Raga SS : Yeh moh moh ke dhaage, chapter 4 ,page 9 Completed ! - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi
Interesting. Raaga married to eachother hiding from their family and did rajmata came to know about this and sending rana away from gayathri😉



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb ... Really interesting concept...
Thanks..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ambbiha

Hi

Interesting. Raaga married to eachother hiding from their family and did rajmata came to know about this and sending rana away from gayathri😉





na na , she didnt know anything , 😃
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thanks a tone :) im glad you liked it !
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hi guys, i've written the next part hope you enjoy it , please leave your beautiful feedback and likes 😃😃


Chapter 2

Gayartri arrived at her house . Nobody was awake .

G. ( in her mind ) hai bhagwan ka shukra hai , koi jaaga nahi abhi tak.

And she ran to her room , where she found geeta sleeping instead of her.

G. Are uth ! Subha ho gayi bhaag !

And geeta woke up .

Geeta. Haan ! Shaadi ho gayi ? Sab theek tha ? Kisi ne dekha toh nahi ?

G. Sab theek hua aur kisi nahi dekha , ab ti bhaag !( she said taking her blanket off her )

And geeta went from there .gayatri went for a shower and came out . She took a red box and took off her mangalsutra , keeping it in the box .

G. Yeh mein tab hi pehenu gi jab hamare ghar wale humein manzoor karenge .

And with wet eyes , she placed the box in her cupboard.

Ramu was out in the market because raj mata sent him there . He had ranas letter with him. He saw geeta in the market .

R. Geeta ji , ye khat aap gayatri bitiya ko dedije ga , sahab ne diya hai .

G. Thik hai .

And geeta gave the letter to gayatri when she came to meet her at lunch . Gayatri went to her room after the lunch and closed the door . She opemed the letter and read it . Her eyes became wet after reading it . But she didnt let a tear drop.

G. Agar hum abhi royenge , toh... Toh ... Aane wali Mushkilon ka samna kaise karungi .

And she wiped her wet eyes .

Days passed , but only she knew how much of pain she had to go through , without hearing a news of her husband. She used to wear and sleep with his coat , the one he wore when he saved her life and gave it to her. Half of her nights were sleepless , and the rest , she could fall asleep only because she was extremely tired .

After two weeks ...

At night , gayatri was standing near her window slightly resting her head on tje side of the window, lost in ranajis thoughts : Where was he , was he alright, etc. She was wearing a blue saree amd floral blouse . In the room , only two lamps were switched on . Suddenly it started to rain . Heavily . Even the power cut and gayatri ran to light the candles .

Jaanam Dekh Lo Mit Gayi Dooriyan

Main Yahaan Hoon, Yahaan Hoon, Yahaan Hoon, Yahaan..

When she lit one long candle she saw Rana ji , their faces were iluminated by the candle light .

Jaanam Dekh Lo Mit Gayi Dooriyan

Main Yahaan Hoon, Yahaan Hoon, Yahaan Hoon, Yahaan

Kaisi Sarhadein, Kaisi Majbooriyan

Main Yahaan Hoon, Yahaan Hoon, Yahaan Hoon... Yahaan

Gayatri forwarded her hand to touch his face but he wasnt there. and gayatri looked around , nonody was there .

g. ( in her mind ) woh yaha kaise hongein...

Tum Chhupa Na Sakogi Main Woh Raaz Hoon

Tum Bhula Na Sakogi Woh Andaaz Hoon

Gunjtaa Hoon Jo Dil Mein To Hairaan Ho Kyon

Main Tumhare Hi Dil Ki To Aawaz Hoon

She proceeded to light the candles which were on a small cupboard... and when she was lightening them... few strands of her curly hair fell on her face ... and ranaji tucked them behind her ear, and placed a kiss on her cheek . when gayatri turned to see him , he wasnt there .

g. ( to herself ) rana ji yaha nahi hain gayatri , rana ji yaha nahi hain . !

Sun Sako To Suno Dhadkanon Ki Zaban

Main Yahaan Hoon, Yahaan Hoon,

Yahaan Hoon, Yahaan

Kaisi Sarhadein, Kaisi Majbooriyaan

Main Yahaan Hoon, Yahaan Hoon,

Yahaan Hoon, Yahaan

Lightening the candles , hot wax which was melting from the candle fell on her hand

g. auch!!!

and rana ji jeld her hand gently , softly blowing in her hand and removing that wax from there . After that , he softly kissed the burnt skin where that wax had fallen . Those lips felt like someone put ice on her burnt skin.

but she realized , he wasnt there. And removed that wax from her hand .

Main Hi Main Ab Tumhaare Khayaalon Mein Hoon

Main Javaabon Mein Hoon, Main Sawalon Mein Hoon

g. yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai ? main... main... jala toh moom batiyaan rahi hoon , par khayaaloon mein unki khoyi huyi hoon. Unki itni yaad mujhe kabhi nahi aayi , aaj , pata nahu kyu , unje dekhne ko dil machal raha hai .

Main Tumhaare Har Ek Khwaab Mein Hoon Basaa

Main Tumhaari Nazar Ke Ujaalon Mein Hoon

she goes to her bed and sits there .

g.( with tears in her eyes ) rana ji ... aap .. ap itna samein kyu laga raha rahein hai ... ( and she sees him sitting right in front of her )

Rana wipes her tears but they werent stopping . So , he leaned forward and kissed the tears on her face , reaching her eyes , and finally , kisses each one of her eyes.

Dekhti Ho Mujhe Dekhti Ho Jahaan

Main Yahaan Hoon, Yahaan Hoon, Yahaan Hoon, Yahaan

Jaanam Dekh Lo ... Yahaan Hoon... Yahaan

Main Yahaan Hoon, Yahaan Hoon, Yahaan Hoon, Yahaan

But she notices , no one was there.

Rama ji reached the gaav at night . But didnt go to his palace , but rana stopped at gayatris house. All these days he had passed thinking of her, he was desperately wanting to meet her . Rana ji entered gayatris house main gate. The rain slowed down a bit .

r. ( In his mind ) aa toh gaya , par ab main gayatri ko kaise dhoonduga ? kaunsa kamra hoga uska ? darvaze se andar ja nahi sakta ..

Everybody was sleeping and there was no light in their rooms . Rana noticed this . H e decided check around the haveli .

R.( In his mind ) par ...agay woh so rahi hai toh ?

Gayatri walked towards the wimdow to enjoy the rainy night . And stood in front of it .

Then rana ji reached the back side of the haveli , where he saw gayatri , a slight smile drew on his face . And he shouted ( but not that loud )

R. Gayatri ! gayatri !

Gayatri looked down , she saw him,a wide smile appeared on her face but

g. nahi ! yeh sirf aur sirf mera khayaal hai , woh yaha nahi hai !

And she turned around to go away ...

R . ( , surprised )gayatri ! gayatri hum yahan hsi ! gayatri !

And gayatri realized that he was there for real .

And turned back.

G . aap yahan kya kar rahe hain ?

R . humein tumse milna tha

G acha ... aap darwaaze ki taraf jayiye ..mai darwaaza khol ti hoon.

r. thik hai ...

Precap: gayatri and ranaji in gayatris room , raga romance , and bhabis taunts gayatri .



Edited by heartbroken1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow..
So beautiful n romantic.
Gayu missing Rana ji a lot.
The song sequence was really romantic.
The letter of Ranaji was touching.
Gayu imagining abt Rana ji everywhere.
Yay..
Finally,Ranaji comes and meets Gayatri.
Precap is awesome..
Continue sooonish..
Do pm me...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
gonna be steamy steamy baby 🤣
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very well written dear...

like there is a song "dooriyaan bhi hai zaroori"

kaash update would be longer or my reading speed is too good 🤣

update soon
Edited by babydolll - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...anika...

Wow..
So beautiful n romantic.
Gayu missing Rana ji a lot.
The song sequence was really romantic.
The letter of Ranaji was touching.
Gayu imagining abt Rana ji everywhere.
Yay..
Finally,Ranaji comes and meets Gayatri.
Precap is awesome..
Continue sooonish..
Do pm me...



thanks a tone!!!!

sure , youre added to my pm list !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: babydolll

gonna be steamy steamy baby 🤣

.
very well written dear...

like there is a song "dooriyaan bhi hai zaroori"

kaash update would be longer or my reading speed is too good 🤣

update soon



thanksa lot!!!! yeh that song is really good!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Awesome
Beautifully written
Waiting for RaGa romance

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