*'Tu Jaane Na!!!'* ViCha FF updtd pg.44 prt 16 on 26th September - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Khadeja

It happened very bad...
You have already written up to part 12 bt...
Try to remember but don't take stress.
We will be waiting 😛

Happy Navaratri...😃



Finally wait of you all guys have been over and I am going to update it now. 😊 😊 😊

I had to re work again.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

Hey dear

Lovely update.👏
thanks Drishu 😊 😊 😊

This is really crazy how Viraf was confused in selecting suitable dress for himself.😉 He made a big mess of his clothes.😆
After all he has to impress her again this time. 😉 😉 😉

I was very happy when Chhavi scolded that idiot Pracheen.😃 How dare he call her? 😡
He is a shameless man who just keep on trying no matter what he get as response. 😡 😡 😡

Viraf is now giving the party and the most awaited guest of the party has reached finally and both of them are speechless. Jab bola bhi to dono ne saath me hi bola.😛
Kabhi kabhi aisa hi hota hai ki samajh hi nahi aata ki kya kahein kis situation me. 😕 😕 😕

Update fast the next part.



thanks a ton dear 🤗🤗🤗
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kumari27

Lovely update 👏

Phone conversation was too good.😊

Wow viraf said " nai tumhien bhool sakta hoon nai tumhare gift ko " & chhavi smiled.😉

Viraf is haapy now as chhavi re eneterd his life.😃

Chhavi is also waiting for him.⭐️

Freddy & farhaan is too Frnd they know b4 he could speak something.

Viraf invited chaavi & ordered her if she will not come then he will not do cake cutting ceremony. Uff kitna haq zama raha hai.

Jitna viraf conscious ho raha hai utna hi chhavi bhi conscious ho rahi cloths ko lekar.

Dono best dikhna chahte hain.

Akhir chhavi aa gai party me.

Dono me awkwardness hai kaun pehle kya kahe.
One song for this situation :
Kuchh na kaho kuchh bhi na kaho
Kya kehna hai kya sunna hai

Mujhko pata hai tumko pata hai
Samay ka yeh pal tham sa gaya hai
Or is pal me koi nai hai
bs ek main hoon bs ek tum ho...,







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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07



It's really sad dear 🤔 but try your best to recall the password and take your time.



I tried my best dear but nothing worked.
🤔 🤔 🤔


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: varshita

It's really fine dear take your time and we can wait. 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊



I know and your wait is over. 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: poorvi16



It's really sad but I know it will be updated soon di,,😊 😊 😊



Yeah I am updating it. 😊 😊 😊
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Edited by Mahak Sinha - 9 years ago
Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey guys,
🤗

I know I kept you all waiting for long so without wasting more time here comes your update. 😉 😉 😉

I know a few of you will be unhappy after seeing the picture day before yesterday just like me.

But enjoy this update and just relax your mood. 😉 😉 😉

Love you all 🤗

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Part 5:-

"My god...I can't believe that you are here."


Chhavi smiled, "Aisa bhi kya?"


"It has been so long to see you Chubby."


Chhavi showed her fake irritation, "You still don't forget to call me that. Look from where do I look Chubby?" she said showing herself to him.


"Main kya bataoon tum kahan kahan se kya kya lag rahi ho?" he said dreamily.


"Kya kaha tumne?"


He came out of his lala land and tried to recover the damage, "I mean...no you don't look chubby but I love to call you that."


"To yahin khada rakhne ka irada hai kya?" she said smiling.


"Oh shit sorry...I forgot..Come in..Welcome in my sweet and small home again dear."


"You are never gonna change na? Same old flirty Viraf." She said.


"Hello Ms. Bak Bak Pandey I am not old and when it comes to flirting it comes out from me naturally as you know I am..." She laughed and cut him in between.


"Born to romance I know."


Now it was his turn to smile, "You know everything about me na?"


"I think so..." Both were interrupted by Freddy.


"Are hum bhi hai is party mein. Zara kabhi hum par bhi nazrein inayat kar dijiye sarkar." He teased Viraf.


"Hey..hi." Chhavi greeted him.


"Hello Chhavi how are you?"


"I am fine, what about you?"


"Bus vaise hi...vaise tell me what are you doing in this Giraffe's party?" Viraf gave him a fake angry look, "Look at him kaise dekh raha hai mujhe as if he is going to kill me."


"Obviously meri hi party mein meri hi burai, how dare you?"


"Now stop both of you. Abhi bhi both of you are the same." Chhavi said.


"We are always same, the best buddies forever." Both said in union and hugged each other and jumped with childlike excitement. Chhavi gave them a weird look. Vahbiz joined them and said, "Don't worry Chhavi these two are really impossible."


"Hey Vahbiz how are you?" Both hugged each other giving greeting kisses.


"I am fine. So you know me haan?"


"Obviously Viraf showed me his picture, he was lying in your lap and had three women around him including you."


Vahbiz laughed remembering those pictures, "Are vo...pooch mat he is just a big nautanki."


"Yeah I know that, saal bhar kaise jhela hai isko I know."


Viraf interrupted, "Oye hello Ms. Irritating Pandey tum ne kya jhela hai mujhe? Maine jhela hai tum ko."


"Accha kya jhela hai mujhe tum ne?"


"Din bhar bak bak bak bak aur agar kabhi chup rahi to gaana start. Oh god it's really irritating when she sings."


"Than don't worry aaj bhi main tum ko irritate karoongi ek song gaa k."


"NO..." he said putting his hands on his ears. "Aisa birthday gift to maine expect nahi kia tha tumse."


Chhavi laughed followed by Vahbiz and Freddy. Suddenly she reminded him, "Hello Mr. Giraffe pehle ye batao where is my gift which you got from US for me?"


Freddy didn't leave the point to tease him, "Haan bhai Chhavi ka gift kahan hai? Aur ye bata humare liye to tu kuch bhi nahi laya States se?"


"Tere liye kya lata jo tujhe chahiye vo vahin hai. Teri life and wife."


Freddy smiled, "Very smart answer."


"And what about me?" Vahbiz pulled his leg now.


"Actually tere liye socha to tha but Chhavi k gift ne hi mujhe out of budget kar diya to tera number kabhi baad me aayega ab."


"You miser. Apni party ke special guest ke liye gift aur humare liye out of budget?"


Chhavi was a bit embarrassed, "No actually main hi is k peeche padi thi ki bring something for me from there."


"Oho so you are taking his side." Freddy teased her. Chhavi got more embarrassed now because of this teasing and Viraf was giving an idiotic smile looking at her.

"Don't worry we are just pulling his leg."

"To jao, go and give her gift to her."


"Are nahi main baad mein le lungi na."


"Nahi nahi abhi de jaa kar warna baad me bhool gaya to." And he sent them off.


"What's the hurry Freddy?" Vahbiz asked in confusion.


"Didn't you look at his face kitna khush hai from when Chhavi has entered in the party? So I gave them some private and personal space so that at least they can enjoy some beautiful moments and you see abhi saare guests bhi nahi aaye hain so abhi we have sufficient time."


"So she is the girl."


"What do you think?"


"Of course she is. Actually I have already told him various times that he is in love but with whom I didn't know. But finally I know who that girl is."


Back in Viraf's room:-


"Tum bhi na sab ke saamne mujhe embarrass kar dia."


Viraf smiled to see the cute pout on her face, "Oho they were just teasing you, don't worry." And he took out a box and said, "Close your eyes."


"Aisa kya hai?"


"Oho band karo na apni aakhein."


"I wish when I open my eyes I will be speechless."


"You trust me na?"


"Yes," she said closing her eyes. As soon as she had closed her eyes, Viraf was lost in her beautiful face. You are so beautiful. I wish I can just watch this beautiful face forever.


Tere chehre se najar nahi hatati

Nazare hum kya dekhein...


His mind automatically sang this song for her. And he was lost in his Chhavi land when Chhavi's voice bought him back to reality. "Viraf...kahan ho tum?"


'Oh shit...main bhi na.' "Haan yahin hoon bas ek minute. Kya Chhavi ek minute bhi you can't keep quiet."


"Tum bhi pata nahi kya kar rahe ho?"


"Just wait..." And in the next moment Chhavi felt something in her hands.


"Can I finally open my eyes?" she asked with excitement.


"Yes obviously." And next she saw a beautiful pendent in her hands.


"Viraf...it's a pendant."


"Yes...I wanted to gift you something as precious as you are for me."


"It's really precious." And she rushed to the mirror to have a look when it's in her neck. She tried to put it on but couldn't and Viraf said, "May I?"


"Of course you can. After all this is the most precious gift of my life from you." She said smiling.


Viraf made her wear that pendant and his fingers gently touched her back. Both felt shivers down their spines. Viraf looked at her in the mirror and was again lost in her smiling and beautiful face. "Diamonds are a girl's best friend you know." She said chirpily.


"And a diamond on a diamond confuses me which is prettier."


"Accha..to kaun sa diamond pretty hai zyada?" she asked in the same tone.


"My one.." And he hugged her tightly from her back. Chhavi smiled.


"You are always that big flirt na?"


"Not for everyone...just for you babe." And he faced her. Turning her face to him and holding her chin gently he said, "Mere diamond se jyada khoobsurat aur shinning diamond is poore universe mein kahan hai?"


"Sach.."


"Much..." And his next target was her face. He gently brushed his lips on her forehead then he went downwards and kissed both her eyes and eyelids. His lips travelled down and discovered a new route on her face and he came down to kiss her ears and the cute nose. His lips came down to a halt on her chin and the corner of her lips. Soon he paused and had a full look at her face as if he wanted her permission to continue further. Her signal was hidden in her closed eyes which she was unable to open because of the intensity of his passion which was making her unable to look into his eyes. He waited for her response but she still kept her eyes closed and it gave him a positive signal. Soon his lips were an inch apart from hers...the gap between their lips was almost about to close..


"Viraf...bolo to kaise lag rahi hoon." Her shout brought him back to the real world. "Kahan khoye hue to tum? Kitne der se tumhara naam bula rahi hoon." This was the umpteenth time when she called him and this time not only called him but also shook him to bring him out of his dream world.


'Oh god...pagal ho raha hoon main kya kya sochta hoon. Abhi Chhavi ko pata chal jata na to pakka mujh se bahut gussa ho jati and thank god maine aisa koi kaand nahi kia.' He mentally slapped himself for having those ideas.


"Hey bhagwaan...what's wrong with you ab kya hua hai?"


"Nooo nothing..." he said almost shouting.


"Are kya hua? You angry ki I shouted on you?" she asked.


"No not like that...actually tum na ...tum itni acchi lag rahi thi ke I was speechless."


"Oh..ab itna bhaav bhi mat bhadao mera."


"No truly...you know na I never lie."


"Yes I know." She said smiling.


"Hey here is the box of this pendant keep it safely." He handed her the box and she was shocked.


"This must be expensive...it's Tiffany's na?" He nodded. "To kya jaroorat thi itna expensive gift lane ki?"


"It's pretty fine Bak Bak Pandey tum itna socha mat karo. I bought the best thing which suits you after all you are a diamond as well."


"Fir bhi Viraf you could have brought something small ye...it's really expensive and precious you know main...".


"Now just shut up and have your gift. Zyada socha mat karo samjhi." He hit her forehead playfully.


"But...".


"Mera diamond jyada pretty hai and costly bhi is diamond se na to?"


"Your diamond kaun?"


"You." He said smiling.


"Oh enough of your flirting." She said giving him a light slap on his hands.


Freddy interrupted them. "May I disturb you both?"


"Nahi nahi bilkul nahi." Viraf said.


"Disturb to karoonga."


"Then why do u even ask?" Viraf said irritatingly.


"Tu itna irritate kyun ho raha hai?" he asked teasing him intentionally.


"Nahi main kahan irritate ho raha hoon?"


"Toh chal sab almost aa chuke hain. Tujhe cake bhi kaatna hai na aur teri special guest bhi aa chuki hai na, so you have no issues in cutting the cake na?" he reminded him about it.


Chhavi gave a look to Viraf and he gave a sheepish smile, "I'm sorry but you know na he is my best friend so I can't hide anything from him." He said.


"Yes he can't even if he tries toh bhi nahi."


Chhavi smiled, "I know friends aise hi hote hain."


"To ab zyada wait na karte hue sab chalte hain aur cake kaat te hain."


Chhavi smiled and so did Viraf and both followed Freddy. He found Sodhi ji still not in the party. He dialed his number, "Sodhi ji kahan hain aap?"


"Oye Viru kahin kaam me fus gaya tha bus abhi nikla hoon it will take time. Tu aisa kar mundayein cake cut kar le. Don't keep everyone waiting."


"But aap ke aaye bina kaise?"


"It's ok tu kar le na cake cut main nahi chahta sab wait karein meri vajah se."


"Fine then be here quickly."


"Yes boss." Both laughed and he hung up.


"So kitne der me aa rahe hain Sodhi ji?" she enquired.


"Woh nikal chuke hain and it will take time. So he told me to cut the cake."


"But unke bina?" she said.


"He said he didn't want everyone to wait so it's better we cut the cake." Viraf said. Chhavi smiled understanding perfectly.


Now it was time to cut the cake and Vahbiz excused herself to bring a lovely big black forest cake which was Chhavi's favorite and she was surprised to see that. "It was your birthday not mine." She said in his ears.


"Ek hi baat hai, vaise bhi jab chief guest aisa ho to kuch to us ki pasand ka hona chahiye."


Chhavi smiled and he cut the cake finally and everyone wished him happy birthday. The first piece of cake he fed Chhavi. His fingers touched her lips gently and again both felt the same sensations in their bodies. His fingers touched her skin inside her mouth making her feel a bit different about his feelings. Just the same as she had felt sometime ago but she herself doesn't know why for the first time her heart signaled her to move ahead with him and enjoy this moment. They were so engrossed that they failed to notice everyone was watching them and it seemed that they could easily make a story about it at which Freddy teased him, "Main bhi yahan hoon. 'Be mujhe bhool gaya."


Viraf and Chhavi's gaze broke and Viraf said, "Haan tujhe koi dekhna kaise bhool sakta hai?"


"Haan itni asaani se nahi." And next he stuffed a big piece of cake into his mouth.


Chhavi and everyone laughed when Viraf finished the piece of cake in his mouth. He just took some cream of it and applied at Freddy's face. At which response Freddy too applied the cream of the cake on his face. Chhavi thought to enjoy it as well. She did the same thing with Viraf which surprised him. He stopped for a few minutes and seeing Chhavi laughing her heart out, he was once again drowning in her eyes.


"Viraf kya dekh raha hai? Us ko bhi laga na cake." Freddy suggested and finally he realized what was said to him. Now it was his turn to play the same game with Chhavi. Chhavi was horrified. She hadn't realized that it's going to return back to her.


"No Viraf...you know I have to go home as well."


"Ye to ab cake lagane se pehle sochna chahiye tha." And he moved closer to her. Chhavi tried to escape but he smartly held her wrist and pulled her to him. She bumped into his chest and for a second it felt as if the time had stopped for them. She was just staring into his eyes. His eyes which always looked so captivating to her. The eyes which spoke volumes to her heart. She could always feel some kind of pull in his eyes for her. This was not the first time when she felt this. Many times, whenever they used to shoot for EBI she always felt the same thing in his eyes. It was not that she never got the hint of his feelings but she never took it seriously until that day.
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 9 years ago
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Edited by Mahak Sinha - 9 years ago
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First of all I am super happy that you updated 😛
You did the work again and Thank you for that..🤗

Superb update 👏

Finally Viraf spoke and his one liner 😆
I like this line '
Mai kya bataoon tum kahan kahan se kya kya lag rahi ho?' 😉
Viraf is just so happy that Chhavi has come...😃
Freedy and Vabiz teased them very much 😛
But this was very cute 😊
Viraf just lost in Chhavi 😳
Chhavi was so excited for her gift..
Wow !!! Chhavi is his diamond 😳
And Viraf's imagination ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
I was thinking suspiciously all things are going so fast 😆
Then came to know this was imagination ...
But wish this happened really 😳
Now Viraf has no issue as his chief guest has come 😉
To feed her cake they lost themself 😳
Not even realized there are people also around
Freedy made them realized 😆
Again they feel, Chhavi is now realizing what she felt before.

This is a great part 😊
Update soon...

Edited by Khadeja - 9 years ago

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