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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mind blowing update
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: newmoon18

Mind blowing update
Loved it

thank u ..
keep reading
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A fresh take on our classic Rajveer-Naina story :) enjoying this ff thoroughly. Keep the updates coming :) 😊
Good writing, despite first attempt. looking forward to many more .
Love and Luck
Trisha
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ginny_trish

A fresh take on our classic Rajveer-Naina story :) enjoying this ff thoroughly. Keep the updates coming :)😊

Good writing, despite first attempt. looking forward to many more .
Love and Luck
Trisha

thank u so much for reading..
ya its my first update on rn..
will keep updating..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank u so much for reading my ff..sorry for mistakes.. actually I not rechecked while updating. ..
k here is next part..

part 3:

next morning all got up at 5 as they needed to report to maj.nair for the first drill..

ali:alekh bahi ap nahathe nahi...aise hI chalenege kya...??

alekh:ha .. sher kabi nahaya haikya???

ali:kya baijaan apbhi na ..chalo late ho rahe hai chalthe hai.. mai yudi bai aur huda ko dekhkar atha hu..

in huda room.

yudi:dude its first drill I am gonna perform beat in this..I am sure I am gonna win it..

huda:abey vo yudiye aaj pehela din hai aaj koi competition nahi hoga.. vo maj nair kuch bathadenge shayad.

yudi:whatever. .

in naina room.
naina:pooja jaldi kar na hum late ho jayenhe..

pooja:kar tho rahi hu.. aur kithna jaldi karna hai??? agar daili aise hi 5 baje uthna hai tho mera tho do din me batry dad hojayega..
patha hai naina maine suna hai ki maj.nair bahuth hi strict n rude hai.

naina:ha shayad ..par kya farak padtha hai hum acha karenge tho vo kuch nahi bigad saktha..


all went to the ground. .

huda:hi phoolan ..
naina igrone him.. all standing in their lines..

yudi:patha nahi maj.nair kaise honge..
huda:kaise bhi honge.. te huda nahi dhartha..
alekh in low voice :phatto sala subha subha shuruhogaya..

maj.nair come there. .

maj nair:so cadets ye kma hai yaha ap sab solders banne aye hai dost nahi...maine suna hai kal aap sab log dost ban gaye hai and cadet singh aap kya ap yaha dost banane aye hai?

naina:no sir..
maj.nair: what no cadet singh .. mai kabhi galath nahi hotha and ladkiya kabhi solders nahi ban sakthe hai.. kyu na thumghar me jakar khana banalethi ho..
naina gets angry by this even alekh gets angry..

naina:no sir.. mai apko wrong prove karke dhikavoongi ki ladki bhi solder ban sakthi hai

all impressed by nainas guts to ans maj nair..

they all finished his drill and came back to canteen.. after 15 min they had capt rajveer class.

all r sitting and having their breakfast.. byt naina sat alone alekh sees this and comw to her..

alekh:jo bhi apun kal kaha uske liye apun sorry hai .
naina looks at him..
alekh:apun galath sochthe the ki koi ham se dost nahi banna chahathe hai par aaj teri wajaha se sab dost bangye hai.. thank u.. kya thu apun ko apna dost banalegi???

naina smiles n says k..
and all come there and alekh says to forgive all so she did..

all came to class except alekh and naina...capt rajveer was already there as he came early to class.

raj:so cadets I am capt.rajveer singh shekhawath.. mai aap sabko communication and strategy padatha hu.. so before I start I want to know my cadets.. so..
"excuse me sir"
a voice came n raj turned to see who was there. .there alekh and naina are standing to get the permission to get inside.. he sees at naina n he find something stange in her eyes he was just seeing at her without saying anything..

"can we get inside sir"naina asked again which made him to come out of the world..

raj:come in cadets.. by the way ur late to tge class and I dont want it to be repeated..
both:yes sir..

they both went and sat in their places..

raj:so cadets lets introduce yourself. lets start with u..
huda: amardeep huda sir..
pooja:pooja ghai sir..
ali:ali bheg sir.
yudi:yedhuvansh sahani sir..
alekh:alekh sharma...(he nt said sir as its his own style.. (
naina:naina ah.. singh sir

raj:naina ah.. singh int. name... ..
and so on...

aftr his class abhi and nandini too had theie class.. as usull all enjoyed nandini class as she was friendly with all.. and in abhimanyu class all had masti..

after finishing class naina was going to cafeteria to have coffe she collide with someone n was about to fall but someone hold her making sure she nt fall her .. that is none other than raj..

raj was lost inhis eyes.. he thinks this eyes reminds me soomeone.. such a beautiful eyes but in ankhome patha nahi muje gham dikhayi de raha hai.. ..

naina:sir... I am sorry..
now hecame out of his ownworld..

raj; cadetsingh be careful while walking.. agar mai nahi atha tho apko chot bhi lag sakthi thi..

naina:aise choth adath hogayi hai sir... she was thinking something..
raj:means??

naina:nothing sir.. thank u so much for helping.. by saying this she left from there..

in raj room.
raj was sitting on bed and was thinking about something ..

gunny:raj kya huva.. y u look so lost..

raj:nothing ..
gunny:abthum mujse bhi bath chupavoge..
raj:aise nahi yar. . bas ek cadet ke bare me soch raha tha..
gunny:kyu..kya thumhe uspar dhak hai..kya vo spy ho sakthe hai..
raj: patha nahi gunny but kuch tho hai jo mai nahi samaj paa raha.. thum nahi mile ho na us se.. kal us se milena baad me batha dena..aisenaina singh namhai uska..

gunny:chalo theekhai .
raj:aise kuch patha chala.. koi adddres mila..
gunny; kya patha chala.
raj:jo hum do saal se kar rahe he uske bareme..

gunny"nahi yar isbaar bhi kuch patha nahi chala.. patha nahi hame kab milenge..

raj:I just hope vo theek ho... jald se jald patha chal jaye...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome part
rn meet wow
excited for more
thanx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nilusoni

awesome part

rn meet wow
excited for more
thanx for pm

thank I so much for reading
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely update dear.raj naina mind blowing.plz update.thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely update dear.thanks 4 pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajeeviansonai

lovely update dear.raj naina mind blowing.plz update.thanks 4 pm

thank u so much dear..ur reading it I am so happy

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