AZMA FF-Ishq da Ruthba Chap 9New note pg76 - Page 9

Ok along with being historical it seems a dark ff

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Ok along with being historical it seems a dark ff

It is very mysterious and at the same time very gripping

Looking forward to know how the story unfolds

Please continue soon😊

thank u very much ! yaa I also want to finish it off fast !😆

Shreya!

Originally posted by: PurpleCrayon

Shreya!

I'm so late! Had such a busy tiring day. I'm afraid I have a lot of running around to do aaj bhi. Pakka I'll hop over and leave a review for you😃

Thank you for such an amazing Thank you note!😆

PS: Lage haath 1st ka bhi edit complete kardo😊

1st chap main aise hi rakhna chahti hoon. isiliye zada alter nehi kiya. 2nd one, u have done amazing fine tuning. I was sleep writing whole time. aj subha when I read, I was like scandalized...ki hey bhagwan ji ! what did I send u ? and then I found u already edited it. and the finished version was like polished diamond to my unclean draft !

Nice one.i like it.
With evry chap it getting interesting.
Cntinu soon.thnks 4 pm.

ressy unressy

wow shreya di... reading this story gives me feel like reading a dark Gothic novel, applause to u and ur editor for that...
This chapter gave a quick pick to the characters of this story... some new characters were introduced... came to know about the dark mystery of janjigarah, its curse and its mysterious chief who lives uphill surrounded by evilness and desired for young woman to please himself... (it reminds me of dracula though!!😆) ... quite amusing and mysterious this part is..
We got a pick onto mahira's past life... how she got tormented by her khala and zarroon.. (OMFG di Zaroon😲... humare pyare bhole bhale zaroon miya koo evil bana diya aap ne?!😆)..such a gloomy period of history where eduated and knowledgeable woman's were said to be witch!! the girl is running away from her past unknown to what her future holds, another nightmare or a new ray of hope for her...
will be waiting for next chapter.. good going di.. even keeping the history part u engrossed us well in this story.👍🏼 thanks for PM..

Nice update
Mahira told them that she has no money for pay. Their convo was nice. She beared too much bc of her aunty & useless son of her aunty. Waiting for story to unfold. Thanks for pm

awesome update
pls cont. soon n
thnx for pm

oi shru...Mystery Thriller wohoo amazing update!!
Update kab hoga madam??Tayar hai to submit krdo lage hathou Curiosity Kam hogi!!

thanks girl u r rocking!!