AZMA FF-Ishq da Ruthba Chap 9New note pg76

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milinda.shreyz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: ifians

Arey kichu bokka khabena.. u just write the way u feel comfortable and convinced... cause i think before the readers, the writer have to be satisfied with her works, and then she can give her 100% to any story...so tension nio na... just lekho..😆

lok er history boi khullei usually ghum pay ar ami golpo r moddhe history dhukacchi ! no wonder, reader eto kom !😆

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milinda.shreyz

@milinda.shreyz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: heartbroken1
nice !

awesome!

thanks for pm!

thank u !!😃

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BabyHimavari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz
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lok er history boi khullei usually ghum pay ar ami golpo r moddhe history dhukacchi ! no wonder, reader eto kom !😆

Hain eta satti katha je besirbhag loker history phoboa ache..😆... amaro chilo upto 10th..🤣... bue seta sudhu exam deoar samay... historical story and novel kintu amar khoob fav... 😳...saradindu bandopadhayer historical stories and novels amar one of the fav... 😛...I just love his narrative style in every novels and stories..
BTW... saw today's eps?!😛

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GitaIyer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Thanks for clearing the Adil Shah angle.

Re read the chapter and loved the suspense you left us hanging with.

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milinda.shreyz

@milinda.shreyz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Kruti baisa !
it looks so good in diff font ! and I have followed ur suggestions too about stanza gaps. thank u so so much !

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milinda.shreyz

@milinda.shreyz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: GitaIyer
Thanks for clearing the Adil Shah angle.
Re read the chapter and loved the suspense you left us hanging with.

thank u Gita ! my head is so full of thoughts about the plot, I cant eat or sleep.

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PurpleCrayon

@PurpleCrayon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Baisa!

Your story has me hooked! The very fact that it is based on real historical events has me very excited!

I love the opening where you mention Akbar and the scheming and plotting of Adil shah. Thank you for the brief history pointers, they have me all the more intrigued😃

I goggled ecls... yeah that word 😆 Learning something new every day. Thank you!

Aur yeh kya? The two men simply disappeared leaving poor Mahira behind? Why do the villagers think she's a witch all of a sudden? The story has wonderful amounts of spookiness and intrigue. I wonder what kind of reception is in store for her. Are they going to chain her up and try to stone her? 😲I cannot wait to see how our hero makes his entry. Perhaps to rescue her?

Looking forward to more of this story VERY eagerly!

Lots of LOVE

PS:Off to see the show now.

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milinda.shreyz

@milinda.shreyz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

that part I know baisa, u r extremely intrigued !!😆
you googled to learn about the actual facts ! bless u darling !
thank u for ur suggestions and fine editing job. i will acknowledge your hardworks on my post officially.