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Posted: 17 years ago
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they rushed to 'the lounge'...
..huda driving at top spedd followed closely by aalekh who too was in brkneck speed...

they reached in 10mins and rushed into the reception..

"EXCUSSE ME....HELLO PLZ WAIT...PLZZZ.."
they were stopped by the manager..

"plzz do u hv a reservation???"

neelu stepped forward..

"dekhiye we r invitees of lt.naina singh ahluwalia.."
"oh...ma'am of course..lekin aap galat direction me daud rahe hai..
miss singh is waiting for you int there"

he pointed to a glass room wich was usualy reserved for get togethers and meeting ..but now..it was..pitch dark...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
THAT WAS TODAYS UPDATE...I M WAITING FOR SOME SMASHING REPONSE...

MORE THAN TWO COMMENTS PLZZZZ!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
hey not fair yaar again u left us with this suspense. Now how am i going to sleep. So if u want my sleep to return please please please do update as soon as possible.

By the way I forgot to mention,update was as usual brilliant,simply superb.too good yaar 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
Hi..

Just today have read it your FF, its great, i did read waqt too and that too is mind blowin...

waiting for the next update...

Hurry!!!

😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
plz update
cn't waiting so much.............
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
only dis mush response???!!! 😭
hmmm...

well !!!

i dont wanna spoil all ur sleep..so here is a small part..next!!

by the way...

thnx!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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he pointed to a glass room wich was usualy reserved for get togethers and meeting ..but now..it was..pitch dark...
"is andhere mein???"
"yes ma'am"
"ok...."
they rushed into the glass doors...at least evryone rushed...except neelu..she was completely relaxed
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"oye naina????..."

"NAINA!!!!"

"KAHAN HAI TU????"
"NAINA ..AAP BAHAR AIYE..."

it was difficult to see anythng in the darkness...when suddenly..

BANG!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
the light were switched on ...
and in the centre of the room wich was decorated with ballons ..confettis and looking superb stood...

naina..looking equally smashing..in a tight fitted denim jeans..
with the black top pooja had presented to her this morning..

with the earings and bracelet given by neelu(read- and aalekh)..yudis gifted perfume...and...

completing the attire were the sandals presented by huda(wich was the most common gift that naina recievd frm him...)

..she looked awesome...

"naina???...."

"hi guys!!!..maine socha aaj mera bday hai..to kyu na ek party di jaye....!!!"

"HUH???!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

"O CMON GUYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

the night was smashing ...

now evryone knew wat naina had meant in that letter of hers...

they were now to bid goodbye to the naina they had known for the past 8 months...coz she was now gone!!!!
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naina stood at a litlle distance watchin her frnds dancing to the music...huda came up to her...

"naina??..tu ne..yeh??"
"yeh dekhle...."

she handed him rajveers dairy opened at a certain page wich said...

NAVEEN....FOR U!!...........

zindagi...
zindagi naam hai tere chehre par khushi ka..
zindagi naam hai teri muskurahat ka...
adhi raat ki gupshup aur tera saath..na duniya ki parwah ..aur na duniyadari ka darr..
zindagi hai waqt se lamhe churakar unhe jee lena..
ek dusre ki ek muskurahat par dil ke har ek gum ka mit jana..
zindagi naam hai ek sacche yaar ki dosti ka..
zindagi naam hai humari yaari ka!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
"huda rajveer sir ye tab likha tha jab woh aur bhiyaa KMA me the..
tum log mere liye itna kar sakte ho...to kya main apne doston ke liye itna nahi kar sakti??!!"

"accha laga naina...tu ne phir se zindagi jeena seekh liya hai!!!
waise rajveer sir har panne par..i mean har poem ke age date zaroor likhte the na??.."

he walked away ...but in naina's mind was..

"date???...." date???..wat was it that she wanted to remember..that had struck her at the mention of date???..

"oye naina???!!!"

she saw the small company surrounding her....and

"look naina..u gave this party..and of crse wat u did for neelu and aalekh..was too good...but there is still smthng missing ya??!!"

"missing??..yudi kya??"
"naina..tera pyaar..."
"aalkeh..."

"areh ur love....ur umm..second love??...right neelu??"
"naina..dekh like bhai said...we know u r incomplete without music and dance....hai na??"

"oye tu ghabra mat..tujhe aaj nachaenge nahi...lekin han..humari taraf se ek aur tohfa hai...."

"kya??!!"
"YEH..."

in the centre of the room placed on the chair was...

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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
there u go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i want some more comments this time people!!!

luv, rumela

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