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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss-Appy

Jaaasss ! 🤗
Such a cute update from such a cute person ! mwah ! ❤️
It was so sweet !
Zoya sach much ki actress hai 😆 her plan and all, she's less of an angel and more of a cute devil 😆
Punctured her own tyres then sent the driver home but Asad's bechari ! 😉 'Bano, voh bechari nahi hai !' *Asad's voice* 😆
Lekin uski bhi gaadi kharab ho gayi an then baarish ! ❤️
Loved the small romantic moment *sigh* ❤️
Thn Asad's protectiveness... Mujhe bhi ek aisa Asad chahiye ! 😭

Anyways, awesome update ! ❤️

Love u Sweetheart ! 🤗 mwah ! 😳

Love u Janna 🤗 kithe gum hai
college khul gaye kya...I miss u
& I m happy u liked d updt😃 aue hehe teko bhi tera AAK mil jayega😉
Hugs🤗
Edited by jas91 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Haila Hellooo my lovely readers & frnds

Yaad hun na main d disappeared writer😆😆
Hope U all r well😃
Well i m back 2day 4 d updt🥳

Frankly this was ready since 8 days actually😳 after lot of struggle initially😆 i managed 2 finish it but after that day weather was bad at my place than Affu's Bday kept all us busy but i was gonna updt this Monday or Tuesday i guess😕 & when i came 2 res here 4 updt all d spammer gang was so busy in chatting/spamming that they didn't give a damn 2 give me a chance 2 do that.😆 Infact kisi ne mera comnt tak serious nahi liya😲 were so busy in ignoring that & quoting each other's comnt😒. So i got upset ki kisi ko fiqr hi nahi hai & left saying that.😈 but after 2 days i felt ki jinhe wait hai unke liye updt hona chahiye but after ressing my net & weather thought 2 play wid me again😆 & than came my nephews Bday. SO all of u should b happy ki itni musibaton ke baad akir kaar yeh updt deliver hone ja raha hai🤣. I guess last on this thread.

After explaining my side of d story i also want 2 rqst 1 thing 2 spammers. Ki spamming se i have no problem jinni ji chahe karo tumhara apna thread hai but when i ask u guys ki mujhe res karne do 4 updt tab toh shanti rakh liya karo atleast😔😳 dekho na ho gya 1 aur week late.😆 Nxt time plz take my rqsts seriously😳


Thank u so much dear readers 4 lovely response u gave 2 d last updt ur love & support means a lot 2 me. So thank u all.🤗 & han hugs 2 spammers as well 😆😆

& now lets go 2 d updt on nxt post😃 finally🤣🤣

Edited by jas91 - 9 years ago
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Chapter- 5


Sun rose welcoming another new day. People were ready for another busy day so were occupants of the lovely Khan Mansion. Wajid their long working trusted house help was busy in supervising & helping in cleaning. Gaffur elder man of the house was reading newspaper in the garden. Dilshaad & Raziya were busy in kitchen preparing breakfast when Nikhat entered ...
-Good morning Ammis. She said joyly making both of them to look at her.
-Good morning beta. Both ladies wished while Nikhat came hugged & kissed both on their cheeks.
-Wow Ammi kya kya bna hai breakfast main. She said lifting lids of dishes.
-Aaj sabki pasand ka khana bna hai tum bas jake bahar wait karo main breakfast lagwa deti hun. Sab log aate hi honge. Yah Allah! Maine dono bachiyon ko toh uthaya hi nahi. Raziya suddenly remembered hitting her forehead with her palm .
-Aap chinta mat kijiye Ammi woh dono uth gayi hain, Ready hokar bas aati hi hongi.
-Chalo shukar hai warna dono pehli hi din late ho jateen...Nikhat tum Wajid ko bhejo breakfast lagwane ke liye sab ho hi gya hai. Bas maine Asad ke liye jaldi se Juice aur toast bna deti hun. Dilshaad asked her.
-Choti Ammi aapne itna kuch bnaya hai ab jayiye bahar table set kijiye...Bhaijaan ke liye breakfast main bna deti hun. Nikhat said smilingly & pushed both of them to go out.
-Are par...
-Jayiye! Nikhat said sternly with an serious face.
-Chaliye chaliye baaji warna subah subah aapki beti hume daant degi. Dilshaad giggled teasing Nikhat
-Han chalo hum table set kar dete hain. Raziya chukled.
They left leaving Nikhat smiling at them & than she got busy in her work.


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Dilshaad came towards dining table while Raziya called Wajid & asked to bring cutleries from Kitchen. When he brought it they got busy in setting the table & Raziya send him to call Gaffur for breakfast.
-Good morning ammi. Najma & humeira wished their mothers hugging them from the back.
-Good morning mera bacha. Both Dilshaad & Raziya smiled patting their cheek.
Than both girls wished & hugged each other's mothers.
-Kyaa baat hai aaj dono chidiyan badi jaldi tyaar ho gayin. Raziya teased them.
-Kya ammi hum toh roj jaldi ready hote hain. Humi pouted & again hugged Dilshad as if complaining about her mother to her choti ammi.
-Han Baji humeri bachiyan ab badi ho gayi hain aur samjhdaar bhi... ab unhen kambal khinch ke uthane ki zaroorat nahi padti. She started to stop Raziya but ended up teasing them.
-Ammi aap bhi. Najma sulked seeing both their mothers teaming up against them.
-Are kya baat hai kyun meri bachiyan subah subah pareshaan hain. Gaffur came towards dining table.
-Abbu...Humi smiled seeing him & along with Najma moved to hug & wish him. Good morning abbu/bade abbu. Both greeted chirpily hugging him.
-Good morning beta. He hugged & kissed both their heads while they were still in his arms. Aaj toh meri bachiyan boht pyaari lag rahin hain.
-Thank you Abbu/bade abbu.
-Par dekhiye na Abbu ammi aur choti ammi hume tease kar rahi hain jaise ki ham roj time se nahi uthte. Humi complained.
-Koi baat nahi beta ammi hain aapki mzaak hi toh kar rahi hain. Aao chalo nashta karte hain. He smartly said dissolving the issue in hand & moved taking both of them towards the table.
-Good morning abbu. Nikhat wished Gaffur coming out of the kitchen carrying breakfast along with Wajid.
-Good morning beta... Nikhat hamne aapse kitni dafa kaha hai beta aap kitchen main jyada kaam nahi karengi. Beta hum chahte hain aap apni padhai pe dhyaan den yeh sab toh aap baad main bhi kar sakti hain. Nikah ke baad aapko hi aapka ghar sambhalna hoga. He first scolded & than tried to make her understand.
-Aur humne bhi aapse kaha hai hume aap sabke liye khana bnana acha lagta hai. Aur aaj humne yeh sab nahi bnaya. Bhaijaan ke alawa sabka nashta Ammi aur choti ammi ne bnaya hai. Aur Nikah jab hoga tab dekhenge aap baar baar humse iske baare main mat kaha kijiye na. She pouted in the end as she doesn't like the topic of her Nikah.
-Aap sach main boht Ziddi hain par theek hai baba nahi karenge khush. He surrendered with a smile. Chalo btao aaj kya special bna hai boht achi khushboo aa rahi hai. Saying so he tried to lift her mood.
-Aap khud hi dekh lijiyega abbu. She smiled & than turned to Raziya & Dilshaad & asked. Ammi bhaijaan nahi aaye abhi tak.
-Han Dilshaad Asad kahan hai aaj subah jogging jate bhi nahi dekha usse. Gaffur enquired.
-Woh bhaisaheb darasal Asad kal raat der se lauta tha mujhe lagta hai thak gya hoga isliye der tak so raha hoga main abhi dekh kar aati hun. She half turned
-Aachuuu...Achuuu...
All looked towards the corridor from where Asad was coming dressed formally for office. His nose was red and eyes looked so tired as if he has cried whole night.
-Asad... Dilshaad said quickly moving towards him. Asad yeh kya huya beta? Kya haal bna rakha hai! Tumhari tabiyat theek nahi thi toh pehle kyun nahi btaya. Ya Allah! Tum bhi na Asad tumhari yeh aadat mujhe bilkul pasand nahi jab bhi bimar hote ho kissi ko kuch nahi btate. She scolded him for being careless. Ab bologe bhi kaise hua yeh haal?
-Dilshaad tum bolne dogi tab kuch bolega na woh. Raziya said sarcastically.
-Thanks Badi Ammi. He smiled at Raziya for stopping Dilshaad's scolding. Both his Ammi's were like that only whenever Dilshaad used to scold Asad Raziya used to divert it so smartly that Asad was saved for sometime by his dearest Ammi's lectures.
Looking back at Dilshaad he started explaining.
-Ammi woh actually...Kal raat main jab office se laut raha tha toh dekha ki Miss Farooqui...I mean Zoya ki gadi khrab ho gayi thi aur woh bahar akeli khadi thi toh maine unhen lift de di par raste main meri gaadi khraab ho gayi aur...He paused & decides to skip the unusual which happened. Aur phir gadi theek karte waqt baarish ho gayi aur hum bheeg gaye. Par woh toh acha hua hume wahan ke paas ke farmhose main ek boht ache insaan mil gaye unhone hume andar aane diya baarish rukne tak par geele kapdon ki wajah se shayad thand lag gayi. He ended the story making a sick baby face which he knew will save him from his ammi's daant as well as will melt her heart.
And true to his prediction exactly that happened.
-Awe mera bacha. She awed hugging him. Main khush hun beta ke tumne uski help ki Par Asad tumhe pta hai na tumhe kitni jaldi sardi lag jati hai phir kya zaroorat thi baarish main bheegne ki.
-Dilshaad abhi toh Asad ne kaha na ki gaadi theek karte waqt dono bheeg gaye tum phir bhi wahi sawal puch rahi ho. Raziya butted again shaking her head.
- Asad beta tumne dawai li?
-Nahi Aami aap hi toh kehti hain khali pet dawayi nahi lete. He said cutely.
Girls giggled seeing the scene between their Bhaijaan & Dilshaad & the way Raziya was making remarks on Dilshaad's over possessiveness.
-Asad aao idhar aao yahan betho aur juice piyo tab tak main tumhare liye kadha bnakar laati hun dekhna yeh sardi jhat se theek ho jayegi. Raziya took his arm & make him sit on his chair in dining table.
-What Kadha. No ways Badi ammi ...achu...main koi kadha wadha nahi peene wala. He said adamantly making disgusting face.
-Pee lijiye na Bhaijaan afterall health comes first. Kyun Tamatar. Humi jumped in the conversation to tease him.
-Bilkul lady finger. Najma said with a smirk.
-Chup betho tum dono. Bhaijaan aapko kadha nahi pina toh mat pijiye main kuch aur bna dun aapke liye. Nikhat asked Asad keeping hand on his shoulder.
-Nahi Nikhat its ok tab tak main late ho jayunga.
-Late ho jaunga matlab. Tum kahin nahi ja rahe ho. Apni halat dekhi hai Asad aur ek din office nahi jaunge toh koi pahaad nahi tootne wala. Dilshaad said angrily.
-Ammi I have to go. Badi Ammi... He looked at Raziya for help.
-Meri taraf mat dekho Asad is baat main main Dilshaad ke saath hun. Office jazoori hai par sehat sabse pehle hai. Isliye aaj toh tum office bilkul nahi jaoge.
-Par..
-Asad Dilshaad aur Raziya sahi keh rahe hain kam-s-kam ek din ke liye toh tum chuti le hi sakte ho. Aaj ka din ache se aaraam karo kal tak behtar mehsoos karoge.
-Jee Bade abbu. Asad said sadly. He had to agree when all elders of home were on same side.
Everyone started having breakfast with Raziya & Dilshaad taking care of only Asad as if he was a two year old baby.
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Same way on other part of the city Zoya also woke up with a running nose, body ace & mild fever. Her maid Merry took complete care giving her food & medicine from time to time. It helped Zoya with fever but she still had cold & weakness. She asked her PR to call at jewellery store which she has to launch today & apologise from her behalf. Sometime later she got call from her Aapi Jiju who get worried after knowing about her health & decided to come back but Zoya somehow convinced them to stay & enjoy their Trip as they don't often get off time. After lot of persuasion to look after herself & several warning to take rest they finally agreed. To lift their mode Zoya gave them a long shopping list & teased a bit which worked. After talking some more Zoya cut the call.
She was sitting in her bed with her head resting on headrest. Cutting the call she took out few tissues from the tissue box placed on the side of her thighs & blew into it & threw it in the waste bin lying on the side of the bed. She took a long breadth with her mouth & closed her eyes resting her head on headrest. More than being ill she hates the cold which was really annoying not letting her rest peacefully.
As she closed her eyes events from last night started playing in front of her . How she told an innocent lie to spend some time with Asad. And her Allah Miyan helped her by showering rain at the right time. Than when Asad caught her to save from falling down that was the most beautiful moment she shared with him. They were so close for the first time & she liked it. The effect he had on her she never experienced in her entire life. She felt alive & she think she will never be like before. Asad's touch spoiled her for her entire life.
Than when the watchman Bheem Singh disturbed their romantic moment she was upset but when they spend time with him he came out to be a very nice kind man. They had a good time with him. Zoya got to know some more sides of Asad. Whether it's the way he covered her in a protective manner or how he was concerned about Bheem Singh for he leaves alone there & the area was also not vastly populated. She also got to know he has this sweet fun side when all three of them got involved in some casual talk or when she was taking pic with the old man & Asad was being adorably cute that she want to pull his cheek fondly.
When they left Asad noticed her shivering form & offered his coat which he had left in the car. That was second time in the night that Zoya was awed at his mannerism & pure heartedness. Young boys usually try to tease or flirt with girls in such situations. But Asad even didn't raised his eyes knowing she was drenched & her dress was sticking to her form. All through the journey he kept asking if she was fine. When they reached her home she insisted many times to come inside & change but he politely refused. She has to let him go after thanking him few more times but she was happy. She has spent a lot of time with him getting to know more of him & created some beautiful memories which she will always cherish.
She opened her eyes smiling a radiant smile remembering all that. She looked at her right where his coat was lying nicely on her coach. She got up moving her comforter aside and picked up the coat. She brushed the back of her fingers on its surface feeling the softness. Hugging it closely to her chest she came back on her bed & lied down on her back. Taking its sleeve in her hand she brushed it on her face & giggled babyishly. She was in her happy world & doesn't want to be disturbed but she suddenly felt something inside the breast pocket of the coat. She frowned & got up to check it. As soon as she took the thing out of the pocket her eyes & mouth opened wide...




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That's it dearies... Thanx 4 reading. Hope u like it😃

Socho kya ho sakta hai aage😆😆😉

Thanx 4 ur likes & comnts on previous part.😊

I know this time i took a little too much of time. Trust me i was also trying 2 updt but my mind was stuck & i was not understanding what & how 2 write. But still i managed to write this down. U might feel it's not my 100% but 4 a change i m happy wid it😆😆 afterall i wrote it after a lot of struggle. So plz b kind wid me this time. I know many have been patiently waiting but if some r upset than I m sorry.😳
Plz forgive errors if any.
Do hit like & leave ur reviews i really appreciate it. Negative positive criticism is welcome😊
Silent readers u can just leave a like tumse itna mil jaye kaafi hai.😊
Nxt updt don't know when😆





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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi frnds

This is d PM id
if u want PM 4 this story u have 2 buddy this acc. only
Plz don't send reqsts 2 my real id Jas91
& plz leave ur reviews.
Edited by asyafeelz - 9 years ago
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Waise toh sabne res kar hi liya hai itne din se😆 but still I m doing it from my end😊
Res 4 my IF family
Heenu mumma, Pinku papa, Ashi, Aloo, Affu, Yumi,
& also
Amu, Goti, Adu, Srash, Rada, Jules, Janna(Bano), Sam di, Chandu darling,Trish, Aishu(Aishwa), Aish(Aishwarya), Mayur, Khush, Nikki, Binnu, Shailu, Sum, Sue, Tehs,
Hope I didn't left any1 aage se kar dungi pkka😳
Edited by asyafeelz - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mineee
unres

pocket mai kya tha????


lovely update

lots of family moments

enjoyed it

aachuuu

kassshhh mjhy bhi flu hojaye 😳

as u know i'm katti

so no long comments 😕

update soon
Edited by ashiii333 - 9 years ago
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Res 4 Aarzo Affu bf choto arshu Srash mayur n meri bestiee ke sabhi regular reader k liye ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing chapter.
Loved it.
Asad's family is so cute n they r so close to each other.
Asya both r suffering from cold due to getting drenched in the rain.
Asad's truly a perfect gentleman.
There were not asya scenes in this chapter but the family moments were awesome.
Curious what zoya found in asad's coat pocket.
Continue soon.
Love u.
Lots of hugs.
🤗🤗🤗
Edited by Kabhibloom - 9 years ago
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Hey jas🤗 Awesome n lovely update yaar👍🏼 asad's is really crazy n lovely dil aur raziya bonding is cute asad bhi itna cute hai😳 aur hamari zoya ko bhi zukaam hogaya😆 aur ab uss cota main kya hai plz yaar jaldi update kar na can't wait😳
Edited by shailu123 - 9 years ago
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Jasss!!!
Kidhar hai tu?
M here.🤗
Lekin update kidhar hai?

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