CID Story: The Innocent Robbers

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Abena Motianim

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Posted: 10 years ago

This is not so much an investigative story as an idea that came into my head when I was watching Abhijeet Trapped (3^rd July 2015 episode). It was around the time Abhijeet was being beaten and the team entered to save him. I just never liked that idea and this story is an adaptation more along the lines of something I would like to have watched, but in a completely different plot. I apologize in advance if it appears slightly rushed or if there are any loopholes. That was not at all planned, but for some reason it just keeps happening even after spending a few weeks trying to fix it.

Disclaimer: Imagine! A Shreya story with no murders or deaths! Yep this one is special. 😉 No murders, no deaths, no dead bodies. Nothing. Instead we have 3 innocent robbers, a disguise, a beating, and a surprise.

Edited by CT_Shreya - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Samyajita

@Samyajita

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Posted: 10 years ago

Excellent story Shreya Di 👏

In that episode I didn't like the idea of Abhijeet Sir being saved by the team...He himself is capable of fighting for himself

I really liked how Abhi Sir managed everything in your story 😊

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@ANGELICEYES

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Posted: 10 years ago

Well executed plot... I enjoyed the story... Simplicity at its best... I wish FW would show something like this instead of that crap...

Faisal gave camera to the robbers...why? Microphone theek hai but what will the blinds do with a camera?

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Heema Somani

@heemasomani

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Posted: 10 years ago

Amazing update

like the way u made abhijeet do everything

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Abena Motianim

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES
Well executed plot... I enjoyed the story... Simplicity at its best... I wish FW would show something like this instead of that crap...
Faisal gave camera to the robbers...why? Microphone theek hai but what will the blinds do with a camera?

No, no. He put a camera in their shirt. So he could see everything going on and direct them through the microphone. 😉

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@ANGELICEYES

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: CT_Shreya

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">No, no. He put a camera in their shirt. So he could see everything going on and direct them through the microphone.😉</font>

Oh yeah.. Dimag me nahi aya tab 😆

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Rifah

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Posted: 10 years ago

Loved the story ❤️

Abhijeet centric episode ho toh aisa hi hona chahiye😃😃

Robbery, then Abhijeet's plan and the finishing...everything was splendid⭐️👏

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 10 years ago

Ummm, SHERYU, might be My Feedback will not give U any Good Feeling even to Ur fans too so Apologies in Advance...😊

Honestly, SHERYU is Completely MISSING in that Story...

I knew U treated it Differently but that Flair Missing was giving a HOLLOW effect...😭😭

from the Beginning part, I feel I m Watching AANKHEIN Movie Starr-er Big B, Akshay Kumar, Arjun Rampal, Paresha Rawal and Sushmita Sen...🤔🤔

the whole BLIND Ppl Robbery Stuff was Similar to that...🤓

i really Find the Story in Complete Hurry...🤔

The Twist which really comes Spectacular was ABHIJEET Sir Arrest...👏👏

yes, thats the Point really Classy...⭐️⭐️

His Inclusion was also without any Reason...

either His Informer was Good in Disguise...😉👏

I really Enjoyed that RANG BIRANGA RESTAURANT...😆😆

Abhijeet Sir Card slipped at Bank was also Unbelievable act, I know U make it so Police Arrested them but I think Police nay bhi itni Kacchi Goliyaan nahi kheli hoti Yaar...

CID does not check out Backgrounds of those Blinds...😲😲

why Police till CID not arrived at Bank, Stayed there with Culprit/Robber as Suspect although not Sending Him to Police Jeep with Hand Cuffs...😕😕

Did Abhijeet Sir Wiped His Disguise at Bank...😕😕

if Faisal was there at Every Bank Robbery as being a Customer, why Team did not Marked even Police did not mentioned that a man having Similar Features found in Every Robbery Spot...😕😕

Did, Faisal also Present at Every Place in Different Disguise...😲😲

the Second Point gives really Spark is that INTERROGATION session with Blinds...👏👏

its really Awesomely Done...⭐️⭐️

yes, its Little Acceptable, No Not Robbing through Blinds, but on Regular bases as I think in Banks, there must be Changed Some Counters, any Inclusion of any Interior kinda thing/Water Dispenser etc...🤔🤔

was there No Scanner or Detector on Bank Entrance as Blinds entering there with Microphones and Cameras...😕😲

the Skipping of One Camera for Shoot is another Good Point...👏👏

that Swift Kick was another Twinkle of Story...⭐️⭐️

I feel that U must added some More Fight Sequence too...😉😉

baaqi, OK tha... 😊

Thank You so much...😳😳

again so Sorry Boss...😊😊

Edited by gadhadada - 10 years ago

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Abena Motianim

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Posted: 10 years ago

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^ Sach boloon toh thank you. Kyun ki I was waiting for someone to say all this. Mere ko khud aapni story achi nahi lagi. Maine toh sirf isli post ki kyun ki main thak gayi thi usse thik karte karte. 😆

Aakhen wala part toh mujhe bhi laga. Lekin main woh blind robbers wala part chorna hi nahi chahti thi.

Sach boloon toh CP ko dekhne ke baad kabhi kabhi lagta hai ke police ne kachi goliyaan kheli hain. Unhone kitni baar dikhaya hai ke kaise police kisi case ko mess-up kar dete hain aur phir wohi case Crime Branch ke paas jaata hai aur tab kuch thik hota hai.

No, no. Faisal wasn't there as customer. But woh bhar khada reh kar sab cheezon pe nazar rakhta tha. Ab kaun kisi sadak pe khade insaan ko dekhega.

Main FW ka fight sequence dekh dekh kar thak gayi hoon. No more fighting. 😉

And thank you again. 🤗

Edited by CT_Shreya - 10 years ago