akdha os~the marriage proposal~

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Today is a very busy and important day for jodha's family.they have fix a groom for jodha by a proposal.today is the day they are going to meet each other for the FIRST time.now her family members are eagerly waiting for their would be in-law's arrivel. after sometime they arrived and greeted to eachother.now time for the future husband and wife to meet each other for the first time.jodha's mother went to her room and came with her.she greeted to everyone.
"so mr.humayun..this is my elder daughter jodha singh.."said jodha's father to HIS family.then he turned to jodha and said "and jodha..this is mr and mrs.humayun mohemed and their son JALAL..Mr.JALAL MOHEMED..he is the owner of JUD privet limited..and.."from here he started to introduse jalal to jodha.but jodha is in her own world.on the other hand jalal too didn't pay any attention to their disscusion.because he too lost in his own world looking at jodha who is lost in her thoughts.he couldn't take his eyes away from her.both jodha and jalal came out from their worlds hearing their parents.
"jalal beta..we talked about lot of things but you two didn't utter any word na..go and talk with eachother..it will be help you to know about each other.."said hamida.both jodha and jalal nodded their head to and went to the garden.they didn't utter any word.jodha followed jalal silently.after came to the garden jodha looked around and assured that anyone can't see them.then she grabed his hand pulled him toward her with a smirk.he anoyingly looked at her and then looked away from her.she lovingly looked at him and turned his face toward her and encirceled her hands around his neck.then he looked other side.she smiled at his antics and she too moved her face toward his.but he didn't looked at her.she pulled him more closer and kissed his cheeks and lovingly asked "still angry..?"then he looked at her and again looked away cutely nodding his head to say yes.she chukeld at him and slowly moved her lips toward his and softly kissed them.after few minutes she broke the kiss and murmured with a shy smile "now? "he said nothing but the coner of his nouth quirked up.then she knew his answer.her smile widened..she quickly hug him tightly saying "i love you soo much baby..".only she knew how she spent this past three days without seeing him,without talking with him,even without any sms from him.she cried,sent sms,called but he didn't responed.beacase he was angry with her.he too very hardly spent thease days.he hug her back and kissed her cheek while she resting her head on his shoulder and hit her fist on his chest muttering
"idiot..if you do this to me again..I'll kill you.."she hugged him more tightly hiding her face in his chest.he could feel her hot tears through his shirt,pinching his heart.he slowly broke the hug and looked at her.her head is lawered and trail of tears are constantly trickled down from her swollen eyes.he lovingly cupped her face and wiped tears from her eyes saiying
"Arre baba..don't cry..see,i don't angry with you..see.."
Then her eyes met with him.
"You are soo bad jalal..you didn't even call me or sent me a sms.."she complained poutingly and again weeped.he couldn't take his eyes away from her cute face.her cheeks,lips are crimson due to the cry.he lovingly stared at her in a smirking manner.she noticed his smirked and again complained while choaking.
"See..even now..you..you don't care about m.me.."hearing her second complain he came out to the real world and chuckeled at her childish.
"Dekhana..now he's laugh at me.."she innocently said poutingly.he couldn't hold himself anymore.encircling his strong arm around her waist he took her to his embrace moving his lips toward hers.their soft lips touched together taking them to an other world.she put her hands around his neck pulling him more to her body while enjoying and respodingvto the kiss.after few minutes they broke the kiss.
"Who said that i laugh at you..hmm.."he muttered againts to her lips sending shivers down her spine.he brushed his nose with her tightening the embrace more.
"You laugh at me..few minutes ago.."she poutingly murmured almost complaining while playing with his collar.he mischiviouely smiled hearing her another complain.leaning his forehead agains to her's he said
"I just chuckled at your cuteness darling..you know na,how much i love your red cheeks when you are blush,angry or cry hmm.."hearing his words her eyes lawerd because of shyness and it refelected from her shy smile.he gave a peck on her pink lips and a mischiviouse smile while a shy smile playing on her lips.
"By the way..atleast You had to answer my call jalal.."she said narrowing her eyes.then she slowly lawered them and said
"Only i know know,how i passed those days,without even hearing your voice.."all the while he lovingly gazing at her.he moved his one hand toward her head and caressed it lovingly said"same here sweetheart..only i had for a peace,the updates given by your sister about you.."her eyes lited up after hear his words.she knew that he'll care about her even he's mad at her.it increased her immence love for him more and more.she and her jalal studied at the same school and they confessed their love for eachother when they are 17 years old.its has been years but nobody know about their relationship other than few close friend of jalal and her sister.
she rested her head on his chest.
"Jalal.."she called him.
"Hmm.."he murmured palying with her ring which is gifted by him on one of her b'day.
"Will you tell to our parents about our relationship.."
He lawered his head to look at her and said
"no need for that baby..whatever they know about us,there is no problem.."he pused for a minute and mischiviousely smile with her."somehow,you are going to be my mrs.mohemad..i.e my lovely wife..that's all we want na.."he asked making blush to the core.


Hey guys🤗I'm here with a new crazy os🤣
Hope you like it..😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very cute os dear😊
Cunning couple hiding their relationship since Years😆
Thanks for the pm!!
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Beautiful and lovely OS Savindi
Their both hiding their relation. But luckily they will become one coz the proposal marriage of their parents. 😳
And JoJa act innocent in front their parents 😆
Continue with other story dear.. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely os savindi
So they already knew each other :-) :-)
Didn't their parents know about them
Why was jallu angry on Jo ??
Chalo Jo ne mana Hi liya:-) :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely n cute os dear.so their love marraige is made an arranged marraige. but why was jalal angry???? Anyways loved ur new work n keep writing more...
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Really really cuteee... Loved this all lovey dovey JOJA...
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hi...
superb os...
I did nt expect that they knw each other before only...
it was a lovely twist...
ur os was cute ...
thanks for pm...
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Originally posted by: erning_w

Beautiful and lovely OS Savindi

Their both hiding their relation. But luckily they will become one coz the proposal marriage of their parents.😳
And JoJa act innocent in front their parents😆
Continue with other story dear..😊

thank you so much for this lovely comment dear🤗and yeah..will update other stories too.. 😳

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