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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: nilusoni

gr8 par

raj and naina like eachother but dont agree on that
omg gunny know raj's truth and i hope going to help him
excited for next part
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next
continue soon


Thanks nilu
Let's see what will happen
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanku 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice. Update

Love and prayer
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Posted: 9 years ago
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a biggg thanks to all for liking & commenting on my fic... posting part 5 in a while
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***Destiney - love story of Raina***

Part 5

mess...

huda:- oye...yudiye...kuchh socha hai...kaun hai tera partner...aur aalekh...tu kiske sath jayega...

yudi:- sach kahun to main us ladki ke sath jana chahta hu...jisse main bahut pyar karta hun...actually na...wo mujhse lagbhag 5 saal chhoti hai...par wo yahan nahi aa sakti hai...

huda:- oye...yudiye...tu bachhi se pyar karta hai kya...(gives a hi five to aalekh)?? aur wo kyun nahi aa sakti...??

pooja:- oye jutt sabko apne jaisa samjha hai kya...ki jahan dekhi naar wahan aankh maar...

ritu:- right...huda u r such a impossible...too much...

naina:- wais bhi agar yudi usse pyar karta hai to kya burai hai isme...aur yudi ne yeh kaha ki lagbhag 5 saal...iska matalab wo yahi koi 17 ya 18 saal ki hogi...wo koi bachhi nahi hai...

yudi:- right...

raj;- par aisa kya ho gaya ki wo kma nahi aa sakti...

huda:- ha ha...bol bol...

yudi;- actually uske ek accident hua hai na toh...

naina:- oh then its ok...yar...use kyun pareshaan karta hai...tu kisi aur ke sath aa jana...

yudi:- thats the problem na...ki koi aur hai hi nahi jiske sath main aa saku...

huda:- oye yudiye aisa kar ki tu is aalekh ke sath aa ja...tum dono ke pass hi janani nahi hai...tum dono ek dusre ke liye...

aalekh aur yudi dono hi...huda ko marne ke liye uthe...par raj ne rok liya...

raj:- huda...tu apne aap ko jitna smart samajhta hai actual me tu uska 1% bhi nahi hai...sahi kehti hai teri mummy ji ki teri akal ghutno par hai...

huda:- dekh raj...tu...

raj:- nhh...ab tu sunn aur dekh...jahan tak baat hai...yudi aur aalekh...ki to mujhe pura yakeen hai ki inn dono ki partners mil jayenge...aur rahi baat...teri...(looking at naina)to kahi aisa na ho ki teri partner hi tujhe chhod de...aur u akela reh jaye...and i m just suggesting ha...

naina:- aisa kuchh nahi hoga huda...main hu na tere sath...dont worry...

aur naina raj ko attitude dikha kar wahan se chali gayi...aur uske peeche ritu aur pooja bhi...

huda;-tu kuchh jyada hi bol raha hai aaj...

raj:- main kaha jyda bol raha hu...main to bas yeh keh raha hun ki...soch huda...huda...the charmer...jiske peeche itni saari ladkiyaan diwaani hai...jo chahe to na jane kitani ladkiyon ko ek sath guma sakta hai...wo aaj sirf ek naina ke liye...uske aage peeche ghoom raha hai..nh...aur waise bhi mr. fresher to wahi banta hai jiske pass charm ho...jo casenova ho like u...par agar tu naina ke aage peeche aise hi ghumta rahega...to...baki as ur wish...i think tujhe mr. fresher banna hi nahi hai...isliye tu is tarah...khair chal aalekh...

is baar raj ne jo kiya wo sirf aalekh hi nahi balki...ali aur yudi bhi samajh gaye...aur bahut khush bhi the...aur huda raj ki baat ko soch raha hai...

yahan sabhi cadets apne room me hai...

naina & ritu's room...

naina apne hi khayaalo mein kahi khoyi hui hai...aur ritu uske saamne baithi hai...

ritu:- naina...tu huda ke sath fresherball pe nahi jana chahti na...(naina nods in yes)to kiske sath jana chahti hai...

naina:- Raj...(ritu smiles)...ahhh,...nahi nahi...wo to...(ritu naina ke bagal mein baith jati hai...)

ritu:- wo to kya naina...achha...chal thik hi hai...ki tu raj ko pasand nahi karti kyuki...mujhe raj bahut pasand hai...

naina(hadbada kar ):- maine aisa kab kaha...(naina bites her lips)...

ritu:- oh to iska matalab u like raj na...ya yun kahun...u love him...

naina( apni jagah se khadi ho jati hai):- stopit ritu...aisa kuchh nahi hai...raj is just a frnd...

ritu:- achha...to fir tujhe itna bura kyun laga...jab raj ne...mujhe ha ki...ball me aane ke liye...

naina:- mujhe kyun bura lagne laga...raj ki marzi...chahe jiske sath jaye...

ritu:- thank god...naina...u dont love him...kyuki naina...i love him...(dhamaake on naina's face...)i just love him very muchhh...now m relaxed...pata nahi kyun...jab se tu us solitary confinement room se aayi...raj ke sath 24 hrs guzaar kar...tabse tu bahut badal gayi hai...tu humesha khoyi hui rehti hai...aur ab its been 2 month tu raj ko janti hai...aur pyar hone ke liye to ek pal hi kafi hota hai na...khair ab jab tu raj se pyar nahi karti to mera rasta clear hai...ki main raj se apne dil ki baat keh doon,...and u know what...main itani khush hun ki raj ne mere sath aane ko haan keh di...(naina smiles sadly)...achha good night...

ritu apne bed pe jaakar late jati hai...aur yahan naina ki ankhon se aanshun behne lage...jo ritu ne dekh bhi liya...aur naina...bhag kar wash room me chali gayi...aur yahan ritu in her mind with cute smile on her face...

ritu in her mind:- tu mujhse chahe jitna jhuth bol le naina...tujhe raj se pyar ho gaya hai...aur tujhe bahut bura laga tha...jab raj ne mujhe ha kahi...kyuki tu raj ke sath jana chahti thi...par ab main bhi dekhti hu ki tu kitna jhuth bolti hai...aur kab tak jhuth bolti hai...teri frnd hun...itna to tujhe jaan hi gayi hun...aur main unme se nahi jo apni dost ke pyar par nazar rakhe...par tujhe yeh ehsaas dilane ke liye ki... u love raj...mujhe tujhse yeh jhuth bolna pada ki i love him...khair ab main bhi dekhti hun...ki tu kab tak is jalan me jalegi...tu aur raj dono hi mere bahut achhe dost hai...aur mere dono dost sath me khush rahe main bas yahi chahti hu...

naina wapas aayi...aur ritu aakhein band kark so gayi...naina apne bed par baithi hai...aur ritu ko dekh rahi hai...uska mann kar raha hai ki abhi ritu ko jaga kar use 2 thappad mare par...wo aisa nahi kar sakti thi...wo bhi so gayi...

Rajveer & huda's room...

huda apne bed pe baitha kuchh soch raha hai...aur azeeb si sakale bana raha hai...jise dekh kar raj bahut irritae ho raha hai...

raj:- abe...kya ho gaya hai...kya prblm hai tujhe...

huda:- wo raj...wo main phoolan ke aage peeche yun bhagta hun...to...

raj:- to...

huda:- to kya baki ladkiyaan...

raj:- bilkul sahi soch raha hai...meri advice maan...fresherball me kisi aur ke sath ja...

huda:- pagal ho gaya hai kya...itani mushkil se phoolan mani hai...

raj:- wahi to...ab dekh tune use kitani mushkil se manaya hai...kitne hath pair jode tune uske,...aur us din mess...me...kaise dhaush jama rahi thi tujh par...ki tu uske sath chalega...bas...jaise ki tujhe order de rahi ho...(huda nods in yes)teri koi dignity hai ya nahi?...ab khud hi soch baki ladkiyaan yeh sab dekh kar kya soch rahi hongi ki ek ladki naina...huda par hukum chalati hai...huda ki to koi self respect hai hi nahi...huda to kisi kaam ka hi nahi raha...huda to namard...

huda:- kya...kya kaha...

raj:- yeh main kahan keh raha hun...yeh to...baki ladkiyaan sochti hai...

huda:- no ways...i m the huda...i m the man...

raj:- hmm to huda the man...be a real man...aur dikha de baki ladkiyon ki tujhme abhi bhi wo aag hai...naina ke chakkar me wo aag thandi nahi hui hai...

huda- hmmm...main aisa hi karunga...par phoolan uska kya...wo kiske sath jayegi...main naina ko abhi hi bata...

raj:- abe pagal ho gaya hai kya...naina ko batayega abhi...parso ball hai...wo tujhe mar - mar kar adhmara kar degi...fir tu kis muh se ball pe jayega...tu aise hi use thode na phoolan kehta hai...aur naina ka kya hai...use to koi bhi mil jayega...

huda:- hmmm sahi keh raha hai...thanks mere bhai...main kal hi kisi ko patata hun...

raj;- yeh hui na...asli mardo wali baat...good night...

huda;- ha ha...good night...(huda so gaya)

raj in his mind:- aalekh...teri partner ka intezaam to ho gaya...ab yudi ka kuchh karna padega...

next day...a day before fresherball...

aaj sabki leave hai taki sabhi cadets apni shopping kar sake...wajah bhi to badi hai...fresher ball k sath sath...kma ke 50 saal pure hone ka bhi jasn hai...akhir kar sabko special jo lagna hai...sabhi loge shopping par gaye hai...aur huda apni date patane me busy...par raj nahi gaya...kyuki use koi khushi nahi ki kma k 50 sall pure ho gaye...sabne kaha raj ko ki wo bhi chale...par wo nahi mana...aur aalekh ne raj ka support kiya...aur kaha ki raj ke liye wo hi kapde le aayega...aalekh ka bhi mann nahi tha par wo chala gaya sabke sath...akhir kar dosti ki hai in logon ne nibhani to padegi...

saam ka waqt tha...bas sabhi laut kar aane hi wale hai...yahan capt gunny apne kamre me kuchh soch rahe the...
unhone rajveer ko apne room me bulwaya...nandini bhi room me nahi thi...raj room me aaya...

raj:- may i come in sir...(gunny nods in yes)...

gunny:- cadet...door achhe se lock kar do...aur yahan aakar baitho...(raj ko kuchh azeeb laga...par usne waisa hi kiya...)

raj:- sir aapne bulaya...kuchh kaam tha...

gunny:- yes...kaise ho ??

raj:- ji...??

gunny:- maine kaha...kaise ho cadet Rajveer Singh SEKHAWAT...(rajveer is totally shocked...wo chahta to tha ki gunny ko sab pata chale...par its tooo early...abhi to gunny ka vishwaas bhi nahi jeet paya tha...wo achanak khada ho gaya) kya hua...maine kuchh galat kaha kya...

raj;- sir...aapko kuchh galat fehmi hui hai...mera naam rajveer singh hai...sirf rajveer singh...

gunny:- Cadet Rajveer singh shekhawat...son of Capt. Ranveer singh shekhawat...(dhamake on rajveer's face)...right...barso pehle...ranveer singh ki maut ho gayi...aur uski patni bhi yeh sadma barshast na kar saki...aur unke 2 bachche the...ek beta aur ek beti...dono ka kuchh pata nahi...cadet singh kahin tum wahi rajveer to nahi...oh yes...u are...u are a son of bloody traitor...(raj ka khoon khaul gaya...sirf gunny tha jis par raj ko vishwaas tha aaj wo bhi...he catches his coller...)

raj:- mere papa deshdrohi nahi the...he was not...

gunny is just looking at raj's eyes...itna junoon...aur itna dard pehli baar nahi dekha tha gunny ne...yehi junoon kabhi usne rajveer ke pita me bhi dekha tha...jis waqt gunny kma me cadet tha us waqt hi yeh hadsa hua tha ranveer ke sath...aur gunny ke mentor aur koi nahi balki...Capt. Ranveer singh shekhawat the...gunny...ne dheere se raj ka hanth apni girebaan se hataya...


gunny:- yehi to main sunna chahta tha tumse...raj...ur father was my mentor...(raj looks at gunny with teary eyes...)...baitho...(gunny ne raj ko apne bed pe bithaya...)ab tum yeh batao...ki tum kya jante ho...kitna jante ho...aur kya hua tha...(raj looks at him and again thinking something)...u can trust me raj...kyuki mujhe bhi pata hai ki mere mentor kabhi gaddari kar hi nahi sakte...i want to help u raj...plzzz...

raj gunny ko sab kuchhh batata hai...jo uske sath hua...uska maksad...abt aalekh, and megha too...even about major bhargav and abhimanyu...(raj ke sath jo kuchh bhi hua hai...wo detail me baad me pata chalege)gunny is almost crying...

raj:- ab bataiye sir...kya main galat hun...

gunny:- nahin raj tum bilkul galat nahi ho...balki i m happy ki tum yahan aaye...tum chup nahi ho...mujhe khusi hai ki aalekh tumhare sath hai...par kma ki barbaadi is baat ka koi solution nahi hai...mana ki sir ke sath jo kuchh bhi hua...jisne bhi kiya..sab kma se jude hai...par tum yeh bhul rahe ho ki kma yeh nahi kehta ki aap dhoka do...kma yeh nahi kehta ki aap gaddari karo...tum khud is kma me 2 mahine se ho...kya tumhe aisa laga ki kma logo ko galat rah dikhata hai...(raj is just listening him)galat kma nahi hai...galat wo loge hai...jo kma me reh kar kma ko khokhla kar rahe hai...ha sir k sath jo kuchh bhi hua kma me hua...par kma ne nahi logon ne galat kiya...yeh mat bhulo raj ki tumhare papa ek sachhe shipahi the...he was not a traitor...he was truely a patriot...jo kma se hi bane hai...aaj tum bhi isi kma me ho...kya tum apne desh ke sath gaddari karne ka soch sakte ho...kya tum hindustaan ka bura chahoge...(raj nod's in no)...to bas raj...saza do par kma ko nahi...balki un logon ko...jinhone na sirf tumahre papa ko dhokha diya...na tumhare papa ko mara...balki...kma ko bhi na jane kitne saalo se dhoka de rahe hai...kma ko bhi mar rahe hai...use khokhla kar rahe hai...kyuki yeh loge na sirf tumhare dusman hai...balki kma k...is desh ke bhi dushman hai...aur yakeen mano raj ki tumhare is mission me har kadam me tum mujhe apne sath paoge...(raj has tears and respect for gunny) tumne mujhse us din puchha tha na ki niyam ya sach...to main aaj kehta hu...ki main tumhare sach ke sath hu...us waqt main kuchh nahi kar paya...par ab main tumahra saarthi banunga...aur bas tumhe arjun ki tarah apne lakshya ki ore dhyan dena hai...jis tarah krishan ji kabhi bhi arjun ko rah se bhatakne nahi diya...usi tarah main bhi kabhi nahi chahuga ki mera yeh arjun apni rah se bhatke...main kabhi nahi chahunga ki mere mentor ka beta...koi galat kaam kare...main bas chahta hu ki wo apne papa ki iksha puri kare...

raj:- papa ki wish...

gunny:- ha raj...sir mujhe apne bete ki tarah treat karte the...aur kai baar wo tumhare bare me baat karte the...wo tumhe veer bulate the na...(raj nods in yes) sayad isiliye main tumhe pehchaan nahi paya...jante ho wo chahte the ki unka beta veer unse bhi achha aur bahadur sipahi bane...jo apne desh k liye jaan dene se pehle ek baar na soche...wo yeh bhi chahte the ki jis tarah unhone kma ka naam raushan kiya...tum bhi unse kahi jayda aage badho...aur kma ke best cadet bano...sirf is batch ke nayi...balki kma ke itihaas ke best cadet...he was also not best... best cadet banne me wo apne dost se ek kadam peeche reh gaye...par unka beta...unki yeh wish jarur puri karega...aur ab tum kma ke cadet bhi ho...par tumhare mann me kma ke prati pyar aur samman nahi balki nafarat hai...is nafarat ko mita do rajveer kyuki kma...galat nahi hai...11 saal pehle jo kuchh bhi hua...jinke karan hua...unhe saza milegi...par kma ko dafan karke nahi...socho rajveer...socho...ab jaao aur mujhe bata dena...agar tum kma ke samman ke sath apne gunehgaro ko saza doge to mujhe apne sath paoge...par agar tum kma ki barbaadi ka soch rahe ho to...i m sorry...tum mujhe hi nahi apne papa ko bhi apne khilaf paaoge...go...and dont worry ur secret is safe with me...

raj wahan se chala gaya...usne puri raat sirf gunny ki baton ko socha...ab wo sabse pehle yeh aalekh ko bata kar apni duvidha ka ant karna chahta tha...wo subah uth kar jaldi se ground par gaya aur usne...aalekh ko bhi bulaya...

aalekh:- kya hua...tu theek to hai...abhi itani jaldi kyun bulaya...

raj;-aalekh woh...(raj ne kal ka sab kuchh bata diya)...ab tu bata main kya karun...

aalekh:- gunny sahi hai veer...galat kma nahi...kma ke loge hai...uncle ke gunehgaar kma nahi balki loge hai...to humien saza bhi logon ko deni chahiye na ki kma ko...hai na...(raj is just looking at aalekh)aur kya tu uncle ki wish puri nahi karega...kya tu...ek sipahi nahi banega...

raj(tears):- haan..banunga...is desh ka sachha sipaahi ban ke dikhunga...papa ki wish main puri karunga...kma ka naam raushan karunga...aur we sabhi loge...jo mere papa aur kma ke gunehgaar hai unhe saza dunga...sirf is batch ka hi nahi...balki kma ke itihaas ka best cadet ban kar dikhaunga...(aalekh has a smile)

aalekh:- sirf tu hi nahi main bhi is desh ka aur kma ka sabse achha sipahi ban kar dikhaunga...aur hum dono milkar...is system me reh kar...is system se ladeinge...apne papa ke liye...kma ke liye...unn sabhi saheedo ke liye jinhone desh ke liye apni jaan di hai...ab tak hum sirf kma ko barbaad karke in sabko saza dena chahte the...par ab kma ki abaadi humara pehla mission hoga...(raj nods in yes both have tears and both hugs...and its raining...)dekh aaj uncle bhi humare is decision se kitane khush hai...

some one is claping for them they turned and find gunny there...who also have tears...

gunny:- i m proud of u boys...aur kya baat hai aalekh...jab tum emotional hote ho to sophesticated ban jate ho...(raj laughs at this)...no tapori language...

aalekh:- are wo to sir...par sir thankyou ha...apun dono ka sath dene ke liye...

gunny:- nahi aalekh main tum dono ka nahi sach ka sath de raha hu...aur tumhare is mission me i m in...waise raj y are u so serious yar... tumhare papa ko achha nahi lagega...apni zindagi jiyo raj...

aalekh:- wahi to apun kehta hai isko sir ki nache gaye...khush rahe...par yeh hai..ki...

gunny:- aalekh is right...so boys see u at party tonight...bye...

now its party time...all are completely ready for the blast...aaj to raj bhi khsuh tha...kyuki ab wo kma k liye ladega...na ki kma k khilaf...raj ne nisha naam ki ek cadet se yudi ke liye baat kar hi li aur ab yudi ke pass date thi...par bechara aalekh...uske sath koi nahi tha...aalekh muh latkaye hue ja raha tha ki raj ritu ko lekar pahuncha...

ritu:- hey aalekh tumhe kya hua...??

aalekh:- yeh tu puchh rahi hai...tune apun ki jagah veer ko chun liya...ab apun akela hai...ab apun kiske sath jaye...(tabhi raj ki nazar naina par padi naina ne same red dress pehni thi jo usne lrl me pehni thi...bas raj use dekhe ja raha tha...bcz she is looking stunning...but naina is sulking...tabhi wahan yudi- nisha, pooja -ali bhi aa gaye...aur naina raj aur ritu ko itane kareeb dekh kar uska dimaag aur kharab ho gaya)

pooja:- oye naina tujhe kya hua...

naina:- kya hona hai...yeh huda ko main chhodungi nahi...

ali:- kyun aisa kya kiya unhone...

naina:- uski himmat kaise hui mujhe dump karne ki...idiot...ek to maine use ha kaha tha...aur ain waqt par usne mujhse...

aalekh:- kyaa??

naina:- abhi 10 minute pehle usne mujhse kaha ki he cant go with me...kyuki use mujhse achhi date mil gayi hai...he is bloody...

ritu:- oh to u want to go with huda...

naina:- mujhse us huda ke sath jane ka koi saukh nahi hai...par ab is waqt mujhe kaha se date milegi...

ritu:- right...problem to hai...is huda ki to...

raj;- waise naina...aalekh is also have the same problem...if u both are comfortable with each other...u both can go together...(naina & aalekh looks at eachother) waise bhi aalekh is muchh muchh better than that huda...

pooja;- oye naina...raj is right...

yudi:- yup...

ritu:- kahin aisa to nahi naina ki tum kisi aur ke sath jana chahti ho?

naina:- ji nahi...ok... i dont have problem with aalekh...aalekh tu mere sath chalega?

aalekh looks at raj...who nods in say yes...

aalekh:- ok...apun chalega...

raj:- great...ab aalekh aur yudi dono ke pass date hai...then lets go...

all enters in the party...

1. it was bc with kma dr...they both got 6/10 on hot & cool meter...
2. gunny with nandini...they got 8/10...
3.pooja & ali...they both also got 8/10...
4.aalekh & naina...aalekh got 9/10 while naina got 10/10...
5. huda with some girl named tia...huda got 8/10 and tia got 9/10...
6. yudi & nisha...yudi got 7 while nisha got 8/10...
7. now finally its time for raj & ritu...raj got 10/10 & ritu got 9/10...

so it means...Raj-Naina are MR & MS Fresher...huda to puri tarah se jalbhun gaya...use raj se to kya aalekh se bhi kam points mile...

ritu;- oh no.naina...u won...u are the hottest cadet and raj is hottest dude of this party...

gunny:- raj naina...congrats both of u...aur tum dono sath me aur bhi jyada achhe lagte ho...(raj & naina both are shocked)enjoy the party...(guuny left)...

aalekh:- kya veer..tune apni jodi mere partner ke sath bana li...chal koi nahi...ritu...tere partner ko apun ki partner naina le gayi kya tu mere sath dance karegi...

ritu:- sure aalekh...(both ritu & aalekh left )

raj chup chap khada hai aur sabko dekh raha hai...naina is fed up with it...

naina:- oh common raj...ab kuchh bolo bhi...

raj;- main kya bolun naina...

naina:- woh common raj now we both are partners...common...lets dance...

raj;- are nahi naina...mujhse nahi hoga...u go...(tabhi huda aata hai)

huda:- kya phoolan raj se kya keh rahi hai...chal tu mere sath dance kar...

naina:- oh shut up huda...ja aur apni us tia ke sath dance kar...(naina wahan se chali gayi...)

huda:- are phoolan sunn to...(to raj)to tune jaan bujhkar mera brane wash kiya tha na...taki phoolan teri date ban jaye...

raj:- kya bakwas kar raha hai huda chad gayi hai kya...naina mere sath nahi aalekh ki date ban kar aayi hai...

huda:- chadi mujhe nahi hai...par ab to teri ban gayi na...

raj:- wo to waise bhi banti agar tere sath aati to bhi...kyuki...main mr fresher bana hun...aur naina ms fresher...samjha...

huda;- chal mana...ki tu sahi hai...par kya tu wakai mr fresher banne k layak hai...

raj;- kehna kya chahta hai tu...

huda:- jo mr fresher banta hai na...use rock karna padta hai...he must be rocking dude like me...not like u serious man...so be rock dude and proove ur self...ki tu yeh title desrve karta hai...naina ko hi nahi...baki sabhi ladkiyon ko bhi apni taal par nacha kar dikha...(huda left frm there attitude thinking raj kabhi nahi kar payega...aalekh aaya..)

aalekh:- abe...tu uski faltu ki bakwaas kya sunn raha tha...jabaab dena tha na...

raj;- abhi deta hu...tamacha wo achha nahi lagta jo dikhayi de...tamacha to wo achha lagta hai...jo dikhayi na de...(raj left frm there)...

naina side par khadi nandini se baat kar rahi thi ki uske kaano me ek pyar si awaaz aayi...jo kahin na kahin use sabse jyada pasand hai...

Rajveer:-
ek ladki thi diwaani si...ek ladke pe wo marti thi...
nazre jhukake...sharma ke...galiyon se guzarti thi...
chori- chori, chupke - chupke...chitthiyaan likha karti thi...
kuchh kehna tha sayad usko..jane kisse darti thi...
jab bhi milti thi mujhse, mujhse puchha karti thi...
pyar kaise hota hai...yeh pyar kaise hota hai...
aur main sirf yahi keh pata tha...
(a beautiful smile appears on naina's face and as well as aalekh's face too)

aakhien khuli ho ya ho band...
deedar unka hota hai...
kaise kahu main oh yara, yeh pyar kaise hota hai...
turu..tu ru ru...tu tru turu, turu ru...
(raj starts dancing...and he frwd his hand too naina and she accepted...now both are dancing)

aakhien khuli ho ya ho band...
deedar unka hota hai...

(ali and pooja also dancing with raj naina)

aakhien khuli ho ya ho band...
deedar unka hota hai...
kaise kahu main oh yara, yeh pyar kaise hota hai...
turu..tu ru ru...tu turu turu, turu ru...
(aalekh with full of style and passion dancing with ritu...she also enjoying aalekh's company)

aakhien khuli ho ya ho band...
deedar unka hota hai...
kaise kahu main oh yara, yeh pyar kaise hota hai...
turu..tu ru ru...tu tru turu, turu ru...

(all are dancing with full of masti...huda is jealous)

...
...
...
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lalalall lallala la lalalalalalala la la la...

(now huda also dancing with tia)

aalekh & ritu:-
aaj hi yaaroin, kisi pe mar ke dekhienge hum...
pyar hota hai, yeh kaise, kar ke dekhienge...hum...


naina:-
kisi ki yaadoien me, khoye hue...
khawabon ko humne saja liya...
kisi ki baahoin me, soye hue...
apna use bana liya...


raj:-
aiye yaar pyar me koi...
turu..tu ru ru...tu ru..ru...
aiye yaar pyar me koi...na jagta na sota hai...
kaise kahu main oh yara, yeh pyar kaise hota hai...
...
...
...
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all are dancing...kahin na kahin aaj raj bhi naina ke sath dance karte hue...kuchh ajeeb sa mehsoos kar raha tha)

pooja & ali, huda & tia:-
pyar hai, ya jadu hai koi, bas jo chal jata hai...
tod ke pehre...hazaaron..dil nikal jata hai...


naina:-
door kahin aashmaano par...
hote hain, yeh saare faiysale...


yudi:-
kaun jaane...koi humsafar...
kab, kaise, kahaan, mile...


raj:-
jo naam dil pe ho likha...
turu..tu ru ru...tu ru..ru...
jo naam dil pe ho likha, ikaraar usi se hota hai...
kaise kahu main oh yara, yeh pyar kaise hota hai...


raj, aalekh, ali, yudi & huda:-
aakhien khuli ho ya ho band...
deedar unka hota hai...
aakhien khuli ho ya ho band...
deedar unka hota hai...
kaise kahu main oh yara, yeh pyar kaise hota hai...


naina, ritu, pooja, tia,& nisha:-
aakhien khuli ho ya ho band...
deedar unka hota hai...
aakhien khuli ho ya ho band...
deedar unka hota hai...
kaise kahu main oh yara, yeh pyar kaise hota hai...

turu..tu ru ru...tu ru..ru...
turu..tu ru ru...tu ru..ru...
turu..tu ru ru...tu ru..ru...
turu..tu ru ru...tu ru..ru...


movie:- mohabbatein...


all are dancing with full swing...

end of part 5
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Edited by rkchandni - 9 years ago
Milleegarg thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Amazing update
Raj ne ke mind vanish kiya huda ka
Thank god finally av ritu ko raj se pyar nai
Nai to aa jati bich mai vamp ban ke
And finally av raj ko bhi naina ke liye feeling aane lge
Hope jaldi kuch karo av tum
Coz every things are nw on ur hands 😆 🥳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Fabulous
My favorite song
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Milleegarg

Amazing update
Raj ne ke mind vanish kiya huda ka
Thank god finally av ritu ko raj se pyar nai
Nai to aa jati bich mai vamp ban ke
And finally av raj ko bhi naina ke liye feeling aane lge
Hope jaldi kuch karo av tum
Coz every things are nw on ur hands 😆 🥳



thanks... yup will do goody goody things...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rinku95

Fabulous
My favorite song
Thanks for pm
Continue soon



thanks rinku...u liked the song how sweet... nd welcm

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Posted: 9 years ago
#60


thanks dear😊😊😊

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