MG OS#28: Bawari Piya Ki

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mounacuty

@mounacuty

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#51

aaa its been a year since i read ur os ...felt soo refreshing...emotions were floating through out dis os..at a moment i felt wet in my eyes...congo for awesome os...GF needs writers lik u👏

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mounacuty

@mounacuty

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#52

well well well i ll b waiting 4 other chap😃

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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

wonderful os with strongest message...loved everything abt it

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rashi_jain

@rashi_jain

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

such a lovely os!!!!!

loved it a lottt

hate ruchi for making maaneet suffer so much bt also love her for somehow bringing maaneet together
mr handa was very understanding and supporting
mehul was the perfect brother

finally maaneet found their happiness in each other😃

keep writing...!!!

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Loved it totally.

Her pain, her yearning for love... emotions are pen down beautifully.

Awesome one-shot.

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Maan was in love with ruchi who was the daughter of geet's maid but her father treated her like his own daughter. He was engaged to ruchi but a single moment change everything & when that news reach up to geet's father's client her father got really angry which leads to event of geet & maan marriage. Now maan hates geet a lot & geet without any fault of her bearing things.

Coz of ruchi, both of them, maan & geet, were forced to be in this relation where geet do love him but maan hate her for destroying his life. This ruchi is such a bitch, already maan hates geet & her one more lie add up the fuel to his anger.

I was anticipating that ruchi is the one for the mess in maan & geet's life. she deliberately did all that so that she can show down geet & used maan as a pawn.

Maan was really ashamed of his deeds & decide to apologize to geet & start a fresh their life. From then on he took a great care of geet & geet was more than happy to have her beside her loving her. Mehul is such a darling brother, he did right with ruchi to play with geet's life.

For some some people light cut is a curse but for people like maan & geet, it's a boon😆

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jenny

@ajenn

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

I actually hated Maan in the beginning part, he was really rude towards Geet. But he is correct at his place, for the him he had lost his love that thought it was true.

He loved Rucchi with true and wanted to marry her. But things turn upside down as he was seen together with Geet is an unpleasant situation. He was made to marry Geet.

Ruchi is total bullshit person, I wonder if she ever loved Maan. She well planned everything. Knowing she will not get the current luxury life from Handa's after her marriage with Maan, she trap Maan and Geet together.

Not only that, she even badmouth about Geet to Maan which increases Maan's anger and hatred towards Geet.

Poor soul Geet, she always loved Maan since the days he used to come their house to study with Ruchi. But she didn't voice out her feelings to anyone.

Thou Maan treated her badly, yet she didn't complaint. She remembers her memorable encounter with her mother, being patience it pays. She waited for Maan to love her one day just like she always loves him.

Her wait got paid off one fine day when she fall sick and Maan wants to send unconscious Geet back to her father's place as he will be away. He is not that bad at least...

On the right time, Man discover how Ruchi had trapped him and she lied to him all the while. Geet was not to blamed at all, it was all Ruchi's plan. He silently left after leaving Geet.

Maan realize his mistake during his away, he was ashamed for his act and once back he straightway meet Geet and ask for forgiveness. And Geet forgave him wholeheartedly and they had a fresh start. Maan is all Geet wants...

It was really and cute act of Maan welcoming Geet into their house , just like a newly wedded bride... beautiful...

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