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Posted: 17 years ago

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hello evryone!!..well i m very new to this forum..but after the warm reponse i recieved for my combined fic(written by JIV and myself)...titled Waqt

i thought of posting my own fic...i hope to get the same response..and hope ua ll enjoy it as much...

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Posted: 17 years ago

[COLOR=BROWN]I WILL DROP U DEAD IN FRONT OF ME CAPTAIN RAJVEER SINGH SEKHAWAT...I WILL KILL YOU.."
the words echoed from each corner of the dark room...
she sat by the window..a fresh drop of tear rooled down her cheek...
it wasnt only her..today even the skies weped..maybe ..maybe even they knew wat she had lost..
finally life had granted her that wish...
it flashed in front of her again..

rajveers face..."jai hind"
BANG!!..the gunshot...
his eyes closed..his eyes...wat was in them..the same hope ...that wait...
what she cudnt tell him wen he was near...
it finally came to her lips...
"raaj....."
thw winds whistled softly outside... captain naina singh ahluwalia had been given the keys of major rajveer singh sekhawat becoz ...he wanted so..
she enterd the sunbathed room...
the bed was untidy..the shirt on the chair...his favrt deo on the study table....the scene brought a smile to naina's face...
it had been a month since.....

she walked up to the table...

"yaadein....kitabon ke panno me...ya..dhundhli tasviron me..
barish ki pehli boondon me ya..phoolon ke khilne mein...
ya fir.... subah ki pehli kiran me chipi hui yaadein..!
waqt se churaye huye chand lamhe...
lamhe ..jo kabhi ankhon se behte ashko ki tarah..ya fir hothon ki dabi hui hasi ki tarah...ya..
ankhon ki chamak me nazar ate hain....
kabhi dil me dard aur kabhi...man ke andhere kone me khushi chod jate hai.....
yadien...jab dil ki khidki se jhakte hai..to zindagi ke bandh darwaze khol jate hain..............."

"RRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAJJJ.................."
aalekh smiled standing below...a tear shining in his eye...
finally naina had cried her heart out....
finally she was free...free from that guilt ...from the clutches of that memory..... [COLOR]

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colours_endless

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Posted: 17 years ago

I HOPE U ENJOY THIS FIC...

ITS A MUSICAL...

SO IT WILL HAVE DAILY DOSES OF MELODIES...AND MY POEMS...!!

AWAITING COMMENTS!!

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saba

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Posted: 17 years ago

hey nice start do continue soon 😊

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RJOpal

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Posted: 17 years ago

Rumela?? 😃 Yayy!! Oh and believe me, people will LOVE 'Rishtey'!! 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

"tum log andar aa jao..."
huda ali pooja and yudi....yes he cudnt stay in usa..any more...

kash yudi bhi yahan hota hai na???
"oye apun us nautanki ko kya kehte hai..miss kar raha hai.."
"no need to bro..."
"oye yudie??!!"
"YUDI!!!!"
"BHAI???"
"abbeh nautanki tu???"
he came and sat down by the hospital bed..
"hey chief??..mujhe kya samjha tumne han??..all this..uar kisi ne mujhe news tak nahi di..??"
"hume chodke gaya kaun tha yudi??"
"pooja...mein kma se gaya tha..tum logo ko chokar nahi...aur..."

he paused..neelu studied his face..

"bhai??...r u serious??.."
he knew she had guessed right..
"i guess so sis.."
"BHAIYA!!!!!..I LOOVE U!!!"

the small huddle in the hospital room were still staring blankly ...they dnt have a clue...

"koi hume kuch batayga??..yudi bhai??"
"aur...ab mein wapas aa gaya hun..."
"HAN???????????????YAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!""
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they walked in wid heavy feet...

"punjaban..tu upar jaa...apun nahi dekh payega use.."
"mein???nahi kaidi..mein nahi jaa paungi...mujhe hi badi mushkil se aaj tak ali ne sambhala hai.."

""mein nahi..."

""oye kaidi..tu bhi janta hai aur hum sab bhi ki tu hi ab naina ko sambhal sakta hai.."

"huda tu janta hai ye pura sach nahi hai..."

their eyes met....

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he enterd the room ..slowly opening the door....

she was sitting on the window sill...looking out at the sky..which was as brigh tas the dspair and gloom on her face.....

she was so immersed in the words of the diary in her hand that she dint even fell his presence..
he put a hand on her shoulder...

"naina.."

her breathing became heavy...as if she was trying hard to hold back something but his consoling touch made it difficult...

"naina?"

thats it...
she suddenly turned embraced him...it seemed to him like..a small child was looking for comfort in his arms...
he hugged her....

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colours_endless

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Posted: 17 years ago

some relations cannot be explined really and this relation was one of those...

he shared wid naina a bond..wich was more than frndship but less than love...

unlike even naina and aalekhs relation...

aalekh was somehow a remembrance of navin to naina...a quiet support..always listened advised and stood by her...

and wid him...the bond was unexplained...they shared a special place..in each others life and

he knew exactly wat was going on inside her...because he had gone thru this..

and surprisingly...he had gone thru this because of....HER..
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"yeh huda bhai kahan reh gaye...pooja aap dekhiye na.."

""nahi punjaban..ruk...apun ko pata hai..woh naina ko leke hi aayega.."

it was as if these words had been heard...

naina emerged frm the room but she was not supported by him...he was just close behind...

"apun logo ko chalna chahiye....naina ko accha nahi lagega..."

they left...

they wr waiting for her outside...

she stopped just outside the main door...
and surveyed the two storeye house wich was shared by rajveer and a fellow army officer..for one last time...

she wudnt return here...
all that she took wid her was rajveers second love..his diary ..in wich he wrote all that his heart told him...

and of his first love...she dint know....

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Posted: 17 years ago

[COLOR=BLUE]aaj ek aakri baar is dil ne chaha hai tumse milna...
aaj ek aakhri baar..kho jana hai mujhe in bahon mein...

aaj ek aakhri bar...

in aankhon ki gehrayi mein dubta chala jaa raha hun mein...
bahut chaha par...roke na rukte hai ye kadam...

aaj ek aakhri baar..

dil ne pukara hai tumhe dil se fir ek baar...
ab aa bhi jao...
aaj ...intezar mein bichi hai palkein...

aaj ek aakhri baar..