LRL Raj Naina ff part 17 page 47

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi
hi guys this is ishani ..a big fan of raj naina and left right left.. i am really missing this serial a lot. i read all ffs on rn.
i thought to write something on rn (lrl) so here it go..


Part 1:

voice over (naveen)::
ye hai KMA KANCHAN GANGA MILITARY ACADEMY jaha par atha hai aam insan par bahar jathe hai ek sipayi jo desh ke liye apne jaan de sakhe... mai naveen singh aluwalia mai bhi isi academy ka passout tha..dekhna ye hai kya anewale bathch me kya khasiyath hai.. kya inme ko haI jo desh ko apne jaan se bhi jyada pyar kare.and not to forget to see koi hai jo is BC and MC ko hamse jyada thang kare ya yu kaho ki koi MC ko sabak dikhade...??


In cafeteria group of four sitting .

nandini:so finally.. guys we r back to KMA ..mera ghar wow.. I just love kma.. hai na abhi..
abhi:kya bath hai n nadini.. apko sach me kma ithna paaand hai.. hame tho patha hi nahi tha.. kahi aisa tho nahi ki apko kma nahi kma me rehenewalw pasandh hai he says smilingly..
nadini gives I will kill u kind of look..
gunny:relax ... guys thumhe patha hai na hum yaha kyu hai..
raj:ya abhi n nandini. ithne saal badh ye mauka mili hai ki hum kmame wapas aye..
nandini:ha raj.. but one doubt... mai aur abhi tho yaha teaching post ke liye apply ki the par thum dono I mean hunny n u how u got posting here.. (gunny n raj r on special duty to save triggers that noone know.)
they both joined here as a teachers of communication n strategy n signals..

HUM SE BHI MIK LIJIYE a voice came from behind all turned to see..its dr.shalini.
dr.shalini:hi.. ap sab naye staff members honge I guess .. actually not guess I am sure aap wahi honge kyuki mai hamesha sahi hothi hu..

nandinj:ya ur absolutely right... we r new teachers here.. nu..
dr.shalini:hi myself dr.shalini single..mai yaha ke one and only doctor hu.. so nice to meet u..
nandini:hi.. I amnandini..and ye pulling abhi towards her ye abhimanyu rai chauhan hai .. n vo rajveer n gunny...

all:hi.. nice to meet u.. dr
dr.shalini:lagtha hai thumsab pehele se hi janthe ho ek dhusreko..

Jaanna nahi captain shalini ye sab tho khotya hai hamara sar dhard karne aye hai phir se..

all turn n see that suriji standing there. .
dr.shalini.:mathlab..
suriji:aise hai dr.shalini ye hamare purqne cadets hai aur ab capt bankar yaha aye hai..
dr.shalini:wow thats great..so aplog bc and nair ko ache se jaanthe hai..

abhi:ya
dr.shalini goes near to raj:hello aap bahuth seeious lag rahe ho.. kya aap hameaha aise hi hothe ho..??
raj:no.. actually (raj in mindha ap sahi kehe rahe ho..ab mere jindagi me kushi kaha se ayenge)

gunny:no.. he is tiered as we travwlled whole night..so..
we will go n meet u aftrsometime dr.shalini n all left..




plz give feedbacks . I will be waiting.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey I am glad I am the first one to read your story, liking it and commenting on it. That's the first time I am the first reader of a story 😉 Anyways getting to the story...

I like the beginning it is making the story to look promising. Let's see how you are going to create and mold the story. Looking forward to it. 👍🏼 Update soon. 😳
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Originally posted by: Sterolinelover

<font size="5" color="#ff0000">Hey I am glad I am the first one to read your story, liking it and commenting on it. That's the first time I am the first reader of a story😉Anyways getting to the story...</font>

<font size="5" color="#ff0000">
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<font size="5" color="#ff0000">I like the beginning it is making the story to look promising. Let's see how you are going to create and mold the story. Looking forward to it.👍🏼Update soon.😳</font>

thank u so much for comment...

u know I like to write when I get comment more.. thank u..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sterolinelover

<font size="5" color="#ff0000">Hey I am glad I am the first one to read your story, liking it and commenting on it. That's the first time I am the first reader of a story😉Anyways getting to the story...</font>

<font size="5" color="#ff0000">
</font>
<font size="5" color="#ff0000">I like the beginning it is making the story to look promising. Let's see how you are going to create and mold the story. Looking forward to it.👍🏼Update soon.😳</font>

thank u so much for comment...

u know I like to write when I get comment more.. thank u.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely dear.I like it.plz plz update soon& pm me
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Fantastic update
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Originally posted by: rajeeviansonai

lovely dear.I like it.plz plz update soon& pm me

thank u. .. plz send me buddy request it will be easy to send pm..
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Originally posted by: rinku95

Fantastic update

Continue soon
Thanks for pm

thank u so much dear...I will update next part night
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Same here comments motivates a writer 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey dear,

First of all thank you so much that you sent me a PM even when you didn't know me...i am so happy and feel so blessed...thank you friend

Now about the FF...very nice start! Interesting and intriguing...suspense from the beginning but this time the suspense centre point is Raj and not Naina...

I am so happy reading RN fics and everyday gives me a new fic to read which overwhelms me! Thanks for adding one more flower to the bouquet.

Plz continue soon and do PM me.

Just one more thing to ask can I know ur name plz...kya karu bina naam Jane apko reply me salutation kya du ye samajh nahi aata

Luv
Megha

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