AZMA FF-Ishq da Ruthba Chap 9New note pg76 - Page 8

Ok this is dark...dark and mysterious. The detailing is amazing.. Mahira is really in an unenviable position. Unsupportive relatives and abusive fiance. Even her fathers teachings are being turned against her. You have successfully created the medieval atmosphere and a world of mystery, sorcery and intrigue. Looking forward to next update.

lol !
whatz with u people reserving posts and never coming back to unres them !😆

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

lol !
whatz with u people reserving posts and never coming back to unres them !😆

toh fir abhi ke abhi unres karo !

Originally posted by: -enchanted-

Ok this is dark...dark and mysterious. The detailing is amazing.. Mahira is really in an unenviable position. Unsupportive relatives and abusive fiance. Even her fathers teachings are being turned against her. You have successfully created the medieval atmosphere and a world of mystery, sorcery and intrigue. Looking forward to next update.

yes . dark and hostile with its endless stories of sorcery,black magic and fairy tales... that was the face of middle age,all through the civilized world. They ambiance of season 4 has resemblance of that period's mysterious ways of life. And I always wanted to write something historical yet mysterious. So I totally seized the opportunity here. And IF readers have always been so amazing and supportive with comments,criticism and claps 😃. so what better platform than QH forum ! and what better cast than Rajbeer and Surbhi !

Originally posted by: oldooz

here i am! 😊 i'm really waiting forward chap2 !

And your chapter 2 is served on the table, fresh and hot !😆

Hey Shreya..Read both the chapters..So as promised , here goes.

WOW! This is amazing work. I enjoyed both chapters. I love it a lot. I mean history is my favorite subject like ever so the way you have written it is pretty amazing.

Originally posted by: StephyM

WOW! This is amazing work. I enjoyed both chapters. I love it a lot. I mean history is my favorite subject like ever so the way you have written it is pretty amazing.

Good Job!

(BTW, I'm Steph- awkward introduction there)

History is my one of most loved subjects...especially ancient and medieval period.
Thank you so much, Stephy for appreciating my work ! writing stuffs like this has taken a toll upon me. Sleep has permanently left me and all the time I am thinking how to make the story exciting yet historically accurate !😆

Originally posted by: _AmyChoco_

Hey Shreya..Read both the chapters..So as promised , here goes.

Chap 1:

Engrossed from the start!! 😃Took a while to ease into it. History goes over my head.😆Encountered a hiccup when I reached the arrival of the two men. Forgot the characters don't bear resemblance to the show characters. Gotta say you have a very good command over the language..both English and Urdu (The terms interspersed are Urdu right? 😆) And the writing is quite refined and dealt with minute precision too..makes it easier for the readers to visualize the scenario.

Who is a Jaigirdar?What are parganas?

Whoa..Latif & Mir are ghosts?? 😕

From the get go ,u have shrouded the story in mystery.

Chap 2:

Why are they hurtling atones at the poor girl? Has the news of her supposed infamy reached the town already? 😲

Aah..so u r a walking talking encyclopedia..should have guessed before signing up for this? Should ask Mahira for a herbal remedy to slow down the burning of my brain cells.😆😆😆

Jaggery se pet barta hain?? 😲*longs for a pizza*😭

Ok..doubt cleared..so Latif & Mir weren't ghosts afterall.

Didn't understand this ''they prefer new comer, you know. They creep through holes, sing to his ears, and then lead him outdoor into nowhere.The mischievous ones of them, Spirits!''.

Ohh..poor girl..she had suffered at the hands of those monsters.It takes immense courage just to run away...

And I loved this chapter too!!😃

P.S:: What does Ruthba mean? Was referring to ur title.

Amy ! Love !!
This is what a star rated review is .
I am overwhelmed , humbled and immensely thankful ! and u have asked very good questions ...any non-history buff will get hit by those unavoidable bumpers . I am going out now. I will get back to you with those replies.