharab tha...Jacky bhaiya ka tha.

Jacky- haan,uncle woh mera tha aur kharab tha..

Vasant-aeee gende tu Ab bata raha hai...

Hemant starts doing hafu hafu

.vasant- Ab hafu hafu mat kar .. Ek kaam karte hai hum yeh detector apne grah wapas bhejte hai high command se baat karna hoga

Vasant further says ab hame aur koi tarike se patah lagana hoga ki manav hamara 2015 hai ya nahi..lekin sabse pehle high command se baat karna hoga..

They contact high command.. While contacting high command .

Vasant- yeh high command kaha hai..bbhukkad kahi ke..agar yeh yaha aaye hote toh pakka ohja uncle ko khaane ki competition mein piche chod dete... Kaha hai yeh high command.. Ooo high command ...

Sharad- bhaiya chill chill relax,... High command hai woh..

Varsha - haan vasant, thoda shant rahiye.

Vasant- areee kaise rahoo shant...hamesha jabhi contact karo khaane ka order pehle dete hai..yeh bhejna woh bhejna kabhi sev puri,kabhi..

Hemant says from behind..

Hemant - dahi puri,

Vasant- haan dahi puri.. Aur haan gende yeh Jo hum unke baare mein bolte hai unko mat bolna..aur haan varsha ek kaagaz aur pen leke aao... Abhi aate hai itna lamba choda order dete hai... Jo saaman bhejna hai..iss baar toh kehi doonga ki kya waha apne grah hotel khol dena...

High command comes on screen... All do ishaaba...

High command- khamma gani...

All- khamma gani..

High command- khamma gani nai gani khamma kehte hai...yeh mujeh hemant ne sikhaya..hai.. Vasant tumhe itna bhi nai aata..

All look at hemant and does actions like mein ne kaha..

All - gani khamma .

Vasant- sabse pehle aap 1947 se mile Jacky naam hai aap 1947 ke mummy papa ko yeh message bhejdana ki woh sahi salamat hai aur hamare saath hai...

High command- Jacky ... Ko saamne bulao..

Ghotalas think ke high command Jacky ko daatenge because of him,2015,2012 today all are in danger..

Jacky - ishaaba high command

High command- ishaaba,Jacky .

And they talk for sometime in alien language..

High command asks about all the happenings and whereabouts of 2015,2012..

Vasant- high command ji woh yeh Jacky ka prajati detector hai toh agar yeh thik hojaay toh bahut aacha hoga..

High command- thik hojaayga..bhijva dena

Vasant whispers to sharad..

Vasant- acha hai yeh bukhad high command ne issbaar kuch mangvaya nahi..

High command- aur vasant detector ke saath 50-60 packet thepla ,bhejna...

Sharad- bhaiya aap bahut jaldi bole..

Vasant- shuru kar diya high command ne apna list..

High command- varsha tum list banao.. Kya kya bhejna hai kyuki yeh fatichar aur chotte fatichar ghotala ko yaad nahi rahega..

At this vasant and sharad are angry vasant tries to shut the briefcase but he is stopped by varsha and Jacky..

Jacky- uncle high command hai

Vasant- jaroor yeh varsha ki daayan jaise maa ne sikhaya hoga..

High command- varsha tum likho kya kya bhejna hai...

And high command gives a lamba list..

Vasant is annoyed..

Vasant- aur kuch mangavana hai bhukhad high command..

High command- kya kaha vasant tumne...

Vasant- woh yeh kahaa ki aur kuch mangvana hai.. Aapko...

High command - jacky ,mathura se mithai leke aana..

Vasant- mathura se? Par high command yeh abhi kaha jaaeyga mathura woh toh UP mein hai...

High command- vasant male bhairavi, mein mathura mithai wala Jo Mumbai mein hai uski baat kar raha hoon...

Hemant laughs

Hemant-papa aapko high command ne bhairavi didi kaha..

Vasant angrily looks at hemant...

High command- vasant yeh sab saaman detector ke saath bhejna.. 2-3 din detector thik hoke aajayga..hoon

All do hoon

All says khamma gani,jai shree Krishna,goodnight...

High command - ishaaba

All are looking at each other and does ishaaba..

Here,manav was talking to someone in code language..

Manav- tum mujeh jald se jald saari info. Dhoondkar dedo.. .aur suno Ab se hum isi language mein baat karenge..aur kal shaam ko call karna jaise hi mein message karu..

Guys high command ko dharti pe bulao ya na bulao ?

Edited by Krish58 - 9 years ago

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Anamta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Nice update

Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

awesome story yeah bring high command to earth now and its high time in show also high command shud appear and give ways to find manav secret or 2015
last time vasant got alien detector and multiplier but their use so far hasnt been much

keep it coming krish