SwaSan SS : My Only Wish (Part 6 updated on Page no 36)

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My Only Wish

Part 1

Venue - baadi

(everybody is tensed)

DP-sanskaar where is laksh

Sanskaar-i don't know bade papa

DP-arey but he was with u na

Sanskaar-yeah papa he said he has some urgent n he left

DP-sanskaar this is so irresponsible...u should have taken care of him na...i mean u know na he is so immature

AP-ji aap shaant ho jaiye

DP-uski shaadi hai...look at swara she is the bride still woh yahaan hai but yeh laksh

(swara n laksh r getting married...but laksh was not in the mandap)

Adarsh-Papa lemme call him

Uski koi zaroorat nhi hai

(a voice came...everybody turned n saw laksh was standing on the entrance that too with ragini...n seemed like they got married...they entered n sanskaar went to them)

Sanskaar-lucky what is this...iska kya matlab hai

(everyone was in shocking state)

Laksh(he held ragini's hand)-we got married bhai

Sanskaar-what...i mean why...matlab what have u done lucky...yeh shaadi toh tumhari marzi se ho rhi thi na

Laksh-sorry bhai...look i thought i was ok with this marriage i mean swara is a nice girl but i fell for ragini...n bhai agar main swara se shaadi kar leta toh sabki life barbaad ho jaati

Dadi(she came there n slapped ragini)-tharey ko sharam na aavey hai apni sagi behen ke mangetar se byaah kar liya tune

Ragini-dadi hum majbur theey...daadi humein pta hi nhi chala ki humein kab laksh se pyaar ho gya
DP-enough...tum dono ne swara ki zindagi barbaad kar di

Laksh-m sorry papa but

Dadi-tharey maafi maangney se kay hoga...kon thamega mahri shona ka haath ab

Sharmistha-maa plzz let it be...he is ragini's husband

Shekhar-yeah maa not now

Dida-sahi bol rha hai parvati...yeh dono shoru ka zindagi barbaad kar diya hai

Dadi-durga Prasad ji ab kon thamega mahri bacchii ka haath

AP-dekhiye kaki galti aapki poti ki bhi hai

Dadi-naa hai yeh mahri poti...ek kaam karo aap na mahri shona ko jaan se maar do...haath toh uska koi thaamne se raha koi na karega is sey byah

(swara was standing emotionless)

Sanskaar-main karunga

(everybody lokked at him)

Laksh-no bhai meri galti ki saja tum khud ko kyun

Sanskaar-shut ur mouth lucky

Ragini-par

Dadi-sach mein

DP-sanskaar...do u have any idea what u r saying

Sanskaar-ji Bade papa...i ll marry her but only when

Shekhar-when

Sanskaar-jab wo haan kahegi

Dadi-kahegi na kyun naa kahegi(she went to swara)shona thareey ko koi pareshaani na hai naa

(sanskaar goes to swara)

Sanskaaar-i know right now the situation is out of control but still...it will be ur decision...hoga wohi jo tum chahogi

(swara looked at him)

Sanskaar-bolo swara

(she nodded her head in yes...shekar n shomi looked at each other)

Shomi(in shekhar's ear)-shekhar yeh

Shekhar-shayad yehi uski kismat hai

Shomi-par sanskaar ka past...i mean his fiance kavita

Shekar-woh mar chuki hai

Shomi-but sankaar still loves her

Shekhar-hamari beti usey jeet legi aur phir...u know what i mean

Shomi-hmm

Dadi-pandit ji shuru kijiye

(the marriage took place with all the rituals...n now she is Mrs Swara Sanskaar Maheshwari...gadodias performed the bidaai ritual)

Shomi-Annpurna ji sujata ji meri dono betiyaan aapki bahu ban gyi hain...dhyaan rakhiyega aur ragini ki galti ko

AP-its okk sharmistha ji n laksh also did the same mistake na

Sujata-haan aur mahrey ko toh ghani khushi hai ki mahrey sanskaar ne byaah toh kara...nhi toh 5 saal se devdaas bana baitha tha...mainey toh umeed hi chod di thi uskey byaah ki

DP-chalein

(maheshwari welcomed their new DIL's)

Pari-chaliye aap dono...aapko aapkey rooms dikhatey hain

(in ragya's room...laksh entered...ragini goes to him n hugged him tightly)

Ragini-laksh...finally we have done it...we ruined swara's life...thank u so much yeh sab sirf tumhari vajah se hua hai

Laksh(he broke the hug)-i don't know ragini...humne jo kiya woh galat toh nhi tha

Ragini-plzz laksh...tum kehna kya chahtey ho

Laksh-matlab we were in a relationship phir bhi swara se shaadi ke liye haan karna woh bhi shaadi waaley din shaadi todney ke liye...m still feeling bad for her

Ragini-kuch galat nhi hai n i told u na usney bachpan se hum se sabkuch china hai...sab usey pyar kartey hain maa baba dada dadi dida...humein toh shaq hota hai ki hum ma baba ki sagi beti nhi hain humein kahin se utha kar laayein hain

Laksh-its okk ragini...i m sorry...m just feeling bad for my bhai

Ragini-unhoney toh sab bigaad diya pta nhi samajhtey kya hain khud ko(suddenly she realised what she said)i mean kya zaroorat thi...barbaad honey detey na usey but nhi

Laksh-ragini he is my brother bhai hai mera n next time bolney se pehley soch lena

Ragini-sorry laksh...chaliye chodiye waisey bhi aaj hamari SR hai

Laksh-plzz yaar ragini not tonight...m so disturbed

Ragini-par yeh hamara haq hai

Laksh-phir kabhi le lena haq now m feeling sleepy...good night(n he went to sleep)

(in swasan's room...sanskaar entered...he saw his room...decorated with rose petals n his bed too covered with rose petals n swara was standing near the window)

Sanskaar(he was feeling awkward)-woh

Swara(she turned n sensed his awkwardness)-aapko nind a rhi hogi na rukiye main bed saaf kar deti hoon(she goes to the bed n clean it)ho gya yeh sab main fenk deti hoon

Sanskaar-its okk table par rakh do...n m sorry i mean

Swara-sanskaar aapney kuch nhi kiya...aur main gussa nhi hoon...aap change kar lijiye phir main bhi change kar loongi...n don't worry i'll sleep on the couch...i know u r not comfortable

Sanskaar-matlab

Swara-matlab we both r sleeping together...no not together i mean on the bed

Sanskaar-swara u r my wife tum so sakti ho bed par because thats ur right...n i just need some time to accept this relationship n m sure u too want that

Swara-yeah i need some time

Sanskaar-so i'll go n change n hum dono bed par hi soyengey

Swara-ji

(ragya's room)

(laksh was sleeping n ragini was standing near the window)

Ragini-swara tum ne humse sabkuch china hai tum hamesha jeet ti ayi ho par iss baar humney tumhe hara diya...humney tumhe jeevan bhar ka dard diya hai...aaj tumney sabkuch kho diya ab tumharey cheherey par kabhi hansi nhi ayegi...hum jeet gye swara hum jeet gye

(swasan's room)

(swara came out from bathroom...sanskaar was sleeping peacefully he was in deep sleep...swara looked at him)

Swara(she smiled)-thanks sanskaar thanks mujhe woh dene ke liye jo mujhe hamesha se chahiye tha...thanks ragini mujhe us unchahe rishtey se nikalney ke liya (she goes to sanskaar n admired his sleeping form...she bent down n kissed his forehead)i love u sanskaar...hamesha kiya hai...thanks durga maa for fulfilling my only wish

[so frds this is my new TS(two shot)on SwaSan...so tell me how is it]


INDEX

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

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-Haju- thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG I love this
Amazing concept
Please continue soon
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Originally posted by: -Haju-

OMG I love this
Amazing concept
Please continue soon

thanks dear
N i love ur aiza khan n danish taimoor siggy❤️
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sonu to good yar and ragya lol ragini never regreat to ask her haqs lol swasan was very lucky do continue yar :-):-):-) am loving it
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Originally posted by: dpm15

Loved it!!!👏

Swara too wants that 😊... hihi.. poor nagin.

Continue soon..😊

thanks dharma😃
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Originally posted by: azira07

sonu to good yar and ragya lol ragini never regreat to ask her haqs lol swasan was very lucky do continue yar :-):-):-) am loving it

thanks azi😃
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Originally posted by: dpm15


Not Dharma... Dhanya😊 sonal

sorry was confused between dharma n dhanya😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG Ragini is so cheap 🤢
RagYa 👎🏼
SwaSan👍🏼
Haaaw Swara loved Sanskaar pehle se 😲
Amazing twist 👏
update soonish 😊
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Originally posted by: MusicMyLife.

OMG Ragini is so cheap 🤢
RagYa 👎🏼
SwaSan👍🏼
Haaaw Swara loved Sanskaar pehle se 😲
Amazing twist 👏
update soonish 😊

thanks misha😃
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Woww kahani mein twist hee nahi supertwist...loved it! Pls continue soon

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