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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
@krazykaju First of all...
Welcome
Welcome! Welcome! Welcome!
Thank you 😊
Once again Welcome! 😆😆
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You too, Keep Smiling! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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>>>>>On special request from Magar1992<<<<<
(Sorry for posting it late. Frankly speaking I almost forgot you asked for another OS on Kabeer and Ananya. Today I noticed, so thought of writing one. I hope you'll forgive me for being late.)😔

*** KABEER AND ANANYA --- THE WAIT ***





When it's a promise that the wait isn't for a day or two, it's for eternity...

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PART 1

Getting tired of waiting for Miss Kashyap at a restaurant, Kabeer stares at his watch, then
shakes his head. "Sorry Sir main late ho gayi. Wo kya hai na..." starts Ananya as she
reaches the table where Kabeer is sitting. But habitual to punctuality, Kabeer starts scolding
her without letting her to explain herself. "Miss Kashyap maine apko kaha tha yahan aath (8) baje milne ko. Main khud yahan aath baje pohonch gaya, aur apka wait kar raha hoon aur aap ab ayi hain? Have you seen the time?"

Bringing her mobile in front of her to check the time, she clicks the lock button, to wake the mobile from sleep mode. "It's 8:15!" exclaims Ananya. Kabeer scowls, "Haan to that's what I am saying".Getting irritated but checking her tone she says "Main sirf 15 minutes late aayi hun, to iss mein konsi badi baat ho gayi?" "Miss Kashyap..." this time she breaks his line in between "Kal jab aap apni girlfriend ke saath baat kar rahe the wo bhi tab jab main apke saath thi, humein kaam se jana tha and you were taking the world's time as if humara mission hi tha apki girlfriend se milna. Tab kon punctuality dikha raha tha aur kon nahi?" says Ananya, angrily. Her anger succeeds in bringing a smile on his face. "Sit down" he says calmly. Rolling her eyes, she accepts doing the same. "Wo meri girlfriend nahi hai Miss Kashyap" he says as matter of his explaination. "Aap to rehne dijiye" she says, indicating that she is not ready to listen any of his explanation.

"So kahan hain wo jinse humein milna hai? Aapne mujhe koi information nahi di ki hum kis topic pe baat karenge, etc." "Life!" "Life?" "Love!" "Love?" she whispers. Bending towards her and placing his arms on the table, crossing his hands he says "Hmmm... Mujhe to iss barey mein hi baat karni hai". Giving him a questioning look she says "Aapko baat karni hai? Matlab aapko kuch bataya nahi gaya? I mean Khalid Sir ne kuch kaha nahi ki humein kis bare mein baat karna hoga?" "Khalid kyu kahega kuch? Ye meri life hai main jo marzi puchun jisse marzi!"

Noticing his tone she asks hesitantly "Sir aaj kya apne drink ki hai?" she stares at him, trying to gauge the shift in his mood, which can go either direction. Not able to handle his laugh any more, he bursts out into a laugh. "Nahi to! Balki main to plan kar raha tha ki kisi ki company miley to kar lun". They both stare at each other. Feeling utterly shy, she chooses to break the stare first. Looking to her left, she exhales. Relaxing a little, now that she is unable to look at his scrutinizing look but fully aware that his eyes are still on her. "Theek se date ke liye puchna bhi nahi aata!" she whispers to herself. "Hmmm...Kuch kaha aapne Miss Kashyap?" he asks smiling, fully aware what she mumbled. "Nahi! Nahi to!" she answers him confidently, looking into his eyes.

"Date!" his word succeeds in skipping a beat of her heart and results in transfixing her eyes to his eyes. Unable to utter a word after listening to the word 'DATE' from his voice, she raises an eyebrow, indicating him to explain. Grabbing her indication Kabeer also raises his eyebrow.

Edited by RNpoint1857 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Wow yaar awsome, nice and perfect
don't be sorry its ok
update soon and thank you for writing on my requst
Edited by Magar1992 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Oh wow!! You portray the characters so well ...
Did Kabir mean a real date ?

Please please update soon. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@Magar1992 Thanks for understanding. 😊 Hope you enjoyed reading it.😳

@Sokool27 Thank you 😊 Let's see how the story proceeds.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi
the os though it was dedicated to someone else but i must say its really nice
so kabir is waiting for ms kashyap who as per her habit got late as usual and this makes our EIC anger oh hoo
So Mr kabir wants to discuss about life and love hmmm not bad mr sharma
i love the hesitation Kabir and Annaya both are feeling
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@ronojoy_ria Firstly, thank you for liking. Secondly your ohooo made me to laugh. 😆
Edited by Sterolinelover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sterolinelover

@ronojoy_ria Firstly, thank you for liking. Secondly your ohooo made me to laugh. 😆

hehe plz write one for me too😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
@ronojoy_ria Hahaha! Alright so I am basically turning to a 'aladin ka chirag' now! 😆 Alright so you want another on KAYA or you want any other combo?🤓
Edited by Sterolinelover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sterolinelover

@ronojoy_ria Hahaha! Alright so I am basically turning to a 'aladin ka chirag' now! 😆 Alright so you want another on KAYA or you want any other combo?🤓

hehe off course kaya dear 😉btw y u write with my username u know my name u can use it 😆😉

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