MG OS#28: Bawari Piya Ki

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@-Lehar-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

wonderful OS
loved it
maan and ruchi were friends first but later maan proposed her and she agreed...geet used to love maan silently...her father MR.Handa gave her all comforts to ruchi but ruchi with her insecurites always hated geet in her hatered she even stooped low and made geet victim of maan's anger
maan thought because of geet he lost ruchi.. geet's father forced maan to marry geet not having any other option he married geet but never accepted her as his wife...but later he came to know the truth and accepted his mistakes and accepted geet wholeheartedly

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Awesome os . luvd it very much ...maan ruchi ki baato mei aake geet ko kitni taklif diya but geet she is such a sweetheart ...har pain bardsht ki usne ...coz she love maan very much . ruchi she is such a kamini grrr ...kitni jada selfish n self centrd gal hai yea ...geet ke papa ne kbhi usse apni family se km nehi smjha n badle mei usne srf dhoka hi diya . but at d last ..she got that ..what she desrv ... Plz do write moreee ...would love to read :D

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@Endgame

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

superb story really Wait is Worth she loved him for years but he didnt notice her at all but because of rachi they got married such a disgusting girl she hated geet so much but to make geet suffer she did the right thing geet suffered very much but maan finally saw the true face of rachi n geet got her love loved the os thnx 4 pm

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Ashdevil

@Ashdevil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

At first i loved the song...
Hata that ruchi...
Loved geets nature...
Overall loved it

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tabby999

@tabby999

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

hi oneoone

i never want u to quit ..

see my comment was long enough ..

u r a brilliant writer ..i always read ur work ..

i had read all os u have written on maneet ..

thank u for ur fabulous stories ..

waiting or next

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monika

@rashmiverma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

amazing os dear.. its true wait is worth. . we want everything happnd rgt nw cnt wait the rgt tym... maan hates her becoz of ruchi not becoz of personal issues. . its human mentality we dnt believe those persons but believe others ... same happened with maan.. but geet trust , wait nw get her beautiful lyf... ruchi deserved this .. uske liye kitna kiya harsh handa ne vo ni dikha bs hate ke chkar me sb gva dia ... apni maa apna best frnd bhi... nice os

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@-Awaari-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

OH MY GOD!!

Mindblowing..I Loved it.. ❤️

You wrote it beautifully

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

hi thanks 4 da pm! terrific os! read n commented already! Love all ur OS ! update soon

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payal.gupta177

@payal.gupta177

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Brilliant OS.. Although belongs to a rich family Geet was a soft spoken obedient girl whereas Ruchi was just the opposite. Maan blindly trusted Ruchi ,thereby hurting Geet in the process.. Ruchi played with Maaneet's life.. Once the truth is out, Maan sought apology from Handas and was forgiven..Ruchi was punished .Moral of the story was awesome..Loved it..

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lovepoo

@lovepoo

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Loved it
Another great os by u

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