Manan ff/ THE RIVALS love/chapter 11pg 31... 4 dec

THE RIVALS

Hello guys I am here with a new ff that is the rivals. The love story of two rivals. So tell me should I continue or not. Basically the story is start with college life. But they are THE RIVALS ... THE MALHOTRAS ...AND THE MURTYS

Characterstic

Manik malhotra: the only heir of malhotras , the Greek god ,girls are crazy on him , cool dude love his parents and his parents too love him .he is son of maan malhotra and nyonika malhotra.

Nandini murty : a modern girl with simplicity , full of cuteness ,enjoying her life,loves her parents and her younger brother rishabh And her friends. She is bubbly, talkative respect others and their feeling, helpful in nature. She brings smile on others face.

The two main identities are here. I will disclose others when they needed.

so plzz give me your feedback so according to response i will continue

INDEX

CHAPTER 1 ...PAGE 2

CHAPTER 2...PAGE 5

CHAPTER 3...PAGE 8

CHAPTER 4...PAGE 11

CHAPTER 5...PAGE 13

CHPTER 6...PAGE16

Chapter 7 ...page 19

Chapter 8...page 24

Chapter 9 ... Page 28

Chapter 10 .page 30

Chapter 11... Page 31

Hey unnu .. Bacha hope u r doing good..
I saw this post and to my surprise it is a story.. Heheh..
Go for it..
I will try to be a regular reader once m done with my stuff.. Eee.. My story...
Gonna read all new stories..
😉
And yes to the title add manan ff/ss. People will get confuse otherwise.. Hehehe..


And rivals ..hehehhe.. Go for it.. Go for chapter one.. Let people know more about the story, they will appreciate ur work for sure..
Best wishes..

Originally posted by: candy1990

Hey unnu .. Bacha hope u r doing good..
I saw this post and to my surprise it is a story.. Heheh..
Go for it..
I will try to be a regular reader once m done with my stuff.. Eee.. My story...
Gonna read all new stories..
😉
And yes to the title add manan ff/ss. People will get confuse otherwise.. Hehehe..


And rivals ..hehehhe.. Go for it.. Go for chapter one.. Let people know more about the story, they will appreciate ur work for sure..
Best wishes..

Hey nice start...continue it. N pm me

Originally posted by: mehek.kwatra97

Nyc concept...

Plz continue...

Originally posted by: AMAR_LOVE

do cont soon and pm me

interesting concept...

Hello guys so I m here with first chapter...enjoy it and give me your feedback

CHAPTER 1

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MURTY VILLA

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Nandini and her family at dining table, having their dinner

Mr murty : so nandu all the best for first day in space, and remember malhotra's are trusty of space so don't ruin murty's image.

Nandini: yaa dad I knw, don't you trust me. i will rock there, right mamma.

Mrs murty: haan murty ji our nandu is will surely rock

Mr murty : haan ji I know mera bachha mujhe bohot proud feel karate hai but I am dad also so I have to instruct them.

Rishab:dad we are not kid now. Don't call me bacha.

So after this everyone enjoy their dinner with family time

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Malhotra mansion

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Manik ,dhruv and cabir (his best friend) were enjoy their brotherly relation in whole mansion .mansion is full with their laughing ,teasing, playing ,the mansion sound happy when these three are together.every Saturday and Sunday they spend whole day with each other.meaning of friendship is equals to manik dhruv and cabir ,they share true friendship with each other ,they call themselves band of brothers they love to play music, games.they share everything and tomorrow they are going to join space.

nyonika :bachho dinner is ready, come fast

And they do their dinner with full masti and all.

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Next day

Murty villa

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N: navya be ready I m there in five okay

Na:ya yep I m ready

She reached their in five and hug her navya is nandini's best friend and she is also joining space to complete her mba

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Space

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Space is full with new faces, new students. Everyone is so excited .nandini and navya is also excited for their new start of collage.manik cabir and dhruv are as usual late. But everyone knw about their friendship as they completed their graduation in space only and now they are here to do mba . So every girl in the space is going gaga over them. And every boy is admiring nandini and navya .

So navya and nandini are finding their class room, but they are not able to find and got late for the class and our band of brothers are already late so they are running like bullet trains and even two girls too.and they reach the classroom at same time and said all in unison may I come in sir.

Proff turn towards them with all angry face,

So did you guys like it, plzz tell me

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