A SwaSan SS 'Strength Of Love' part 7 updated pg 17 on 2/3/2

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Purbi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: rerose
Ur work is so awesome pls do continue and make it into an SS .

thank you so much.. I will make it a SS..

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Purbi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Lavender_Love
Loved it sweetie...
Please do continue it...

Thank you dear.. I will update after 8th..

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Purbi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: ketty84
Kaash aisha swaragini writers bhi soachte . Par according to them swara think about her family n clear about her feelings she dont love sanskaar. So what story ur developing is great . I dont want to think about selfish lakshya n ragini. Omg always meant together why fight lakshya u trusted ur wife blindly

THANKS Ketty.. Ab kya kare jo writers hume nhi dete usse hum story me pa lete hain.. Hahaha..

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Purbi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Hi, I am back again and want to make it an SS.. Thanks for all the precious comments and much needed love.. 😛
A big SORRY for late.. I had exams but from now I will be regular.. Enjoy reading..😳

PART- 3

In the morning Sanskaar wake up when the sun rays hit him.. He opened his eyes slowly and tried to understand his position.. He found himself in a seating position.In the previous night he slept sitting on the floor and resting his head on the bed, exactly in the same side where Swara used to sleep..
He took her name "Swara" and sighed sadly..

Gadodia house

Swara in sleep felt like someone was calling her name, she wake up immediately and frowned seeing her empty room..
"Yahan pe to koi nahi hain, to kisne pukara mujhe?"

She failed to understand and got up from her bed to freshen up..

MM

Sanskaar's hand roamed all over the beadsheet.. He felt the coldness of the bed and turned off the AC.. He remembered how Swara used to say, "Sanskaar AC bandh kardoge, please." A smile tugged his lips.. Then suddenly he recalled the previous night's incident..

FLASHBACK

He was returning to his room from garden.. Suddenly Lucky called him..

L- Bhai, mujhe tujhse kuch baat karni hain..

Sa- ha Lucky bol na.

L- Woh, mujhe maaf karde bhai, maine tere aur Swara ke saath bahut galat kiya, bina soche samjhe tera insult kiya.. Main..

Sa- (Grasping his palm) Bas Lucky, woh sab purani baate hain, bhulja woh sab, main tujhse gussa nahi hun.

Laksh hugged him with joy..

L- Thanks bhai. Tune mujhe maaf kar diya..

Sanskaar was happy seeing his beaming face..

L- Bas ab Swara mujhe maaf karde to sab thik ho jayega. Par Bhai plz help me..

Sa- Kya help karu Lucky?

L- Kal tu Swara ko mujhse milne ke liye bula sakta hain? Plz plz plz plz..

Sa- (hesitatingly) par main kaise usse..

L- Plz bhai, mujhe usse maafi mangni hain. Woh teri baat jarur sunegi, mujhse toh woh naraz hain.. Plz bhai itna madad kar de.

Sanskaar sighed.. Looking at his stubborn brother he nodded and Laksh cheerfully hugged him..

Present

But now he was thinking how to make Swara agree.He did not want to lie to Swara but for Lucky and Swara's sake he had to do it.. He got up to get ready..

Gadodia House (Bari)

Swara came in the hall and saw noone was there.. Her eyes moved to the sofa and stuck at a sleeping Sanskaar who was sleeping peacefully with a cusion holding close to his chest.
Swara thought "wow, yahan meri nind udi hui hain aur ye abhi tak so raha hai?ruko abhi uthati hun"
She came near him to wake him up but he vanished out of sight making her back to reality.
"Yeh mujhe kya ho raha hain? Ab mujhe Sanskaar kyu dikhayi de raha hai? Uff! Shayad raat ko main thik se soyi nahi isiliye" She tried to reasoning herself..

Then her Maa and Dadi came there..

S- Maa aap log kaha the?

Dadi- Woh hum dono Mandir gaye the, Bhagwan se prarthna karne ki sab kuch thik ho jave thari zindagi mein.

She gave prasad to everyone.

Here Sanskaar entered his car to leave for Badi. He found an earring on the next seat.
"Yeh to Swara ki hain" (remembering how he once gave her earrings) and put it into his pocket and drove off.

Gadodia House (Badi)

Everyone is on the dinning table for breakfast. The ladies were serving.Swara went to kitchen for water. Suddenly, Dadi saw him on the door.
Dadi- Arre Sanskaar beta! Waha kahe liye khade ho, andaar aao beta.
Sanskaar came inside and touched everyone's feet. They blessed him..Dadi offered him breakfast but he declined.. His eyes were searching someone special and there she came with a green suit and long hair, like freshness of nature..
Swara looked at him instantly and there was an eyelock..

Teri Sansoon ki saans mein jo hu,
to main hu
tere khwabo ki aanch me jo hu,
to main hu
Tere hone se hi mera hona hain,
tujhko khona jaise khudko khona,
Tu jo hain to main hu,
yun jo hain to main hu..
Tu jo hain to main hu,
Yun jo hain to main hu...

Dadi noticed them and smiled..
Sanskaar broke the eyelock and told everyone that he came to meet Swara.

S- Mujhse? (feeling happy inside) Kya baat hai Sanskaar?

Sa- Woh tumhe mere sath chalna hoga.

S- Kaha pe?

Sa- (taking a deep breath and looking at the floor, with heavy heart) Woh lawyer se milne jana hai, humare divorce ke silsile mein baat karne ke liye..

So, here is the end of this part.. Sorry, if you find it boring.. Plz hit like and give comments, if you want me to continue..😊

Love,

~~Purbi

Edited by Purbishona - 9 years ago

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Sweet_Ashum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

It was a nice part

U mentioned their scenes well :)

Just a request.. Could you post all the chapters in one thread? Instead of posting different threads for different chapters?

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950660

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Sweet little update..

Waiting for next part..

Try to update soon. !!

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medha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

nice update purbi..

cosmic connection hoye geche.:))))

ending ta ektu sad...anyway..swasan hobe aste aste.

thanks for the PM.

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Purbi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum
It was a nice part
U mentioned their scenes well :)
Just a request.. Could you post all the chapters in one thread? Instead of posting different threads for different chapters?

hey, thanks for appreciation.. About ur request, I can't understand it properly..I think all the chapters are in this thread only. Plz clear my confusion..