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kark12

@kark12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: m.bahety
Hey dear,

First of all thank you so much that you sent me a PM even when you didn't know me...i am so happy and feel so blessed...thank you friend

Now about the FF...very nice start! Interesting and intriguing...suspense from the beginning but this time the suspense centre point is Raj and not Naina...

I am so happy reading RN fics and everyday gives me a new fic to read which overwhelms me! Thanks for adding one more flower to the bouquet.

Plz continue soon and do PM me.

Just one more thing to ask can I know ur name plz...kya karu bina naam Jane apko reply me salutation kya du ye samajh nahi aata

Luv
Megha

hey thank u for comment.. actually I dont know anyone from lrl forum...

I was there on EMA forum n I was more close there.. all call me drama queen...

thank u so much for lovely comment..
I will update it soon..
my name is ishani... ur megha right

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kark12

@kark12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Sterolinelover
Same here comments motivates a writer😊

absolutely right

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Arti Gupta

@RNforever

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

wow
so finally u started ur ff
i m so happy dear
i always love to read RN
thank for pm

love naina

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Milleegarg

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Hey thanxx 4 pm me
Such nyc strt
👏
Plz keep update nd pm too

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kajalkalwani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Thank you for the pm. M eagerly waiting fr n nxt part. This part was amazing

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Awsme story
Loved it

Continue soon
Wtng

Thanks for the pm

Keep smiling

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kark12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: newmoon18
Awsme story
Loved it

Continue soon
Wtng

Thanks for the pm

Keep smiling

thank u so much for reading...
ya I will continue it soon

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kajalkalwani

@kajalkalwani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Amazing update. Thanks for the pm

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Misha (Sumitra)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

He,

Thank you much forgiving us another FF to read.

There are so many new RN FF starting and I am so happy about it.

This looks really promising.

Poor Rajveer is depressed😭😭😭Why?
Excited to read further

Lots of love

Misha

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kark12

@kark12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

hi

thank u so much for ur lovely comments..
here is next part.. hope u all like it.. don't forget to give comments..

part 2:

all goes to thier respective rooms...and they report to brig.chandhok..

voice over (naveen):ajka din sab ke liye ek naya shuruvath hai. chahe ho faculty ho ya cadets.. cadets ka aaj pehela din hai is academy me.. and meri dostonka bhi pehela din but not as a cadet as a teacher.. jo log 5 saal pehele yaha seekhne aye the vo aaj seekhane aya hai.dekhthe hai hamare naya cadets kaise hai.kya hamare dost insabka dil jeeth payenge. kya inmese koi kisika kushi ka wajaha banjayenge ayiye dekhthe hai. .

At the kma gate :

person:beta its not good for u. think it its not right .

girl:baba dont worry nothing will happen to me.. mai yaha apne makshad me kamiyab hone ayihu aur mai hokar rhoongi chahe muje kuch bhi karna pade. muje patha hai taining tough hoga pir bhi ap chintha math kariye mere bayya mere naveen bayya hameaha mere taqath bankar mere sath rahege.

m:naina agar thuje kuch huva tho hamara kya hoga... and she cries..

naina hugs her and says ma aap chinta math kariye muje kuch nahi hoga.. ap jayiye.. they were about to leave when they see a boy hugging his mother and crying...its huda and his mother. .

they too see naina and her parents n ce near them

hm:beti ye mera beta hai huda.jyada bath kartha hai par dil ka sona hai... plz iske saath rehena .

naina:jee anti.

nm:ha naina.. huda plz mere betika dhyan rakhna.. vo peheli bar is tharaha ghar se dhoor rehe rahi hai..

huda:ji anti ..ap chita math kijiye.. huda hai na sab sambal lega tho apki beti kya cheez hai..

naina gives what the hell kind of look...

their parents left from there. .

both huda and naina enter the campus.

huda:hi myself amardeep huda.. sab jananiya marthe hai mere upar u know mere personality hai hi aise.. by the way thumhe kaise laga ye huda.. I am sure thera tho dil agaya hoga mujpar..

naina got irritated by this and walks fast without saying anything.

huda:oye thu tho kamal ki hai phoolandevim thuje tho gussa bhi atha hai.

naina:shut up..

huda:kyu ..mai kyu shut uo karu... ab tho tere mammyjine thuje sambhalne ko kaha hai.. tho mai hi hu na tera ..

naina:look..mai kuch nahi kehe rahi hu iska ye mathlabnahi ki thumkuch bhi bakega... mujse door rehena..and dont u dare to callme phoolan devi..n she left rrom there.

huda:jaav jaav kaha javogi.. ek dinmere paas hi tho aana hai thuje ... he went to his room..

naina was standing near the wall of fame and looking at the photos there..

suriji:dekh puttar yaha thuje sudharnekeliye beja hai.. thu ek ache army officer banskthe ho.

person:kaam kya karna hoga..

suriji:kaam?? kuch nahi puttar .yaha thuje padne beje hai kaam karne nahi.. chalo thum kuch khalena mai thumhare kapde lekar atha hu..

naina seen all these and she got that he came from jail. but ahe find a truthfulness in his eyes n she goes to talk to him.

naina:hi I am naina nenital se hu.. ..

suriji:chalo puttar acha huva.. ise canteen dikhadena mai iska kapde lekhar atha hu..by saying that suriji left..

nain:apka naam...

person:apun ka naam alekh hai.. jail se aya hu (he think if he say that noone will do friendship wuth him but sad he was wrong)

naina:chalo mai canteen dikhathi hu..

they both went to canteen..

there other cadets also sitting..

ali:hi hum ali hai khanpoor se..
naina:mai naina nenital se..

yudi:hi my name is yaduvansh sahani but u guys can calk me yudi..

pooja:hi mai pooja ghai.. mai yaha apne ranje rohith ko dhoondhne ayi hu.. jab uska connection lag jaye tho yaha se connection khathvadoong..

all look confusingly at her .

alekh:iska mthlab hai ki ye yaha se chali jayegi jab ise vo mil jayega..

naina:wow you understand her language also.but alekh gives her not interested kind of look..

huda:chalo acha hai.. I am huda amardeep huda.. sun kar acha laga ki atleast ek janani tjo mere peeche nahi padegi...

naina gives u will not change kind of look..she looks towards alekh who was irritated by hudas word..

pooja:aise thum dononki connection pehele se hi hai kya... mera mathlab hai thum dono ek doosreko pehelesehi jaanthe hai kya .??

naina:nahi vo..

alekh:nahi apun kisiko nahi janthe aur na hi jaanna hai..apun jail se aye hai...by listening this allshocked except naina.. by saying that he left from there..

they got room alloted..

naina-pooja room no 202 girls hostel
yudi-huda room no 202 boys hostel
alekh-ali room no 201 boys hostel
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in night all gathered in canteen for dinner..
by now all got close to each other apart from two that is naina and alekh.

nain come in canteen and sees that alekh sitting alone on otger table and all are enjoying in other place.. she took her plate and goes to sit near hi.

by seeing this alekh got surprised. .because as much he know noone want to be with qaidi but this girl is different. .

naina:hai.m mai yaha baith sakthi hu???
alekh:...

they both r eating silently

byseeing this huda says
huda:dekhlo dosto kaise vo jakar qaidi ke saath baith gayi.. lagtha hai use jailwalw jyada pasand hai..

by listening this alekh get anger he was about to get up but nain holds his hand..

alekh:dekha kaise hai .. apun ke saath rahe tho thuje bhi ye sab sunna padega.. ja yaha se.

naina:mai kisi aur ke bath kyu sunu..

alekh:jyada banneka nahi.. apon ko kisiki jaroorath nahi chali ja yaha se..thu kyu apooon ke peeche padi hai.. mai jail se aya hu and jo jail seatha hai use koi bhi dost nahi banthe thu kyu.. chala ja yaha se...he shouts on her..

by seeing this all gets up

pooja:oye naina ..ye qaidi hai ise kya bath kar rahi hai.. aja yaha hamare saath..

huda:aise bhi kya ghuna karkar andar gaya hai kise patha... aaja thu..

other cadets also start to say bad about alekh that he came from jail n all.. its higgts jow so naina shots

naina:just shut up... jail jail jail.. bhura vo nahi thum sab ho.. jo insaan ko insaan nahi samajthe...jail gaya iska mthlab ye nahi ki ye bhura admi hai.. kahi bar jo dekha suna sabkuch galath hotha hai jIske karan auronka jindagi narak ho jaatha hai.. (she become emotional by remembering her bro)..bhura bo nahi hai thumlog ho.. thumlog tho insaan keheneka layak bhi nahi ho .. and huda thumapne hadh me rehena kuch jyada bolneka jaroorath nahi hai..u all r just disgusting. ... she left from there without eating .

alekh feels happy that first time someone treated him as a human being and took stand for him . use naina ki bathonme kuch dard mehesoos huva jo uske ankhose bhahar nikhl rahi thi.m he feela bad that he said her to leave him..

alekh to himself:thank u naina.. ajthak apun ko koi thumhare jaise nahi mila...mai thumhare sath hamesha doonga chahe kuch bhi ho..

all r standing silently.. alekh was about to leave when ali stopped him

ali:alekh bhai..

alekh:kya..

ali:hame maaf kardijiye.. ham jo bhi kiya galath kiya .. aj ke baath aise kabhi nahi hogga.. all says sorry to him n now they become friend to alekh too.

sab gale mil rahe the suriji was hapoy to see this.. ther there comes our capt..

capt.abhi:lagtha hai kuch kushi ki bath hai..

all sees towards them n says

pooja:ji sir.. kushi ki hi hai.. hum sab ka connection jo judha huva hai..
all capt.:what..

ali:inka mathlab hai hum sab friends ban gaye..

raj:thats great cadets.. pehela din hi ap sab dost bangaye..

huda:ye sab phoolan ke wajaha se huva hai..
raj:phoolan???

yudi:iska mathlab hai naina ki wajaha se.

raj:naina... so kaun hai ye naina.

pooja:uske sath wrong no lag gaya tho wo gusse se chali gayi..
nandini:its k... cadtes now its time to light outs so go to ur rooms..

all goes to there rooms.

in raj room
raj was thinking about cadets..

gunny:wgat happened what ur thinking. .

raj:kuch nahi.. kithma acha hai na cadets pehele hu din dost ban gaye..
gunny:jaise thum aur naveen bane the...

raj become sad by listening naveen name...

gunny:muje lagatha hai phoolan I mean naina khafi samajdhar cadets haI kyuki aise hI sab ko dost bajana choti bath nai hai..
raj:ya.. chalo.. sojathe hai.. morning we have classes.

raj:naina... naina kaun hai ye...

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