A SwaSan SS 'Strength Of Love' part 7 updated pg 17 on 2/3/2

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Purbi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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CarpediemRose

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow.I loved it a lot dr👏👏👏

Awesome start😛 pls do continue soon😛😛

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Jwala

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Posted: 9 years ago

very nice dear... here swara has also feelings for sanskar. .. do more. .. loved this..

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Robia Yousaf

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Posted: 9 years ago

very nice start waitint for the next part update soon

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Purbi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: harshsriti
very nice dear... here swara has also feelings for sanskar. .. do more. .. loved this..

yup! I want this actually.. CVs nhi de rahe hai to maine apne aap Swara ko aisa bana diya

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Purbi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Plz everyone give sum detailed comment .. I want to know about what was good and wrong in my writing too.. I want to improve myself.. Thanks for reading..

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-Ros-

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Posted: 9 years ago

Loved it!

There has been so many Sanskaar's POV in the forum and it's nice to see one on Swara.

I agree with you, I think Swara is completely lost and broken.

I loved that Swara was smiling after her shaadi flashbacks 😳

I really liked how you brought out the reasoning of Swara's concern for Ragini which seems unnatural after all that has happened. She has been through the same thing some weeks ago- the same humiliation, rejection and hate. She wouldn't wish that upon anyone, let alone her sister.

When she left MM, she wasn't happy, her smile to Sanskaar wasn't genuine, it looked like she smiled for the sake of it. She is defo attached to him in so many ways, she has no clue about it. 😆

Cont soon please 😊

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damon fan

@-damon-

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Posted: 9 years ago

Well
there's nothing bad about it... i abolutely loved the whole part!
U r a very good writer..i loved the whole mirror scene..
when she unknowingly smiled nd became sad after remembering divorce thing..lovely scene..i hope smthing like this happens in the show
one thing that was bad was that u stopped there..i sooo want to know who is at the door..?
May be sanskaar or shomi ? Dunno
will've to wait for the nxt part!
update soon

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Anu

@anu91

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awe...so nice...

Waiting for next part...

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Purbi

@Purbishona

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: -damon-
Well
there's nothing bad about it... i abolutely loved the whole part!
U r a very good writer..i loved the whole mirror scene..
when she unknowingly smiled nd became sad after remembering divorce thing..lovely scene..i hope smthing like this happens in the show
one thing that was bad was that u stopped there..i sooo want to know who is at the door..?
May be sanskaar or shomi ? Dunno
will've to wait for the nxt part!
update soon

Sorry dear for stopping there.. It's a surprise.. Expect the unexpected.. THANKS for ur beautiful comments.. I will update asap..