Raga SS : Yeh moh moh ke dhaage, chapter 4 ,page 9 Completed ! - Page 5

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thanks a lot!!!!!! im really happy you liked t!
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hi guys, sorry for updating late , i hope you enjoy this part , and please leave your precious feedback and likes. 😃😃😃😃

Chapter 3

And gayatri , came out of the room , with a candle holder and went towards the door and opened it. Rana ji was standing there .

G . ( whispering ) rana ji jaldi andar aaiye !

And she grabs his forearm and pulls him inside and takes him in her room with the light given by one candle . And she then locks her room.

And when she turns around , she sees him , adjusting his wet transparented ( due to the rain ) white shirt . She could easily see his well toned torso and muscular arms through his wet shirt .


Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara
Dheemi Si Dhadkan Ko Badne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum... Hum Tum...
Tum... Hum Tum...


Rana started unbottening his shirt and gayatri looked down and started walking towards her cupboard . Rana ji took off his wet shirt and kept it on the bed . Gayatri walked towards him anf forwarded her hand with the towel to him . He touched her hand intentionally when he was going to take towel which made gayatri feel really nervous as she felt his cold hands on her warm hands .

Aankhon mein humko utharne do zara
Baahon mein humko pighalne do zara
Lamho ki guzarish hai yeh paas aa jaaye
Hum... hum tum...
Tum... hum tum...


Rana took the towel and started patting his chest dry. Then his arms . And kept the towel on her bed . Gayatri was looking at him lovingly , she noticed that his hair was wet and took the from the bed and started shaking his hair softly to dry them with the towel . Rana was lost in his wifes beautiful big light brown eyes.


Salvatein kahin karwatein kahin
Phel jaaye kajal bhi tera
Nazron mein ho guzar tha hua
Khwabon ka koi khafila




She noticed him staring at her and blushed . She turned around to leave but rana grabbed her forearm. And pulled her towards him , she collided wiith his bare chest , and looked down unable to look at him .


Jismo ko ruho ko jale do zara
Sharmo khaya ko machalne do zara
Lamho ki guzarish hai yeh paas aa jaaye
Hum... hum tum...
Tum... hum tum...

Saanson ko saanson mein dalne do zara



He took the towel from her hands and kept it on the bed with his hand still on her forearm . Keeping it , he lookedat her ... Few hair locks were bothering gayatri as they were covering her face . He took his hand towards her face and tucked them behind her ear and placed his hand on her neck ... In the nape of her neck ...which sent shivers to gayatri and ... And then... He took his other hand on the other side of her neck. He leaned forward...and kissed her cheek .. Gayatri closed her eyes ... Due to his closeness . He pulled back to look at her , her closed eyes , her blush were making her look even more beautiful .


Choolon badan magar iss tarah
Jaisa surila saaz ho
Hum hai re chupe tere zulf mein
Kholo ke raat azaad ho


He slowly and gently kissed each one of her eyes . Gayatri then, slowly opened her eyes , and saw ranaji so close to her , their noses touched and she looked at his eyes , which were looking at her eyes ...lovingly.


Aanchal ko seene se dhalne do zara
Shabnam ki boondein phisalne do zara
Lamho ki guzarish hai yeh paas aa jaaye
Hum... hum tum...
Tum... hum tum...


It was raining again, and something fell due to the wind and broke their eyelock . And gayatri came to her senses


Saanson ko saanson mein dalne do zara
Bahon mein humko pighalne do zara
Lamho ki guzarish hai yeh paas aa jaaye
Hum... hum tum ...
Tum... hum tum ...


G. Are rana ji ... Aap ... Is waqt yahan ... Kisine dekh liya na toh bahut bada bhavaal ho jayega ... Yeh jo badal bahar baras rahe hain na ...woh mere upar barsenge wo bhi iss ghar ke andar

R. Ghar ke andar ? Par kyun ?

G. ( gayatri thought of her bhabhis taunts and that they taunt her all the time and she didnt want ranaji to know it ) ... Aap. ...aap bas ... Jaiye yahan se ...baarish bhi ruk gayi hai

R. Par

G. Rana ji . .. Main nahi chahte hai ki koi apko yahan mere saath dekhe... . Hum apse kal milenge ... Subah ko . Mandir mein .

R. Thik hai

Rana ji started walking towards the door ,

G. Are ranaji .. Andhera hai ,mein chalti hoon apke saath .

And she goes with him . When they were walking , rana ji was stealing glances of gayatri . They reached the door , rana ji steps out of the door and looks back

R. Khud ka khayal rakhna gayatri

G. Aap bhi apna khayal rakhna.

And leaves .

The next day... In the morning ...

Gayatri was getting ready in front of the mirror , when her bhabis came into her room

B1. itni jaldi subah subah kyun tayaar ho rahi hai yeh ?

B2. Pata nahi ... Iski baatein toh hum sab ke samaj se bahar hai ... Yeh toh panau...

G. Woh... Meri saree thodi maeli ho gayi hai . Ap bahar jaiye main aajaungi ...

And they leave , gayatri changes her saree and wears a yellow saree with pink blouse And comes to the hall , where her parents and her friend geeta were as well as her bhabis ,

Geeta. Gayatri tu a gayi. ... Hum ko...

G. Mandir jana tha ! Hena .. Pravachan sunne ... Chal chalte hai...! Ma babuji hum na pravachan sunne ja rahe hain mandir , main ja sakti hoon kya ?

Ma. Haan ja na , geeta aur tum jao mandir.

Geeta got a shock , as she tough that they were going to library and then she said mandir , And gayatri and geeta leave from there ., but gayatris bhabis werent in the mood to believe her and after all left the hall ,

Only bhabhis were there

B1. Yeh mandir mein pravschan sunne toh nahi ja rahi hai ... Toh akhir kya karne ja rahi hai ????

B2. Chale ...

B1. Chal !

Precap. Gayatris bhabis follow her , rana waiting for gayatri at the mandir ,bhabis see gayatri, rana gayatri spend time together . gayatri falls in the river , rana saves her , , parents question gayatri .

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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
aaj mai scenes mai itna kho gayi thi ki maine song bhi ignore kiya... 😆


aur hamseha ki tarah tumne mera fav song use kiya😉


fantastic update...

love raga so much in this update


you portray them very much.

and now bhabhi's follows gaytri😡


love you 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Woww beautiful

Ur update always has one romantic scene. I love that 😛

Waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007

aaj mai scenes mai itna kho gayi thi ki maine song bhi ignore kiya... 😆


aur hamseha ki tarah tumne mera fav song use kiya😉


fantastic update...

love raga so much in this update


you portray them very much.

and now bhabhi's follows gaytri😡


love you 🤗



thank you so very much 😃😃😃😃

im sooo glad that its your favourite song 😃😃😃

haan abhi bhabhi n1 and bhabi n2 will follow our gayitri


thanka lot 😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sam_DDzfan

Woww beautiful

Ur update always has one romantic scene. I love that 😛

Waiting for next



thanks a lot 😃😃😃😃

@ bold wow😃😃😃 you noticed that ⭐️⭐️ yes !!! i love to write romantic scenes of them. ⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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These two bhabhis can't they mind there own business?? 😡
Always behind Gayatri 😡
Loved Gayatri and Rana part
Loved the update
Thanks for PM





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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asheley

These two bhabhis can't they mind there own business?? 😡

Always behind Gayatri 😡
Loved Gayatri and Rana part
Loved the update
Thanks for PM







thanks a lot😃😃😃⭐️⭐️⭐️

im really happy you liked it 😃😃😃

thanks so much😃😃


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful updts,cont soon.
Waiting 4 nxt part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update loved Gayatri and Rana moments Gayatri could not believe he is for real but she makes him go promising she will meet him the next day at the mandir

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