A SwaSan SS 'Strength Of Love' part 7 updated pg 17 on 2/3/2

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.Sarcasmazing.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

This is really nice 😳 I like the subtle feelings Swara is showing for Sanskaar, nothing too overwhelming & OOC, just the right amount <3

Lovely read. Do write more :D Are you going to continue?

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Purbi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: ros_aavir
Loved it!
There has been so many Sanskaar's POV in the forum and it's nice to see one on Swara.
I agree with you, I think Swara is completely lost and broken.

I loved that Swara was smiling after her shaadi flashbacks😳
I really liked how you brought out the reasoning of Swara's concern for Ragini which seems unnatural after all that has happened. She has been through the same thing some weeks ago- the same humiliation, rejection and hate. She wouldn't wish that upon anyone, let alone her sister.

When she left MM, she wasn't happy, her smile to Sanskaar wasn't genuine, it looked like she smiled for the sake of it. She is defo attached to him in so many ways, she has no clue about it.😆

Cont soon please😊

Thanks for your lovely and encouraging comments.. I will update soon..

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Purbi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: .Sarcasmazing.
This is really nice 😳 I like the subtle feelings Swara is showing for Sanskaar, nothing too overwhelming & OOC, just the right amount <3
Lovely read. Do write more :D Are you going to continue?

yes I'm going to continue.. Thanks for your lovely comments Kavya..

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Purbi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Purbi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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JazzyM

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

The blooming of feeling...you are writing about Swara's awareness towards Sanskaar...nicely strung along...

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Besmine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Nice update. It was good to see Swara having a heart to heart conversation with dadi while dadi gives her those guidelines which she really needs. I wish in the show too the makers could handle Swara's character in a better day. Do continue :)