SwaSan TS 'Dil De Diya Hai' (last part pag 11)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello guys 🤗 I'm here with another SwaSan story.I planned it to be a TS (two or three shots, not sure) I'm kinda obsessed with them (i guess i don't have to tell this, you can see it LOL, and i'm not obsessed as Ragini 🤣) I tried to be a bit hatke from the story line.So let me tell you the plot: Ragini and Laksh got married (without any problem, so there was no love triangle here) and are happy with each other.Sanskar got married with Swara (arranged one).At the beginning he is not happy with the shaadi, he married her just for the sake of his parents. Swara on the other side slowly starts falling for him with each passing day. He do cares for her but only as a friend. Swara one day reveals him her feelings as she is not able to hide them anymore, but is left shattered as Sanskar doesn't reciprocate. He is still in love with Kavita, his pehla pyaar.Swara accepts it and treat him as her friend. She promise to herself that she will fulfill her duty as a bahu in the house. Laksh and Ragini got to know about it and tries to unite them, even though at the beginning Swara is not sure about it.They organize a small party and make them dance together, to bring them closer. Swara and Sanskar has lot of arguments and one day while arguing Swara decide to leave the house and go to Mumbai, where her cousin Riya lives. But in the meanwhile he has started falling for her as well, but doesn't tell her because he think she has moved on and because he thinks that loving her means he is cheating on Kavita, his pehla pyaar.So here Swara leaves the house in anger and Sanskar doesn't stop her. She takes the bus to Mumbai. After a a few hours he receives a call from the inspector Shinde who tells him that the bus going to Mumbai met with an accident and in that bus there was also Mrs Swara Maheshwari, his wife. I'll upload the first part soon 😊👍🏼 Do tell me if the plot is nice or not and whether i should continue it or not 😃


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Posted: 9 years ago
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The plot is very nice

For a change Ragz is human and Lux might have brains

Arranged marriage to a loved one I love this concept
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice plot !!!!
Continue soon 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg. Another one. Your on a roll. Lovely concept. Can't wait till u update the next part.

~Rose
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Annei123

Nice plot !!!!

Continue soon😛


Thanks 😊 i will soon, but not sure when as i'm working on another OS since a week 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: white_rose

Omg. Another one. Your on a roll. Lovely concept. Can't wait till u update the next part.

~Rose


Thank you Rose 😳
Actually im kinda obsessed with them, and whenever i'm free i try to write a story on them.
Will update soon but not sure when, as i'm working on an OS since a week 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

yup..

it's nice continue soon


Thanks 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Unreserved my previous comment
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A msg for Sanskar

Jab pyar dil pe dastak de toh kivaad khol dene chahiye USe andar aane dena chahiye

Doosri mohabbat pehli mohabbat se bewafai nahi hoti
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chahanya

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The plot is very nice

For a change Ragz is human and Lux might have brains

Arranged marriage to a loved one I love this concept


Thanks dear 😊
Will try to upload the first part by the end of the next week or even before 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chahanya

Unreserved my previous comment

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A msg for Sanskar

Jab pyar dil pe dastak de toh kivaad khol dene chahiye USe andar aane dena chahiye

Doosri mohabbat pehli mohabbat se bewafai nahi hoti


Well said 👏

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