MG OS#28: Bawari Piya Ki

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lena

@lenageorge

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

wow superb os dear

👏read the whole part in one go ...

it was a sweet and awesome story😊

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Jaggy

@--Fairy--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Amazing update loved it wat a beautiful os geet patience get best result ,..each and every one is prefect in his role Bi, mehul and Mr Handa too good loved them

maan anger , hate , guilt and their manofying so wow

ruchi arghh

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shree2

@shree2

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Wonderful OS...

You have portrayed the moral in a wonderful way where we can able to catch it quickly using Maaneet..

Thanks for this lovely story...

Keep up the good work👏👏👏

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mansiahmed

@mansiahmed

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Beautiful OS...first part made me cry a lot n made me hate Maan n the reason behind his hatred towards geet made me melt towards him n forgive him,step by step progree in relation n the patience of geet is commentable👏

Ruchi deserves more that what a mean girl Mehul did the right thing what a bitch she is 😡

Loved the way Maan made her enter their home after clearing all missunderstandings love her dad n brother .very nice very well written OS.

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sandymg

@sandymg

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

just what i needed now..

a beautiful OS.. loved it..

i literally have no words to describe..

its just awesome!!!😊

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DivyaMala

@-MishtyBlue-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Amazing writing!!! I was waiting for ur writing!!! I have read all ur stories!! Ths one shot is too good!! Each character was dramatized really well!! Keep up with the work!!

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_SnowFlakes_

@_SnowFlakes_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Lovely OS
Ruchi was witch ..jis thali mein khaya usi mein jhed kiya 😡
Harsh was amazing father ..always trusted & supported Geet & Maan also ..
Mehul was lovely brother & how he took Geet's revenge frm ruchi ..i really liked it ..
Frankly agar mein Geet ki jagah hoti toh maan ko maaf nahi karti ..itni aasani toh bilkul bhi nahi ..Bt since Geet's love for maan was really grt & she acceptd him with open arms

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tooba ilyas

@doll.12

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

OMG... Just read it today...it was exceptionally beautiful...at first I hate maan how brutally he behaved with geet..but that was because of ruchi... She was an evil witch... For richness she played a dirty trick.. But geet's bro. Taught her a very good lession.. Tit for tat.. It was beautiful... Their union... Loved it throughly

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aditi

@aditi_2010

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Another brilliant OS from you. I really hated Maan here. I know he was misguided but the way he behaved with Geet was really very bad. I know he felt guilty and all but felt like he got off easy... And Geet is such a sweetheart and I absolutely loved Mehul.😉 But thora aur likhte yaar!!

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Phenomenal OS

Maan has been in love with Rucchi and he believed too that she was in love with him but she could not marry a middle class guy because she was to fond of the luxuries at the Handa's .
after her engagement to Maan she decided to trap Maan and Geet and she so did that only making Maan believe that his life is over and he started hating Geet .
Geet has fallen in love with Maan from the days he would come home and study with Rucchi but she never said anything to anyone and when she married Maan he treated her with all hatred but she always prayed and waited for him to love her .
Maan discovers that Rucchi has just used him and always lied to him and Geet has always taken his hatred but never told anyone
Maan realizes his mistake and repents which Geet forgives him and slowly they start getting to know each other

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