MG OS#28: Bawari Piya Ki

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tabby999

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

hello

love the os ..

it was totally mind and heart capturing ..

geet's immense love for maan but she can't share her feelings with anyone ..

ruchi total crap ..how can someone be so worthless and back stabber ..the family that gave her shelter ..gave her luxurious life ..she used all ways to spoil their lives ..

geet's father is so much understanding person ..always by his daughter side and even after knowing what maan is doing to geet yet he gave him a chance without showing him down ..

maan ..what to say first i was simply not liking it but later when he decided to make up for the loss to undo the things he did with geet ..giving him chance is worth..in ruchi's love he was not to understand how much wrong he is doing to geet but once realised there was not looking back ..he will now surely take care of geet in every moment of life ..

geet ..perfect example of everything ..being so rich she never gave importance to money ..always taking care of her loved ones ..even want all happiness for ruchi ...i am happy that ultimately she got her piya back ..her bawrapan won her piya..forever to be hers ..

totally love the os ,...

thank u so much ..

looking forward for the next one ...will be waiting waiting

Edited by tabby999 - 10 years ago

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DishaMG

@DishaMG

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Beautiful os
and the moral was good :)

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scorpiodreams

@scorpiodreams

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Wonderful OS. Thanks for penning down awesome story for us. Bi, Geet, Harsh characters are so strong and stand for themselves and their loved ones. Mehul gave right punch to Ruchi's ego. Maan is darling once he came to know truth.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Always a pleasure reading ur os. Beautiful emotional bos. Superbly written. Gee suffered dilently b4 geeting her deserved happiness. Ruchi was j of Geet. She used Maan, he bekieved wt she sed. Geet was a dutiful wife bt MAan was so rude 2 her. Bi was supportive. Maan vheard wt Ruchi sed n realised the truth n slaapped her. Geet came frm rich family bt adjusted with maan. She loved him. her answer was good 2 pranay. Handas were always nice 2 him. Maaneet were forced 2 marry cos off Ruchi spreading rumours. Mehul put Ruchi in her place! Finally he accepted her! Geet gt her love! All ends well.

Edited by khwaishfan - 10 years ago

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divya22

@divya22

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Its a lovely os...

loved it sooo much...

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mauaa

@mauaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

hii oneOone.. hope u r fine..

loved this os totally.. u have written it v nicely..

hate maan in the beginning when he misbehaved with geet.. but eventually like geet's father u made also fall in love with maan..

i loved the way u have described geet's father.. though he loved his child v much he didn't interfere in her personal life.. he could have scold maan for not treating his daughter well.. infect when maan kept her when she is ill, he supported geet n looked after her... that's really shows how nice n kind hearted man he is.. clap for him..

bi ... though she was not a negative but i think it was her fault also in all these.. she should have made clear to her daughter that they are mare servants of handas.. so if she is giving more importance towards geet it's not wrong but her duty.. they should b grateful to handas for their kindness... if she had made ruchi understand all these may b things might b batter...

geet's bro.. kudos to this guy.. he played the cupid but the smarter one.. ruchi's exposure n maneet together..😉

u always write v wonderful stories.. thanks for this n keep on writing n be with us forever..😊

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ankita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

It was a lovely os...

Arghh I am soo hating ruchi for doing this to geet...
She planned it all so well to let maan believe that it was geet who wanted to trap him😡

But I wished maan could have behaved and thought a little more maturely...
I know he was angry and upset but didn't he once felt that the girl he is living with is not as what ruchi has told him😒

But thank God he did came to know about the actual truth and he did try to mend his ways with geet...
He felt guilty and he did ask for forgiveness from geet without any hesitation😊

I must say geet not only just believed her mother but also accepted it and had her patience with maan...
She knew that the day will come when she will get her love no matter what time it takes...

This os surely had a great message which that 'wait is worth it'