Raga SS : Yeh moh moh ke dhaage, chapter 4 ,page 9 Completed !

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Hi guys , i hope you enjoy this , its my first raga ss . The credit of the concept goes to M.V.Kohli007 for the wonderful concept . So hope you guys enjoy it and please leave your precious feedback and likes.

Yeh moh moh ke dhaage


Chapter 1


It was 8 o clock in the morning and Ranaji and Gayatri came out of the mandir , where just few minutes back Ranaji tied the knot with gayatri as rana ji asked her to marry him and she agreed , so they married without informing their parents , as the raj mata was strongly against him marrying an ordinary girl and gayatris parents didnt liked raj matas behaviour towards ordinary people . So Geeta ( gayatris very dear friend ) and Ramu ( ranajis servant , but very close to him , just like a family member ) made a pandit agree to do their marrige in the morning before anyone was awake , and helped gayatri sneak out of her house to go to the mandir and marry rana. Nobody , nobody knew about this marriage , except the bride and groom and Geeta and Ramu.

Rana ji sat on the mandirs stair and pulled gayatris hand , so she sat down as well.

R. gayatri , hum ne toh shaadi kar li , par , ab , hamare parivaar ko kaun samjhayega ?

G. rana ji , aap bahut chinta kar rahe hai , aap bilkul na pareshaan hoye , main hoon na , main sab thik kar dungi .

R. kaise ?

G. bharosa hai na mujh par ?

r. haan

G. toh bas

And she rested her head on his shoulder , and hugged him sideways . He put his hand on gayatris waist , and caressed her face. Then caressing her hair :

R. main bahut jald , sabke saamne tumse shaadi karunga aur tumhe mere ghar le jaunga gayatri , main tumhare bina nahi jee sakta .

G. rana ji , humse bhi aap ke bina jiya nahi jayega , ram kare , hum jald hi ek saath rahe . Rana ji , ab thodi hi der mein maa uth jayegi , main ghar jaati hoon, aap khud ka khayal rakhna ...

And she gets up ,and starts to go but rana ji grabs her hand , and takes her in an embrace , she was shocked initially , but , recipocrated the hug caressing his back . Still locked in his arms...

G. rana ji , mujhe jana hai

R. gayatri , mat jao na ... aaj .. aaj toh hamair shaadi huyi hai ...

G. rana ji , jaungi nahi toh aungi kaise ?

And she broke the hug ... and left from there .

At the palace , when rana arrived , the raj mata was furious.

RM. ranaji ! aap subhe subhe kaha gaye the?

R. hum , wo hum , mandir gaye the !

RM. itni jaldi? aur aap toh kabhi mandir jaate nahi ? toh ab kyu?

R. jaatein hai , bas , aapko itna samein kaha ki aap humari baatein sune , ki hum kaha jate hain , aapko toh keval vyapaar ki hi chinta hoti hai .. aur usi baare mein aap humse baat karte hain.

RM. yeh baatein chodtein hai, aapko , paas wale gaav mein jaana hai, Hastanpur , woh hastanpur aur kaulpur ke raste mein kuch samasya aa gayi hai , toh tumhe woh dekhna , kuch 2 ya 3 hafte mein kaam pura ho jayega . Aap tayaar ho jayye. abhi.

R. abhi ? !!

RM. haan abhi !

Rana ji gets really shocked and goes to his room , he finds ramu there

R. ramu kaka , kaka , mein kya karu , aj meri shaadi hui hai , aur meri aaj mujhe , kaam ki vajah se hastanpur jana hai , main , aise bina bataye , kaise jau?

K. beta , aap fikr na kijiye , aap khat likiye jaldi se bitiya ko , aur hum ponchadenge unhe !

R. kaka , kaka dhanyevaad !

And he writes a letter to gayatri :

Gayatri,

gayatri, hume maaf karna , hume aaj subhe ko jana pad raha hai hastanpur gaav mein , raj mata ka aadesh hain, kuch zaruri kaam se . Hum 2 - 3 haftoon mein aa jayenge , aap hamari chinta na karna . Aap hamare dil mein ho , hum besabri se wapas aane ka intezaar kar rahe hai , ram jaane hum aap ke bina kaise 2 3 hafte nikalenge , bina aapki koi khabar mile . Khudka dhyaan rakhna .

Aap ke Rana ji

And he gave the letter to ramu kaka.

K. tum chinta mat karo bete , main ye us tak jald hi paunchvaunga .

r. kaka, dhanyevaad , hum chalte hai , khudka khayaal rakhna.

and he left from there.


Precap. gayatris wait ( song sequence ) , after 2 weeks , rana arrives at night at gayartis house.

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Index

Chapter 1 : page 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4 ( Last chapter )
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thanks a lot 1 im glad you liked it!
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haye mai mar java


suerb one


love this part

OMG they are married and no one knows abt it.

he goes away from her for work

and in precap :song sequence😃


really thx for penning down




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youre most welcome, in fact , thanks a lot !
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So so beautiful. 😊
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I am getting addicted to your writing 😃
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Wowww it is beautiful
Waiting for more
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thanks a lot!!!!!! im glad you liked it
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raga loves each other but rajmata dont like her or her familly because they r not belong to royal family so they married secretly but now he have to for 2 weeks hope gayatri will get ranas letter

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