Dancing Hearts(ASHNITA FIC) Chapter 2 updaed on pg 3

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BOY'S P.O.V.


There she was,the one who made my heart skip a beat everytime I saw her.

Some said they were attracted to her, for some it was friendship with her that mattered.

Being a shy one I never looked any girl with lovey-dovey eyes. I was always a step ir two away from them, but this girl always makes me want to get close to her. Damn !! I know how hard it is to control my heart.

We are friends but I know what my heart has in store is more than friendship but kya?????

GIRL'S P.O.V.


Everybody called us a great couple. N that is true. We make awesome pair, great couple n most romantic duo on stage. But that romance is till stage only. In real we are 'Just Friends', that is for him I guess. For my part even I don't know? I was always flattered by boys,they used to get attracted to me but I was never intrested in any of them.

Though I have many friends but he is someone special. But what about him. For him I'm just his friend. Well...


THIRD P.O.V.

These two idiots. What to do of them? Huh... now I guess will they ever get togther or will they need a Cupid????

Stay tuned to know more...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely one
Unique too
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm
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Brilliant start
Lobed the different POVs👏👏

Update soon😳
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WOw!!!
lovely start
plz continue soon...😳😳
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Very nice.. Waiting for your next update 😳
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awesome one...
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awesome start
eagerly waiting
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Originally posted by: vrinda65

Vil update by sunday

Yeah do update.. Me waiting eagerly 😃
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Originally posted by: ..Kimi..

Yeah do update.. Me waiting eagerly 😃


ya i jst meed to write d end
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AND THE JOURNEY BEGINS...



"Welcome to amul Dance Indaia Dance season-5." Roared the anchor, Jai Banushali's voice.

"Today is the main event day i.e., after days of auditions we are standing here with the top 15 dancers of India. So lets welcome Grandmaster Mithun da. And now its time to introduce our teams -Mudassar ki Mandali. Gaiti k Gangsters n Punit k Panthers ."

And like this the show continued with the performances n finally it was time for duo performance.

"Lets welcome in stage Ashish n Proneeta from Punit K Panthers."

And the song started ,and with it started the begining of something new.

Hoo...
Sun saathiya maahiya
Barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan
Rang jaaun, rang rang jaaun ri, haari main

Tujhpe main jhar jhar jhar jaaun
Hoon piya bas teri main
Ho chhu le toh khari main
(Toh khari main khari main...)

Ho.. sun saathiya maahiya
Barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan

Main ret si, boond ka zariya tu
Paa ke tujhe bheeg jaaun re
Main ret si, boond ka zariya tu
Paa ke tujhe bheeg jaaun ri

Tar jaaun tar tar jaaun
Dariya ye tar jaaun jee
Ishq ye paake main tera
Nikhar jaaun ri...

Piya bas teri main
Ho.. chhu le toh khari main
toh khari main khari main...

Ho.. sun saathiya maahiya
Barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan
(I am not going into details as I feel everybody remembers their act. N ya m introducing a new section in this story that is masters n team will tell how much fun n difficulties they came through while preparing the act. Sort of bloopers/behind the scene)

Jai-" wow what a performance."

Master Gaiti-"are u both sure u r performing together for the first time?" She questioned.

"Yes", nodded the duo.

Master Gaiti-"I must say you both were beautiful. You were complementing each other... perfectly fitting the frame together... n ur lines n lifts everything was just so beautiful. I must say K.I.L.L.E.R. killer performance"

Ashish n pronita were bloomibg with happiness.

Jai-"master mudassar"

Master mudassar-"bole toh ekdum bawal tha ... aag laga di stage pe... the main part is your chemistry... u both were dancing like one soul. Luvd it..."

Jai-"master puneet"

Master Puneet-" I am shocked. Ye tum dono hi ho na... I mean dada ye dono ko jab main rehearsals mei bolte bolte thak jata tha romance la ek dusre ki aankho mei dkho... hold her like this but... Mujhe toh bahot acha laga finally you got it in urselves."

Jai-"Grand Master"

Dada-"ye kya master Puneet sahi keh rhe hai?"

Pronita passed the mic to Ashish.

Ashish-"Grand Master vo ummm it is for the first time I am dancing with a girl.(I am keeping Ashish like a bit of shy kinda guy.)"

G.M-" ab kya bole KYA BAAT KYA BAAT KYA BAAT"




AUTHOR'S NOTE:-

Guys I know it was not up to the mark but I needed to start the show. In next update i vil give u some ASHNEETA scenes.

N plz pray that Ashiah comes back today warna mera ye fic likhne ka mood half ho jayega :(.

PRECAP:-

ASHNEETA IN REHEARSALS...

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