Destiney - Love Story of RaiNa FF **completed**last part on page 61**

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SO here is the character sketch + part 1...here i m only introducing some main characters...but i will introduce all the character as story move on...

BC(56 years):- head of kma , very strict person about rules & despline but also very kind hearted .

Maj. nair(51 years):-he is vice pinciple of kma, ek number ka khadoos insaan hai, he hates all the girls cadets mostly.

major bhargav (50years):- he is also a very stricts faculty of kma...actually he is a guest visitor to kma...for special checking...isiliye yeh cadets ke liye ravan se kam nahi hai...

major Naveen singh Alhuwalia 50 yrs (played by Sameer sharma):- he was cadet & proff of kma...now he posted some where else...but kma is very close to his heart...he lost his wife Dr. capt salini singhal aluhwalia in a mission...that time his only daughter naina was only 10 yrs old...

capt. Ranveer singh shekhawat(Sameer soni):- he is no more..he was also cadet of kma, and a brave officer...he is father of Rajveer...

Shavitri singh shekhawat(shilpa shindey):- she is also no more...she was Ranveer's beloved wife and Rajveer's mother...

major abhimanyu rai chauhan 50 yr (Gaurav chopra) :- like Naveen & Ranveer... he was also a cadet and faculty member of kma...right now he is posted in kma again...

Subedaar suri ji ,49 years:- mess incharge at kma very jolly & loving person.

capt. gunraj randhawa urf gunny 34yrs (Ankur nair):- he is very brave officer of indian aarmy...right now he is going to teach strategy & communication to upcoming batch of kma...and he is also in a special duty to save the triggers from traitors...

cadet Rajveer singh shekhawat,23 years ( Rajeev Khandelwal ):- he is 1st year cadet , very brave & bright cadet...very handsome,any girl can fall for him easily but he never pay any attention to them ,he is full of attitude,but only his best frirnd aalekh know him very well that who is real rajveer, rajveer ek makshad ke sath aaya hai kma me...jis baare me aalekh ke siwa kisi ko nahi pata...rajveer ne bachpan me hi, jab wo sirf 12 saal ka tha, usne apne maa aur papa ko kho diya hai...jis wajah se wo jyada logon se baat nahi karta...par uske liye uska makshad hi sab kuchh hai...

cadet Aalekh sharma ,23years(Arjun bijlani ):- he is 1st year cadet & a very hansome tapori but best frnd of Rajveer...rajveer aur aalekh same orphange house me pale badhe hai...aalekh aur rajveer ka is duniyaan me ek dusre ke siwa aur koi nahi,rajveer k liye iski jaan bhi hazir hai.they both are like brothers...

cadet Naina singh aluhwalia ,22 years ( Priyanka bassi):- 1st year cadet , very beautiful, any boy can fall for him , but she is very arrogant and naughty girl, she is daughter of major naveen & Dr. capt salini...she lost her mother at early age...but naveen gives him all the love he can...she wants to be a true soilder like her parrents...

cadet Ritu mishra 22 yrs (Sweta salve):- 1 yr cadet very beautiful and hot...par makeup kuchh jyada hi karti hai...khair she is room mate of naina...and now good frnd of naina & pooja...

cadet Amardeep huda , 23 years ( vikash mankatla ):- 1st year cadet , biggest flirt, totally hariyanviii.apni mummy ji ko bahut manta hai unse shart hari thi isne isliye kma aaya hai. is desh ka jawaan ban kar apni bharat maa ki raksha k liye, iska nara hai ''Jai Jawaan te Jai Kishaan"

cadet Ali beg 23 yrs (Harshad chopra):-1st year cadet...ali ke abu ek subedaar the...ali apne mata pita ki bahut respect karta hai...6 bhai behno me ali akela ladka hai...aur wo apne pita ka sapna pura karna chahta hai..aur desh ka sachha sipahi banna chahta hai...

cadet pooja ghai 22yrs (Gazal rai ):-1st year cadet,she is totally mobile ki dukan...she was in love with some one named rohit...but shadi wale din rohit pooja ko ditch kark bhag gaya...par pooja aaj bhi rohit se utna hi pyar karti hai...aur jabse use khabar mili hai ki rohit ambala me hai to use dhundhne ke liye humari mobile factory ne kma join kar liya...how intelligent na she is ?...khair ab to waqt hi batayega ki ise rohit milta hai...ya iska connection hi nahi balki tower hi change ho jayega...

cadet Yadhuvash sahni (yudi) 23yrs (kunal karan kapoor ):- last but not the least...cadet yudi...he is also a 1st yr cadet...he is kind of nurvous man...he dont know what he actually want to do?...but very sweet and inocent boy...but he wants to proove his dad ki he can be a true soilder by him self...without any kind of support of his rich father...he loves a girl...but he never told her...

Megha singh shekhawat 18 yrs (played by akansha singh):- she was Rajveer's sis...but when rajveer lost his parrents...he also lost her darling sis when she was only 7 yrs old...abhi kisi ko nahi pata megha kaha hai...she is alive or not...no one knows that...

Anshika sahni urf anshi 21 yrs (played by sanjeeda seikh):- she is yudi's yuounger sister...happy go lucky...sweet n bubbly...

so here was the character plzz response so i can write further...

plzzz do comment...
with love Chandni...
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***Destiney - love story of Raina***
Part - 1

hum dekh sakte hai ki ambala ki wadiyon ke beech ek bahut hi badi military academy hai jo is saal apne 50 saal bhi pure kar rahi hai...is military cademy ne humare desh ko kai saare naujawaan diye hai...jinhone dekh ke prati apna farz sachhi shradhdha aur imaandari se nibhaya hai...aur aage jakar bhi yeh academy desh ko aise tohfe deti hi rahegi...yeh koi aur academy nahi balki india ki sabse reputed military academy me se ek hai..nam hai...Kanchan Janga Military Academy...in short KMA...aaj is academy ke liye bahut khas din hai...kyuki aaj itihaas banega...kyuki aaj kma ka 50th batch jo pass out hua aur 51th batch ki suruaat hai...aur sath hi sath is academy ne 50 saal bhi pure kar liye hai...so dekhte hai ki kma me aane wala yeh lot kaisa hoga...2 din baad se sabhi classes suru ho rahi hai...so sabhi freshers ke pass sirf 2 hi din hai...aaj aur kal...kal tak sabhi ko yahan report karna hai...kuchh cadets ko to bahut hi asaani se admission mil gaya par kuchh ko bahut hi mushkilo se...BC aur MC yani brig chandok aur maj nair subah se hi student ke admission ki process me lage hai...tabhi koi jawan jyoti se guzarta hua bc ke cabin me daakhil hota hai...

a voice:- may i come in sir...

bc:- yes come in...oh...capt gunraj...welcome to kma...

gunny:- thankyou sir...

bc:- major nair..he is capt gunraj randhawa...yeh aaj se hi kma join kar rahe hai...as a faculty member yeh humare naye batch ko strategy & communication padhayenge aur drills bhi karayeinge...

nair:- so capt welcome to kma...aap maj abhimanyu rai chauhaan ke sath drills comand kareinge...

gunny:- sure sir...thankyou...

bc:- capt u can go...waise bhi classes day after tommorrow se start hongi...

gunny:- yes sir... (he salutes and left to his room)...

bc:- major nair yeh major chauhaan abhi tak nahi aaye...(ki tabhi abhimanyu knowk karta hai)oh come in major...so let we start the interview...

abhimanyu:- sure sir...first cadet hai...cadet ali beg...kanpur se hai...inke pita bhi subedar the...

ali aata hai aur report karta hai...

bc:- so cadet ali...apke room mate honge cadet aalekh sharma room no 202 all the very best...

ali:- thankyou sir...(and ali salutes and left)

aise hi thodi der bad aur bhi humare cadets aa rahe the...pooja ki mulakat gate pe hi ritu se hui aur dono ne bc se mil bhi liya but unfortunatly dono hi ek dusre k room mate nahi thi...pooja ki room mate koi sherry thi to ritu ki room mate naina singh alhuwalia...ab bari thi yudi ki...yudi ka interview bhi achha guzara yudi ka room mate koi shivam tha...par abhi 4 cadets aane baki the...aur aaj ke saam hote hote un me ek pahuch hi gaya apni bhaish par baith kar i mean apni gadi pe baith kar par sath me yeh bhaish ko kyun laya hai...watch man ne us ladke ko dekha aur rok liya...

WM:- aap ise andar nahi le ja sakte...

that boy:- oye kake...thare ko mari khushi dekhi nahi jati kya...dekh main kaun sa ise training dilane laya hun...
ab mahri basanti mare se door rahegi...ghana prem kare hu main mari basanti se...tujhse dekha nahi jata ki main mahri azaadi ke kuchh pal mahri basanti ke sath guzaar saku...

WM:- toh theek hai na...aap apni basanti ko le jaiye par yeh bhaish nahi...

that boy:-aye ki bat kare hai...yehi to hai mahri basanti...mahri behen...

WM:- kya...yeh bhaish...(tabhi capt gunny wahan aate hai)

gunny:- kya baat hai...WM...koi problem...

WM:- dekhiye na sir yeh cadet is bhaish ko lekar aaya hai...

gunny:- kya...whats ur name aur yeh...

boy:-sir mahra naam...i mean my self Amardeep huda...first yr cadet sir...aur yeh meri behen hai sir...bachapan se...

gunny:- ok cadet but yeh bhaish...i mean ur sis is not allowed...aur aap itna late aaye hai..interview khatam ho chuke hai...

huda:- are sir mujhe pata hai ki main late hu...par main kya karta apni sabhi 17 behno ko akhiri vidayi de raha tha to late ho gaya...

gunny:- kya...17...

huda;- are 17 nahi 18 hai sir..meri is basanti ko mila kar...

gunny:- u mean tumhare ghar me 18 bhaise hai jinhe tum apni behene mante ho...

huda:-right sir...ab dekhiye mere bina yeh doodh hi nahi deti...

gunny:- cadet agar ab aapka ho gaya ho to aap unke sath is bhaish i mean apni behen ko rawana kijiye...aur hostel me jaiye...apki reporting kal hogi...

huda:- ok sir (to his basanti) achha basanti apna khayal rakhna...oye tau...mahri basanti ke sath rekha, madhuri, kareena, katreena sa ka khayal rakhiyo...(gunny rolled his eyes)

a man:- tu chinta na kar puttar tu ja...aur desh ka sipahi ban kar dikha...(and he left with basanti)

huda:- achha sir ji kya yahan jananiyan bhi hongi kya...

gunny:- kya...

huda:- i mean girls sir...girls...

gunny:- cadet...aap bhul rahe hai ki aap apne teacher se baat kar rahe hai...

huda;- kya sir mana ki aap mere teacher ho but aap bhi young...(gunny gazing him hard)sorry sir...good night sir...

gunny:- wait cadet...sukra manaiye ki main tha...agar maj nair ya brig chandok hote...to tumhar yeh pehla din akhiri din ban jata...bar room...

huda:- yes sir...(and huda ran away to his room)...

gunny:- oh god yeh sab to sample hai...pata nahi kya karnaame kareinge...(he too left)

its almost night...Mumbai...

mumbai seher ke shor bhare ilaake se door...ek viraan haveli hai...jo kabhi kisi ka sayad bahut hi khubsurat ghar hua karti thi...par aaj to yahan sirf wo yadien hai jo kabhi is ghar ke logon ne jiyee thi...us haveli ka darwaja khulta hai...aur hum dekh sakte hai ki ek ladka andar aata hai aur apni dard bhari nigaho se us ghar ki har ek cheej ko dekh raha hai...wo ladka koi aur nahi Rajveer hai...aur yeh ghar...kabhi rajveer ka tha...jo ab khandar ban chuka hai...

oh jeena, jeena, jeena re...udaa gulaal...maai teri chunariyaa...lehraaaye...
jeena, jeena, jeena re...udaa gulaal...
maai teri chunariyaa...lehraaaye...
(raj main hall pe khada hai...aur use charo taraf sirf apne bachpan ki parchhai dikh rahi hai...)

rang teri reet ka...rang teri preet ka...rang teri jeet ka hai, laaaiii...
laaaiii, laaaiii, laaaiii...
(raj dekh raha hai ki kaise uski maa usko apni god me bitha kar khana khila rahi hai...raj unhe chhune jata hai par wo parchhai ojhal ho jati hai..phir use apne aur apni chhoti behen megha ki kuchh yadein yaad aati hai)

rang teri reet ka...rang teri preet ka...
maai teri chunariyaa...lehraaaye...
jab - jab mujhpe...uthaa sawaal...
maai teri chunariyaa...lehraaaye...
(jab jab raj par ugli uthai gayi humesha hi uski maa uski taakat rahi...na hote hue...bhi raj ke mata pita humesha uske sath the...)

jeena, jeena re...udaa gulaal...
maai teri chunariyaa...lehraaaye...
maa...maaa...maaa...maai re...
maa...maaa...maaa...maai re...
(raj apne kamre me aata hai..jahan aaj bhi raj ke kuchh khilaune hai...uski aur megha ki nok jhok unka pyar unki ladai har ek cheez ka gawaah hai yeh ghar..wo un khilauno chhuta hai...aur use wo sab yaad aa raha hai..ki kaise uske papa use apne kandhe pe bithate the...aur uski maa use marne ke liye uske peeche daud rahi hai...jisse raj ke chehre pe ek muskaan aa jati hai...par agle hi pal wo muskaan aanshun ban kar ankhon se beh jati hai...)

jag se haaraan...nahi main...
khud se haaraaan hun maaa...
(raj ko uske parrents ki death ke baad bahut torture bhi kiya gaya...)

ek din chamkungaaa...lekinnn...
teraaa...sitaaraa hun maaa...
(par wo nahi toota...kyuki use jeetna hai...zindagi se jitna hai maut ko harana hai)

maai re... maai re...tere bin main to adhura...rahaa...
maai re...maai re...mujhse hi ruuthii...meri parchhaayiii...
ohh...meri parchhaayii...tera khayaal...maai teri chunariyaa...lehraaaye...

(jab jab raj toota...humesh uski maa ke diye hue sanskaaro ne use joda...humesha..hi apni achhi yadon ko raj ne sambhal kar rakha...par raj ne apna bachapan kho diya...apni hasi kho di...12 saal ka bachha kab itna samajhdaar ban gaya...ki zindagi se ladne aur maut ko harane ki jung ladne laga...yeh to raj ko bhi pata nahi chala...)

jeena, jeena, jeena re...udaa gulaal...maai teri chunariyaa...lehraaaye...
rang teri reet ka...rang teri preet ka...rang teri jeet ka hai, laaaiii...
laaaiii, laaaiii, laaaiii...
(raj us ghar ke madir me jata hai...aur wahan use uski maa pooja karte dikhti hai...par phir se raj ke chhute hi wo ojhal ho jati hai...bhagwaan dard to sabhi ko deta hai...par maa baap se bichhadne ka jo dard naak manzar raj ne dekha...wo ek bachhe ki muskaan chheenne ke liye kafi hai...)

rang teri reet ka...rang teri preet ka...maai teri chunariyaa...lehraaaye...
(itane saalon me raj chain se nahi soya...bas un yadion ne raj ko zinda rakha hai, aur uske dost aalekh ne... raj wahi baith gaya hai aur mandir ko dekh raha hai...)

jab - jab mujhpe...uthaa sawaal...maai teri chunariyaa...lehraaaye...
jeena, jeena re...udaa gulaal...
maai teri chunariyaa...lehraaaye...

movie:- ABCD2

tabhi aalekh aata hai aur us raj ke kandhe pe hanth rakhta hai

aalekh;- veer...chal...humien ambala ke liye nikalna hai...

raj hugs him and crying...actully they both are crying...

aalekh:- tu aise nahi toot sakta veer...bhul gaya humara makshad...

raj:- nahi aalekh kabhi nahi...apne makshad ke liye hi to main aaj jee raha hu...warna yeh raj to usi din mar gaya tha...jis din usse uska sab kuchh chhin liya gaya...tu sahi kehta hai...main nahi toot sakta...bas tu mera sath kabhi mat chhodna...

aalekh;- mera is duniyaan me tere siwa hai hi kaun...aur yeh tera nahi humara makshad hai jise hum milkar poora kareinge...aur iski nayi suruaat kal se hogi...jab hum dono KMA jayeinge...

raj:- sahi kaha tune...KMA se humari nayi suruaat hogi...aur KMA ka ant...

camera freezed on Rajveer's red blood shot eyes...

end of part 1
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Milleegarg

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey awesome story
Smething totally different concept from lrl bt jst like that too
I really luved ur 1st part
Keep updating soon
Waiting 4 nxt part chandni
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Posted: 10 years ago

Amazing start
Continue soon
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RNlove4life

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice start...
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Thanx for the pm

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RNlove4life
Nice start...
Continue soon...
Thanx for the pm

thanks...😊

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rkchandni

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rinku95
Amazing start
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

thanku rinku..😊

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rkchandni

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Milleegarg
Hey awesome story
Smething totally different concept from lrl bt jst like that too
I really luved ur 1st part
Keep updating soon
Waiting 4 nxt part chandni
[:D/] 👏

thanks a lot milee