Sanskaar-Ragini FF: Hum Tum CHAPTER 11,12&13 Updated

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is my first ff on sanskaar and ragini... So please ignore the mistakes...
Sanskaar and Laksh are own brothers and swara and ragini are best friends as well as own sisters...
CHAPTER 1...

The story starts with a speeding black car. A very handsome charming boy is driving the car. His age must be 24 or something. He is driving the car at a very high speed. He was often advised by his friends to drive carefully and a bit slow, but he never listened to their advise

After 20 minutes , he reached the college and stops the car..His friends saw him coming out of the car and called him "Sanskaar, we are here". Sanskaar turned and started walking towards them. He knew that every girl in the college is staring at him but he didn't care...

He said 'hi' to his friends- Laksh and Vicky..After few minutes, they started playing a game. In this game, every guy should impress a girl and should become friend of her. Firstly, Laksh goes to impress a girl but he was slapped by the girl.Then Vickey also tried but also failed'Both the girl whom Laksh and Vickey were trying to impress went to Sanskaar and said " Hi Sanskaar, aaj tum kitne smart lag rahe ho.." Sanskaar while trying to stop himself from laughing at his friends condition replied "thanks".

When the both girl were gone, Laksh and Vicky joined Sanskaar and Sanskaar started laughing loudly..Laksh said "yaar ye ladkiyaan itna akadti kyun hai? Agar humse dosti kar leti to kya bigad jata? Aur ek yeh hai, jo ladkiyon se baat tak nahi karna chahta to wo hamesha iske piche lagi rehti hain" Then Sanskaar replied "tum logon ko ladkiyon ko impress karna nahi aata " Laksh said " to tum karke dikhao " Sanskaar agreed to play the game and said "Jo pehli ladki ab college main enter karegi, main use impress karke dikhaonga"

They waited for 10 minutes Then a girl wearing a purple suit entered in the college.Sanskaar was looking somewhere else. His friend Laksh said "Sanskaar ek ladki aa rahi hai" Sanskaar turned and saw the girl..The moment he saw the girl, he just got surprised. The girl was looking very simple yet very beautiful.Sanskaar said "isko to maine aaj tak nahi dekha college main kaun hai yeh ladki?" Vickey replied "ladki chahe jo koi bhi ho tune jo kaha tha wo kar". "thik hai main jata hun", Sanskaar replied.

Then he started walking towards the girl and stared at her.He just got blown by her beauty.He was just thinking to execute his plan when suddenly his phone rang up. He picked up the phone and said "hello" "sir kya aap hamari company ka credit card lena chahenge.etc'.." Sanskaar rejected the offer furiously and he was in his own thoughts when he accidentally collided with the girl'.. Due to the collision, the girl got scared and dropped her books and lost her balance''.Sanskaar caught her hand tightly and placed his other hand around her waist''' they both stared at each other for few minutes . "aap thik to hain na?" Sanskaar questioned the girl'..The girl came back into her sense and started picking up her books from the floor and before Sanskaar could say anything, she ran away. Sanskaar admired her. He was joined by his friend after few minutes and they asked what happened to his challenge''..Sanskaar replied "aaj tak kisi ne bhi mere sath aise behave nahi kiya'''janna padega iss ladki ko". Then he questioned himself "who is she?"

So now tell me how is the chapter 1...







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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good attempt Bhanu...!
Do update it!
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Omg..an ff on Ragini n sanskar..my 2 fav chrctrs of swaragini..
The plot is very interesting..i loved the first chapter..update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb yaar sangini ff plz update soon
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nice start
update soon
next prt
waiting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank you all 4 lovely comments will update CH2 soon...
Edited by bhanu321 - 10 years ago
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CH-2
Sanskaar was busy in discussing something with his friends when he saw the girl whom he earlier collided with'''.. He decided to follow the girl. He told his friends to go to the canteen and he will be back in few minutes'''. Then he started following the girl. After 5 minutes, the girl entered in a class and then Sanskaar also entered in the class following her. He was just busy in staring at the girl, when he heard his economics teacher, A.K Mishra's voice, "Sanskaar beta aa gaye tum class main? Poore year main meri ye pehli class hai jo tum attend kar rahe ho''.. I am very lucky ki tumne meri class attend ki'''." The whole class started laughing'''Sanskaar stared at his teacher for a few minutes and then sat on a bench'''..The girl was silently watching this scene..
Then the teacher introduced her to the whole class, "Yeh hain Ragini Gadodia. Aaj se ye bhi aap logon ke sath iss class main padhengi''". Swara who was also present in the class said "Sir, she is my sister". The teacher replied, " I hope that she is not like you who always thinks of other things apart from studies". Then the teacher indicated Ragini to sit with Sanskaar . For few moments, Ragini hesitated but then goes to sit with Sanskaar.
The teacher started teaching Sanskaar , as usual, was not interested in the chapter taught by his teacher. Then, for just time pass, he decide to talk with Ragini. He tried a lot to grab her attention but she was ignoring him''.. Then he said, "Lagta hai iski dimagi halat sahi nahi hai ya phir ye kuch bol or sun nahi sakti tabhi meri baat ka jawab nahi de rahi" loud enough so that Ragini can hear. Ragini replied " Oh mister, main bilkul thik hoon bas main tumse baat nahi karna chahti". "Kyun agar tum mujhse baat kar logi to earthquake aa jayega ye phir flood, jiske dar se tum mujhse baat nahi karna chahti?" Sanskaar replied''' "Apne aap ko bahut smart samajhte ho tum?" Ragini questioned furiously. "Nahi samajhta nahi hoon, actually main smart hoon" Sanskaar replied. Ragini wanted to argue with him but kept quiet and did not responded to Sanskaar.
When the lecture got over, Laksh rushed towards Ragini and said, "Ragz, tum wapas aa gayi. Kitna acha lag raha hai tumse milkar". " Mujhe bhi, Laksh.", Ragz replied. Swara also joined them. After seeing Swara, Laksh's smile disappeared, "lo ye bhi aa gayi". "Haan main bhi aa gayi to tumhara mood kyun upset ho raha hai?" Swara replied. Ragini said "di, Lakshh tumhe dekhkar kyun upset hoga?". Lakshh replied , "Di? Ragz, Kya Swara tumse age main badi hai? Phir bhi dono ek hi class main?." "oh hello main Ragz se sirf 8 months badi hoon. BTW tumhe meri age se kya matlab?" Swara said. "off course nothing, Swara Di", Laksh teased her. Swara left without saying anything.
When Swara was gone, Laksh said "Ragz aaj tum mere sath ghar chalna. Maa tumhe dekhengi to kitni khush hongi". Thik hai, par kya tumahare yaha koi mehman aane wala hai... Ragini replied... Nahi ghar par sirf main, maa aur Sanskaar rahege , Lakshh replied. He pointed towards Sanskaar who was listening all their conversation quietly. Sanskaar smiled at her but she stared at him furiously. Laksh and Ragini left together for another lecture, while Sanskaar was lost in his own thoughts. He remembered his childhood days'.He used to play pranks with Ragini still they were best friends'''. He was very happy to meet Ragini again. After all, she was his best friend.
In the evening, Ragini was welcomed by Annapurna,Laksh's mother in Maheshwari house. Ragini touched her feet and took her blessings. Annapurna said , "tu kitni badi ho gayi hai Ragz. Aaj tu aur Swara hamare saath hi dinner karogi, main Parvati ji ko bata deti hoon". Ragini and Swara agreed. Then Ragini, Swara, Annapurna , Sanskaar and Lakshh ate dinner together.
All the time, Sanskaar was staring at Ragini but she was just ignoring him. He felt like an invisible string was attracting him towards Ragini. After the dinner, Ragz and Swara bid goodnight to all of them and left for their house. In the night, Sanskaar was trying to sleep but he couldn't. Whenever he closed his eyes, he only saw Ragini's face. Then, thinking about her, he got into sleep.
Edited by bhanu321 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nyc yaar plzzz update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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omg sangini i luv them lots...next update pm me plzzz
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hey can anyone help me in posting pics... I mean how to post pics.

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