Few OS and FF: ***KABEER AND ANANYA---THE WAIT*** (COMPLETED)

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: aalinaghosh
Sorry for the late reply... Busy in ofc..Both the parts are awesome.👏👏
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No problem about the late reply. Work is more important. 😊

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heartbroken1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

nice !!!!

beautiful one !!!

continue soonest !!!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

Nice update dear

Awe...what a way to stop her cry Mr. Sharma...

Loved it...

Continue soon

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Prinky-
Nice update dear
Awe...what a way to stop her cry Mr. Sharma...
Loved it...
Continue soon
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MR.SHARMA 😆😆😆 That made me to laugh. Thanks for your comment. 😃

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 10 years ago

#115

PART 7:

They get up to leave, feeling utterly drowsy, Ananya unconsciously collides with Kabeer.

"Sorry", she apologizes. "Mujhe restroom use karna hai, abhi aati hun" she says in her

drowsiness. As she turns and leaves, Kabeer realizes, she has unconsciously dropped her

left earring. Picking it up he manages to say "Ananya tumhara..." that he realizes, she has

already gone far away, to hear his voice. Seeing the earring Kabeer smiles, as a naughty idea comes into his head, then he looks up to where he could still see Ananya walking, moving towards the restroom. Shaking his head, smiling, he puts the earring into his jacket's pocket. As Ananya returns he says "chalein?" hoping she doesn't remember about her earring. And as if God was too much happy with him, Ananya didn't remember about her earring at all and says "ji", still sleepy. Smiling at his own secret joke, Kabeer, gestures her to move forth, in a very gentleman style.

As they get into the car, Ananya falls into a deep sleep. Kabeer concentrates on his driving, in between he gets a chance to bring out Ananya's earring from his pocket. Looking at it, he smiles and puts it back to it's place, before the traffic signal turns green.

As they reach her house, it was already 11 pm. Kabeer turns his head to find Ananya

sleeping next to her, calmly in his car. Smiling, he takes his hand to push the tendrils back from her face. But controlling his feelings, thinking he won't touch her while she is unconscious, he needs her permission first. He needs to know that she is comfortable on being touched by him. Although he knows the truth too well, but still he needs to listen it from her. To get the words from her. Then suddenly he remembers, that from tomorrow onward 'The Punishment Scene' will start and he won't be able to talk to her, even though it would kill him, but this is important. He wants to know how much she aches for him. How much she can endure his anger. How far can she go to change his mood. How much would she want him to start talking to her. Taking a deep breath, he whispers into her ear "Ananya ghar aa gya hai".

Edited by Sterolinelover - 9 years ago

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shinyshajil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Awesome 😆 do update soon!!! Loved it !!

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shinyshajil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Wow !! I ask for an update and I find that even before posting my reply... That's cool!!!

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: shinyshajil
Awesome 😆 do update soon!!! Loved it !!

Thank you dear. 😊

Edited by Sterolinelover - 10 years ago

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RNpoint1857

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Posted: 10 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: shinyshajil
Wow !! I ask for an update and I find that even before posting my reply... That's cool!!!

Hahaha yeah right actually I write in my diary first and when I find the update entertaining, I can't resist to share it with you all so I keep updating simultaneously. Even if the update is a small one. 😉😆 So in all you end up getting small updates from me, rather than a lengthy one. 😉