Lambi-Judai - SG/LKT FF Part 21 upd pg 6

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Introduction


For all those who are not very well versed with the story line so far...here goes:
In Shantiniketan, Mihir and Tulsi are still together, Tulsi had an accident and had a plast surgery. Karan and Tanya's marriage is on the rocks,and Bhoomi just came to know of all the truth about her and Nandini and now supports her.Manthan has tried to run over Nandini in blind rage of maternal love. KT and Ekalavya are married now, and Lakshya is left all alone. Nakul thought he loved Sanjhi and that she loved him, but is disappointed. Ganga and Saahil on the other hand, are gradually coming close to each other..and here is my first FF about them.


Chap : 1 - Mulakat ki shuruat

Kahani ab tak...

The story line so far is the same as what has happened to Saahil and Ganga in SN. Saahil is married to Tripti and Ganga never remarried, but became successful in her business. Now the story continues from the present…

Ab aage...

Ganga goes to meet Sahil to tell him that the meeting was cancelled and that she needed some other files now. KT sees her and asks her to go wait in Saahil's study. Ganga goes, in his study, she sees pictures of her and saahil in a corner and then pictures of lakshya and nakul as kids. Tears role down her cheeks. She hears footsteps and quickly wipes them off, but doesn't see who enters the room.

Saahil: Ganga, tum yahin?? Meeting itni jaldi kaise khatam ho gayi.

Ganga turns towards Saahil..

Ganga: Clients nehi asake aaj, isliye, cancel kar diya. Mujhe doosri files chahiye , kal ke meeting ke liye.(She tries to control the one drop of tear from not falling, but it rolls down)

S: Tum ro kyon rahi ho Ganga?

G: Aisi koi baat nehi hai Saahil, ank mein kuch gir gaya hai.

S: Ankh mein jab kuch girta hai to use nikal dena chahiye, warna dard badh jata hai.

G: Mujhe dard se koi fark nehi padta Saahil. Mujhe file do, mujhe jana hai.

S: Bees daal bahut hote hain, farak padne ke liye, Ganga. Mujhe dekho, mere dard ne, meri zindagi hi bhikher di, ek galti ne, na mujhe accha baap banne diya, na beta, (looks up at Ganga ) aur na hi accha pati. Mein to kahin ka nehi huin Ganga.

G: Tumhare paas to sab kuch hai Saahil..Ghar, Ma, bacche, aur yahin tak ki(with anger in her voice) patni bhi. Tumhein kis cheez ki kamin hai..(and her voice trails off..)

S: Isi baat ka to dukh hai Ganga,mere pass sab kuch hote hue bhi mein, itna akela huin.

Tripti walks in..

T: Accha hall mein sab ke samne nehi to, room mein chup chup ke milne lage? Saahil, do bacchoin ke baap hote huye bhi tumhein sharam nehi ati? Patni ke rahte hue, doosri aurat ke saat mil rahe ho?

Saahil is going to say something, but Ganga interrupts before him.Very calmly she looks at Tripti and with an evil smile tells,

G: doosri aurat kaun hai yeh to tum bhi acchi tarah janti ho Tripti.Aur tumhein to is baat ka bhi tazurba hai ki ek doosri aurat kya kar sakti hai..kyon sahi kaha na meine?

T: Ganga(shouts her name)!! (Looks disgustingly at Saahil and continues). Tum kuch kyon kahoge Saahil, tumhari zaban to kabhi thi hi nahi!! Par ek baat kaan khol kar sunlo Ganga, mein tum hare tarah nehi huin, ki koi bhi mu utake chale aye or mein apna pati use itni aasani se de doon!

G: Sahi kaha tumne Tripti, ek tum ho, ki doosroin ki barbadi mein khud abad hote ho, aur ek mein, kisiki abadi (looks at saahil, who shamefully looks down) ke liye, khud barbad ho gayi.

Tripti angrily leaves the room and slams the door on saahil's face.

Ganga completely breaks down and bursts into tears. She slowly sits down in the chair are cries..Saahil walks upto her and cant muster the courage to console her. He still slowly pulls up Ganga by her shoulder and with one hand on her shoulder, he lifts her face up. Big tears roll down Ganga's face, with the back of his palm, he wipes her tears off, and Ganga, not able to control anymore, hugs him, Saahil returns her embrace with a warm hug. Tears swell up in his eyes, but he controls. Both of them are thinking of the beautiful time they had together years ago, the time when they first met, to the saath phere they took…golden memories flashback, and Ganga suddenly realizing that she is hugging Saahil, break open the hug and moves towards the desk.There is a moment of silence between them, but there hearts were talking to each other…Saahil's mind was tracing back all the events before their break up and he turns his head in shame. Ganga pics up the picture of lakshya and Nakul from the desk and hugs them dearly. She sobs some more…saahil places his hands on her shoulder, she angrily shrugs them off and turns towards him.

G: Mein tumhara kya bigada tha Saahil, mere bachoin ko mujhse kyon alag kar diya tumne!!

S: Mein majboor tha Ganga, mujhe please maaf kar do..

G: Maaf? Tum maaf kar pate mujhse saahil agar mein tumhare bacchoin ko tumse zabardasti alag kar deti aur unhe yeh sikh deti ki unke pitaji unhe chod ke chale gaye??

Saahil ashamedly looks down. Ganga continues..

G: Mein tumhein kabhi maaf nehi karungi saahil, aur nahi Tripti ko. Yeh mera wada hai tumse Saahil, agar meine tripti ke mu se yeh baat Kabul nehi karwai, to mera naam bhi Ganga nehi hai!

S: Lekin Ganga…

G: lekin wekin kuch nehi Saahil, ab samay a gaya hai…hisab barabar karne ka.. Tumhari bewafayi ka, aur mere Mamta ke khoon ka..

And she storms out of the room, snatching the file from the desk. Outside, KT hears the conversation and is shocked…

(To be continued!!)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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PPl, i am new..so please leave your comments.. 😊
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Cont soon babe its really gud 😃
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Originally posted by: JatinzWife

Cont soon babe its really gud 😃


Thanks so much..I will continue soon....😊
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I agree!..I love this FF!..finally a Sahil-Ganga FF!
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same...its finally something diff. here 😳 ...continue soon!! 👏

-jhanvi
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Posted: 17 years ago
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excellet , it change to see ganga sahil ff in fanfic forum lol
anyway love it
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Will continue soon..thanks for all the support 😊 👍🏼
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Chap 2




Ganga is in her office, she is waiting for Nakul and Saahil to come to the meeting. She meets Sanjhi on the way to the conference room..ab aage..

G: Arey Sanjhi, kaisi ho tum? Kafi dinoin se dikhi nehi?
S: Wo mam, mein kuch kaam mein busy ho gayi thi, isliye. Ap meeting mein a rahi ho na.

From the corner of the office, Nakul enters and sees both S & G talking. He walks upto Ganga..

N: Meeting ke sare papers ready hai..Ma..Mam..(he corrects himself)
Ganga momentarily has a gleam of happiness in her eyes and then it vanishes as he finishes his sentence sternly with "Mam".

G: Tum mujhe office mein Ma kah sakte ho Nakul..
S: Nakul, mujhse naraz ho, Apni Ma par kyon jata rahe ho use? Kuch kahna hai to mujhse kaho na..
N: Hain Sanjhi, tumse hi kahunga. Door raho meri zindagi se, usse judi hui, kisi bhi shaksh se aur khas kar mujhse. Mere tumhara koi rishta nehi hai…aur na hi kabhi hoga!
S: Nakul…
G: Nakul, tum itni kadwi baatein kyon kar rahe ho beta? Aisa kya ho gaya?
N: Kaash apko malum hota ki apke bete ki zindagi mein kya hota hai aur kya nehi…ap ne bhi sirf jatay ki ap meri Ma hai, par kabhi bann nehi payi, oh, let me correct, ap to meri Ma hai hi nehi!!

And with that he storms out of the place, towards the conf room.
Ganga has tears in her eyes, Sanjhi notices this. She is also very upset. Sanjhi takes ganga to her cabin..

S: Mam..I am sorry, meri wajah se apko itna kuch sunna pada..
G: Nehi Sanjhi, nakul ne sach hi to kaha..meine hamesha jatay ki mein uski Ma huin, par shayad, mujhe bahut kuch karna chahiye tha..Bachpan se use kabhi ek acche pariwar ka pyar nehi mila..aur jab pata chala ki uska asli pariwar kaun hai, tab bahut der ho chuki thi…use kabhi pyar kaise karte hai, yeh to pata hi nehi chala..
(She looks up at Sanjhi..) Beta, mein tumhein apni beti manti huin..mujhse wada karo..

S: Mam..
G: Mujhse wada karo Sanjhi, ki, tum meri madad karogi, Nakul ko fir se, accha banana mein.
S: Yeh bhi koi poochne ki baat hai…mein apke saath huin..
Sanjhi then leaves the room..

Ganga, picks up nakul's photo and talks to it..
G: Mujhse sab ne mil kar dhokha diya Nakul, Pahle tere pitaji ne, fir garwaloin ne, aur ab meri kismet ne…tujhe pa kar bhi meine tujhe kho diya.. tu mera tha nehi, par meine kabhi yeh mahsoos nehi hone diya tujhe..fir aaj yeh kadwapan kyon.
Saahil walks in..Ganga wipes her tears and puts the picture back..

G: Saahil tum..
S: wo meeting mein sab tumhara intezaar kar rahe hain..
G: mein bhi bees saal se tumhara kar rahi huin…
S: Kya?
G: amm..wo kuch nehi…chalo
S: fir se bolo na Ganga, tumne kya kaha..
G: Saahil..tum mere manager ho..so, you do what you are said to..meeting ke liye late ho rahein hain..ab chalein.!

Saahil feels hurt and happy at the same time…gives ganga a smile,while Ganga turns her face away and leaves the room..

Ganga talks to herself:
G: Mujhe apne aap ko sambhalna ho ga…meine Saahil aur tripti ke beech nehi aa sakti..
And she leaves for the meeting..

In the conference room:
G: Good morning gentlemen..i am sorry, mujhe kuch kaam mein waqt lag gaya..

Client: koi nehi Madam..apke company ke saath kaam karne mein hama rahi fayeda hai..

G: Let me introduce you to my team.
Nakul – Is project ko lead kar raha hai.
Sanhi – She is taking care of all the PR issues
And Saahil – My, I mean, he is my financial manager, who is business ke sare financial issues sambhalte hain..

Clients: Hum ne apke bare mein bahut kuch suna hai Ms.Ganga. We are ready to do business with you. Apki kabiliyat par aur apke team par hamein pura bharosa hai.

G: Thank you , par ap log ek baar presentation to dekh lijiye..Sanjhi…

Nakul interrupts before that..
N: Gentlemen, yeh rahe sare documents ke copies, jo apko zaroorat padegi..here are all the proposal details.
He hands over the documents to the clients, who go through them, a hurt Sanjhi looks at Nakul and Nakul returns it with a smug glare of triump!

G: Ap log please continue ki jiye, mujhe ek aur meeting mein jana hai..it was a pleasure meeting you.
She bids them goodbye and leaves, Saahil leaves too..
S: Ganga…suno
G: peeche se tokne ki adapt nehi gayi tumhari abhi tak..
S: kya karuin Ganga, koi tokne ke liye mila hi nahi..
G: kuch kaam tha kya?
S: Hain, meine hamare lonavala project ke liye, ek plot dekha hai, tum kaho to hum chal kar dekh sakte hai..
G: mujhe kaafi kaam hai Saahil, tum chale jao
S: Mere khatir?
G: I don't mix business with my personal life Mr.Saahil Virani!

Saahil looks down hurt and leaves..
Gange thinks to herself..and does not see Lakshya standing by the door..

G: I am sorry Saahil, tum nehi jante, mein kitna jana chati thi tum hare saath..par halat se majboor huin mein..
And she stands there looking at Saahil's vanishing silhouette..

Lakshya had been listening to their conversation, and understood what was in her mind..and he pledges to bring them closer...

At the same time, SN mein, Tripti looks into some documents in Saahil's cupboard, and smiles to herself. She thinks, ab mujhe koi nehi rok sakta…what she does not notice is the small piece of paper that falls to the ground…

(To be Continued..)
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Friends, do leave your comments, suggestion..would encourage me to write the next part.. 😊 😊

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