Destiney - Love Story of RaiNa FF **completed**last part on page 61**

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Arti Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

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wow wow wow
ek or RN ff maja aa gaya
thanks chandni ek or fic start karne ke lihe RN pe
character toh ache h but first part me he naina gayan h kaha chupa kar raha h usse jalsi se mere hero heroin ki first meeting karo
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rkchandni

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: RNforever
wow wow wow
ek or RN ff maja aa gaya
thanks chandni ek or fic start karne ke lihe RN pe
character toh ache h but first part me he naina gayan h kaha chupa kar raha h usse jalsi se mere hero heroin ki first meeting karo
cont soon

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Oh finally u read it

Thanks hogi entry kal

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yoginisahakari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Nice story
Nice start

Pl cont soon
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rkchandni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: yoginisahakari
Nice story
Nice start

Pl cont soon
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thanku yogini keep reading

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Posted: 9 years ago

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thanku everyone for liking introduction and first part...here is the part 2 of RAJ naina

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rkchandni

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***Destiney - love story of Raina***

Part 2

raj:- sahi kaha tune...KMA se humari nayi suruaat hogi...aur KMA ka ant...

camera freezed on Rajveer's red blood shot eyes...

hum dekh sakte hai ki kma ki gate ke bahar ek bahut hi shaandaar car aakar rukti hai...jisme se naina aur naveen bahar aate hai...

naveen:- so naina...tumne finally soch liya na...tum chaho to...

naina:- oh common papa...m your brave daughter...aur main bhi maa ki tarah hi banke dikhaungi u dont worry worry...(naveen smiles)u know what papa i m very exited ki main kma me hi aayi...jahan se aap aur ma passout hue the...aur aap dono yahin to mile the...

naveen:- ha beta...is jagah se meri bahut si yadien judi hai...kuchh bahut surat to kuchh...(phir naveen kuchh soch me pad jata hai)

naina:- kya hua papa...

naveen:- nahi kuchh nahi...

naina:- achha papa ab aap jaao...yahan se aage ka safar main apne dam par tai karungi...

naveen:- r u sure?...i mean tum chaho to main tumhare sath...

naina:- nahin papa...main nahi chahti ki loge mujhe maj naveen singh aluhwalia ki baeti ke naam se jaane...aur mere sath extra care ka factor aaye...u know...

naveen:- ok ok...m very proud of my daughter...best of luck beta...(tabhi wahan se huda guzarta hai)

naina:- ok papa byee...take care...(naveen kissed her forhead)

naveen:- u too beta...(and naveen left)

huda to him self:- hiee...kitani soni janani...huda...tera to kaam ban gaya...ab yahan kma me bhi itani sunder sunder jananiyaan hongi tera dil behlane ke liye...aur tujhe rab ji se kya chahiye...

naina apne samaan lekar ander ja hi rahi hoti hai ki...huda daud kar aata hai...aur naina se takra jata hai...

huda:- oh...sorry ji...(wo naina ko sambhalta hai...par naina use push kar deti hai)oh my self cadet amardeep huda ji...but u can call me only huda...

naina:- whatever...(naina fir chalne lagti hai...)

huda in his mind:- kya karaari cheez hai yaar...par jo bhi hai...hai kamaal ki...pehli hi nazar me is huda ka dil le gayi...

huda (loudly):- oye kudiye sunn...maine kaha na m sorry yar...

naina:- so maine kuchh kaha...??...

huda:- are par tu bhi to apna naam bata...

naina:- Naina...

huda:- woww...what a beautiful name...like u...

naina:- flirt kar raha hai...?

huda:- aapko kya lagta hai...?

naina:- mujhe lagta hai ki...

huda:- kya lagta hai...??

naina:- mujhe lagta hai ki agar tum do minute me yahan se nahi gaye...to...

huda(kareeb aate hue):-to

naina:-to ji wo kya hai ji...ki mere yeh jo hanth hai na...yeh aur bhi khubsurat hai...(huda ko laga ladki pat gayi...)par jab yeh tumhare gaalon par padeninge na...to yeh aur bhi khubsurat ho jayenge...aur tumahre gaal laal...aur kya hai na...maine bahut dino se kisi ki dhulaii bhi nahi ki...to soch rahi hun...ki yahan suruaat tujhse hi karun...kyun kya khayaal hai...(huda's attitude was trashed)...so will u plzz excuse me...(aur naina huda ko apna avtaar dikha kar chali gayi...)

huda:- kya baat hai...aaj tak ladkiyaa to bahut mili par is jaisi phoolan devi se mulaakat aaj pehli baar hui hai...kya ada hai yarr...hiee huda...kuchh to alag hai isme...khair janani kaisi bhi huda ka charm uspe chal hi jata...just wait & watch...(aur huda bhi seeti bajate hue andar gaya...)

huda ka interview jo kal reh gaya tha wo aaj hua...kal late aane ke liye warn bhi kiya gaya...aur huda ab yeh soch raha hai ki yeh Rajveer singh kaun hai...jiske sath use apna room share karna hai...huda ke baad naina ka interview hua...aur maj chauhan naina ko pehle sehi jante hai bcz abhimanyu aur naveen batch mates the...aur frnds bhi...naina ne gunny ko bhi impress kar diya...par maj nair...was as usual khadush...naina ko pata chala ki use kisi ritu mishra ke sath room share karna hai...isliye wo nikal gayi apne room ki taraf...naina ke apne hostel ke ander jaate hi...2 logon ne Kma me enter kiya...naina ne unn dono ko apne hostel ke bolcony se dekha bhi par use kuchh saaf nahi dikhayi diya isliye wo ignore karke chali gayi...aur yahan dusri taraf Rajveer aur aalekh kma ke gate par khade hai...

inside BC's cabin:- so maj nair...sabhi cadets ho gaye ya koi baki hai...

maj nair:- no sir abhi cadet Rajveer singh aur Cadet Aalekh sharma ka aana baki hai...

bc:- so kya ab humein bhi cadets ka wait karna padega...

gunny:- sir yahan likha hai ki wo loge by train aa rahe hai to may be sayad u know train late ho gayi ho...just plzz just wait for sometime...

nair:- but this is not the rule capt...

gunny:- sir plzzz...

bc:- ok hum sirf 15 minutes wait kareinge...agar we nahi aaye to uska admission cancell kar diya jayega...

at KMA gate...

Rajveer bahut hi gaur se Kma k gate ko dekh raha hai...wo jahan khada hai use amar jawaan jyoti saaf saaf nazar aa rahi hai...aur us jyoti ke sath raj ki aankhon ki aag badh rahi hai...

Aalekh:- Veer tujhe strong banna padega...samajh raha hai na...aur ab chal ander chalte hai...hum pehle se hi late hai...

Raj;- hmm...aalekh...bhul kar kisi ke saamne humara sach nahi aana chahiye...we have to be very careful...

aalekh:- hmm...chal...apun hai na...

both raj & aalekh left for BC's cabin...

a voice:- may we come in sir...

bc:- come in...(both raj & aalekh enter)u both are late...

raj:- we are sorry sir...actually..hum mumbai se aa rahe hai...aur humari train late ho gayi thi...

bc:- u both may sit...

raj:- thankyou...

major nair:- so cadet Rajveer singh...and Cadet Aalekh sharma...aapne pehle din hi late aakar academy ka rule toda hai...agali baar se aisi harkat bardast nahi ki jayegi...

aalekh:- sir apun dono ne bataya na ki kyun...

bc:-cadet...displine is displine...it was ur first time...isliye hum aapko manf karte hai...humne apke records dekhe hai...yahan admission pane ke liye aap logon ne bahut mehnat ki hai...isliye ab use mukammal kijiye...aur sachha sipaahi ban kar dikhaiye...(raj is just staring at them...which make major nair a little uncomfortable) Cadet singh ur room no is 201 with cadet huda...and cadet aalekh ur room no is 202 with cadet beg...now u both may go now...kal se aap logon ki drills aur classes suru hongi...

aalekh:- ji sir...chal Veer...

raj:- thankyou sir...(both left...and major nair looking at them)

bc:- kya hua major aise kya dekh rahe ho...

nair:- nahi sir yeh ladke kuchh alag hai...

bc:- kya...kya kehna chahte ho major...

nair:- cadet Singh jis tarah hume dekh raha tha...

bc:- common major...they are young...aur is naye jawan khoon ka andaaz alag hota hi hai...kyun bhul gaye...subah wo sample...cadet huda...

nair:- ya sir right...

bc:- so major...admission to gaye aur is baar kafi sare cadet bahut special hai...kyuki inke records aur inka junoon alag hi hai...specially yeh aath...

a voice :- may we come in sir...

bc:- yes...(gunny aur abhimanyu ander aate hai...)be seated officers...main mj nair ko abhi yahi keh raha tha ki is baar ke batch ki quality bahut achhi hai...aur maine yeh 8 cadets ko select kiya hai...jo bahut upar ja sakte hai...maj. nair, mj chauhaan & capt. aap logon ko in par khash nazar rakhni hogi...

gunny:- ok soir par yeh 8 hai kaun...

BC:- 1. cadet Ali Beg
2. cadet Ritu Mishra
3. cadet Yadhuvansh Shahni
4. cadet Amardeep Huda
5. cadet Pooja Ghai
6. cadet Naina Aluhwalia
7. cadet Aalekh Sharma &
8. Cadet Rajveer Singh

abhimanyu:- ok dont worry...hum is bar best sipahi dene ki puri kosis kareinge...ok sir may we leave kal se classes start hai to kuchh prepare karna hai...

Sabhi loge apne kaam me lag gaye...aur raj aur aalekh apne room ki taraf jane lage...

aalekh:- kya yaar...ab pata nahi...apun dono ko kin chirkuto ke sath rehna padega...kaya main aur sath nahi reh sakte...

raj;- its ok aalekh...kya fark padta hai...humein apna kaam karna hai...koi fark nahi padta ki hum sath me ek room me reh rahe hai nahi...bas fark yeh padta hai ki hum sath hai...

aalekh:- hmm sahi kaha...yeh le 201 tera room...aur yeh bagal wala mera...

raj:- sunn...tere siwa mera koi nahi hai...apna khayaal rakhna...(aalekh hugs him)

aalekh:- tu bhi...samaan rakh kar..mess me chalte...apun ka sir bahut dard kar raha hai...

raj nods in yes...aur dono hi apne room me jate hai...par na hi huda hai na hi ali...so raj aur aalekh...apne samaan settle karke kapre change karke mess me jaate hai jahan...dekhte hai ki huda bina sir pair ke ritu aur naina se flirt kar raha hai...ali chup chap coffee pee raha hai aur yudi aur pooja...huda ko dekh rahe hai aur maje le rahe hai...tabhi gunny peeche se aata hai...aur raj aur aalekh ke kande par hanth rakhta hai...

gunny:- kya hua cadets aap loge bahar kyun khade ho...

raj:- nahi sir kuchh bas...

gunny :- ok...attention cadets...(all are looking at them...)so whole a new batch bhai...yeh dono bhi aap ke batch mates hai...Cadet Rajveer & Cadet Aalekh...(aalekh smiles but raj didn't which were noticd by none other than naina...)so aaj ji bhar kar mil lo ek dusre se bcz kal se aap sab ki life ka naya phase suru hone wala hai...suri ji...aaj first day hai to in sab ko meri taraf se special coffe pilaye jaaye...

suriji:- oh...kyun nahi sir ji...(To raj & aalekh)...oye khotyo...wahan kyun khade ho idhar aao...(gunny left with smile aur raj & aalekh ja kar us table ke bagal me baith jate hai jahan ritu aur naina baithe hai...)

ritu:- hi i m ritu...

aalekh (with smile):- apun aalekh aur yeh Veer...(raj looks at aalekh...)apun ka matalab hai ki Rajveer...

naina:- i m naina...

ali:- humara naam ali hai...

aalekh:- ali...ali beg...(ali nods in yes) wo apun tera room mate hai...

pooja;- hii agar meri life me rohit ka connection pehle se nahi laga hota to main tum dono me se kisi ek se sadi kar leti...(raj who was sipping his coffee spit out)..ahh...kya raj...(raj & aalekh looks at them)oye dar mat nahi karungi...waise hum sab tujhe Raj to keh sakte hai na...(raj nods in yes)waise..bada sona hai tu...bilkul mere shahrukh kaun hai...

raj:- hmm...(to aalekh) ab yeh shahrukh kaun hai...??

aalekh:- abe mujhe kya pata...

naina(smiles):- she means...shahrukh khan...films super star...

aalekh:- oh...wo shahrukh...kya baat hai pooja...wah veer tujh par aate hi ladkiyaan fida ho gayi...(aalekh winks at raj...and raj gives him Whatever look which were noticed by our naina...and she smiles)

huda:- oye tum loge hi bat karte rahoge ya mujhe bhi bolne doge...mera naam hai...

Raj;- Amardeep huda mera room mate...

huda:- oye tujhe kaise pata...aur ha main hi hu tera roomie...khush ho jaa...

Raj(with full of attitude):- Reallyyy...

naina laughs a loud.. at this state of huda...

huda:- oye phoolan tu has kyun rahi hai...

ali:- ahh...wo kya hai na huda bhai...naina isliye has rahi hai...ki abhi tak aap hum sab ki dho rahe the...aur raj bhai ne aap ki dho di aur aapko pata bhi nahi chala...

yudi:- right...u know what dude...har ser pe ek sawa ser hota hai...

huda(chhid kar );- ha ha theek hai- theek hai...par tujhe kaise pata ki main hi huda hun...

aalekh;- ab yeh hum sabko pata hai ki humara room mate kaun hai aur sawaal raha ki veer ko kaise pata...ki tu hi huda hai to...tu hi itani zore se bol raha tha...abhi thodi der pehle in dono se (pointing towards naina & ritu)ki huda ke charm pe jawaaniyaan fida hai...

Naina & ritu:- Jawaaniyaan...??

raj;- abe jawaaniyaan nahi jananiyaan...means girls...tu bhi iske sath jute khayega...

huda:-oh...hello what are u think of ur self ha...good looking hoga tu... par iska matalab yeh nahi ki...

aalekh:- oh...tu hello samjha...abe saale...teri aukaat tujhe dikha di to jal rahi hai kya...

raj:- aalekh chup ho jaa...chal yahan se,...

ritu:- guys stop it...huda aalekh...just forget it...aaj first day hai tum loge...

aalekh:- isko bol na...

huda:- oye aalekh tu kyun beech me bol raha hai...

naina:- bas...huda...chup ho ja...aalekh...plzz...(raj looks at naina then to aalekh)

raj;- chal...(raj gets up to go)

ritu:- byee veer...(raj naina& aalekh looks at ritu)

raj;- rajveer ya raj...aur kuchh nahi...

pooja:- par kyun...jab yeh aalekh tujhe veer keh sakta hai to hum kyun nahi...??

raj:- abhi isne puchha na...ki aalekh beech me kyun bol raha hai...to wo isliye ki maine use haq diya hai...he is my family, my best frnd, mera bhai...only he can call me veer...siwaay...(a tear appears in his eye...aalekh held him..and he left)

aalekh:- ahh...sorry guys...sorry huda...ahhh...veer...veerr sun toh...

huda:- dekha... salo ka attitude...

ali:- oh common huda bhai...zindagi me kuchh cheeje insaan sabse nahi batata...waisa hi kuchh un dono ke beech hai...sachhi dosti...hume kuchh galat nahi laga...

yudi:- actually ali is right...sabki apni personal life hai...

ritu:- yup and huda...ab kal humein yeh sab nahi chahiye...hum sabko as frnd ban kar rehna hoga...after all humein yahan 3 saal bitane hai...

pooja;- oye naina...tu itani chup kyun hai...kya soch rahi hai...

naina:- nothing pooja...raj aur aalekh ke baare me soch rahi thi...they are different...specially raj...aur huda...tera yeh jo over confidence hai na...use tu fek de warna koi hai...jo tujhse 10 kadam aage hai...chalo guys...good night...kal milte hai..chale ritu, pooja...

ritu:- yup lets go...(All left except huda)

huda;- bloody hell...rajveer aur aalekh... bach ke rahiyo huda se...tum dono ne huda se panga liya hai...bhari to padega...tum dono ko...(huda also left to his room)

huda jab apne room me pahuncha to dekhta hai ki raj aur aalekh baithe hai...aur kuchh bat kar rahe hai...par huda ke aate hi dono chup ho jate hai...huda unhe ek look dekar apne bed pe jakar late jata hai...

raj:- huda...(huda looks at them)ahhh...wo sorry...frnds (raj frwded his hand...and huda sakes him)

aalekh:- ok..to good night huda...veer...good night...(aalekh left)

huda;- raj wo i m sorry too...(both smiles and sleeps)

new bright sunny day for them...

end of part 2
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rinku95

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Superb
Thanks for pm
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Arti Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

nice part
chalo acha h aa gayi mere naina , raj ke past me asa kya h ki wo itna chidha chidha rahta h kych toh gadbad h , i like gunny kafi cool minded h gud naina ne raj ka different behavior notice kiya but i thik raj ne naina ko notice he nhi kiya 😕 yr huda ka panfa raj alekh ke saath dekhte h kya hota h aage
wase mjhe pta h jald he naina raj ko veer kah kar bulayegi of course hak jo banta h uska 😉

love naina

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Milleegarg

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hufff
Finally sabki entry hui
Frm 1st day naina start observing raj- nice
But mujhe na naveen n raj ke dad ke bich kuch connection lagta h. May be batch mates, friends n many more nd too death behind raj dad
Lets see wht u ll do
Really nice update

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