Lambi-Judai - SG/LKT FF Part 21 upd pg 6 - Page 2

Nobody likes it ?? or is there no other Saahil Ganga fans here?? 😭 ..I feel sad and disappointed...

chap 3

In Shantiniketan..there is Ganesh Chaturthi celebrations going on…Everybody is enjoying, Manthan brings Nandini in, to the utter dismay of Tanya. There is aarti going on and garba is on too…ab agea..

Bhoomi looks on admiringly at Nandini , while Nandini takes blessings from Thakurji and Baa. Lakshya enters…and following right behind him is Ganga, dressed in a Red saree and looking as pretty as ever. Saahil moves towards the door..

S: Aao Ganga…Badi ma tumhare bare mein pooch rahi thi.
G: Tulsi Ma kahain hai?
And Saahil points towards where Tulsi, Baa and other elders are standing.
Ganga goes and touches Tulsi's feet and takes ashirwad from Thakurji and Baa as well.

Tulsi asks all the married couples to do pooja, when it's Saahil's turn, saahil and tripti do the pooja, and Mohini finds this opportunity to her use..and taunts Ganga

M: Arey Ganga..tum yahain kyon khadi ho..tumhein too wahan hona chahiye(pointing towards Saahil and Tripti)..arey, mein to bhool hi gayi..tum ab uski patni nehi ho…sorry.
G: Koi baat nehi hai Mohini, tum bhi Harsh ki patni ho, par kismet to dekho, tumhare pati ke rahte huye bhi tum akeli ho..and moves away from there.
Mohini mumbles to herself : Yeh ganga kuch zayada hi taz ho gayi hai..Tripti ko batana padega!

Ganga goes and stands beside lakshya, KT and Ekalavya are doing the pooja now..Lakshya looks sad and visualizes himself and KT..
G: Maat socho kya ho sakta tha…jo hai usi ko apna lo..
L: Ma..ap kah rahi hai yeh?
G: hain beta, takdeer aur kismet ka khel bahut hi anokha hai…jo hum chatein hain, wo kabhi nehi hota, aur agar hota bhi hai, to bhagwan use cheen lete hain.
L: Ap aj bhi nehi bhool paye jo apke saath bees saal pahle hua, fir , meri kahani ko to ek saal bhi nehi hua…mein kaise bhoola duin?

Nakul comes there and taps on Ganga's shoulder..
N: Ap yahain kyon ayi hai..kya ap nehi janti, meri Mom ko pasand nehi, apka yahain ana..
L: Nakul bhaiya, ap jinse baat kar rahein hain, wo meri Ma hai..aur tumhari bhi…
N: Nehi lakshya..yeh meri Ma nehi hai..
And nakul leaves..

G: Mujhe chalna chahiye…
S: Arey Ganga, itni jaldi kaise..khana kha kar to jao, aur fir pooja bhi khatam nehi hua hai…
L: hain Ma, abhi Garba phir se shuru hogi, apko bhi khelna hoga, mere saath..
G: lekin…
S: Lekin vekin kuch nehi, theek hi to kah raha hai Lakshya..

Everybody is playing garbha..Tripti stands with Tanya and Mohini.
Damini comes to them and asks them to join…Mohini joins Damnin but the other two don't answer her. Damini shrugs and leaves with Mohini.


Ganga is playing Garba too..and her garbha stick slips out of her and falls near Saahil..
Both saahil and Ganga bend down to pick it up at the same time, and they place their hands on each others.Ganga slowly looks up and so does Saahil..
Hand on hand, Ganga and Saahil talk through their eyes..

G: Pahle jab tumne haat thama tha to saat janmoin ka wada kiya tha..Saahil abb..??
S: wada to mein ne kiya tha Ganga, aaj bhi wo wada nibhana chata huin, mujhe ek aur mauka to do..
G: Zindagi mein ek hi baar pyaar aur shaadi hoti hai Saahil, meine dono tumhi se kiya tha..
S: Meri zindagi mein, tum nehi to kuch bhi nehi Ganga..wapas a jao..
G: Mein to kahin nehi Gayi thi..tumhi ne mujhe chod diya…

A tear drops from Saahil's eyes and falls on Ganga's hand, she comes back to reality and looks down at her hand..and takes her hand off saahil's and doesn't wipe the tear off it..She slowly stands up and so does Saahil..

G: sambhalo apne ap ko Saahil..tum toot gaye to mera kya hoga..
S: Ganga…
G: Aj tak meine sirf tumse nafrat hi kiya hai, par mein kya karuin saahil, tumne mujhe aur koi rasta hi nehi choda..
S: mujhe ek aur mouka to do Ganga…
G: Nehi Saahil, ab tumhari zindagi mein meri koi jagah nehi hai…jao..tumhara pariwar tumhara intezar kar raha hai…


And she leaves SN. Lakshya comes from behind Saahil and puts a hand on his shoulder..

L: Papa…
S: lakshya beta…wo..
L: kuch mat kahiye aap…
And with that Saahil leaves for his room..
He enters his study and looks at his and Ganga's photo and remembers his good times and what happened today and the song "Tu jo nehi hai to, kuch bhi nehi" plays in the background. Something near the bed catches his eyes..he goes and picks the paper up, but before he can see what it is, KT comes up..

KT: Chahu, sab Baa niche bula rahein hai..jaldi ayiye..
S: Accha…(he puts the paper on his desk) and leaves with KT..

The paper flies and falls on the ground, but this time, face up..and it's the cheque that Mihir had given to Saahil for his share of the house….


(To be continued)

:Ganga goes and stands beside lakshya, KT and Ekalavya are doing the pooja now..Lakshya looks sad and visualizes himself and KT.. "

abbe yaar, yahan pe bhi eku aagaya? 😆 lol...

so happy u have lakshya n kt now!!...sahil is soo sweet, so sad that ganga always has to go away from him w/ good intentions which always makes him even more sad... i hope my lakshuji brings them together!! 😳

Originally posted by: desigrl05

:Ganga goes and stands beside lakshya, KT and Ekalavya are doing the pooja now..Lakshya looks sad and visualizes himself and KT.. "

abbe yaar, yahan pe bhi eku aagaya? 😆 lol...

so happy u have lakshya n kt now!!...sahil is soo sweet, so sad that ganga always has to go away from him w/ good intentions which always makes him even more sad... i hope my lakshuji brings them together!! 😳

Hahaha..eku ke bina, kahani mein twist nehi ayega...ab hai to rakh hi lete hain..😉 aur age age dekho kya hota hai...😃😃

haha...thats good then, i also have eku in my ff so i guess i shouldn't be the one to complain...he's a good character to put twists in 😳 continue soon!! i love ur sahil ganga scenes (even if they're sad, cuz they're soo sweet)...and don't feel discouraged..keep up the good work!! 👏

-jhanvi

Originally posted by: desigrl05

haha...thats good then, i also have eku in my ff so i guess i shouldn't be the one to complain...he's a good character to put twists in 😳 continue soon!! i love ur sahil ganga scenes (even if they're sad, cuz they're soo sweet)...and don't feel discouraged..keep up the good work!! 👏

-jhanvi

Thanks Jhanvi..its a little intimidating, considering the millions of SK, AK fanfics....i am like the only one with Saahil Ganga...ahahaha..but wht the hell, i love them and I'm gonna make it happen..thanks for the tips buddy!!😃😳

abbe yaar, update already!!!!!!!!!! lol, waiting 😍

Chap 4



KT is in the kitchen making food with Archita. KT looks sad..

A: KT, kya hua, tum itni udas kyon ho?
KT: Archita, is ghar mein koi bhi khush nehi hai..
A: Aise kyon kah rahi ho tum?
KT: Dekhona Archita, karan chachu aur Tanya Chachi mein darar a gaya, Saahil chachu bhi khush nehi hai, aur phir, hamein hi dekhlo…koi bhi to khush nehi hai.Fir Baa ko bhi thakaral ne pareshan kar diya tha..
A: Chinta mat karo KT, thakurji ki kripa se, sab theek ho jayega..
KT: Nehi archita, hamein hi kuch karna padega…
A: Tum kya soch rahi ho?
KT: Bataungi, waqt ane par sab bataungi..
Daksha dadi enters the kitchen
DD: Ararara…tum log thepla banaye ki nehi?
A: Dadi, bana rahe hain..
DD: Jab mujhe himmat junagad mein pahli baar dekhne aya..tab mein Himmat ko thepla khilaya..ab meri halat dekho, aaj bhi khilana pad raha hai..ar ra ra..
KT: Dadi ap bhi na..
DD: Waise tum log kya baat kar rahe the?
A: Kuch nehi dadi, KT bas udas thi, is ghar ke rishtoin ke bare mein soch kar..
KT: khas kar karan aur saahil chachu ke liye..
DD: karan to chala apne sawariye ke paas.. aur saahil bechara…Ganga ke na is paar na us..
KT: Chachi, jab Ganga chachi ghar par thi, tub kaisa tha..
DD: Ganga is ghar ki beti jaisi thi, tulsi laye thi usse, pahle Gautam ke saath, fir saahil ke…ab kya batauin..is ghar mein, kisi ki bhi shaadi unke marzi se to nehi hoti hai…tulsi kahe to hain, nehi to na..
KT looks upset, DD notices and immediately changes the topic….
DD: arey purani batein chodo ab..chalo thepla banate hain..

In Ganga's house..Ganga is on the phone..
G: Sharma ji, Lonavala ke project ka kya hua?
S:Mam, whain kuch problem ho rahi hai..kisi aur ne bhi tender bhara hai…aur sunne mein aya hai ki uska price hum se thoda hi kam hai..
G: kya? Yeh kaise ho sakta hai? Meine us party se personally baat ki thi…yeh nehi ho sakta..
S: Ap kahe to mein jake dekh sakta huin..
G: nehi Sharma ji..ap mere jane ka bandobast ki jiye..
And Ganga thinks to herself… Jahain Saahil , wahain Ganga to hogi hi…

In SN, Lakshya is in the garden and helping Mihir in some garden work..
M: Are lakshya beta, mujhe kuch kaam yaad aya, jo tumhari dadi ne bataya tha, nehi kiya tho, sayad khana nehi milega..
And they laugh,

KT brings juice to the garden,
KT: Dadu, Baa ne apke liya juice bheja hai..
M: Arey, lao, mein waise bhi andar hi ja raha huin..
Kt gives his glass to Mihir and comes towards Laksya..
KT: Laksya , tum bhi lo.
As she hands over the glass to him, their fingers touch and KT looks sad, and removes her hand..
KT: I am sorry Lakshya.
L: Kis baat ke liye KT?
KT: Kuch nehi..mujhe chalna chahiye..
L: Ek minute…

KT turns back and Lakshya puts his hand right above her maang, and pulls a small piece of paper from her hair..
KT looks stunned and they both look into each others eyes and KT runs inside the house..

Laksya thinks about his time with KT, and gets a call..
L: Hello
G: Hello lakshya,
L: Arey Ganga Ma, sab theek to hai na??
G: Nehi beta..wo lonavala project mein kuch problem hai, mein saahil se baat karma chatithi.
L: Ap phone par rahiye, mein papa ko bulata huin..

Lakshya runs into the house and in a hurry bumps into Tripti..
T: Arey Lakshya, tum itni jaldi mein kyon ho..
L: wo papa ke liye phone tha…
T: Jiska bhi phone hai, usse kah do, tumhare papa aur mein, ek important dost se milne ja rahe hain, wo abhi kisi se baat nehi kar sakte.

Ganga heres the conversation over the phone and feels bad. Tripti leaves and Lakshya comes to the phone..
L: Ma, wo papa, abhi bahar ja rahe the…
G: koi baat nehi beta, mein Saahil se baad mein baat kar lungi.bye beta
And Ganga cutes the phone..

Saahil is in his room and bends down to tie his shoe lace. He notices the cheque. He picks it up and thinks to himself..
S: Meine to yeh apne files mein rakha tha…yeh yahain kaise pada hai?
Saahil opens his cupboard and searches for his file. He finds it and keeps the cheque in it.

Meanwhile, Tripti meets Rishabh (flashback to those who don't know, he is the guy Tripti secretly meets in the hotel)…and gives him some papers…
T: Suno, badi muskeel se mile hain yeh mujhe..
R: Tripti, tum aaj bhi bahut kaam ki heez ho..
And they laugh..
R: Yeh tender mere haath lag jaye Tripti, fir hemein apne maksad mein kamayab hone se koi nehi rok sakta..
T: Hain..bees saal se mein isi ka to intezaar kar rahi thi..


At Ganga's home, she gets a call..
G: Hain Sharma ji, kuch pata chala wohh dusra tender kisne bhra tha??
S: Ji hain, koi Goa ka firm hai..R.S enterprises…



(To be continued…)

sweet scene w/ lakshya n kt 😭 😍 ...im happy atleast kt has some flashbacks of laskhya also not just him all the time lol great update!! continue soon!!

Originally posted by: desigrl05

sweet scene w/ lakshya n kt 😭 😍 ...im happy atleast kt has some flashbacks of laskhya also not just him all the time lol great update!! continue soon!!

Hehe,thanks Jhanvi...will do..