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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the up is really good
So their first drill class started and Major Abhimanyu who is their in charge and also their music teacher took their introduction
Raj got disturbed by hearing the shit about his dad from that fellow cadet
Aww poor he but Alekh is always there with him
so Raj's dad was framed as a traitor and they are here to prove him innocent
Naina is falling for Raj but also have some doubt regarding his so quite nature
so their risk drill started and major nair as usuall gave them the most risky one
Huda and yudi both are funny
but yaar y the Ritu in btw Raj-Naina i really them to be alone now this stupid Ritu will be like kabab mein haddi
please cont soon and pm me


Thanku dear
Don't worry ritu ka kuchh krti hu
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
loved your fic .. finally something different ...love the way story is shaping up ... 😳😳
i have this feeling ritu will come between raj naina idk why 😕😕😕 .. baki toh only u can tell as thestory will continue .. update soon .. 😃😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: jiglijuju

loved your fic .. finally something different ...love the way story is shaping up ... 😳😳

i have this feeling ritu will come between raj naina idk why 😕😕😕 .. baki toh only u can tell as thestory will continue .. update soon .. 😃😃😃


Thanks dear let's see kya hota h
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
nice part
is bar naina ki nhi balki raj ki family suffer kar rahi h
raj ke papa gaddar kahla rahe h sad yr humesha ase tragedy hone jaruri h kya RN ke saath
ritu toh kabbab me haddi ban gayi h i hate her
raj naina ko bachane wala h yuppie...
ab pyaar hoga
par yr raj toh naina pe dhayan he nhi deta
update long part yr


love naina
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Fabulous
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Wow
Nice story
Pl cont soon
Love and prayer

Yogini
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Amazing story. Plz pm me wen u update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: kajalkalwani

Amazing story. Plz pm me wen u update



thanku so muchh kajal...yes i will pm u
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thankyou every one for liking my fic...keep reading and keep smiling always...here is the part 4...
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***Destiney - love story of Raina***


Part 4

raj;- nainaaa...

raj jaise hi naina ko pakad kar kuda bahut bada blast hua...naina bahut dar gayi...usne raj ko ka kar gale se laga liya,...aur raj bhi naina ko apne bahon me liye hue hai...after about 2 minutes...

raj;- naina...are u ok...(ek taraf raj naina ke liye pareshaan tha...to dusri taraf use naina pe bahut gussa bhi aa raha tha ki wo itani care less kaise ho gayi...use kuchh ho jata to...so he shouted at naina)...are u out of ur mind naina...(naina dar gayi...aaj usne raj ko pehli baar itne gusse me dekha...)samajhti kya ho tum apne aap ko...kaha tha na...kaha tha na...ki dekh kar chalo...par nahi...tum to yahan picnic manane aayi ho...ek blast kam tha...jo dusra bhi...kabhi socha ki tumhe kuchh ho gaya to...tumhare apno ko kya hoga...par nahi...

ritu:- raj...its ok yar...ho gayi na galti...common...chal naina ...uth...(aur ritu..naina ko shahar dekar le jati hai...na chahte hue bhi naina ki ankhon se aanshun behne lage...)its ok naina...raj...chale...

aur teeno bina kuchh bole...sambhal chalne lage...ritu raj se baat kar rahi hai...par naina chup hai...raj ko ehsaas hai ki usne kuchh jyada hi bol diya...par wo bhi kuchh nahi keh raha tha...3no badi mushkil se finish point par pahunche aur ghayal sipahi ko bhi dhundha...ritu ghayal sipahi ko lekar aage ki taraf ja rahi hai aur raj naina peeche chal rahe hai...aur reporting point par pahunch kar raj ne us AK47 se firing ki...but major nair ne jaan bujh kar jung lagi gun rakhi...jisse raj ka kandha chala gaya...use bahut pain ho raha hai...

naina:- raj...

ritu:- raj are u ok...?dard ho raha hai...naina chalo ise dispensory le chalte hai...oh no...par yeh ghaayal sipahi...

naina:- ritu tum unhe lekar yahi wiat karo...main raj ko dispensary lekar jati hun...

naina raj ko sahara dekar dispensary lekar gayi...baki sqabhi ne bhi apna task pura kiya...

major nair:- cadet mishra...aapke sathi cadets kahan hai...

ritu;- sir...wo raj ko chot lagi thi isliye..naina use dispensary lekar gayi hai...

aalekh:- kya hua veer ko...

major nair;- cadet sharma jab main bol raha hun...to aapko bolne ki permission kisne di...so cadet mishra...aap yeh kehna chahti hai ki aapke...dono sathi cadets ne aapka sath chhod diya...

ritu:- no sir...hum sab sath yahan aaye the...wo gun raj ne chalayi...aur back fire hua jisse raj ka kandha injured ho gaya isliye...

major nair:- wo jo bhi ho...aapke points to nahin kateinge...par cadet singh aur cadet alhuwalia ko punishment milegi aur points bhi kateinge...sathi cadet ka sath chhodne ke julm me...

ritu:- but its wrong sir...balki raj ne 2 baar blast me mujhe aur naina ko bachaya hai aur aap...

major nair:- aapko bhi apne points katwane hai cadet ritu...

ritu:- no sir...

major nair;- then shut ur mouth,...so cadets...cadet singh, cadet alhuwali, aur cadet alhuwalia first jarur aaye...par yeh last kehlayeige kyuki inhone...trust toda hai...isliye...cadet beg aapki team first hai, cadet huda aapki team 2nd aur cadet mishra aapki team last...aur jaise hi cadet singh ka first aid ho jaye...un dono ko 24hrs ke liye solitary confinement room me rehna hoga...dissmiss...(nair left)

aalekh:- is muchhad ki toh...veer...(aur aalekh infirmary ki taraf bhaga...uske peeche baki sab bhi...)

aalekh;- veer tu theek to hai na...(raj nods in yes)

pooja:- oye tum dono ke liye buri khabar hai...muchhad ne tum dono ko ritu ka sath chhodne ke liye...punishment di hai...

naina:- par humne ritu ka sath nahi chhoda...

ritu:- wahi to maine kaha bhi use par wo...

raj;- kya punishment di hai...

yudi;- tum dono ko24 hrs ke liye...detension room me rehna padega...

naina:- kyaa...par yeh galat hai...

raj:- salaaa...ahhh...

ali;- bahut dard ho raha hai raj bhai...

yudi:- isse pehle ki muchhad akar tum dono ki saza aur badha de jaldi se chalo...

aur phir raj naina solitary confinement room me chale jate hai...

pooja:- hieee...kitani soni saja mili hai na...dono ko...

aalekh:- kyaaa...

pooja:- are aur nahi to kya...mere veer zara...24 ghanto ke liye ek sath ek room me, wo bhi akele...

ali:- kya pooja aap bhi na...wahan raj bhai itne dard me hai aur aur aap...

baki sab chale jate hai...par huda soch raha hai...

huda:- chahe jo ho...punjaban ne baat to correct boli...kahi un dono ke beech...are nahi nahi...tu bhi kya huda...kuchh bhi sochta hai...waise bhi fresherball me to phoolan tere sath hi jayegi...(tabhi yudi aata hai)

yudi:- dude tumne usse puchha tak nahi hai...to wo jayegi kaise...jaldi puchh lo kahin kisi aur ne naine se puchh liya na to tum to gaye...

huda:- nahi nahi...main kal hi puchhta hu...abhi saja kaat lene do...

in detension room...

raj ek kone pe jameen pe baith hai...usne apni aakhien band kar rakhi hai...aur nainqa uske saamne baithi hai...wo raj ko dekh rahi hai...aur use yaad aata hai ki kaise thodi der pehle raj ne use danta tha...aur wo ab raj se naraaz hai...wahi raj ko bhi yeh ehsaas hota hai ki usne naina ko jyada bol diya tha...use naina ko sorry kehna chahiye...raj apni aankh kholta hai...aur dekhta hai ki naina uske saamne nahi hai...yahan wahan dekhta hai...to pata hai ki naina window ke pass khadi hai...raj uske peeche jata hai...aur uske kandhe pe hanth rakhta hai...naina palatti hai...raj dekhta hai ki naina ki aankh me aanshun hai...

raj;- naina...i m really sorry naina...dekho naina...wo us waqt dar gaya tha...bas isliye tum par gussa ho gaya...

naina(rote hue):- maine jaan bhujh kar thodi na kuchh kiya tha...jo tum itna gussa kar rahe the...aur wo bhi us rotu ke saamne... datna hi tha,...to akele me dant lete...(naina bahut hoi cutely yeh sab bol rahi thi...jisse raj ke chehre pe ek smile aa jati hai)

raj:- oh tumhe is baat ka bura nahi laga ki maine tumhe danta...tum par chillaaya...balki is baat ka bura laga...ki maine tumhe ritu ki saamne danta...right...(naina nods inyes)oh to iska matalab main tumhe akele me jee bhar dant sakta hun...

naina:- haan...nahi...

raj is laughing...and naina just looking at him...aaj na jaane kitane dino baad raj khulkar hasa tha...

naina:- raj tum haste hue bahut achhe lagte ho...to kyun yun maayush rehte ho...(raj's smile faded away & raj turn to go...naina holds his hand)...jante ho raj...mere papa kya kehte hai...ki humein ek hi zindagi mili hai...use khul kar jii lena chahhiye...bina kisi shart ke bina kisi shwarth ke...

raj;- bahut kismat wali ho tum naina...ki tumhare paas tumhare papa hai...tumhari family hai...par unka kya...jinke pass kuchh bhi nahi...wo kaise jiye? ha...koi to makshad hona chahiye...unke jeene ka...unke hone ka...

naina:- haan...yeh tumne sahi kaha ki papa ke maamle me main bahut kismat wali hun...you know he is best...aur tumne puchha na ki koi to makshad hona chahiye...to haa...makshad hona chahiye...aur agar makshad na ho to kisi ko apna makshad bana lo...raj tumne kabhi kisi se pyar kiya hai ??

raj:- kya...

naina:- pyar...love...true love...

raj:- nahi...kabhi socha hi nahi is baare mein...aur waise bhi... aur bhi bahut se kaam hai meri zindagi me...

naina:- raj may be i m wrong...but mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai ki tum jaisa dikhate ho wo ho nahi...

raj (ghabra kar):- kya...

naina:- ofcrs...ab dekho na...u r very handsome...par abhi tak single...koi to raj hai...

raj:- oh single to tum bhi ho...to tum kya chhipa rahi ho...

naina:- oh hello...tumhe kisne kaha ki main single hun? ha...

raj:- oh mean u have a bf...what...!!!!...then u r lucky...kab milwa rahi ho usse...??

naina:- i was just kidding...yup m also single...par ab pata nahi kyun aisa lagta hai...ki saayad koi hai...jo mere liye bhi bana hai...hope so mera prince charming bhi jald hi aa jaye...

raj:- tum bahut achhi ho naina...tumhari har khwaish puri hogi...m tired good night...

naina:- hope so...ab tumne kaha hai to wo mujhe mil hi jayeha...par yahan...good night...

raj:- ab jo bhi hai...sona to yahin padega...

naina:- yup...gn...

aur naina wahan par baith kar so jati hai...

raj to himself:- u are wrong naina...my father was the best in this world...(raj bhi so jata hai)

aur ek dusre se baat karte karte kab 24 hrs beet gaye...in dono ko hi nahin pata chala...

after the class...naina...aise hi ground par baithi thi aur kuchh soch rahi thi...tabhi huda aata hai...

huda:- hey phoolan...yahan kya kar rahi hai...

naina:- tujhe kya lagta hai huda...

huda:- tu mujhse seedhe tarike se baat nahi kar sakti hai kya...achha sunn chhod wo sab...ab chal bata...mere sath ball pe chalegi...

naina:- main hi kyun...

huda:- are tujhe to khush hona chahiye ki huda khud tujhse puchh raha hai...nahin to bahut sari kudiyaan hai...jo huda ke sath jane ke liye mar rahi hai...

naina:- to jaa na unhi ke sath...mujhse kyun puchh raha hai...

huda;- chhid kyun rahi hai yaar...bol na chalegi...

naina:- no...(aur naina chali jati hai...)

huda:- are yaar..ise kya hua...koi nahi...ball pe to tu mere sath hi jayegi...

mess me raj aur aalekh baat kar rahe the...

aalekh:- tune jis aadmi ke baare me pata karne ko kaha tha...uska naam eagle hai...

raj;- eagle??...to iska matalab main culprit yahi hai...aur megha ka kya...??

aalekh:- wo hai to ambala me hi...

tabhi wahan sabhi loge aate hai...

naina in her mind..:- raj se puchhu main...fresher baal ke liye...par wo ladka hai...use puchhna chahiye tha mujhse...oh god...tu bhi kya naina,,,isse pehle koi aur usse puch le tu hi...

ritu:- hey raj...kya tum mere sath fresher ball pe chaloge...(naina ko jhatka laga...)

naina in her mind:- ritu ki bachhi...no raj...dont u dare to say yes to her...

raj to pehle mana karne wala tha...phir pata nahi kya soch kar usne haa kar di...

raj ;- ok ritu...main tumhare sath chalunga...(naina ko laga ki abhi jakar dono raj aur ritu ka sir phod de...aur gusse me naina wahan se chali gayi...)

pooja:- oye ise kya hua...

aalekh:- kya ritu...apun ko laga tha ki tu apun ke sath jayegi...par tune to apun ka dil hi tod diya...bahut galat kiya...

pooja:- oye ali...tu to mere sath chal raha hai na...

ali:- ha pooja...hum aapke sath hi jayeinge...huda bhai aap kiske sath jayeinge...

huda:- kiske sath kya..oye phoolan ke sath aur kya...

yudi:- wo maan gayi...

huda;- oye meri phoolan hai...haa kar hi degi...

tabhi naina tej raftaar me wapas aati hai...aur raj ko ek stern look deti hai...jo aalekh ki nazaro se bach nahi pata...

naina:- huda...tu mere sath ball pe chal raha hai...(then again looks at raj...raj ko kuchh azeeb bhi laga...par aalekh ko sab samajh aa gaya)

huda:- par phoolan thodi der pehle to tune...

naina:- kaha na...tu mere sath chalega...to chalega bas...(aur naina fir chali gayi...aur huda uske peeche)

yudi to aalekh:- dude...sabko partner mil gaye...par tera aur mear kya? haa...

raj;- koi nahi yudi...tujhe bhi koi na koi mil hi jayega...

yudi:- hey raj...ab sab tere aur huda jaise lucky thode na hai...jo ladki saamne se aaker ball ke liye puchhe...khair main bhi chala date arrange karne...

raj:- achha mujhe kuchh kam hai yaar...baad me milta hun...

aalekh:- aalekh beta...ho na ho...naina aur veer ka kuchh scene to hai...apun ko aisa kyun laga ki naina ne huda ko sirf isliye haa kaha kyunki veer ne ritu ko haa keh di thi...kahin naina veer ko...agar aisa hai to apun veer ke liye bahut khush hai...ki koi sachha insaan apun ke veer ki zindagi me khushiyaan laayega...par i m danm sure is ullu veer ko is baat ka ehsaas bhi nahi hai...ki naina use pasand karne lagi hai...khair aisa bhi to ho sakta hai ki apun galat hai...chalo jo bhi hai...waqt ke sath saamne aa hi jayega...par apun ko in dono par nazar rakhni hi hogi...

raj rat ko bina kisi ko bataaye...kma ke secret record room me ghush jata hai...aur kuchh tallash raha hai...actually raj ko aaj se 12 saal pehle ke records chahiye...jo uske papa se jude hai...aur raj kuchh aisa mila jisne uske hose uda diye...wo insaan jine uske papa par goli chalai thi wo kma ka ek officer hai...jiska naam major bhargav hai...jo ki har saal kma me special duty pe aata hai...aur jis waqt raj ke papa capt ranveer ka murder hua..us waqt major bhargav...special duty me kma me hi the...sabse badi baat yeh hai...ki sab me se raj ko sirf bhargav ka ka chehra hi yaad hai...phir raj ne aur search kiya to use apne papa ke wo records bhi mil gaye jab naveen, abhimanyu aur ranveer kma ke cadets the...aur us batch ke cadets me raj ko abhimanyu ke sath naveen ki bhi tasveer mili...kam se kam ab raj ko yeh to pata tha ki akhir kar naveen hai kaun...tabhi kisi ki aahat se raj waha se bach kar nikala...aur lautate waqt kisi se takra gaya...par major nair ne use nikalte dekh liya...

major nair to him self;- cadet singh record room ke pass kya kar raha tha...par waha to lock laga hai phir wo yahan...kahin yeh koi spy to nahi...pata lagana padega...

raj;- aap...

gunny:- kya baat hai rajveer...is waqt kaha se aa rahe ho...aur bhul rahe ho ki lights out ho chuki hai...

raj:- wo...i m sorry sir actually...wo i was not feeling well sir...suffocation sa mehsoos ho raha tha...bas isliye...bahar...

gunny:- its ok cadet...be care ful next time...(raj turns to go)...rajveer...u know na u r my fav...

raj:- yes sir...and thankyou for that...

gunny:- no need cadet...par pata nahi aisa kyun lagta hai...ki tum kuchh aur ho...(rajveer is shocked)dont be so shocked...i mean u r different...u possess...some different quality...which i like the most...isliye kuchh bhi aur kabhi bhi meri help ki jarurat ho i will always there for u...

raj:- thankyou sir...

gunny;- gud night...

raj:- sir aapke liye kya maayne rakhta hai??...sach ya niyam...

gunny;- matalab...

raj;- sir agar zindagi me kabhi koi aisa waqt aaya...jab aapko sach ya phir fareb ke beech kisi ek chhunna pade...bas fark itna ho ki...fareb aur dhoke ke sath kanoon hai...aur sach ke pass koi sabooot nahi...to aap kiska sath deinge sir...

gunny;- sach kisi saboot ka mohtaaj nahi hota rajveer...aur ek baat meri humesha yaad rakhna...der se hi sahi jeet humesha sach ki hi hoti hai...aur capt.gunraj singh randhawa...sach ke liye apni jaan bhi de sakta hai...wo kisi kanoon ka mohtaaj nahi...

raj:- thankyou sir...aapke yeh sabd mere liye bahut maayne rakhte hai...

gunny:- raj...(raj looks at him) kya tumhare frnds tumhe yahi kehte hai na...(raj nods in yes)..kya baat hai...koi problm hai...dekho main tumhara teacher hi nahi...tumhara dost bhi hun...u can tell me ur prblm...

raj;- ofcrs sir...sab bataunga...waqt aane par sab bataunga...tab aapke sath ki bahut jarurat hogi mujhe...gud night sir...

gunny ;- gud night...(raj to chala gaya...par gunny ke dimaag me bahut se sawaal chhod gaya...)

few days later...

sabhi cadets gunny ki class ke liye baithe hai...naina ka mood kal se hi off tha...use bilkul bhi achha nahi lagta jab ritu raj ke kareeb rehti hai...naina ko yeh ehsaas ho chuka ki ki she liked raj par kis had tak is baat ka ehsaas abhi use nahi hai...naina apne hi khayalon me kahi khoyi hoti hai ki...tabhi gunny ata hai...

naina in her mind...:- kya ho gaya hai mujhe...main kyun aisa react kar rahi hun...i know i like him...but sayad sirf crush ho...aaj tak na jane kitane ladko ne mujhpar try mara...huda bhi to unme se ek hi hai...par raj...kya baat hai rajveer me...stopit naina...bhul ja...use teri kadra hi nahi hai...warna tere sath ball pe jata...hnn..agar use parwah nahi to main kyun sochun uske baare me...

gunny;- cadet alhuwalia...,cadet alhuwalia...kahan ho tum...

naina:- oh m so sorry sir...

gunny:- its ok concentrate in the class...so any questions...

raj:- sir...assume ki koi desh ka sipahi hi...kisi aur sipahi ko kisi gunaah ke liye frame karta hai...aur koi aur sipahi use saamne lana chahta hai...to iske liye kaisi startegy se kaam karna chahiye...(gunny was shocked...by this question of raj...kyuki rajveer humesha hi..kuchh alag hi sawaal puchhta hai...jo kahin na kahin uske mission se jude hote hai...(aalekh ko sab samajh me aa raha tha ki raj kya janna chah raha hai...aur baki sab to confussed se raj ko sunn rahe the...par chahe jo bhi ho raj ke question hote hi aise the..jo cadets to kya...faculty ko bhi pareshaan kar de...)

gunny:- well cadet iske use sirf legal tarike se aarmy court me apeal karni chahiye...aur saboot dene chahiye...thats all...

raj;- par sir...aksar...sach ke saboot nahi hote...tab kya kare...kahan se laaye saboot...aur aap agar us sipahi ke jagah hote to sach ki jeet ke liye kahan se laate saboot...kya system me reh kar...sahi raste pe chal ke system ko haraya ja sakta hai...

gunny:- kya tum system ke khilaaf jaoge rajveer...

raj;- sir maine kab kaha ki main wo sipahi hun...main to in sab ki tarah normal cadet hun...its just i want to know ki aap kya karte...

but some where...gunny ko ab raj ki baatein samajh me aane lagi thi...aur usne bhi apne hi andaaz me jabaab diya...

gunny:- ek baat humesha yaad rakhna...jab ghee sidhi ungli se na nikle to ungli ko teda kar lena chahiye...aur jab aapke sath sach ho to der se hi sahi...us tedi ungli ko bhi salaam milta hai...anything else...do u want to know...

raj(with smile):- filhaal ke liye itna kafi tha sir...thankyou...

gunny(smile):- any time cadet...

gunny thinks:- mujhe rajveer nazar rakhani hogi...kyuki yeh baaki cadets me se nahi hai...yeh alag hai...aur kuchh to iske dimaag me chal raha hai...i have to search about him...every thing about him...

gunny:- ok then...start ur preparations for the fresherball...have a good day...next classs capt nandini ki hai...

aur uske baad capt nandini ne bhi apni class li...par inki class raj apni hi dhun me kahi khoya tha...capt nadini & capt gunny both are batch mates and husband and wife also,...

its evening...raj apne kamre me akela tah ki aalekh aaya uske kamre me...

aalekh:- veer...teri satak gayi hai kya...kaise sawaal kae raha tha gunny se...apun ko pura yakeen hai ki...use tujh par kuchh saq ho gayela hai...

raj(cool):- pata hai...

aalekh:- kya...oye tu yeh afford nahi kar sakta...ki teri sachhayi kisi ko pata chale...agar kisi ko pata chal ki tu deshdrohi kehlaane wale..capt Ranveer singh shekhawat ka beta hai...to tujhe is academy se bahar fek deinge...fir tera maksad...

raj;- kyuki main chahta hun ki...gunny sir ko sab pata chale...

aalekh:- kya par kyun...??

raj:- aalekh...chahe hum jitani kosis kar le...hum cadets hai...officers nahi...aur hume apne kisi supirior ki mada ki jarurat jarur padegi...aur pata nahi kyun...mujhe gunny sir par vishwaas hai...mujhe yakeen hai...jab unhe sach pata chalega to wo humari help jarur kareinge...aur is puri academy me sirf gunny hi mujhe sahi lagta hai...

aalekh:- par academy me ek aur insaan hai..jo humare kaam aayega aur humara sath dega...major chauhaan...

raj:- no way...i hate him...

aalekh:- kya...par wo to uncle ka dost tha na...

raj(hatered in his eyes):- jiske pass aise dost ho unhe dusman ki jarurat nahi padti...aur ek minute...

phir raj ne aalekh ko jo usne search kiya tha...wo sare proofs dikhaye jo unse apne secret camere me record kiye...

aalekh;-iska matalab...

raj;- kma ke loge hji kma ko khokhla kar rahe hai...mere papa humesha kma ki itani taarif karte the ki kma aisa hai...kma waisa hai...yahan pe strength hai unity hai...par yahan to...abhimanyu rai chauhaan ne mere papa ke khilaaf gawaahi di thi...dost hote hue bhi usne mere papa ka sath nahi diya...ab tu soch usne apne dost ka sath nahi diya tha...wo dost jo uske liye jaan bhi de sakta tha...to us dost ke bete ka kya sath dega...

aalekh:- sahi kaha tune...mann to kar raha hai ki abhi jake saale ko jaan se...

raj:- nahi aalekh...abhi nahi...mann to mera bhi bahut kuchh karne ko keh raha hai...lagta hai ki bass is kma ko hi aag laga dun...jisne mujhse mera sab kuchh chheen liya...par abhi nahi...abhi humien bahut kuchh aur hasil karna hai...

aalekh:- chal koi nahi...mess chalte hai...

dono hi mess ki ore chale gaye...par in dono ko hi nahi pata chala ki koi in dono ki sari batein sun raha tha...par sayad kismat achhi thi ki wo koi aur nahi gunny tha...jise raj par kuchh dino se doubt tha...usne aalekh ko sabse chhip kar raj ke room me aate dekha to use andaza ho gaya ki kuchh gadbad hai aur wo chhip kar inki baat sunn raha tha...aur aalekh yeh galti kar di ki usne door achhe se band nahi kya...jis wajah se gunny ne sab kuchh sunn liya...is waqt gunny bas us taraf dekh raha hai..jahan se abhi raj aur aalekh gaye hai...na chahte hue bhi gunny ki aankh se anshun behne lage...aur usne bahut hi teekhi nazro se apne aanshun pochhe aur apne room ki taraf chala gaya...

mess...


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Edited by rkchandni - 9 years ago

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