Few OS and FF: ***KABEER AND ANANYA---THE WAIT*** (COMPLETED) - Page 5

Created

Last reply

Replies

439

Views

106.1k

Users

32

Likes

1k

Frequent Posters

RNpoint1857 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Sokool27

😊😊

Awesome as usual😃
I always feel : oh no yeh khatam bhi ho gaya😔

Hmm waiting for the next part


hahaha! lolz... sorry for short updates. 😉 But at least you enjoy them, I am glad. 😃
Magar1992 thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#42
superb yaar
pls next time thoda sa long update 😊
why u didn't send pm????
RNpoint1857 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#43
@Magar1992 I remembered sending PM but I didn't send one because I knew it's a small update n I thought by the time you all will discover the update yourself I might have added a bit more 😉 But I guess you guys are too quick in observing an update. 😆😆
Edited by Sterolinelover - 10 years ago
ronojoy_ria thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#44
hi
the up is really good
so kabir being too smart change the topic smartly
plz cont soon and pm me
RNpoint1857 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the up is really good
so kabir being too smart change the topic smartly
plz cont soon and pm me


Thank you Ria. 😊 Yes indeed our Kabeer is too smart!😆😳
Magar1992 thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Yaar story ache hogi to observe ho he jata hai
RNpoint1857 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Magar1992

Yaar story ache hogi to observe ho he jata hai


Ohh your words! 😳 Thank you so much for the appreciation.😳Henceforth whenever I update, even a little I'll PM. 😊
Magar1992 thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Sterolinelover



Ohh your words!😳Thank you so much for the appreciation.😳Henceforth whenever I update, even a little I'll PM.😊



👍🏼
-Prinky- thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Awe...this is so cute...!!!!
loved Kabir's words...
yeh dil mange more...plz continue soon...
RNpoint1857 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#50
PART 3

"Kyun karun baat main aapse han? Office mein aap mujhse aise baat karte hain jaise pata nahi main kis janam ki dushman hun aapki. Meri galti kya hai? Bus yeh ki main aapko jawab deti hoon, jo actually koi aur apko nahi deta. Kyunki apke hisaab se sub apki respect karte hain, jo apke hisaab se main nahi karti, right?" she waits for him to answer.


"Continue Miss Kashyap" he says in his answer. His answer adds into her anger. "Continue? How..." unable to find words, she shows him hand, indicating 'enough'. "Main ja rahi hoon!" she says and starts to pick up her bag. "Yaar yeh ajeeb hai, ab jab main tumhe mauka de raha hoon baat karne ka, tab bhi tum satisfied nahi ho! Aur ye 'main ja rahi hoon' 'main ja rahi hoon' kya laga rakha hai?" "To aur kya karun main? Theek se baat karna to aapko aata nahi hai" "To aur kya kar raha hoon main?", he raises his voice. She stares at him, enlarging her already large eyes out of anger. "Oh to aapke language mein 'chilane' ko theek se baat karna kehte hain?" she asks him , looking into his eyes, waiting for him to reply. "Main..." he starts and then realizes that everyone is staring them. Crossing her arms on the table she says "Aap?". Shaking his head and looking at her he says "kuch nahi. Tumhe chalna hai?" Getting irritated she says "Yaar aap bhi ajeeb ho! Ab jab main baith gayi hoon to puch rahe ho, tumhe jana hai?"

As she completes her line, a guy passes by their table and collides with Kabeer by mistake. Then he starts shouting at Kabeer "Ajeeb ho yaar, theek se baithna nahi aata? Pata nahi kahan kahan se chaley aate hain". Getting angry, Ananya gets up and shouts at him "Ajeeb yein nahi ajeeb aap hain. Agar dekh kar chalna nahi aata to aap aise aatey kyun hain kahin bhi? Kisi aur ko blame karne se pehle khud ko dekh lijiye aap. Jante hain ye kon hain? Ye KKN ke editor-in-chief hai aur apko to..." as she was about to shout more, Kabeer tries to calm her down, coming in front of her, he asks her to calm down. "Ananya it's okay koi baat nahi" "Kaise koi baat nahi? Khud chalna nahi aata aur keh rahein hain ki apki galti hai. Arey ab ap aise kya dekh rahe hain, chaliye mafi mangiye inn se. Aur han agar apne mana kia na maafi mangne se to main pehle hi bata deti hun ye editor-in-chief hain to main ek reporter
hoon. Abhi camera mein record kar lungi apko aur aap par achi khasi ek story bana dungi samjhe aap?" says Ananya, fully determined. Then addressing to the man "Arey aap khade kyun hain? Chaliye maafi mangiye". "I am sorry Sir" the man says politely to Kabeer. Then turning to Ananya he apologizes "I am sorry ma'am" "It's okay, aap please jayiye" says Kabeer on behalf of both of them. Then the man leaves.



"Tum bhi na Ananya ajeeb ho" says Kabeer, after she takes her seat. "Main ajeeb hoon?Ajeeb aap hain. Office mein to aap mujhe humesha dantne ka bahana dhundhte rehte hain.Ek bhi mauka nahi chodte mujhe dantne ka. Aur ab jab aapko iss aadmi ko dantna chahiye tha aapne kuch nahi kaha!" "Par Ananya yeh itni badi baat nahi thi ki main kuch kahun".

"Ohhh... uss din jab barish ho rahi thi, aur ghar pohonch kar maine apko call nahi kia tha, jabki aapne Trisha, Richa aur mujhe kaha tha ki call karna ghar pohonch kar, apne mujhe call karke itna sunaya itna sunaya jaise meri zimmedari to meri parivaar walon ne aapko saupi hui hai. Jaise main koi apki mamuli employ nahi balki aapki girl..." she stops, realizing she has said more than she should. Having said this, she feels utterly shy.



"Girl...? Kya girl...? Tum kuch keh rahi thi Ananya. Bolo na" he says, giving her a naughty smile. When she doesn't reply, he smiles and changes the topic. "Jo bhi ho Ananya, ye itni badi baat nahi thi ki main kuch kahun". Ananya rolls her eyes after taking a deep breath, relived that he has changed the topic. "Acha theek hai, ab hum kuch order karein agar apki ijazzat hoi to?" asks Kabeer sweetly, smiling. She looks at him, creasing her brows then staring at him, she relaxes and smiles. Kabeer smiles back at her.


As they wait for the food to arrive, they chat. "Tumne kal jo dress pehna tha office mein, uska cut thoda zada deep hai ussey mat pehna karo", says Kabeer casually. Raising an eyebrow, and completely stunned by Kabeer's remark she says, smiling "Aap ko yeh bhi yaad hai ki kal maine kya pehna tha?" He answers casually "Han to?" "Nahi aise hi" saying this Ananya peeks at him, who is reading the menu just for time pass. "Kal main aapko achi nahi lag rahi thi?" she whispers. "Maine aisa kab kaha?" says Kabeer, after exhaling and giving his full attention to her.

Edited by Sterolinelover - 10 years ago

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".