MG OS#28: Bawari Piya Ki

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flowing_river

@flowing_river

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

simply fabulous...

what a transition of maan's character...

and geet is hell of a woman with so much tenderness and patience..

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custodian75

@custodian75

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Lovely OS.

It was a roller coater ride of emotions. At first I was mad at Maan for behaving in such a way with Geet. And slowly as the truth unfolded, was really angry at ruchi. How could she do this with Geet, whose family has always treated her and her mother so well. She forgot all she got from the handas and even corrupted Maan's mind. That was a dirty trick she played on Maneet and brought the rift between them.

Thank god all the misunderstandings were cleared. Maan realised his mistakes and tried to mend it. Geet true to her nature forgave him completely.

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SonalikaSingh

@SonalikaSingh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Wow, a fab writer u r!

I m feeling that i hv read a ff not an os.

Inspite of the story being in negative zone for a good amount of time, u kept the spirit alive n kept ur readers guessing.

Ppl like ruchi do exist in this world.out of jealousy they can stoop to any levels, i personally had a traumatic experience on the hands of a girl working for me in my office who wanted quick success by any means n thought that if i m somehow sidelined, she can bcum the ceo by bcuming close to my hubby.

Maans emotions r very well depicted n the strength of geet is also done justice with.my heart went out to geet on her karwachauth n maan too bcoz he was committing so many crimes bcoz he trusted a wrong person.

But all is well that ends well.only that i m a romance freak. Last event thoda aur elaborate karna tha...it always feels good to read the first times of newly weds...ha ha

Luv u.keep wriying amazing stories

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piya27

@piya27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

amazing OS

loved it

In the starting I was feeling so miserable for geet and had a doubt that ruchi knew geet was using her washroom then why did she messaged maan for coming to her roim straight away that doubt got cleared wen read ruchi's confession

I actually could feel all the pain that she was going through

ruchi got what she deserved

her character was perfectly described and that made it easier to hate her character

finally, maan realized his mistake and gave the respect geet deserved it

the best part of the story was the moral

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indiegirl

@indiegirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Loved this short story, Bawari, really you portrayed Geet so beautiful and total Bawari for her Maan, but I specially loved the convo of Geet and her mom. Patience the big word and truly how it brought Maan and Geet together, her patience and belief in her mom's words. Loved it.
Thnx

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CoolHania

@CoolHania

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Fab Os

loved it

geet's patience finally got her love

ruchi was so mean

loved Bi's love for Geet

harsh's ch was also well.

😊

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ambeern

@ambeern

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Awesome os with the lovely massage first when I read it
I think it has sad ending but in the end it happy ending
loved it beautiful massage in the os

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priya

@priya111111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

such a beautiful os. really loved it very much. beautifully written . sach mein waiting brings happiness. and the same thing happened with geet. her true love towards maan finallly made her win in her love test. maan sach mein buddu nikala. how couldnt he recognise the game played by ruchi. how well she made geet a scape goat. and poor geet she couldnt recognise how she has been used. thank god mr.handa came to know about ruchi's game and played his own game by making maan to marry geet. He knows that one day maan will come to know about the true face of ruchi and true love of geet. And finally what he expected happened, maan recognised the true love of geet .

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Monikaarora

@Monikaarora

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

wonderful story dear ! ... so beautifully written !! .. i loved it so much ...moral inspired me too. ...keep writting these beautiful unique stories..

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